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K1k1k1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Omg Mann married and he ruthless to wife too what going on he and why he like this poor Sam and how there no picture of the handa daughter so Mann can't fine her interesting doll wake and meet the devil

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deep002

@deep002

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Awesome update dear, OMG he is already married to sameera

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Mahika

@MGMahika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Part 5

Maan looking at her hazel eyes sometimes lost then slowly pushed her hair behind her ear...Suddenly he come to conscious...then looking at her with fury ,,,his eyes turn red...his gripe tightens more on her wrist make her flinch, seeing his red eyes she already shivering with fear.

Doll :Mamma...whimper trembling lips, but this isn't affecting him at all

Maan : Who are you ? With extreme anger

Annie : Bhaiii she scream at Maan...then rashes to him before he crushed her Doll... Bhai meri Doll k upar se utho . Ushka dam ghut jayega. Please utho...uthooo she grabbed his wrist tried to free from her Doll from her Bhai

After sometime she succeed or say Maan leave her , Annie take her from there

Annie : Tumhe kaha tha na Doll ki bhai k room mein jana mat she giving her angry look

Doll : Par mujhe bhook lag rahi thi rubbing her wrist that is now turned red because of Maan devilish clutch

Annie : Chalo kuch kha lete hai they left for dinning table and having their food , Dadi also come there after sometime.

Dadi : Good morning bete wishes Annie then Doll Good morning too you mamma ki beti

Annie : Dadiii she is flinch woh mamma ki beti nahi, meri Doll hai

Dadi smile to see her so possessive about Doll same like Maan, Maan is also very possessive about his things, if anyone tried to take his belongings he make them see hell in this world itself

Dadi : Haan ...haan aapki he Doll hai. Waise Maan kya Mansion mein hai ? Taking sit beside them where Doll was having food like she is starved from ages.

Annie : Haan Dadi, aur aapko pata hai, bhai Doll ko apne niche kuchalne wale the . Said making her eyes big as she could as possible, hearing her "Bhai"'Doll stopped abruptly, where Dadi chocked her food

Dadi : Whattt shocked, Annie nodded, Dadi murmur kahi yeh Maan k room mein toh chali nahi gayi thi. Making thoughtful face but Annie heard all her murmuring

Annie : Haan Doll ko bhuk lag rahi thi, toh woh mujhe dund rahi thi

Dadi nodded and silently having breakfast, after sometime Sameera also join them...

Looking at New member she anxious to know who is she ?

Sameera : Yeh koun hai ? Asked with sugary voice

Annie : That's none of your business, she is my Doll so stay away she warned with her big eyes like her Maan bro...

Dadi : Sameera Maan kaha pe hai...

Sameera : Ji Dadima woh atey he honge...mai dekh k aati hu Sameera left from there with sad face...Annie smirk to see her left

Dadi : Annie aap Sameera se aise baat kaise kar sakti hai...bhooliye mat woh aapki Bhabhi hai she warned her

Annie : Sorry Dadi with her head down

Dadi : Ok nashta kijiye, hume aglibaar shikayat ka mouka nahi milni chahiye.

Annie only nodded her head. Suddenly Doll saw Maan coming downstairs

Doll : Annie Rakshash agaya she whisper but Annie can't able to heard anything...Annie Monster agaya almost crying then they saw Doll is crying.

Maan now standing there with his formal black suit looking as usual hot and dashing, about to say good morning but stopped heard someone cry, turn to see that girl is crying who did dare to enter in his room...giving her his famous angry glare make her cry louder than before because she is crying all the time looking at Maan thinking him as a "Monster"anytime he will grab her and eat her alive, her imagination running like anything making her slide down on the floor unconscious before she fall on the hard ground Maan rashes to her and hold her securely in his arms then from Dadi's instruction he left towards Guest room

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In Guest room

After checking doctor said to Dadi ...where in this room Annie, Dadi, Maan and Sameera all present

Doctor : Chinta ki koi baat nahi hai , kabhi kabhi jaida stress lene se aisa ho jata hai, she is perfectly fine

After Doctor left she gained conscious again saw this monster in front of her eyes because Maan is standing exactly front of her legs , Annie sitting beside her left side where Dadi right side and Sameera also standing beside Maan (but for Doll he is monster)seeing him she again closed her eyes tightly
Annie : Doll she called because she seen her open her eyes then shocked to see her closed again, hearing Doll again open then turn to Annie then Dadi at last Monster (Maan).

Doll : Mai koun hu...mai kaha hu... she is acting like she is seriously injured or lost her memory

Annie : Doll tum Doll ho...aur yeh Khurana Mansion hai... then looking at Dadi Dadi Doll sab bhool gayi hai almost crying, where Maan rolled his eyes seeing their antics woh mujhe kaise bhool sakti hai Dadiii...kuch bolo na...bolti kyu nahi

Maan left from there totally frustrated with their drama so as Sameera

Annie : Doll yaad karne ki koshish karo...mai Annie, aur yeh Dadi Dadi smile to knowing her drama all because of Maan, she actually got scared to seeing him.

Dadi : Doll thik hai Annie, aap bas unhe thodi der aram karne dijiye said with trying hard to control her laughing. Annie nodded then two of them left her alone sometime for her taking rest...

Part 5

Edited by MGMahika - 9 years ago

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zida

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

yapiii me 1st
superb pt
doll secrd from maan
I think think this Sam is no right

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shimmer0398

@shimmer0398

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

Hey!! M missing from your pm list!!
N plz pswrd fr part 5

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kabslocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Superb update. Geet went to Maa's room and he crushed her under him. Geet screem and Annie came. She saved Doll from Maan. On the dining table Dadima, Annie and Geet are sitting when Sameera came and asked about Doll. Maan also came and Doll got scared. She thought him to be a monster and got unconscious. Doctor came and told it was due to stress. Doll acted as she had forgot everything. Dadima knows that she was acting.

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hira2010

@hira2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Awesome update
Anamika notankti
Anie care
So good
Maan angry a girl call him monster

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Mahika

@MGMahika

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

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