NIBIR/SWARON STORY - A Valentine's Week (Completed)*2/1* - Page 20

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Posted: 8 years ago
Unressed on rose day... But abi adha baki h wo b 😵
Couldnt comment more Bcoz i cant stop laughing 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

lovely update
thanks for the pm


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ___Neha___

Unressed on rose day... But abi adha baki h wo b 😵

Couldnt comment more Bcoz i cant stop laughing 🤣


Okk 😆😆
Waiting😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ___Neha___

Res for rose day

Unres
Kan naak se dhua 🤣
Shantilal katghare me hazir ho 🤪
najao saiyyan chhuda k baiyan 😆
Poor teacher 🤣

Kabir kitna J hai 😆
roseday h... Wat a discovery!! discovery ko call karlo😆
kirti also likes saurav kya😲
Everyone ready with popcorn and Kabir sabse zyada excited 🤣
Nishu is shinchan 😉 lol
Kirti jealous from Nisha 😆
Kya khichdi h wah😆
Nisha in library to slee... Means think plan 😆
Chudail kon bola 😲
Mar mat daku 🤣
Phenk de manali me 🤣
Nisha ko pillar se khichne wala scene was so funny n cute 😃
Parsu dinner in 5star sunke she agreed😆 Khana Nisha ki kamzori h kya? 😛
Waaattt😕😲Dj wala babu is Kabir?? 😲
Oh gaawwddd😆😆
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I cant stop laughing on this🤣
Will Continue this comment later.. Need a break to catch my breaths 😆


Thanks Neha 😳
Sab student toh badmash hote hi hai 😉 par nibir ke semester wale khub naughty hai 😆
Chudail nisha ka bhai bola 😆😆
You know DJ wala babu kabir ka naam q hai...remember kabir as a DJ hi NAUC me entry mara tha iss liye Maine ye naam socha 😉😆
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333



<div>Thanks Neha😳

Sab student toh badmash hote hi hai😉par nibir ke semester wale khub naughty hai😆
Chudail nisha ka bhai bola😆😆
You know DJ wala babu kabir ka naam q hai...remember kabir as a DJ hi NAUC me entry mara tha iss liye Maine ye naam socha😉😆



nishu ka bhai 😲
ohh
haven't read the full update yet!
kal pura pakhke I will comment more..
and DJ wala babu
tujhe pata h na 10th Feb ko hi kabir ki entry huo thi as DJ 😃
such a beautiful coincide that aj hi mujhe ye update padhni thi 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ___Neha___



nishu ka bhai 😲
ohh
haven't read the full update yet!
kal pura pakhke I will comment more..
and DJ wala babu
tujhe pata h na 10th Feb ko hi kabir ki entry huo thi as DJ 😃
such a beautiful coincide that aj hi mujhe ye update padhni thi 😳


Okk 😊
Yeah I remember 😳😳 kabir ke entry ke baad se hi toh main dobara show start ki thi dekhna warna viraj or nisha ka love story start hua tha tab band kar di thi 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
PLZZZ UPDATE NEXT PART REALLY EAGER TO READ ANOTHER ALL PARTS ARE SO AWESOME STILL CANT STOP MYSELF FROM LAUGHING
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mkjr

PLZZZ UPDATE NEXT PART REALLY EAGER TO READ ANOTHER ALL PARTS ARE SO AWESOME STILL CANT STOP MYSELF FROM LAUGHING


Thanks yashika😳😳
Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Next part will be serious don't expect much...
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Kiss Day



Bhaiyo or mere payre bhaiyo ki behno...aaj kiss day ke khas awsar par aap sabka swagat hai " tarun said in literally typical social worker way as we heard whenever they try to give speech.

Wah...!! sale ko neta hona tha " said ashu gitring his teeth as taurn looked at him

Sorry sorry bahiyo ki behno sirf ashu ko chod ke aap sab ki behne... Ab theek hai ?" asked tarun

Bhai hai tu mera " said ashu looking at tarun emotionally

Sala nautanki..." Tarun said keeping aside his mic on which he was speaking, then continued on mic " so aaj khas kya hai aap sab yahi soch rahe hai na "

Haan..." All the crowd choral together

Toh guys aaj ka speciality ye hai ki college ka most dashing guy and charming guy...jispe har ladki hai feeda, har ladki pana chahti hai use bata sakte ho kon ?" Asked tarun

Kabirrr kabirrr " everyone cheered up

Correct college ka most popular and dashing guy kabir...aaj girls ke liye surprise laya hai " said tarun

Bata dun ??" He asked to whole college girls

Haan jaldi " said whole girls together

Toh girls aap sab ek line me khade ho jaiye or kabir kisi ek ladki ko pure college ke samne kiss karega " he said whole crowd cheered up "wwwooo"

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Swayam ye rasta toh college nhi jata toh hum kahan jaa rahe hai ??" Nisha asked as Swayam drove on other way not on that road by which they reach college everyday

Haan na nisha... Rook na thoda...batata hun " he said and soon halt his car infront of sharon's house

Damn...Swayam tu mujhe bol nhi sakta tha ki tu Sharon ke ghar jaa raha hai use pick karne...idiot ab main kya karungi tum dono ke beech me ?" Nisha asked

Arey nisha...tu daily mere sath aati hai toh main tujhe kaise mana kar sakta hun...!! Or kal Sharon boli mujhe ke lene aana toh main use bhi kaise mana kar sakta hun " he defended

Chup kar gadhe...tu mujhe bol sakta tha " nisha said being pissed off

Tum dono hi important ho mere liye main ek ko bhi nhi chod sakta " he said slowly while looking down

Offohh...!! theek hai main kal se apne se college aaungi...!!" nisha said to which Swayam try to interfere but she continued by showing her finger at him "kuch bolna mat...Sharon ko acha nhi lagega or tum dono ko bhi privacy chahiye " said nisha

No nisha..." He start but couldn't complete as nisha said "Swayam ab teri ek girlfriend hai or tujhe use time dena hoga or mujhe kam smjha "

Sharon aa rahi hai main baad me ladunga tujhse " he said

Arey..." Nisha said

Baad me..." Swayam said and went forward to welcome Sharon while nisha switch to back seat.

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Whole girls stood up in a single line waiting for kabir's entry. Kabir soon come on stairs looked at girls line and smile gloomy as his eyes couldn't trace the girl for whom this all drama was going on. Kabir was fully on his dashing avatar as he wore royal blue full sleeve shirt paired with black jens looking more handsome and ever. He slowly descending stairs girls excitement levels rose up.

Girls girls...shant koi cheena jhapti nhi, kabir kisi ek ladki ko kiss karega or vo ladki kal kabir ki Valentine's hogi " tarun announced

Wwwooohhh " whole girls cheered up

Slowly kabir started passing by each every girl as he still can't found his lady love in that line. While those girls who were rejected fumed. Kabir almost passed every girl only to see glimpses of nisha but no use as nisha was not standing in the line and she don't even know what's going on.

Ye kya ho raha hai ?" kabir heard that melodious voice for which he was waiting, he turned his gaze at the direction of voice saw she come there pushing two girls aside.

Kabir had moved away almost cross five girls but seeing her back, he come back in lighting speed and hold nisha's right cheek with his left hand and place a soft kiss on her left cheek, but everything went wrong.

When someone hold nisha she was in shock as that was happening so fast, but as soon as kabir lips touch her cheek she immediately slapped kabir. When she slapped him whole crowd was went to shock, everyone silenced, kabir hold his left cheek utter shock after slapping kabir nisha too realize that kabir kissed her she was shock, disappointed, and most of the above she was sad and her fear again started build up.

Kabir slowly rise his face seeing her face his feature were soften as he was hell angry, his facial muscles clenched, his face was red in anger but seeing her in tears his anger filed away concern instantly took place. Nisha started taking back step as kabir try to hold her. She ran away from there with tears in eyes and kabir try to stop her. On the other hand tarun and ashu was in complete shock as they never thought that nisha would slap kabir infront of whole college. They know nisha is different but this was the limit, they thought she shouldn't slap him. SwaRon didn't come to college as Sharon ask Swayam for a movie so Swayam dropped nisha college and went to theater, so they wasn't witness of Nibir scene.

Nisha was running fast as she could can as kabir was continuously calling her name try to stop her.

Don't touch...!!!" Nisha shouted as kabir hold her hand to stop her, he immediately left her hand and said "nisha please listen to me "

Just go away...!! " nisha replied while crying

Nisha please for once " he requested again going behind her

No I don't want to listen any thing, I know why you are doing this, you want new girlfriend who will fulfill your lust but Mr. Kabir Singh Rathoor I'm not those type of girl...I can't do anything for you " she said in one go

No nisha its not like that please listen to me I..." Kabir was about to confess when nisha stopped him by saying

It's my mistake, it's completely my mistake...I should have stop you, I shouldn't have taken those rose plant, I shouldn't have taken those chocolates, I shouldn't have taken that teddy bear..." Nisha cried

Nisha that was not a mistake...I gifted you cause I lo..." Kabir start again but failed miserably

Because I'm your new lust it was your lust that's why you're gifting me those things. "

It was not lust at all..."

It is...!! You jerk don't ever try to come closer to me... I hate you kabir I hate you..." Saying this she left a shocked kabir behind hearing those words from her mouth which he don't even want to hear in his wildest nightmare, it left him completely broken.

I love you " kabir said as tear make way through his hazel brown eyes which were reflecting pain, pain of seeing hate in those eyes in which he always want to see his reflection only. He need to tell her feelings, why he fall for her, he need to tell her that he loves her, she's not his lust that he'll use her like tissue paper then throw away. She need to know how much she's important to him.

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It's been night now nisha was trying to forgot morning incident but no use her mind were stuck at one point that kabir is trying to use her, she's his next target. From morning her parents trying to ask the reason for coming back to home and why she is crying but nisha told them only one thing she needs some time and ask them to not to worry about her.

Nisha just locked herself in the room nor she go out and not let anybody come in. She just sat down on floor and put her head on bed.

Her vision was blur as fresh tear had made their way, when she saw a manly figure sat beside her, looking at her only keeping his hand on knees which were infront of his face.

Gussa ho...??" He cooed

Nhi hun gussa bas hurt hun " nisha replied as he stroke her cheeks by wiping her tears

Kyun hurt ho ??" He whispered softly

Kyunki... I love you kabir...main aisa kuch nhi chahti thi...hum Jo bhi karte usme meri marzi bhi shamil hoti koi award nhi hun main..."

Tum meri duniya ho nisha...main janta hun mujhse galti hui...nisha I love you too... And I need you that's why I did this stupid mistake "

That wasn't a mistake you kissed me for the first time but in that my consent was important "

I know nisha please forgive me... "

M not angry kabir "

Then...will you be my girlfriend ??"

Kabir " she gasp as he was holding a ring infront of her, she nodded as her restrain was coming undone again but this time they were of happiness. He smiled wide and slide that ring in her ring finger.

Wait kabir... Tum yahan aaye kaise ??" She asked as reality stuck her as she had locked the door

Balcony se " he replied pointing toward balcony

Nisha stood up and went to balcony to see how he come inside. When she comes to balcony only to get shock. She immediately look down to her hand and yes there was no ring in her hand as she saw kabir infront of her house sitting on his bike. Looking at her house only.
Nisha realize that she was imagining kabir who come to her room and confess his feeling to her. She looked at kabir who was desperate to see nisha once. Kabir's eyes wandered around and saw nisha standing at her balcony, he took a deep breath of relief and stood up went near her house gate as it was mid night and gate was locked.

Nisha please listen to me once...please nisha...I... " he started

Stop it kabir...sab so rahe hai tum jao " she said as kabir was screaming

Nhi main apni baat bole bina kahi nhi jaunga aaj chala gaya toh sab kuch kho dunga " he said gloomily as he was scared of losing nisha

Tum jao kabir "

Nhi nisha you have to listen me "

Okk wait main neeche aati hun " she said and went down stairs quietly if anyone will woke up then a new scene was going to start


Dekho kabir main neeche toh aagai par tum yahan se jao mujhe kuch nhi suna hai " nisha said as soon as she stood infront of him

Nisha I'm sorry please nisha I'm very sorry, mujhe tumse puchna tha aise nhi karna tha I'm so sorry nisha..."

Kabir...please mujhe iss bare me koi baat nhi karna"

Nisha please ye gate toh kholo main kuch or bhi kehna chahta hun"

Nhi I don't trust you...jo bolna hai wahi se bolo " this again hurt kabir, today he was got to know about all real feeling of nisha for him, she hates him, she don't trust him, and who is responsible for this the great kabir who want everything go according to him. Who want nisha at any cost, who forget that a relationship between two people, and both of their's consent is important, only one person don't take all decision.

You're right nisha, you shouldn't even trust me... I'm the one who did everything wrong...I forget that your consent, your thoughts, your point of view is important" kabir said his voice was cracked that make nisha feel guilt on her words

Kabir..."

Nisha you're not my lust... I know mere past me bhout si gf rahi hai par I love you..." He said making her dream into reality

No you're lying... I'm your lust if I said yes you'll use me then throw me away as you always do " said nisha closing

Nisha I love you...please don't give my love name as lust please nisha" he cried

No no I don't want to trapped in your game...just go away just go " she said closing her ears with her hand and close her eyes

No nisha please trust me once I love you... Please nisha I can't see hate for me in your eyes please trust me " nisha slowly open her eyes hearing his pleading she looked at his face which shows his helplessness, pain was clearly evident in his face.

You love me right ??"

Yes nisha I love you " he said nisha went near to him and placed her left hand on his cheek and he lean to her touch. She wipe his tears which was about to restrain again.

Shhh " she said and wipe his face as she noticed now that kabir was crying

Tum mujhse baat karna chahte ho??" She asked pulling her hand back

Haan please nisha for once listen to me then decision is yours I'll do accordingly I promise but give me one chance "

Theek hai par abhi nhi...abhi tum apne ghar jao...or waise bhi bhout raat ho gayi hai "

Theek hai main abhi jata hun par wada tum mujhse baat karogi "

Haan promise..." Nisha said then he made his way to his bike and went to his house. After seeing him go nisha too come back to her room. Lie down to bed smilingly as today for the first time she have some trust on kabir his confession was reflecting his truth, his every word reflecting his truth. Like this randomly her eyes fell on clock which shows that it's 1:00 am at night. Her eyes widen on this as once someone had told nisha that if on Valentine's night at 12 o'clock she meet a guy, that guy is her life partner.

"That means kabir is my life partner ??" She thought blushingly as 12 o'clock they were talking and kabir was confessing his feeling

"Nisha is my life partner!!!! " kabir thought looking at nisha's pic on his bed room wall as he too saw the time.

To be continued...

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Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago

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