Ff(maneet) : pyaar tho hona hi tha (all over again)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi this is geeta, I had wrote a ff few years back but completed that so somwere in me there is that o have not completed what I started so now I decided to complete it. The topic was already closed so I started with a new thread and now I am continueing were I left it...
Here I am linked all the earlier parts to regain it all again

H

PYAR THO HONA HI THA

INTRODUCTION

Mr. Malhotra: Geet's father a rich business tycoon of Delhi. He have the biggest Add agency and part of board members of Juneja's Hotel and Khuraana's Construction. He never have that attitude. He has a great personality but he always cares about their employees. He always treated his office employees as his family members. And always celebrate each festival with them and his employees are also very loyal to them. He is a perfect businessman, perfect husband, perfect dad and a perfect son. He loves her family but he loves Geet more than anyone else. He never see drop of tear in her eyes. He always stands by Geet in her decisions.

Mrs. Malhotra: Geet's mother very religious women and loved her family very much she is the biggest pillar of the Malhotra family. She always wants her family to be happy & for that she can do anything. She loves her both daughters very much but she loves her elder daughter Heer more than Geet's, as she is the first child of the family. But this means not that did not loves Geet, of course she loves her a lot but their fights she always be with Heer. So there is always cute family fight where one side Geet & Mr. Malhotra and another side Heer and Mrs. Malhotra.

Heer: Geet's Elder sister and only best friend she always share her feelings her secretes with her. She also loves Geet very much and very possessive about her. She can't tolerate if anybody say anything to her. She is trendy very sexy and very beautiful. Guys are always following her but she did not like guys who are flirtatious

Geet: A simple cute religious girl. She is the youngest child of her family. And loved by each member of the family. As her family over pampers her so she is over weight but yet cute and very down to earth. She hates people who see the outer beauty of the people but not the inner beauty. She never use to love parties even on her own birthday she din't like if her parents make it Grand.

In school (St. Joseph) reputed school of Delhi Geet is in class 10th and Heer in 12th

Geet: Hey pari Tu rooz school late kyun hoti hain ' Tujhe teachers seay dar nahi lagta

Pari: come-on Geet dar aur Pari kaa door thak koi rishta nahi hain'.. aur vaise bhi agar school main masti nahi karenge tho kya bhudaape main masti karenge'. Tujhe pata bhi hain teacher sey daanth kaane main kitna maza aata hain.. vaise bhi tujhe kahan pata hoga tu tho sabhi teachers kii best student hain'.tere life main tho kuch fun bhi nahi hain'.

Geet: theek hain meri maa samaj gayi ''. Ab apne parvachan band kar and go and put your bag in class else you'll be late for assembly.

Pari: ok wait' I'm coming'..

In the assembly Principle this annual function will be celebrate it with double mazaa'.. Every body having a question look '.

Principle: because this year we'll celebrate our schools 50th anniversary so there will no loops we'll also organize fate in this annul function and the amount would collect will be donated to ruler child education' there is sound of applause' in the assembly hall all teachers and students are impressed by this'.

After the assembly in the 10th class teacher announce that if anybody have some ideas for this annul function can share with everybody'..

Geet is a very reserved but yet very talented she had a plan but she can't say it so she share this idea with Pari as she is her bench mate and a good friend and only friend in the class. Pari raise her hand and teacher asked ' Yes Pari you have something to share with us ''

Pari: Yes ma'am'.. actually I'am thinking that if we were celebrating our school's 50thanniversary'. Than we have do some thing traditional and epic like we have to organize some dance sequence from the each state of India as that we can symbolize our school as a proper Indian cultural theme ''..

Teacher: It's a great idea Pari'..

As Pari trying to say that this plan is not of her but of Geet but Geet stops her'

Pari: Thanks ma'am''

Pari: Tune mujhe tera naam kyun nahi lene diya '..

Geet: Kya farak padta hain'

After the class everybody appreciate Pari about her plan'

Then enters our Maan The Maan Singh khurana'.. He also appriciate pari's paln and Geet is very happy that Maan also likes the plan '.Maan is the hottest hunk of the school but he never used to speek more but he is very talented, intelligent and very Proudy & rude also. Girls of the school used to like him but he never like these girls. Geet also likes Maan very much. Whenever Maan appreciate her plans is in on the 9th cloud'.

But Maan dosen't even notice her'

In class 12th they are doing drama of Heer & Ranjha'

Heer is playing Heer and ranjha is playing by Prem '..

Prem ''. Prem is the also very hot but very down to earth. He is Maan's Cousin Brother and son of Juneja's they have the cities biggest Hotel cain ''

Maan is son of Kuraana's and they have the biggest construction company.

Prem likes Heer very much' Heer also likes him but never shows'.

Soo both are happy that they are playing Heer & Ranjha'.



Part-2

Part-2

After the school on the way to home Heer and Geet are in the car '

Heer: Chutki (heer call geet as chutki) tujhe pata hain main Heer bani hunn''

Geet: Di what do u mean aap tho already Heer hain..

Heer: Haan vo tho main hun by raising her coller'

But our class is playing the drama of Heer and Ranjha & in which I'am playing role of Heer '..

Geet: Whow'. Di'

Heer: aur tujhe pata hain ranjha kun bana hain'

Geet: Haan haan pata hain'.. Prem na''.

Heer: how do u know?

Geet: Di.. the smile that u have ''.

Heer: This smile is not for that it. Is because '''..

Geet: Di please aap kisi sea bhi chupa sakte hain '' par Geet sea never''

They reached home''..

Heer: ok ok '. By having a angry look lets go we have reached home''..

After Geet goes. Heer smiles and shied'

Geet: Maa'. Maa..

Mrs. Malhotra: Aa gaya mera cutu Pie '

Geet: Haan maa '.

Mrs. Malhotra: where is Heer'

Geet: A rahi hain apki ladli'' mujhse seay tho maa aap pyar bhi nahi karhte ''.

Mr. Malhotra: Tho kya hua jab Chutki ke Paa uske pass hain tho kya Chutki ko Kisi aur kii zaroorat hain'..

Geet: Paa '.. She hugs him and says u are right Paa '

Mrs. Malhotra: Aap dono ki natunki phir shuru ho gayi'

Heer: Maa. Come near and winks and says maa lets have lunch leaves both of them with there nautanki'

Mrs. Malhotra: Ya heer u r right and today I had made gagar ka halwa, palak paneer Aur. Aur (Geet & Mr. Malhotra) as these are favorites of both

Mrs. Malhotra: aap dono k liye nahi hain'.

Geet: Paa kya aap bhi naa maa KO naraz kar dete hoo' chalo soory bolo maa Koo and wrinks

Mr. Malhotra: Soory Biwi ji'

Mrs. Malhotra: hold Geet's ear and said tuhaara soory

Geet: oouch maa chodo naa Dard hota hain'Phale khana kha le phi bol dun'.

Mrs Malhotra: no still holding her ear

Geet: Maa please chodoo naa Dard hoo raha hain'. Oouch' ok sorry'''

Mrs. Malhotra: Now go change by the time I'll serve food for u'

Geet: as she is going upstairs Maa vaise apne bataya nahi apne aur kya banaya hain'.

Mrs. Malhotra: Go change and see by yourself ok' and come fast'

Heer'. Chutki tu sachi main natunki hain '' aur school main aise rahti hain jaise bahut sharif hogi'

Geet: Di' pls. Apko pata hain main jitni open gar main hotii hun utni school main nahi hoo pati'

Heer: Vohi tho why u are so dumb in school'

Geet: goes to her room''' leave this topic di'

In the night Geet is studying in her room as this year is her 10th Board so this Year she is more serious out her studies'

Heer: kya Chutki tu kitna padti hain' chal na Maa aur Paa party main jaa rahe hain

Geet: Di apko pata hain naa mujhe Party sharty pasand nahi'''

Heer: Chal naa Chutki Tujhe pata hain party kahn hain'..

Geet: kahan

Heer: Juneja House'..

Geet: ok thabi aap itni excited ho rahi hain aur thbi aap makeup kii dukaan lag rahi hain'.

Heer: tujhe chal na hain tho chal mere makeup k bare main kuch mat bol' aur vaise bhi tu kya jaane makeup kya hota hain ''.. isye stye & trend khaete hain'. Main Jaa rahi hun' aur last time puch rahi hun ki tu aa rahi hain yaa nahi'.

Geet: Di.. aap loge jaaooo naa mujhe nahi aana''

Heer: Mujhe pata hota hain kii tu nahi aayegi phir bhi main hamesha patanahi tujhse puchne kyun aajati hun'. And leaves

Geet: shouts because u loves me Di''.

Heer: Mummers'' love my foot and smiles''

In the party Maan is looking stunning in blue Denim Jeans and Red T-shirt with Brown leather Jaket''.

Prem is wearing Black Jeans White T-shirt with Black Jacket''

Both are looking stunning''.

Heer is wearing a red color gown

Pari is also there''.

She wears a short Knee gown of black colour with simple makeup she is looking awesome

As she enters the party Maan is just staring at her'..

Prem notice this'.. oye'. Maan tu usey khea kyun nahi deta if u likes her '..

Maan: yaar but if she din't like that then''

Prem: yaar tu bhi aajeeb hain 2 saal hogaye tujhe par tune abhi tak use kuch nahi kaha'..

Heer comes behind and said hi to both of them''

Hi'. Heer both says

Prem: Heer u are looking great''

Heer: Tum bhi kuch bhi kuch bure nahi lagrahe'.. and smiles

Heer: lets go and Dance Prem'.

Prem: Sure''

Prem and heer both excused Maan'.

Maan goes to Pari and said hi'..

Maan: hi' Pari'

Pari: hi.. Maan

Maan: u are looking sexy'..

Pari: thanks Maan

Maan will u join me on the dance floor

Pari: ok lets go'..

Next day in the school ''..

Pari: Geet tu kal party main kyun nahi aayi'

Tuhje pata hain Maan kitna hot lag raha tha ''

Aur usne mere saat dance bhi kiya tha''.

Geet: in a low tone ok'.


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Part-3

Maan with his friends yaar yea Pari kitni Hot hain na '

Yash: Yaar vo tho hain ek dum rapchik hain'.. par yea hamesha us kaante k saath kyun rheti hain.. (Yash refers Geet as Kaanta)

Maan: Vo kaanta nahi Hathi hain '.. and laugh Vaise bhi Hume tho Phool se matlab hain naa tho kaante sey kya lena dena'.

Yash: yaar par jab pool todthe hain tho kaanta tho haath pe lagta hii hain'.

Maan: Yaa''

On the same night Geet in her room ''''

Maan ko main kabhi bhi pasand nahi aa sakti kyunki naa hi mujhe aacha lagna aata hain aur naa hi main Di aur Par ki thera thin hun'''

Par mine kya karon Main chahe ke bhi Maan k bare main soochna nahi bolthi''..

In Kuraana's Home'''

Mr. Kuraana gets a call that there London office is going through a very bad condition so board decide that Mr. Kuraana have to leave for the London as he is the only person who can take out the company of this drastic situation and he agrees and leaves for the London''''

In the school the rehearsals are going on in full fledge & all were excited'''''..

Now the Annul Day comes'.

And the Annual Day is a Great success' After the end of the function Maan propose Pari but she din't accept she also likes him but she is just giving him attitude'and leaves from there' Maan how can she do this to me ''. You have to accept my love' this is a promise'..

Next day in the school''. Maan enters the class and saw Pari but shows her that he had not seen her'

He goes up to his bench and take his seat'..

Yash: yaar mujhe pata chala hain kii pari ne tera proposal accept nahi kara'.

Maan: Leave that topic'. & concentrate in the class''.

In the recess Geet & Pari are having there lunch''.. Geet finished first so she goes to water tank as she is going she bumps on Maan and is going to fall but Maan holds her' They have a short eye lock geet thanked Maan and leave from there Pari notice this she din't like the way Maan hold Geet and staring at her'' Pari'(Phale mujhe propose karta hain aur jub maine accept nahi kiya tho ab Geet ko pakad liya) gave angry look to him and leaves from there'.

Geet is very happy that he holds her'. The way he stare her'

Pari: Geet tu is Maan sey dur rehe '. Yea bhaut hi'. Bell rings'.

Geet: Chal yaar bell baj gaye hain'..

Lets go to class''

They both proceeds towards class''

In the class Maan is having fun with his friends'..

Pari & Geet Saw him Maan also saw them'. Maan gives a smile to Geet and ignores Pari'.

Both sits on there seat'. And teacher enters''..

On the other hand In class 12th they were having there free period '. Prem is just solving some accounts questions''. Heer came up to him'

Hey prem Kya kar rahe ho'.

Prem: Just solving some accounting problems''

Heer: Kya Prem tum aur Chutki kitna padte hoo'. Tum itna pad pad ke thakte nahi ho kya'..

Prem: Nahi mujhe tho bada maza aata hain''

Heer: Maza vo bhi padne main'' chalo chodo ise free period hain sab basket ball khel rahin hain lets go hum bhi chalte hian'..

Prem: Bas yea question solve kar luun uske baad chalte hain'

Heer: Nahi abhi chalo'.

Prem: Ples iske baad chale'.

Heer: make a sad face and leaving from there'..

Prem tum bhi naa theek hain chalo'..

Heer hugs him and thanks him''

Prem also hugs her ''..both are lost in each other''

In the night''. Geet is in her room recalling that happens in school and shied'..

In heer's room Heer is also thinking about there hugs and smiles'..

In Juneja house.. Prem is thinking about heer.. and her childness'.

In Kuraana house Maan to himself Pari yea tho bas suruaat hain' ab tum kud mujhe Propose karoge''that Moti is a way to realize u what u have done 'and smiles'.

Now day passes Geet and Maan becomes friends but Pari din't react but she is jealous very much''.Maan knows that but he did not like this as he just cant bear Geet anymore so he thinks now I have to propose Geet that's the only way Pari will accept her love for him so one day after the school Maan goes to Geet and asked her to come with her but she ignores and said Maan Di is waiting for me and I have to go but Maan pressurize her as she din't say no to him'. Pari is watching all this so she also follow them Maan takes her to backyard of of there school and knee down and proposed her and said Geet I don't know from when but I like u very much will u be my Girlfriend''Geet has tears in her eyes and she accept and both hugs ' Pari is watching this and having tears in her eyes'.Maan also notice her'..


Part-4


Part-4

Geet: Maan

Maan: Hmm'.

Geet: I have to go now di is waiting for me ''.

Maan: Ok ''. Aaj sham ko milen''.

Geet: Smiles no'. kal school main milte hain and leaves

Maan: Thank god maine soocha ki aaj ki shaam is Moti k saath guzaarni padegi'.

As he is leaving ''. Pari comes to him ''..

Pari: how can u do this Maan '.how can u ditch me''

Maan: but when did I diched u'' u rembered that day it is u wo din't accept me '''

Pari: Yaaa but.. I said no it means not that I love u ' I thought u will impress me or u will owe me but no u not even tried to talk to me '.. I hate u Maan I hate u

Maan: but I love u pari'.. I love u'..

Pari: what and what was that u said to Geet''

Maan: That was my plan to make u feel jealous and to accept ur love for me'' and that what happen''

Pari: hugged him ''.. and said do not do this again or I'll kill u'..

Geet listen all this and hurt she is crying crying and crying''

She is comes there to said him that they can meet in evening''' but she got a shocked'..

Maan again proposed her and she accept, Geet stands on the corner and witnessed of their moment and having tears in her eyes'''

In the night Geet cried her heart out'. But din't show her pain to anyone in the family' she is very much hurt''

Next day in the School Pari and Maan tells everybody about their relation'.. that day Geet din' come as she is suffering from high fever''

After two day Geet comes to school but din't react to see Maan and Pari together'.

Pari thought that Geet is also know about Maan's plan and she just helped him'.

Maan thought that Pari had told her everything and she understands'

Geet now being more reserved she not even talk to Pari very much''

Now Pari spend most of her time with Maan. And only said hi and hello to Geet''.

Day passed months passed''''

Day of board exam'''..

(as I already said Geet and Maan are the best students of class) and Maan always becomes first in his class, but Geet never mind

Geet is fully prepared, but this time Maan is not fully prepared as he is now more concentrated on Pari as on books

Result announced''''..

Geet got the first position

Maan Got second'''

This can't bear by Maan'''.

Maan how can be that Moti be first'.. this can not be possible''

I'll teach that Moti a lesson''..

Next day is the Geet's Birthday''''..

In the morning'''Geet is on her bed every body wishes her happy birthday

Pari. also calls geet and congratulate and whishes her happy birthday''

There is a surprise party organized by geets's Dad''

He invited all her teachers her classmates.

Maan Prem and their family is also invited'

8'O clock'' Now Geet & Heer are in the Heer's room''

Heer: Chutki lets be ready tujhe pata hain naa dad ne kaha tha kii 8 baje tak ready hone k liye''..

Geet: Di par kyun hum kahi jaa rahre hain ''.

Heer: Paa ne tere Birthday clebrate karne k liye pizaa hut chlane ko kaha hain ''

Geet: whoow di Pizza Hut ''. I love him'.. he is world's best Paa'.. ok o'll be redy in 10 minutes''.. As she opening the door heer stops her and said'.. you need not to go anywhere your dress is here only''.

Geet: ok di''.

After 10 minutes Geet is ready''''.

Geet: Di' I'm ready lets go'''.

Heer: Tu bhi yaar aaj k din tho thoda makeup karle aur tune apne hair tie kyun kiye hain kya behenjee ki there lag rahi hain''..

Geet: kya di''. Aap ko pata hain mujhko yea makeup shekeup bilkul pasand nahi hain'. Aur rahi baat mere hairs kii mujhe kule Hairs main irritation hotii hain'' so please chale ab''..

Heer: Kya karun tera main'''' tu jhalli ki jhalli rahegi''. Chal

Geet & Heer are near the hall and there is dark and dark everywere'..

Geet: Di' Yahan itna andhera kyun hain''..

Heer: I think light nahi hain''.

Geet: What di'. Room main tho thi ''

Heer: kya yaar tu chal naa'' tu dar mat main hun naa tere saath huunn'..

Geet: Daar'' Aur main'.. main tho nahi daar rahi'..

Heer: Haan haan mujhe pata hain''.. tu andhre seay kitna darthi hain'. Chal ab''.

Heer Drags her and says chal naa '''

As they reached near the chandelier lights are on and noise around Happy Birthday to u Geet is Surprised and Shocked''.

Geet dad came up to her and said Happy Birthday once again beta'..

Mr. Malhotra: So beta how did u like my surprise'..

Geet: Dad its good ''.. but Paa u Know na I don't like celebrate in this grand manner'' its enough for me if we clebrate it together'''''

Mr. Malhotra: comeon beta u know naa I love to do all these things for u '..comeon now lets enjoy the party'''

Geet: Ok' Paa'

Pari comes to Geet Happy Birthday & Congratulation Geet Tune tho isbaar Maan Ko bhi Hara diya'. Geet with a smile Thanks Yaar'..

Geet: thanks yaar tu aagayi maine soocha tu nahi aayegii..

Pari: Kaise nahi aati tera Birthday Hain'' (Geet having a lovely smile but vanished when Pari said) aur Maan bhi tho aa raha hain tho mujhe tho aana hii hain'

Pari: Geet chal main aati hun'.

Geet: To herself'.. Yaar you are here because of Maan but not for me'.She had tears in her eyes'.

Mr. Malhotra: Hay baby lets go and cut the cake''

Geet: Din't show her tears to her Paa'. She wiped her tears.. and smile yea Paa lets go.

As she cutting the cake Maan enters and Pari Goes to him and hugged him'..Geet saw that and hurt'. Not for Maan and Pari growing relation because she is losing her friend'.

She cuts the cake and all enjoys the cake'..

After the cake cutting ceremony'. She went up to her room''

She is alone in her room recalling her good time with Pari and Maan'' She is holding Maan's photo in hand and saying'..


Geet: why Maan why did u do this to me tumne mere saath aisa kuyn kiya''.

Maan is searching Geet and went up to her room' and listen what geet is saying'..

Do u know how much I like u'. but u din't understand my feeling even u played with my feelings''.

Maan enters the room and said ''' Geet'.. Geet gets up and said Maan tum yaahaan '..

Maan: Kya bola tumne tum mujhse pyar karti ho'' khabi tumne apne app ko dekha hain hathi '. Lagti hoo aur mujhse pyar karne k sapne dekthi hoo''.. tabhi main soochun kii tum is baar first akise aagayi main jaanta hun yea sab tumne kara hain apne dad se bolkar examiner ko bribe kiya aur Mujhe beat karne k liye tum first aagayi hooo'.

Bhaahar saey tum jitni bhooli dhektii hoo naa utni hoo nahi''. Tum sey do chaar baar dhank seay baathin kya kar lii tho mujse payar karne k sapne dekhne lagi'' Tum agar duniya ki aakri ladki bhi hoogi na tho bhi main tho kya koi bhi tum jiase moti seay pyaar nahi karega''.. he snatches his photo from her hand and leaves'''

After he leaves Geet cries her heart out''.. Ramu kaka servent of that house (he loved Geet like his own daughter) saw all that and understand everything he came up to her and wiped her tears she hugged him tight and cried

Ramukaka: Chutki don't cry I'll go downstairs & tell malik every thing but geet stops him and said that he will not tell anybody about that'' and give him kasam and told him that every body are looking for u .

Geet: Kaka aap jaao main theek hunn'. After he left Geet locked herself in the room after half an hour heer knocks the door but she din't open so she thinks that she went slept so she dint disturb her''.. she went down to her parents Maa Paa I think Chutki is sleeping so I dint disturb her'.

Mrs. Malhotra: its Ok lets have dinner' let her sleep

All the guest and the family have their dinner and than everybody leaves

Raukaka tries to tell Mr. Malhotra about Geet but that he remember the Kasam that given by Geet and he stops.

All family members went to sleep'''

Edited by geeta.muskan - 8 years ago
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Part-5

Next morning''.. Geet is in her room remembering all that happen last night and tell to himself that Today onwards I will never think about Maan'.. And not letting him to effect me'.

On the breakfast table all are having there breakfast she comes and wishes everybody good morning and take her seat..

Mr. Malhotra: Beta kya hua kal tum bina kuch kahe apne room main chale gayi aur dinner bhi nahi kiya'.

Geet: Nahi Paa vo bas main thak gayi thi isliye''..

Mrs. Malhotra: Ok beta have your brekfast '''

Geet: Maa Paa main ap se kuch bolna chati hun'..

Ramukaka is also there he thought that Geet is trying to tell them everything '.

Mr. Malhotra: What Beta'..

Geet: Paa main soch rahi thi kyun naa main apni baaki kii studies London main karun'

Mrs. Malhotra: What (alongwith her) all are shocked including ramukaka'''

Mr. Malhotra: What R u saying beta'.. but why u can study in India also'..

Geet: I know that but if I'll study in Londan than the chances are more to be the student of the reputed College of London''. And u told me after my 12th u'll send me to London for higher studies '. So why not know''.

Mrs. Malhotra: No chutki u are not going anywhere ok '''

Geet: Please Maa understand me naa'. I want to go there for my better future''..

Ramukaka understands everything and leaves from there and went to kitchen and cries'. ( Mujhe pata hain chutki tum aisa kyun kar rahi hoo)

Back to brekfast table'..

Heer: No Chutki u are not going anywhere

Geet: Di pls at least u understand me'..

Mrs. Malhota: Shouts no Geet I told u are not going any where now no more discussion on this topic''

Geet cries and leave'''

Mr. Malhotra din't see tears in Geet eyes so he went up to her room and tries to understand her but she not listing any thing she just want to go London ''

New morning Geet have not eaten anything from last morning'' Mr. Malhotra din't see this so he agrees and also agrees Mrs. Malhotra he booked tickets and also fill all the formalities from mail for her admission.

In the lunch Mr. Malhotra, Mrs. Malhota & Heer went to Geet's Room and told her that they are with her in her decision and she hugs them and smiles now all are having lunch ' Geet kya Paa apko maanaa hi tha tho phale hi maan jaate pata hai mujhe kitni bhook lag rahi hain'.

Heer: Natunki hain yea puri'''

And all laughs'''

Ramukaka is also happy to all of them laughing'

Mrs. Malhotra: Theek hain par yea vahan rahegi kaise '..

Mr. Malhotra: Biwi Ji aap tension mat loo Mr. Khurana vahi hain Geet unhi k saath rahe gii''.

(Geet din't know that Mr. Kuraana is father of Maan ''.)

Geet: Par Paa kya main hostel mian nahi reh sakti''

Mrs. Khuraana: ab har baar tere nahi chalegi''. Tu Mr. Khurana k saath hii rahegi'..ok'

Geet: ok ''' ok'''

Next day Geet and Mr.Malhotra leaves for the London'''

Heer hugs Geet and cries'.. Chutki mat jaa naa ''.. please'

Geet: Di mat roo na phir main bhi rooongi'.

Mrs. Malhotra also hugs her and cries'..

Geet went up to Ramukaka and also hugged him and thanked him that he not told anything to anybody'

Geet & Mr. Malhotra reaches London airport and Mr. Khurana welcomes them''.

Mr. Malhotra introduced Geet to mr. Kurana''.

She touches his feet' he blessed her'..

Mr. Khurana: your daughter is very cute''

Mr. Malhotra: yaa and u know she is my life''' and give her side hug.

They proceed towards home'''''

After they reached Mr. Kurana showed Geet her room the room was very pretty with white decor' Beta does u like the room in excitement Geet uncle like I loved this room'.

Mr. Malhotra and Mr. khuraana laughs and ask her to have rest''.

Days passed' Mr. Malhotra helps Geet in her admission and in other formalities''

Now the day come when Mr. Malhotra have to leave for India''..

Mr. Malhotra told to Mr. Kurana Please take care of her.

Mr khurana: Yaa I'will u don't panic'

Geet, Mr. Malhotra and Mr. Khurana proceed towards the airport

After reaching airport Mr.Malhotra hugs beta take care of urself'

Geet: You too Paa''

Both are having tears in there eyes'.

Mr. Malhotra said bye to both of them and leaves'
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Part-6

In Londan Arirport''''

Mr. khurana & Geet proceeds towards home ' geet is still crying'..

Mr. khurana: Geet beta don't cry'. he try to console her'. She hugs him and cries a lot'

Mr. Khurana: ok now if u'll not stop crying then I call Mr. Malhotra to take you from here'.

Geet: Why uncle''

Mr. Khurana: First u'll not call me Uncle I'am not ur uncle ok'..

Geet shocked'' so what did I call u '. In surprised tone''

Mr. Khurana: Smiles you call me Papa' ok''

Geet: Hugs him and said ok Papa'.

Mr.Kurana: U know beta I always want a daughter'.. and today I have my daughter with me'

Both Hugged each other and smiles'..

They both are having there dinner'

Phone rings' Geet papa u have your food let me see'..

Geet: Hello''

Maan: Hello' May I speak to Dad'.

Geet: Papa I think its ur son'.

Mr. khurana'. Hey champ how are u?

Maan: Fine Dad'.. Just missing u''

Mr. Khurana: I miss u too beta'. Anyways how are ur studies going on '.

Maan: Great Dad'..

Mr. Khurana: Where is your mom''

Maan: she is here only'.

Man gives phone to his mom and leaves from there'.

Mr.khurana: so how are u Mrs. Khurana'

Mrs. Khurana: Fine app kaise hain'.

Mr. Khurana: Hum tho ek dum theek hain'.Hume tho ek beti bhi mil gayi hain'

Mrs. Khurana: What'. Yea kya bol rahe hain aap'..

Mr. Khurana: Haan aap tho hume beti nahi de payi tho humne apne liye ek beti dhund li hain'. And wrinks to Geet and smiles

Mrs. Khurana: In a shocked tone how can u do this to me. U don't even thinks of Maan

Mr. Khurana: Relax Mrs. Khurana' then he told her everything'. And laugh'.

Mrs. Khurana: Aap ne tho meri jaan nikaldi thi'.. jaoo main aap seay bath nahi karti'. And she cuts the phone'.

Mr. khurana: Arey suno thoo.. and smiles he put done the phone'.

Geet: Kya Papa apne aunty ko naaraz kar diya naa'..and similes..

After having dinner both have lots of gossip'. Now Geet is feeling drowsy'

Geet: Uncle''no..no '. Papa I'am very tired ' lets go and sleep..

Mr. Kurana: beta u go I'll sleep after some times'

Geet: ok papa Goodnight''.

Next morning'''

Geet: wakes up and ready for her school her first day in her new school '.she is on the breakfast table'.

Geet to servant'. (servant name is maddy) hey maddy uncle where is Papa''.

Maddy: Baby.. He is not yet waked up'

Geet: What'

She mummers and went up to his room' Papa' Papa'.. wake up'.. I have to go to school and u are also getting late for the office'' he did not listen her'' now she is very much furious she saw glass of water which is on the side table and take the glass and pore the water on him'' he wakes up ''.. Hay who did this''..

Geet is standing by putting her hand on her waist'' with angry look''

Mr. khurana: Geet tum ''.. yea tum ne kya kiya'''.

Geet: Aap ko pata hain time kya ho raha hain''.. aur aap key vajaha sey main main bhi school ko late ho jaaungi''. Come-on get up and fresh n up I'am waiting for u on the breakfast table''

Mr. Khurana: ok u go I'm coming ''.

Geet: Fast''.

Mr. khurana: yaa yaa''

As she leaves the room he again take the blanket and going to sleep but Geet comes again''. And now she take the jug of water and pore the water fully on the bed''

Mr. Khurana: what geet'. U had make my mattress all wet''

Geet: come fast I'm waiting''.

After 20 minutes''' Mr. Khurana comes'

Geet: came papa have your breakfast' but Mr. Khurana ignore her'..

Geet understand that he is angry with her'' ok u don't want to have breakfast then I'll also not having breakfast and then in school if I'll faint then who will take care of me'' here is no one who in mine and worries about me''.

Mr. Khurana: oye.. nautanki'' chalo brekfast karo aur mujhe bhi serve karo'..

Geet: Vo tho main huun'''

They both smiles and have there breakfast'' Mr. khurana drops her to her school and went to the office''.

In India'' Heer is now a college going girl She Got admission in one of the best College of Delhi''..

Prem is also in the same college'''.

In St. Joseph school of Delhi'''

Maan is in class 11th and Pari is also there they are now spend most of the time together they sit on same bench and they are the hottest couple of School''..

In Geet house Mr. Malhotra and Mrs. Malhotra are missing Geet''.

Mr. Malhotra'' Why I always agrees with her in any decision she takes''

Mrs. Malhotra: Now nothing can be happen' She is gone now ''.. but I'am satisfied that Mr. Khurana is taking care of her like we did''

Mr.Malhotra: You know that they are having a great bond ''

Back to London'. Geet is in the home doing her homework'. After finishing her homework she went to kitchen''.

Geet: Maddy uncle can u please teach me how to do cooking''..

Maddy: yea sure baby''

Geet asked about Mr. khurana's likes and dislikes'''

Now days passed Geet is now in free time enjoying cooking after coming from school she used to talk to Heer, Her Mom and with her Dad''.. he also talk to Maan many times but they both dint ask ther name yet''.. They just do hello & hi'. Now Geet and Mr. khurana are more close each other they both take care of each other'' both know each other very well ' Mr. Khurana calls her Hitler as she always restrict him on sweets, tea, parathas as he had diabetes, now every morning Geet is the one who wakes him up ''' on the same way as she did last time'' and takes him for the walk'

Part-7

After 4 Years Geet is of 20 years now, a college going girl & in last year of her college' she is slim very beautiful, mature, smart, loving & caring by nature, loves to wear Indian Dress'. Mostly she wear Suits Or Kurta with Jeans' she did not that interested in makeup she is very beautiful that she had no need of makeup. In makeup she only use Kajal and lipstick of light shades' She always ties her hair (as in the serial Geet)'. She also starts jogging with Mr. Khurana every morning and becomes more mature' but is more bubbly nature and open hearted' (In this 4 years Geet and Maan talk to each other on phone but doesn't recognize each other they refer each other as Champ & Hitler as Mr. Khurana did)

In these last 4 Years Geet had never celebrate her birthday in Grand manner she always celebrate her birthday with Mr. khurana and Maddy only'.. and never even went to India'.. And she is in her last year of Graduation'

Now she is helping Mr. Khurana in her business also'..

After college she used go to the Khurana Construction both have lunch together and also helps Mr. Khurana in his work' She love to work with him and came home together'

Joggers Park in London

There saw a girl''' who is jogging'wering black lower with red t-shirt'. Long hair but knot together as a pony..' She is very slim having perfect body structure' listing music with her I-pod' A man call her from behind oye Hitler''..he is none other than Mr. Khurana'. Lets go home else u'll late for the college'.. she turned around'.She is our Geet''she is sweating'' but that sweat making her more beautiful'.

Coming Papa'''.she comes to Mr. khurana '..and told''. What Papa I always told u don't call me that'at least not at public place' u know you son is also starts calling me Hitler'''.

They starts walking towards the home'

Mr. khurana: But why not that's what u r'

Geet makes an angry face'

Mr. Khuran: See Geet u always wakes me from my lovely dreams in which I were with lots of girls'. And not just this'. u did this in such ruthless manner and in early morning u forcefully make me come for walk' not only that do restricts me for eating sweets, tea and all my favorite dishes'.

Geet: so what is wrong in this, you know naa'. That u r a diabetic patient'. Then even u never care of ur self' even u don't take ur medicines in time' and if I am taking care of u''..

Mr. khuran: Smiles''

Geet: what happen.. why are u smiling'''

Mr. khurana: No nothing'

Geet: Papa what yaar why u are not serious out your health' and move her face other side'

Mr. Khurana: smiles'. Beta because I know u r there for me'. So don't need to take care of myself'

She smiles ok ok'. Are u trying to butter me up? So you will have tea this morning' but this not works'.

Both reached home'

As they stepped in the house Mr. khuran Please Geet at least toady

Geet: Why what so special today'

Mr.Khurana: U know that today I 'm getting best business men of the Year form our Indian business Community'

Geet: What'. Waaoo Papa it's a great news'.

She came forward to congratulate him'. Congratulations Mr. Khurana' in serious tone

Mr. Khurana: Thanks Miss. Geet Malhotra and both laughs and hugs each other'

Geet: Seriously Papa u deserve this'. This company is going form such a drastic situation but today because of u this is one of the best construction company of London'

Maddy is also there he also congratulate him'

Geet: did u gave this news to aunty & to ur champ'

Mr. khurana: Yes''.. I gave this new to them in night only'

So Geet are u giving me Tea or not'.

Geet: ok'.

Mr. khurana: waaoo' today I'll enjoy tea'.

Geet: Smiles to see him so excited'.she requested Maddy to make tea for him '. As she requesting him to make tea she wink to Maddy'.

Maddy: But baby there is no tea leave in house all grocery items are almost finished.

After listen this '.the big smile that was on Mr. khurana's face is wipe down

Mr. khurana: What'' u r joking naa Maddy'

Maddy: No sir I am very much serious' u are not trusting me'. One minute let me show u the tealeaves box ' (as both are talking Geet is smiling in her own'.)

As Maddy went inside the Kitchen'. Geet to Mr. Khurana now Papa what can I do'. See today Iam ready ' but there is no tealeaves; even god doesn't want u to have tea'. Sorry Papa and she left' she turns and said anyway Papa congratulation once again and smiles and leaves from there' in the mean time Maddy in the kitchen emptied the box '

He comes out' and shows him the box'

Maddy: See sir there in not a crumb of tealeaves in it. He put the box in the hands of Mr.Khurana and said what sir u wasted my time'give him an annoyed look and leaves'

Mr. kurana: Now he is alone in the Hall' he said with an annoyed look I know it is all done by that Hitler only' & went to his room'''..

In India'.. There is a Grand Party in Juneja Mansion'.

Lots of guests'all are having fun'

One Guest: What a grand party na Mr. Juneja always through these kinds of parties..

Another Guest: yaa u are right but today this party is planned by their Son'. as there anniversary gift.

Here comes Prem ''' he have great personality, great physic he is wearing a Black color suit immensely complimenting his personality' and looking Great'all girls presented in the party are just staring him' but he is waiting for none other than Heer'

Mr. Malhotra &Mrs. Malhotra enters the hall'Prem welcomes them'. And asked for Heer'

Mrs. Malhotra: She is coming u know naa that she takes lot of time to be ready'. So we cant say''.

Prem smiles and said ok Aunty' U enjoy the Party'

Mr. & Mrs. Juneja's room'''..

Mr. & Mrs. Juneja are getting ready for the Party'..

Mr. juneja: Today I'am very happy'

Mrs. Juneja: Yaa I know and me too' because today we realizes that how responsible & Grow up is our son is'

Mr. juneja: No but this is not the reason of my happiness'

Mr.Juneja: So Why are u so happy today'

Mr. Juneja: Because today is our 50thanniversary' and I still look handsome as always'

Just then his pone rings' its Mr. khurana'

Mr. Juneja To Mrs. Juneja'. Loo apke jijaji (brother in law) ka bhi phone aa gaya'.

Mr. juneja: received the call'.. hello' Khurana'''.aur bata kaisa hain''maine suna hain ki tujhe award mil reha hain'.congratulation buddy'

Mr. Khurana: Thanks Yaar'. Happy anniversary'.

Mr. Juneja: Thanks Yaar'. Maine tho yea bhi suna hain kii tu India vapas aa reha hain' tho phir kab aa rahe hain

Mr. khurana: Haan yaar tune sahi suna hain but not yet decided yaar'

Mr. Juneja: But why what happened' Kya koi gori pasand aa gayi kya' and laughs'

Mr. khurana: smiles' yaar you know naa that if I'll came back then Geet will alone here' even I don't even told her about this'.

Mr. Juneja: But why'.

Mr. khurana: I don't know how will she react after listen this'and don't want to hurt her'

Mrs. Juneja interrupts and said give pone to me'.

Mrs. Juneja: Jijaji'. App Geet ki chinta kyun kar rahe hoo app usko bhi India vapas aane k liye kaho naa' vaise bhi uski puri family India main hain'. Mrs. Malhotra told me that her Graduation is also going to complete this Year'. At least u try' to understand her'

Then Prem Comes to room Mom Dad how much time both of u take to getting ready'. Mr. Khurana listen this'.

Mr. Khurana: U people go and enjoy once again happy anniversary'

Mrs. Juneja: Thanks Jijaji' and u pls try to talk to her'

In London'. Geet listened Mr. Khurana'

Back to India'.

Party is going on' Heer enters the Hall '''She is wearing white color one piece gown with light makeup she is looking stunning' All the boys presented in the hall cannot get their eyes from her'

Prem is on the stairs and saw Heer as he saw her he stands as a statue'

Heer saw Prem and raised her hand to say hi' but he didn't response to her'.

Heer: to himself what happen to him why he is not responding'. Is I'm not looking good' my efforts are wasted' and went up to her parents'all the people stand with her parents complements her'

Heer: to himself' if all other people complementing mean than there is some problem with Prem only'. She went up to him he still just stand like a statue with a big face on his face and just looking at her'

Heer said Prem but he still din't listen'.

Heer quiver his shoulder and said Prem now he came to his sense' and said yes Heer'.

Heer: What happens to u?

Prem: just starring u '..

Heer shies

Prem: u are looking awesome today'

Heer; Thanks'. She smiles and leaves'

Mr. & Mrs. Juneja now comes to the party the spot light is on both of them''' all gives them an ovation'''

They came down all the gusts presented there wishes them Happy anniversary'.

Mr. & Mrs. Malhotra also wishes them'''..

Mr. Juneja: So Mr. Malhotra when ur' daughter coming from London we have heared that Khurana is also coming to India'

Mr. Malhotra: Ya ' I know' I talk to Mr. Khurana about that but he told me that first he will discs it with her as they both have a good bonding'.

Mr. Juneja: yaa she will understand... As Khurana always told me about her I know she is really understandable'

On the other hand Mrs. Juneja & Mrs. Malhotra' also talking on the same topic' Mrs. Khurana also joins them'

Mrs. Khurana wishes her happy anniversary' and continues with the same topic'.

Mrs. Khurana: Yea did right I know they both shares a great bonding so it will be more precise if Mr. Khurana will talk to her'

Prem comes to them , he great Mrs. Khurana and asked Mann's whereabouts from Mrs. Khurana'.


Mrs. Khurana: beta pata nahi vo ghar sey bhaut phele hi nikal gaya tha'

Prem: ok aunty' and leaves Kahan reh gaya ye Maan ''. Jazoor kisi ladki ke saath hooga'..

Heer: what happen why are u muttering '

Prem: Yaar ye Maan pata nahi khana reh gaya ''.

Suddenly all lights goes off''' all people are talking to each other that what happens how the lights went off'

Then a sound comes of a guy'' Happy anniversary Mausi & Musaji (uncle & aunty)'.

And thanks to all the guest who present over here'''.

Then a spot light fall on a guy''' and he turns he is non other than our' Maan'

He is handsome as ever' He is also in black suit'.and looking great'..In my story he is clean shaved''.. (ek dum chikna) he has a great personality''

For full story here is the link

Thread# 1 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1545607

Thread# 2 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1742325


Edited by geeta.muskan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it is nic story
i read it before
and I love it
hope this time we can read it completed
not like before
I have request
pls if u start write it all over again so pls this time
complet it
not leave it in mid like before
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: zida

it is nic story
i read it before
and I love it
hope this time we can read it completed
not like before
I have request
pls if u start write it all over again so pls this time
complet it
not leave it in mid like before


Sorry for the last time and that's why I want it to finished it and somewre in my mind that I have not yet completed my ff so now I m going to starts it with season 2 pyaar tho hona hi tha hope u'll like it also.
Edited by geeta.muskan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
thanks dear
but if I said same think wrong
pls don't take it on heart
I just want say many writer have superb stories
and reader love to read it
but then without any note
writer stop writing there work
that hert .
I don't know about others but I fell bad about this .

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