ISHRA OS-|| Patta Patta Janta Hai ||

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Pata Pata janta hai


After ishra, abhishek and shagun come to know that there is nidhi in the box instead of ruhi. Ishra had arugument and raman went from there in anger. While ishita thought to use this situation in her favour. She tell her plan to abhishek and shagun and they also get ready. They brought nidhi a flat. They call sohail there. When sohail come he was shocked to see his sister tied with a bomb. Abhishek was hiding.

Sohail- Ishita Bhalla tumhari himmat kaise hue mare bhain ho baandka rakhna ki aur uska upar bomb lagana ki.

Ishita- Mara himmat ki toh tum baat hi mat karo sohail. Jab baat mare family and most importantly mara bachho ki aati ate ha to mara liya kuch galat aur kuch sahi nahi hota. Aur tum na toh mare beti ko chot paunchayia ha tumha ma kasa chodhdu.

Sohail- Dekiya plz mare bhain ko chod dijiya, ma aapka saamna haath jodta hu. Unka siva mara is duniya ma aur koye nahi ha.

Ishita- Tekha ma tumahri bhain ko chod dungi lakin uska liya tumha mara ek kam karna hoga.

Sohail-(pleading her) Aap jo khaingi ma vo...

Sohail(laughing sarcastically)- kabhi nahi karunga. Mujha pata ha ishita bhalla ki tum aisa kahi nahi karogi. Tum acha logo ki yahe problem hote ha. Tum kabhi kisi ko maar nahi sakta. Aur ma janta hu ye bomb bhi nakli ha.

Nidhi- Tum pagal hog aye ho Sohail ye bomb asli ha nakli nahi.

Ishita- Sohail baat jab bachho ki ate ha na toh ek ma jan de bhi sakti ha aur jan la bhi sakti ha. Dekhna chaoga, she switch on the bomb and count dow start.

Nidhi start panicing and shouting at sohail to do whatever they day, but sohail was confident that bomb is fake.

Ishita- Aur agar tum chaho toh ma ye bomb fatna sa rok sakti hu, lakin uska liya tumha paper par apna saare gunha confess karna honga ki tumna hi us blackmailer ko mara tha, tumhna hi ruhi ka mms banaya tha aur tumna hi ruhi ko blackmail kiya tha ki agar usna koon ka ilzam apna sar nahi liya toh tum uska parents aur uska bhai bhan ko mar daloga, aur is sabh ma nidhi bhi tumhara saath shamil ha.

Nidhi- Sohail plz jo ye kaha raha ha vo karo sirf ek mint raha gaya ha.

Sohail was still admant but then shout on him and said to as they say. Then sohail write on the paper and confess his crime. Then ishita stop the bomb, while abishek came from outside with his constables and act as he doesn't know anything and was finding nidhi as she was missing. Then ishita gave that confession paper to abishek and abishek arrest nidhi and sohail. Then they went to mayor of delhi and show him the letter and they release ruhi.

Ishita bring ruhi back to bhalla house. Raman was crying in room for ruhi when he heard ruhi's voice, he immediately come down and get happy seeing ruhi there. He went to her and hugged her while ishita move aisde. All settle down in hall and then ishita tell them that how she rescued her. All were happy getting ruhi back while ishita tell everyone that she was going to amm's house for sometime. Mrs. Bhalla and raman felt ashamed the way they behaved with her. Raman want to say sorry to her but he also know sorry is not enough. At dinner time ishita come back and had dinner with everyone. After having dinner all went to their room. Ishita was in kitchen doing work avoiding going to their room. Pihu tell ruhi that how raman shouted on ishita and tell her that ruhi is not her daughter. Ruhi went to romi and get to know how raman treated ishita and get angry on raman. When raman slept ishita entered hrer room and saw him sleeping and slowly pack her bags and went to ruhi s room.

In morning, all were in hall when ishita ,ruhi and pihu came out of room with their bags. On the same time raman also came down and saw them. His heart was beating fast thinking of the worst, when mrs. Bhalla said

Mrs.Bhalla- Ye kaya puttar kaha ja rahi ha.

Ishita- Ma ja rahi mumiji amma ka ghar.

Mrs.Bhalla- Par kuy puttar ma janti hu mana jo kiya mujha nahi karna chaiya tha, maanu maaf karda puttar par ye ghar chodkar mat ja.

Ishita(crying)- Nahi mumiji abh bhaut ho gaya. Aap plz mafi mat mangiya. Aap ki koye galti nahi ha. Par ma abh takh chuki hu. Jabh ki koye problem aati ha toh uska liya hamasha mujha zimadar tehraya jata ha. Mujha ye yaad dilaya jata ha ki ma ruhi ki asli ma nahi hi, ruhi mare beti nahi ha. Ruhi mare zindagi ha, ma usa chot paunchana ka baare ma soch bhi nahi sakti. Lakin baar baar mujha ruhi ka liya apna payaar aur apni mamata saabit karni padhti ha. Ma abh takh chuki hu. Ma abh ye aur bardasht nahi kar sakti. Ho sake to mujha maaf kar dijiyaga.

Ruhi- Aur ma bhi apni ishima ka saath rahungi. (turning to raman)- papa aap ye kasa kar sakta ho aap hamasha ishima ko kasa blame kar sakta ho. Aap janta ho ishima apna bachho sa kitna payaar karti ha. Unka saath bura karna toh dur wo toh is baare ma sapna ma bhi nahi soch sakti. Aur aap kasa kaha sakta ho ko vo mare ma nahi ha aur ma inki beti nahi hu. Ishima mare ma ha aur hamasha rahangi. Aaj ma is ghar ma hu aur aapka aur mara rishta teek hua toh vo sirf aur sirf ishima ki vajah sa. Aur ye hak kisi ko nahi ha vo kaha ki ma ishima ki beti nahi hu ya vo mari ma nahi ha, aapko bhi nahi papa. Aapka baato ki wajah sa ishima na suside karna ki koshish ki. Aur jab vo 7 sal baad wapis aye aapna unha kitna hurt kiya. Aapna toh pihu ko bhi ishima ka baare ma nahi bataya aur shagun mama ko uski ma bana diya.

Pihu- Aur ma bhi apni ishima ka saath jaungi. Papa aap hamasha ishima sa ladhta rahata ho aur unha rulata rahata ho. Ma apni ishima ka saath rahungi.

Meanwhile Adi also come with his bag.

Adi- Aur ma bhi apni ishima ka saath jaunga. Is baar kisi ki bhi wajah sa ma apni ma sa alag anhi hunhga. 7 sal apni ma ka bagar raha hu abh aur nahi.

Ishita, adi, ruhi and pihu went to amma's house. At the door ishita once turn and look at raman and saw a defeated and lost man but she had enough now so went from there crying.


Samandar se zyada meri aankhon me aansu
Jaane ye Khuda bhi hai aisa kyun

Tujhko hi aaye na khayal mera
Patta patta jaanta hai
Ik tu hi na jaane haal mera
Patta patta jaanta hai
Ik tu hi na jaane haal mera

Nit-din nit-din roiyan main
Sonh Rabb di na soiyan main
Ik tere piche maahi
Saavan diyan ruttan khoiyan main

All were crying in hall while raman went to his room and locked himself in room. He take out his family album and start seeing their pics and crying cursing himself for ruining his family with his anger. On the other hand ishita was also crying remembering their moments.

Dil ne dhadkano ko hi tod diya
Toota hua seene mein chhod diya

Ho.. dil ne dhadkano ko hi tod diya
Toota hua seene mein chhod diya

Khushiyan le gayaa
Dard kitne de gayaa
Ye pyaar teraa

Patta patta jaanta hai
Ik tu hi na jaane haal mera

Mere hisse aayi teri parchhaiyan
Likhi thi laqeeron mein tanhaiyan
Haan.. mere hisse aayi teri parchhaiyan
Likhi thi lakeeron mein tanhaiyan

Haan karun tujhe yaad main
Hai tere baad intezaar tera

Patta patta jaanta hai
Ik tu hi na jaane haal mera

Haal mera...


Days start passing, it's been one month that all happened. Bhalla house has become silent. Raman go to office early and come late and then start drinking till he lost his senses. Ishita was also in bad condition though she never show in front of everyone, but it's difficult for her to live without her ravan kumar. Some times she thinks to forget everything and go back to raman but ten she remember his words and get sad. He got to know from romi about raman everyday. In morning when raman go to work she see him from the window of her room and in evening she sleep when he saw him coming. She know he was drowning himself in work but want him to learn her importance in his life and want to go back with self respect.

One evening, ishita come late due to emergency and saw raman going towards terrace and was drunk fully. He was not able to stand properly even and it was raining also, she got worried and went behind him. When she reached terrace she saw heart wenching scene. Raman was sitting on the railing hanging his legs down on the other side and was drenching in rain. She got startled seeing this and went to him

Ishita- Raman ye aap kaya kar raha ho. Aaap gir jaoga , utro yaha sa.

Raman- Tumha kya farak padhta ha. Tum toh chali gaye na mujha chod kar aur mara bachha bhi. Mujha akala kar diya tum sab na. Ma maru ya jiu tumha kaya.

Ishita- Raman plz nicha aa jao, app gir jaoga.

Raman- Toh kaya ua mar hi jaunga na. Acha ha tumhari musibat bhi khatam ho jayege. Tum toh mujsa payaar bhi nahi karti na, he said complaing cutely.

Ishita(crying)- Aisa kuch nahi ha, aap plz phala niche aajao .

Raman- Phala tum payar se bolo aur khao ki u love me, phir hi ma nicha aunga, he said cuetly

Ishita(smiling at his antics)- Ha I Love You Raman. Plz abh niche aa jao.

Raman-Ok ishu

Ishita smiled hearing ishu from him. She blushed as he never called her ishu. Raman was getting down and ishita was helping him as he stumble a little and was about to fall when ishita held him but loose her balance. Both fall down. Ishita was on raman and they share a beautiful eyelock. Raman tuck her hair behind her ear.

Raman- Abh tum mujha chodkar nahi jaogi na. I know I behaved like a jerk. Gussa ma kuch bhi bol deta hu par tum janti ho na ma tumsa kitna payaar karta hu. Agar tum abh mujha chodkar gaye toh mar jaunga. Pagal ho gaya hu is ek mahina ma tumhara bina. Nahi jee sakta tum sabh ka bina. Plz I am sorry. Tum mujha tapad marlo chaha ya stick sa marlo par plz vapas aa jao. I can't live without u. plz vapas aa jao. Plz love me don't hate me.

Ishita was crying seeing him pleading and curse herself to make him like this that he latterly pleading her to come back and love him. Ishita kept her head on her chest and hugged him tight and said

Ishita- Bas raman, I am sorry. Mujha aapko chodkar nahi jana chaiya tha. Ma janti hu aap chaha jo marze khao, jo marze karo aap mujhsa bhaut payaar karta ho. Then they sat up leaning on the wall, while ishita kept her head on his chest.

Raman- Ma janta hu ishita maine hamasha apni baato se tumha bhaut hurt kiya ha,itna ki tumna suside karna ki koshish ki. Par mara yakeen mano vo sabh maine gussa ma kaha tha dil se nahi. Plz tum mujha jo punishment dana chaho do par plz mujha chodkar mat jau, I can't take it. 7 sal is guilt ka saath jiya ka mare vajah sa maine tumha aur hamari ruhi ko kho diya. Ma chaha gussa ma kuch bhi bolu par ma ye dil sa manta hu ki ruhi tumhari beti ha aur hamasha rahgi. Aur ruhi sahi khati ha kisiko haq nahi ha ki vo kahe ki vo tumhari beti nahi ha.Plz I am really sorry.

Ishita- Aap soory mat bolo raman. Galti mare bhi thi. Mujha aapko aisa chodkar nahi jana chaiya tha. Par jabh bhi aap khata tha ki ruhi mare beti nahi ha toh aisa lagta tha ki aap mujha yaad dila raha ho ki maine ruhi jo janam nahi diya ha, ki ma uski sautali ma hu. Isliya maine ye step uthaya. Lakin abh ma aapko chodkar khai nahi jaungi, I promise. Ma bhi aapka bina nahi rah sakti. Acha chalo niche chalta ha. Aap pura bheeg chukka ho bimar ho jaoga.

Raman get up and in his senses due rain. He picked ishita in his arms, while ishita's hand automatically went around his head.

Ishita- Ye kaya kar raha ho raman koye dekh laga toh acha nahi...

Ishita's words left in mid as he perk on his lips. He know how to make her quiet. She then close her eyes and lean on his shoulder blushing hard. Raman take her to Bhalla house to his room. As it was late everybody was sleeping but adi and ruhi was awake who has come out to find their ishima. They saw raman taking ishita to bhalla house in his arms and come to know that they have sorted their differences. Raman was lost in ishita so he didn't notice adi and ruhi. Adi and ruhi went inside and slept peacefully waiting for the next morning so that they can go back to their home and agai live like a happy family.

Raman lay ishita on bed and went to close the door. Ishita get up and was going towards washroom when raman held her wrist and backhugged her.

Ishita- Ye kaya kar raha ho raman

Rman- Apni biwi se payaar.

Raman- shhh..., by pacing her finger on his lips.

Raman pic her and went to washroom. He kept her down and start the shower. Warm water fall on them drenching them. Ishita turn around not able to hold his gaze. Raman slid his fingers down her arms and held her hand and pull her towards him, while with other hand he removed her hairs at one side. Her bare back was visible to him. Raman ran his fingers on her bare back sending a shrill through her spine. Ishita closed her eyes tightly. Raman pulled her more and blow air on her neck. Ishita was feeling heavenly. Raman kissed the nape of her neck. He trailed the kissed till her ear and bite her ear.

Tujhe dekh dekh sona
Tujhe dekh dekh sona
Tujhe dekh kar hai jagnaa
Maine yeh zindagani
Sang tere bitani
Tujhme basi hai meri jaan haye

Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jaayen

Ishita instantly turn around and hugged him. Raman broke the hug and joined their heads and pinned her to glass wall and locked her hands above her head and kissed her cheeks. Ishita was about to go when raman stopped her by holding her shoulders and again pinned her to wall and removed her pallu and pleats and removed her saree. Ishita also start unbuttoning his shirt and removed it. Ishita kissed his bare chest and bite the nipples. Raman pulled ishita towards him and removed the blouse and skirt in a jiffy and removed his pants. They were standing in their under clothes. Raman picked her and went towards bed. He gently laid her on bed like she is a glass doll and climb over her. They removed their remaining clothes.

Kab se hain dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe
Inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa
Kehna kabhi to mera maan haye
Jiya dhadak dhadak Jaayen

Lagta hai ye kyu mujhe sadiyo se chaahu tujhe
Mere sapno mein aake apna mujhko banake
Mujhpe tu kar ehsaan haye
(Jiya dhadak dhadak Jaayen)

He start sucking her breast on by one giving her pleasure. He bend down and kissed her belly. He saw she can't take more, he entered in her and they rocked the sync making her his all over again.

Tujhe dekh dekh sona
Tujhe dekh kar hai jagna
Maine yeh zindagani
Sang tere hai bitani haye
(Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jaayen)

After two three round they get exhausted and slept curdling into each other. Raman was sleeping peacefully keeping her head on her chest and while ishita lovingly kissed his forehead and promised to never leave him again, whatever may happen.

Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Dhadak dhadak dhadak jaaye
(Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jaye)


In morning adi,ruhi and pihu come back bhalla house and tell them about ishra. All were happy that their differences got solved. Ishra also came down and take blessings from elders and promise to be together always.

The End


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations for first os
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Congratulations on Your first OS dear

Nice one
All the three takes Ishita's side
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awesome os...raman and toshiji feeling ashamed bcoz of there behaviour...raman apologise is cute...i hope show mein bhi aisa hi ho ...raman ko apni mistake samje... ...
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Congo for your first os.
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lovely os
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raman was complaining cutely they sorted their differences

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Beautiful os...👏
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