*Milengae Milengae* IB FF Part Four updated PG 7 - Page 3

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Awesome part...
So excited fr next update...continue soon...
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Amazing
Continue soon
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Thank u guys for loving my story and encouraging me😃
i will be putting two parts today
part 2 coming soon
manas😃

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Meet Anika's Family

Anika has a younger brother Sahil and a younger sister Soumya. Anika's parents belong to a upper middle class family Saurab Tiwari and Sunita Tiwari. They lead a simple life all together and as like in the story Shivaay forcefully marries Anika and post marriage Anika assures her parents that how nice her husband his and convinces them. Everything is fine till that day.

Anika has a childhood friend Gaurav Mishra who happens to be a common friend of Shivaay. Let me now proceed with the story and will give u details regarding any new characters.

Part 2

Shivaay and Om are on their way to the Mumbai office. Due to traffic jam they all are stuck in one area for more than fifteen minutes in the same place and on the opposite side there is no traffic at all. Om and Shivaay decide to hold the meeting and decide to use the laptop. For that they have to find a suitable place because its not possible in the traffic.

At Anika's house

Taayi make Ansh and Vansh sit in the baby trolly and cover them with colourful baby blanket and they are ready to go aut on a walk. Taayi slowly pushes the trolly on to the footpath of the main road by the end of which is entrance into the park. Both Ansha and Vansh are enjoying their day out making noises.

Om and Shivaay happen to be stuck in the traffic on the same road, now they have decided to make a conference call as they are getting late. Both of them get down their car. They are now the footpath on the opposite side of the road attending phone calls and informing officials that they want to conduct a online meeting. At the same time both of their eyes fall on the woman on footpath opposite to them pushing the trolley.

At that moment something unexpected happens. Taayi gets busy for a moment as someone asked her for address nearby and unintentionally leave the trolley for a moment. As there is slope the trolley comes on to the road. Shivaay and Om alerts very soon and they both start running in that direction. The worse thing is to happen yet, a big container is heading towards the baby trolley. At the right time Shivaay and Om reach there and either of them take a baby in their hands and the truck crushes the baby trolley underneath its wheels. Taayi realizes her blunder and run towards the babies. Babies unaware of any danger giggles happily and smile widely.

For a moment both Shivaay and Om couldn't take their eyes from Ansha and Vansh whom they are carrying respectively. Both of them left a sigh seeing the babies fine. Taayi comes into picture and thanks them for saving the babies. Shivaay un intentionally turns very possesive and scolds Taayi for the blunder she has done. Om and Taayi both are surprised as Shivaay is reacting as if he is the father of the kids.

Taayi : Maaf kar dijiyae saab yeh galti dubara nahi hogi

Shivaay : Agar mere bachon ko kuch ho jaata toh

(he stops in between as he said mere bachon ko, even he is so confused as to why did he say that)

Mera matlab hai agyar inn bacchon ko kuch ho jaata inn ke maa papa pe kya beethegi.

Om : Shivaay pls relax kuch hua toh nahi na, i think hamae chalna chaiyae.

Taayi : Aap donon hamari ghaar aa kar chai pee ke jaaye na yahi paas mein hi hai.

Shivaay : Om i think we should accept this invitation apne meeting waha se karengae. Driver

se saaman lane ke liyae kahengae. What say??

Om : theek hai koi problem nahi

Taayi : Bachon ko mujhe de dijiyae na saab.

Om and Shivaay say no in unison and reply "hum le kar aayengae koi baat nahi"

Shivaay and Om both are confused now as to what made them take care of the kids as their own family.

Om : Shivaay baache kitne pyaare hai na, dekh iss ki aaken bilkul tumhari tarah hai. Tu

bachpan mein aisa hi tha.

Shivaay : Aur yeh bacchi pata nahi kyun mujhe yeh Anika jaise lag rahi, iss ki aaken baal sab

kuch

Both Om and Shivaay are super impressed with the kids. Aur kyun na ho bacche to unhi ke khaandan ki hai.

Om and Shivaay are now at Anika's house

Scene shifts

Ishaa keeps on trying Om's and Shivaay's phone but they are switched off. She is on the way to their office at Mumbai. All the vehicles stop at the signal crossing and even after the signal is green traffic does not clear. At that time the car in which Anika is travelling stops beside Ishaa's car. Ishaa suddenly feels pain in her stomach and she yells in pain. Driver tries to enquire if she is ok. He stops the car and start asking for help. Anika soon reach the spot and opens the door to find Ishaa in. Even Ishaa is shocked to see Anika. She could not speak anything out of pain.Anika instructs the driver to reach the hospital nearby. All the while she comforts Ishaa saying that she will be fine. Before Ishaa could say anything she falls unconsious and Anika takes her into the hospital. Ishaa is sson taken into the operation ward.

Nurse : Mam aap patient ki kya lagti hai.

Anika : Bhabhi hu mein uski

Nurse : Aap please saari formalities puri kar dijiyae reception pe jaa ke

Anika goes to reception and sign the papers as Anika Tiwari...

Scene shifts to Anika's house

Shivaay and Om are now done with their investors meeting. Taayi offers them chai and Shivaay goes and knees down infront of the swings of the kids

Tum donon mere itna apna kyun lag rahe ho

Aisa lagta hai saalon purane rishtae phir se jud rahe

He picks Ansha in her hands and asks "koun ho tum??"

For that Ansha giggles and does susu on her papa.

Om is surpised to see this side of Shivaay.

Shivaay smiles and slowly puts Asha back into the cradle and asks Taayi to clean her up and goes into wash room to clean.

Om enquires about mom of the kids but Taayi says she doesn't know much of her, but mam's husband never turned up.

Shivaay and Om take leave and leaves Anikaa's house.

Shivaay's eyes start brimming up with tears and wipes them saying Om, shaayad kuch kachra chala gaya. But Om really knows about how lonely his brother feels all the time.

At Hospital

Operation is successful and its a baby boy. Anika goes in to see the baby and takes him into her arms kisses on his fore head and leave the room before Ishaa wakes up. She goes to reception and ask the receptionist to inform Omkara Singh Oberoi father of the baby giving the phone number.Then Anika leaves the hospital.

Om and Shivaay reach the hospital minutes after Anika left.

Omkara is elated to see his son he places a soft kiss in Ishaa's forehead and takes his son into his arms proudly.

Shivaay standing at the door see his brother's family being complete.

He remembers Anika

Flashback

Anika : Shivaay aap ko ladka chahiyae ya ladki

Shivaay : Mujhe tum jaise cute si ladki chahiyae. Aur tumhae??

Anika : Mujhe aap jaise smart tadibaaz chote Shivaay chahiyae aur meri jaise paagal choti

Anika bhi

Shivaay : Paagal kis ko bola mind your language woh meri wife hai

(HA ha ha laughter...)

Shivaay comes out of trance as Ishaa calls out his name

Ishaa : Shivaay bahi aap Anika ke baare mein soch rahe na

Shivaay just smiles and says Om idhar do mein iss ka bade papa hu mera bi kuch haq banta hai.


Ishaa : Anika aap ko chod kar nahi gayi aap ke liaye ek letter chodaa jisko aap ne aaj tak

dekha nahi

Ishaa takes out an old letter from her handbag and gives it to Shivaay

Shivaay hands the baby to Om and takes the letter and opens it..

Precap

Mein aap ki intezaar karungi. Aap mujhe lene aayengae toh mein samjhungi aap ko mujhpe vishwaas hai, agar...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow..total awesome
Shivaay meeting his kids
So sweet
Ishana became a mother
Dying to know what is in the letter
Thanks for the pm
Update soon!
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its awesome
thanks for pm nd requst
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Awesome update..
What will happen next?
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Loved it !! Thanks for the pm 😳
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Part 3


Shivaay starts reading the letter

It seems that Anika might be crying at that time when she wrote the letter as the ink is smeared in between.

Shivaay

Mein abhi ghar chod kar jaa rahi hu kyon ki mere paas aur koi raasta nahi bacha hai. Maa ne aap ki kasam di. Mujhe pata hai ki aap iss tarah ki baaton mein vishvaas nahi karte par mere liyae aap se judi koi bhi baat sab se jyada important hai. Aaj bahut kuch ho gaya ghar pe. Mein rok nahi paayi maa ko.

Abhi ghar pe koi nahi sirf mein aur maa donon hi hai. Mein kal raat apne ghar mein so gayi kyon ki mujhe aap ke bina iss ghar mein rehna acha nahi lagta aur office mein aap ki kaam khatam karne mein dher hui toh mein ne maa ko daadi ko kisi ko uss time disturb karna theek nahi samjha. Uss waqt raste mein mujhe Gaurav mil gaya toh ussne mujhe ghar drop kiya.

Maa ne mujhe Gaurav ke saath jaate dekha raat mein toh unko misunderstanding hui. Subah mein jab ghar aayi

Pinky : Ruko kaha se aa rahi ho


Anika : Maa apni ghar gayi thi wahi se aa rahi hu


Pinky : Jhoot bol rahi ho tum, aur mujhe jhoot bolne walon se nafrat hai


Anika : Nahi maa kal apni ghar gayi thi mein


Pinky : Apni ghar yaa uss ka ghar mein ne dekh liya

tuhje uss kammenae Gaurav ke saath


Anika : Gaurav ne mujhe lift diya aur kuch nahi


Pinky : Mein apne bete ki tarah andhi nahi hu jo teri yeh harkate samjh nahi sakti, Sharam

nahi aati kisi ke saath yeh sab.


Anika : Maa aap aise kaise bol sakte hai mein aisa kyun karungi mein Shivaay ki biwi


Pinky : Tu hai toh meri Shivaay ki biwi par sab jagah apni muh kala kar ke aati ho


Anika : Maa...


Pinky : Chillao mat mujhe sab pata hai, aur yeh sab dekhne ke baad tu iss ghar mein ek

minutes nahi rehsati


Ainka : Jab tak Shivaay nahi aate mein kahi nahi jaavungi.


Pinky : Tum keh rahi thi na tum mere Shivaay se pyaar karti ho


Anika : Apni jaan se bhi jyaada


Pinky : Saabit karo phir, chale jao mere bete ki lifes se


Anika : aap yeh kya keh rahi hai


Pinky : Tum abhi isi waqt iss ghar ko chod kar nahi gayi samjho mere betae ka aaj iss duniya

mein aakhri din hoga


Anika : Kaise baate kar rahe aap, kya hua hai aap ko, aur Shivaay ko baddua kyun de rahe ho


Pinky : tumhae Shivaay ki kasam abhi niklo iss ghar se warna


Anika : Chale jaavungi aapni saari saaman le kar and goes up stairs


(tears welled up in her eyes and make their way down her cheeks wetting them and she packed all her belongings and decided to leave the house)

Mujhe vishwaas hai ki aap mujhe lene aavogae. Mein aap ki intezaar karungi. Aap mujhe lene aayengae toh mein samjhungi aap ko mujhpe vishwaas hai, agar aap bhi duniya walon ki tarah sochte hai toh mujhe lene mat aayiyae. Mein 6 baje tak devi mandir mein aap ki raah dekhungi ...

Aap ki

Anika

Shivaay feels as if his heart wrenched. Tears make their way down his face. Shivaay feels bad for what happened to Anika. He is now feeling the pain she has gone through. He shouts Anikaa...

Omkara places his hand on Shivaay's shoulder and Shivaay hugs him crying like a baby.

Om : Shivaay just calm down pata chal gaya na Anika kaha pe hai, hum jadi uske paas

jaayengae


Shivaay: Anika ne mera intezaar kiya hoga aur mein nahi gaya. Ab mujhe kaise pata chalega ki

woh kaha hai.


Nurse come to them and tell them Ishaa is calling them.

Om and Shivaay are inside the room.


Ishaa : Shivaay bhai aap theek toh hai na, kya hai uss letter mein

Shivaay explains everything written in it. And tells them that now how will he find his Anika

Ishaa : Shivaay Bhai Anika yahi hai Mumbai mein

Both Om and Shivaay say in unison "kya kaha tumne??"

Ishaa explain everything that happened

Shivaay goes to reception to check if he can find out any address of Anika.

He gets nostalogic on seeing Anika's signature on papers

He determines to bring his Anika back home very soon.

There at Anika's home

Taayi opens door for Anika and offers her coffee and later on explain her all that happened.

First Anika shouts at Taayi and later say sorry to her and share with her that how she is very attached to her kids.

Later Taayi leaves her alone to return at the right time next morning and Anika Shuts the main door.

Anika thinks as who could be those two persons who helped her and saved her life i.e her babies.

She thanks god for sending them and thanks them too.

Anika is in no mood to have any food but she thinks of preparing the food for her little ones. She goes into wash room to freshen up.

She finds a metal watch on the wash basin and picks it up, one word that comes into her mind after seeing that is Shivaay...

It is a very rare customized imported watch which is one of Shivaay's favourites. Now she knows those two people who helped her are Om and Shivaay.

Anika gets emotional. Tears start flowing continuously from her tears and she keeps on repeating "Shivaay Aap aa gaye ..."

She talks to herself

Shivaay aaj aap ne apne bacchon ko dekha hoga. Aap ko kuch mehuss nahi hua hai kya?? Shivaay kaash mein aap ko ek baar dekh paati aur aap ko apne bachon ke baare mein bata paati

Kyu hua yeh sab Shivaay Kyunnn??? (cries)

She prepares cerelac for Ansha and Vansh and take it into their room. Ansha and Vansh are sleeping calmly on their big bed. Anika sits on the corner of the bed facing the dressing table.

She keeps on thinking about Shivaay and cries her heart out.

Then she feels someone pulling her dupatta from behind and she turns to find Ansha sitting on the bed and utter her first word "m...m...ma..." That one word took away all the pain of Anika and she hugs Ansha aur ask her " phir se bolo beta, kya bola, bolo bolo."

Ansha says it again "maa.." Anika hugs her and taking her into embrace kisses her forehead. Just then Vansh too get up and come to her crawling.

Anika make both of them sit properly and slowly feeds them. She keeps on telling them about their father Shivaay Singh Oberoi

Anika make them say Paapa... Ansha just says Maa again but does not repeat papa ...

But surprisingly Vansh Say Paa,...Pa for the first time. Anika feels so elated as if she heard Shivaay after many years. She hugs both her kids and feel happy that she has them in this world...

Precap:

Why did Oberoi family split after Anika left the house???? Daadi and Shivaay's converstion

He learns complete story...

Oberois welcome Ishkara and baby boy...

Rudra comes back


pls do leave your comments

and tell me how its going

manas😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow totally emotional part
Seriously Pinky ka kuch nahi ho sakta
Feeling sad for Anika
Aww ansha and vansh said maa and Papa
Update soon

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