NIBIR/SWARON STORY - A Valentine's Week (Completed)*2/1* - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333


Thanks 😊
But itu chotu comment 😕

Ary tb jst read kia tha n I was busy thoda
To d update was really amazing..
Kabir ki jealousy
I thnk u must introduce some1 who nisha z j of
Tb it ll b equal equal na..cz abi really feeling bad 4 my cuteness ki dukaan
Chalo watevr it'll b em sure acha hoga
Just update it d sooonnnesssttt
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Res 😊 unress 😊

Takasu are amazing😆😃👏 the grp of jokers 🤣
The variation in kabirs speed .. fast slow phir normal 🤣
Aww sare rose phek diyee... Poor nisha ... Koi nai jaldi kya pata pura rose garden mile😆 ya roz ek rose 😳
Romance ki gadi dheere dhere saki aur nibir station ki oor badh rahi h ... Passengers taiyaar h jaldi se gadhi k speed badhao 🤣
Superb update yrr👏loved it...


Thanks poorni 😳😳🤗
@bold 😆😆

Romance ki gadi nibir ki slow chal rahi hai SaKi toh full speed me hai 😉😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tani_0209

Ary tb jst read kia tha n I was busy thoda
To d update was really amazing..
Kabir ki jealousy
I thnk u must introduce some1 who nisha z j of
Tb it ll b equal equal na..cz abi really feeling bad 4 my cuteness ki dukaan
Chalo watevr it'll b em sure acha hoga
Just update it d sooonnnesssttt


Thanks tani 😳😳
@ cute act ki dukan j me or cute dikhta hai😃😆
Or introduce someone else 😕 I have already fixed everything toh koi nhi aayegi 😆 par koi old character hi nisha ko j kar de 😉😉 pata nhi 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

Wow... Marjawa gud khake


Thanks sanchi 😳😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful 👏
Im enjoying j kabir but bechara saurav bich mein phas gaya hai
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

awesome update
loved itt


Thanks😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: angelanju

Beautiful 👏

Im enjoying j kabir but bechara saurav bich mein phas gaya hai
Update soon


Thank you anju 😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago



Teddy Day


It was a bright sunny morning. The streets were fresh, calm and composed. Not many people were outside this early. There were only a few early birdies and unknown big box infront of a big vila. But being unaware to this beautiful morning a girl was sleeping peacefully because today college was going to start late, thanks to her mother who come to call her after seeing a huge, huge box in front of their house.

Princess..." Said girl's mom, caressing her daughter hairs

Sone do na mom..." Said girl and cover her face

Wake up princess look there is a surprise for you " said the lady

What mom...??? You know today is not my birthday " said girl turning other side

Yeah I know...but I think your boyfriend don't...see what he had done " said lady, boyfriend word make girl wake up with jerk, she ran out fast as fast she could. She come to living room saw big well wrapped box. She almost tore everything. When her mom shouted "sharon it's all yours...have patience..." Hearing this she fasten her speed more. In few minutes, larger than life, a teddy bear was visible to her.

Arey sharon sumbhal ke " said sharon's mom as sharon try to hold that teddy but failed miserably and she was on floor with teddy on top. Many servant of her house including her mother come to rescue her. Then placed sharon and teddy properly.

Kisne bejha hai...?? Uska naam toh batao?" Asked her mother teasingly

Pata nhi mom... I'm so happy " said sharon looking at teddy lovingly

Ohh secret admirer...hmmm" teased her mom while she blushed as she was wandering that, this all done by swayam then left from there not before ordering her sevant to bring teddy in her room.



She's happy " said swayam dreamingly

Nisha looked at him with corner of her eyes, smiled little bit then said "ab hogaya ho toh chale college bhi jaana hai "

Mere pyar ki dushman kya hai tujhe...kitna padhna hai tujhe " said swayam as NiYam were in swayam's car, they were just outside of sharon's house but at some distance. swayam fitted transmitter in the teddy bear's box so they were able to hear sharon.

Acha beta main tere pyar ki dushman hun iss liye tere sath subha se yahan hun or tere pyar ka gift rakh kar main aayi or transmitter bhi maine lagaya..." She stopped as swayam said " bas kar pagli rulaegi kya main samjh gaya "

Good toh chal na...or iss transmitter ko thod de " said nisha and swayam did what asked



swayam drive back to nisha's house only to get big surprise over there. All the time NiYam was fighting with each other or teasing each other. Fighting because nisha had wake so early to give surprise to sharon and teasing because swayam take kabir's name in between to distract her.



Nisha aa gayi maa " said sukku as soon as nisha stepped out from Swayam's car. Seeing choral swayam too went inside of nisha's house instead of going back to his house.

Kya hogaya ?? " she asked seeing her family members serious face as if something bigger had happened

Kya chal raha hai nisha ??" Asked her father in very serious tone

Kuch nhi..." Said nisha

Bas yahi din dekhna reh gaya tha...meri beti ka ek boyfriend hai or mujhe bata bhi nhi rahi " said ramesh melodramatically

What the...Papa mera koi boyfriend nhi hai or na boyfriend hoga " said nisha

Arey q nhi hoga tera bf ?? Kya zindagi bhar akele hi rehna chahti hai tu ??" Asked her mother in tension because of nisha's word

Maa main akele hi achi hun...mujhe khud se bhout pyar hai or main apne alwa kisi or se pyar nhi kar sakti...or mujhe nhi pasand ye sab chiz " said nisha annoyingly

Par q beta...q tujhe kisi se pyar nhi karna...??" asked lakshmi seeing something in nisha's eyes which were speaking some other emotion

Kyunki aaj ke zamane me sacha pyar reh hi nhi gaya hai...sirf ek natak hai sirf ek natak...apne interest, status ke liye bas use karte hai ek dusre ko just like tissue paper " said nisha her voice reflected an unknown pain. swayam know what she is talking about while her parents understood something wrong with her that they missed out. Bunty didn't understand anything stood there said nothing, sukku sensing the tension, so to distract everyone he spoke " vo sab nhi pata par tu jhoot bol rahi hai...mere koi bf nhi hai...jhooti hai ek number " and smack her shoulder

Tu chup kar kutte..." She said and smack him back

Main jhoot bol raha hun...toh bata ye kisne bejha " asked sukku showing her a box, not so big as swayam had given to Sharon but nor too small a medium sized box

Hawww nisha tera sach me koi bf hai...tune mujhe bhi nhi bataya chor kahinki...I'm your best friend nisha " cried swayam

Shut up you moron...mujhe nhi pata hai ye kya hai" said nisha

Toh khol ke dekho na nishu di " said bunty, nisha did what bunty said open that box only to reveal a cute white colored teddy bear which make nisha smile. She was smiling looking at teddy bear forgetting eight pairs of eyes were looking at her suspiciously, she looked up her smile faded away seeing everyone like that.

What ??" She said try hard to not to blush

Kon diya tujhe ye ??" Asked ramesh

Mujhe nhi pata " said nisha

Toh itna has q rahi thi ??" Asked sukku

Kyunki ye bhout cute hai " said nisha looking at teddy bear with adoration which turned soon in shock as swayam snatch it and run away

Aee kutte vo mera hai " said nisha and run behind him

Toh bata kisne diya ye tujhe ?" asked swayam as he stood up near door of the house

Mujhe nhi pata hai bhai " said nisha

Bhai nhi hun main tera...or ab ye tujhe tabhi milega jab tu sach bolegi " said swayam and went to his house

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Nisha was sitting putting her head down on desk feeling all annoyed with swayam. Kabir and his friends come sit on their seat. Seeing nisha like that kabir asked "kya hua nisha ??" Hearing her favorite tune she turned not sitting straight just look at him and smiled, He smiled back.

Kuch nhi hua kabir " she said and turn back

Then why are you sitting like this ??" He asked again

Koi kitna kameena ho sakta hai " she said which shocked him

Jitna tu soch bhi nhi sakti " come reply from swayam

Tujhse baat kar rahi hun kya...apna kaan yahi kaat ke phek diya hai kya " she replied

Ohh gussa hai...toh bata de mujhe or apna saman lele "

Kutte mujhe pata hai kya kon diya hai "

Gali ruk..." swayam said and took out that cute teddy bear from desk and punched it.

aaaeee " nisha screamed she almost stood up to beat him black and blue when he gesture he'll do it again, punch it again, seeing that she sat back and putting head on desk cried again

Abey ye toh kabir wala teddy lag raha hai " whisper ashu

Lag kya raha hai bey vo kabir wala hi hai... Ye pray kar ki kabir na pehchan gaya ho " said tarun

Vo pehchan gaya hai..." Said ashu looking back at red in anger kabir

Kuch bolna mat sidhe ho jaa " said tarun

Then they both never turn back, leaving a hell angry kabir to clam down by own himself.

Soon Hindi class started. A male teacher come to taught them as Nibir were sitting in last bench. Ashu and tarun just infront of them so nisha was hidden from teacher taking advantage she kept down her head.

On the other hand,something was going in between ashu and tarun, including nisha too although she wasn't part of their convo but she was able to hear everything clearly, kabir was looking at teacher hearing him carefully.

Ashu was giggling continuously thinking something.
Oye ghode...kya hua?" Asked tarun seeing him giggling

Kuch dimaag me aya..." Ashu replied
Wao...Eureka ?" Tarun asked

Abey sun toh...dekh...!! Just imagine DIL word ke meaning ko hum tashrif mane to...line ka matlab hi badal jayega" ashu said

Kya matlab hai saaf saaf bak " said tarun

Tashrif matalb smajhta hai na tu ?" Ashu asked

Haan na jab hum baith te hai toh tashrif rakhte hai " tarun said

Haan... Correct...Soch agar hum dil ka meaning tashrif mane to har sentence ka meaning kya hoga? " said ashu to which Tarun gave him a look of disgust.

Toh pehli line...humara dil apke pass hai..." Said ashu and laughed along with tarun getting the newly underline meaning of word DIL. Behind them nisha too giggle without coming in notice.

Hahahaha ek aur sun...best one..." Said ashu

Bas oye... Its disgusting man..." Tarun said though he could not stop his laughter.

Arey sun toh...HUM APKE DIL MEIN REHTE HAI "

Hahahahahaha...chiii oye... Hahaha... " nisha and tarun said toghther but couldn't control themselves from laughing like lunatic. When nisha told ashu to stop that ashu and tarun realize she had heard their conversation. They laughed out so loud to earn everyone's stare at them. Ashu was normally laughing, tarun had put his head on desk while nisha had covered her face by her right hand.
Yeh kya ho raha hai...khade ho jao teeno...jinke itne daant nikal rahe hai..." Said Hindi sir, they stood up trying best not to laugh. While kabir were looking at trio try to understand what had happened just now.

Haan to aap teeno batane ka kasht karenge ki aapko hassi kyu arahi hai...zara hum bhi to hasle..." Asked sir

"Haaan haaan kyu nhi..." whole class crooned.

Now what they suppose to tell, so they stood up silently

Aap bataoge ki bahar jaoge?? " he asked

Bahar jayenge..." Aahu, nisha and tarun said in unison. Making whole class "...ooohhh..."

Niklo baahar..." Sir said

Nisha and tarun was walking silently, ashu was walking like he had won gold medal. By walking something click in nisha mind. Slowly she took out from Swayam's desk and ran out before swayam realize something. On the other hand swayam didn't like that nisha was laughing like that with other group and kabir was shell shocked, he stood there with wide mouth open because of two reasons first nisha left the class and second he's friends too now what he'll do alone.

Trio came out, looked at each other and burst out in laughter holding stomach. After a while...
Chalo coffee pikar ate hai " said ashu

But you're disgusting " said nisha holding teddy

Yeah she's right " said tarun

Acha baba main tum dono ko coffee pilata hun chalo " said ashu

Okay " both tarun and nisha said

They walked away leaving all yawning sleeping in hindi class.


After a while kabir come back to his friends asking what happened in class ? Why they laughed wagera wagera

Kya hua tha bey...kyun Mar rahe the ? Or nisha kahan hai ?" Kabir asked seeing his friends leaning on pillar munching chips

Nisha toh ghar chali gayi... " said ashu

Par q ??" Kabir asked sadly

Kyunki vo apne teddy ko swayam se bachna chahti hai " taurn said

Acha... Wait a second tujhe kaise pata ?" Asked kabir

Jab hum coffee pi rahe the tab nisha batai" said ashu

What ??" Kabir asked in anger " tum dono nisha ke sath the or coffee bhi pi " kabir exclaimed, sat down and cried for not spending time with nisha

First tarun and ashu made ho gaya shuru face then pick him up and take him to rehearsal hall only to get punches and kicks from kabir as kabir blame them for not taking him along with them. As usual trio fight then think about next day plan.

On the other hand, poor swayam was beaten by nisha black and blue for punching her teddy bear which was given by kabir but she never told swayam about that.

To be continued...

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Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waah kirti ka itna bada tedy .. so romantics 😳
I was just imagining that ki kabir ka reaction kya hua hoga jab sauro ne vo punch mara tedy ko 🤣
Poor nisha ... I wonder sab uske gifts k peeche kyu h 😆 roses kabir ne fek diye ... Tedy sauro ne punch kia😆
Than tasu k jokes se teeno out ... 😃 poor kabir cofee nai pee paya nisha k saath 🤣
Edited by poornima_15 - 8 years ago
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