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jeharshu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Mind blowing concept didu
Arjun loves rosh,Riya loves Arjun nd sam has feelings for Riya
Ab aage kya hoga???
Do continue soon
Sorry for late comment
Nd thanks for the pm didu

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shaheen82

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Nice concept dear...
Continue soon 😊

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nicronyariya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Fantastic prologue

Waiting for the update

Cont soon

Thanx for pm

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Areesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

nice cs

prologue

a big no to samiya

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Shanafr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Update plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz

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Krinal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Nice cs and prologue

That's a weird love square, so Arjun's not over Roshni, Riya loves Arjun but Sam has feelings for Riya and Ayesha has feelings for Sam.. People are gonna get hurt in this but it sounds super interesting!

Update soon..

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Part 1:-

Etf office:-

Conference room:-

All are in conference room..

Shree n chotu little sad face banaye hue baithe he..arjun apni ungaliyo me pen ghuma raha he..n soch me duba hua he..

Sam bhi kisi soch me he..

All are sitting quietly..

Aayesha(seeing choree):-tum dono aise kyo baithe ho..?aaj hua kya he..?

Shree(sadly):-exora 2 virus ke case ko aaj pure 6 months ho gaye he..kash ri hoti..

Aayesha:-ri..?

Shree:-ri..matlab..Riya mukherji yaar..bataya tha na..?

Aayesha:-wahi officer jisane lakho logo ki jaan bachate hue exora virus khud hi kha liya tha..

Chotu:-ha wahi..woh abhi bhi coma me he..

Shree choree get sad..aayesha too feel bad hearing this n become quite..

But two minds are lost in remembering Riya..

Sam remember his first meeting with Riya..

Flashback:-

(Consider sam is remembering this)

Sam(on phone):-OK..OK sir..jai hind sir..

He cut phone..n look to choree..

Sam:-guys..a new team member is joining us..aur woh as a research specialist appoint hui he..

Choree look each other naughtily..thinking finally some girl is going to enter in their boring team..

Same time the conference room door get opened..

N a girl waring white shirt n blue jeans..with high pony tied hairs n red clip to hairs enter in room..

Sam look to door n get lost in her..n automatically get up from chair n keep staring her in trance..

Seeing Sam standing up,the girl walked to him..

Girl:-umm..muze etf chief acp sameer dam sigh rathod se milna he..

Sam(coming out of his trance):-umm..mein hi hu sameer..

The girl smiles little..

Girl:-miss.Riya mukherji reporting sir..

Sam:-oh..new appointment..? For research specialist..?

Riya:-yes sir..

She give him his appointment letter..

But he don't read it..just overlook it..n again his eyes turn to Riya..

Sam:-welcome Riya..welcome to etf..

Saying this Sam shakes his hand with her..n keep shaking for some more time n then leave her hand..

Riya:-thank u sir..

Sam:-meet our team mates..shree..technical expert..

Shree n Riya look each other shocked..n hug happily each other..

Sam:-tum dono ek dusare ko jante ho..?

Shree:;sir..mein aur Riya training me ek hi batch me the..par muze technical department mila aur isse research..

Sam:-oh..Riya ye chotu he..our commando..

Riya:-hi chotu..

Chotu:-hi..

Same time Sam's phone buzz..

Sam(on phone):-what..?raghu sir ki beti ka kidnap ho gaya he..?sir..OK sir..ham abhi waha pahochte he..

Sam cut phone..

Sam(looking to team):-team..we have a case..ham crime scene pe chalate he directly.. Raste me case discuss kar lenge..

Sam started walking towards exit of etf..

Choree n Riya behind them..

Riya(mutter to shree):-oh god..ye sach me etf Chief he..I can't believe this..

Shree(mutter):-kyo..?kya hua..?

Riya(mutter):-are muze laga tha etf chief he..aur itna lamba bhari bharkam naam he sameer damsing rathod toh koi kam se kam 50 sal ka hoga..par ye toh bahot young he..aur kya personality he..

Shree:-personality toh he..par utne hi khadoos bhi he..tuze baad me batauga..

But unknown to them Sam has heard this..n first time he don't want to yell on shree for calling him khadoos as his mind was thinking on Riya..

Flashback ends..

Sam is smiling lightly remembering it..

He sigh n get up from chair..he walked to window n started looking outside..

He remember how slowly he get impressed by intelligence.. How he was lost in her in kalki devi case..n he get jelious when all are staring as soon as she enter there..he get more angry when choree compliment her n that's why he remind them that they are on duty..even he get flurious when that boy try to flirt her.. But he then Impressed by the way she handled him..

He sometimes acts that he is irritated by her satastic theories but in mind he always want to hear her statistics.. He always want to see her simple smiles..he just love her smile..the way she giggles..he started liking everything of her..n then the case of riyaz khan comes..when she said he was her crush..he feels really bad..really bad..n he don't know the reason..he realized he has started feeling more..the way she goes to hostage case with Arjun..n the way she courageously goes to bank money transfer case he was just more impressed by her..in that case she n Arjun was caught by that goons..but then after sometimes he saw Arjun holding Riya in his arms n bringing her out..he was so shocked n worried seeing Riya hurt..but he holds himself..he smack himself not to act like fool..he told himself to behave like chief..

Days goes on ..he has realized this feeling for Riya is more than just liking..it's love..but he is stopping himself..

N then the exora virus case comes to them..

Riya gulp that virus to save all..what he just wanted to save her..just wanted to keep her safe..but he can't do anything.. Nothing.. She steps into coma..n had not wake up till..

Sam sigh sadly..

Sam(in mind):-kash..kash..meine khud ko roka na hota..kash khud ki feelings ko accept kar leta aur tumse confess kar leta..kash ..kash tum ..tum thik hoti..kash..kash..

He close his eyes..n try to control his feelings..

Here another man..who act as if bringing Riya's subject has not affected him at all,but in reality..it affect him lot..a lot..really a lot..

He remember the first meeting with her..he was checking petrol in car of sheen n Riya attack him from behind..but failed..n their close moment..

He smiles remembering her shocked face when she come to know that the man who she consider criminal is actually acp Arjun rawte..

Her red clip stick to his shirt.. N her pink pen..her emotional face after they save all girls..then her irritated face when she come to know Arjun joining etf..the way she ware that short dress to prove herself.. N then the way she said "aurat ki kabiliyat pe kabhi shaq nahi karna chahiye"..

He like that attitude..but don't said..

But he get angry when she unintentionally interfere in his life..he was angry n ask her to stay away from him..

N the way she said sorry to him.. He was melted..but still act as indifferent..

N in kalvi devi case..she was looking so beautiful but he get angry to her thinking she told others that he is her husband..the way she answer that boy ,he was actually impressed.. The way he pull to her when she was dancing..n her smiling face..

N then she started making tea for him sometimes..sometimes compliment him for solving case..

He too slowly started getting comfortable around her.. The way she put the coin in his pocket in ganapati case n it save his life..the way she help him by keeping herself in danger in hostage case n in money transfer case also..she get hurt n how arjun saved her..he was so worried for her but dont show it..the way she was scare of firing.. But he help her..n she broke down..he remember that moment when she was under shower..n then hug to him..he cup her face n try to make her understand that she had saved one life..

Slowly she get confident in firing..n become good shooter..

N then the exora virus case come up..they had done all investigation.. But still not getting culprit..they are feeling helpless n peoples are dying because of virus..

Then Riya come to him n said that she trust him ..she knows he will caught the culprit..n she thanks him fir helping her in making good officer..

N then she gulp that virus..what he just wanted to do is to hide her in His arms..not yo let her go anywhere..but..but she step in coma..n not awaken still..

He sadly sigh..

Arjun(in mind):-tumse dur hone ke baad iss baat ka ehsaas hua he ke mein tumhare liye kya feel karta tha..ab iss baat ka ehsaas hua he ke mein tumse kitna pyar karta hu..plz Riya..plz jaldi wapas aa jao..plz..

Arjun n Sam both's though get broke when they hear shree..

Shree:-are bhul hi gaya aaj sankasti chaturthi he na..meine mannat mangi thi ke ri thik ho jaye tab tak mein har sankasti ko prasad chadauga .

Chotu:-sham ko ghar jate waqt chale Jana mandir..mein bhi chaluga tere sath..

Shree nodded..

Sam(in mind):-bhagwan aaj tak kuch mangne ki zarurat nahi padi..Jo chahiye tha woh meine zindagi me hasil kiya..par Riya ko nahi kho sakhta..usse thik kar do..plz thik karo..bas ek baar usse hosh aa jaye..fir sabse pehale mein tumse yahi kahuga ke mein tumse pyar karta hu..

Arjun(in mind):-bhagwan..? Tum nahi ho ..nahi ho tum mein aaj tak yahi kehta raha aur aaj bhi yahi kahuga lekin agar tum sach me ho toh Riya ko thik kar do..usse zindagi de do..plz..agar woh thik ho gayi toh mein maan lunga ke tum ho..aur tumne aur kismat ne muze ek aur chance diya..usse thik kar do..mein zindagi bhar tumhara shukarguzar rahuga..bas ek baar woh thik ho..fir mein usse keh dunga ke mein usse bahot pyar karta hu..bahot..

Here in hospital:-

Riya is lying on bed..life support system is attached to her..her parents are sitting near her bed..

Riya's mom:-har din ye sochke jagti hu ke aaj meri Riya ko hosh aayega..par har din aise hi guzar jata he..kya meri beti zindagi bhar aise hi rahegi ab..?

Riya's papa:-shant ho jao shobha..sab thik hoga..hamari beti bahot hi brave he..woh zarur thik hogi..dekhna tum.. Bhagwan pe bharosa rakho..

Its like god really hears all of them..n Riya's papa realized Riya's fingers are moving..

He immigiately call doctor..

After some time..

Riya's parents anxiously waiting out of room..doctor come out..

Doctor:-congrats..she has cone out of coma totally..she is perfectly alright now..u can meet her n can talk her..but don't let her take stress much ..n don't let her talk much..

Riya's parents get delighted so much..n goes to meet her..they hug her Happily.. Riya too weakly hug them ..

Riya:-mom..mein..mein...

But she can't speak more due to weakness..

Riya's mom:-beta tum yaha par 6 months he..comma me thi..ham toh bhagwan ke bharose hi the .aur aaj tumhe hosh aaya finally..

Riya:-mom..meri team..mere..

Riya's papa:-are ha..tumhare team ko phone kar deta hu..they should know this..

Riya smiles lightly..

Riya's papa goes out of room to talk on phone..

Riya(in mind):-thank u bhagwan..tumne ye nayi zindagi di muze..warna muze toh lag raha tha ke abhi pyar ka ehsaas hua he..aur mein iss pyar ko bina kahe ..bina confess l
Kiye hi mar jaugi..

She remember how she gulp the exora virus.. N then team rush to hospital.. They took 20 minutes to reach hospital.. N those 20 minutes was the most important 20 minutes of her life..in those 20 minutes when death was in front of her she realized what she feel for Arjun is not just sympathy, not just heroship, not just respect.. Its love..its love..but she couldn't confess that time..

Riya(in mind):-I love u Arjun sir..I really love u..bas ab aapka intzaar he ke kab aap aayege aur mein aapse kahugi ke mein aapse pyar karti hu..

She smiles to herself..

Here Riya's papa (in mind):-Mr.rathod hamesha Riya ko dekhne aaye the..aur unhone kaha tha jaise hi Riya ko hosh aaye toh mein sabse pehale unhe call karu..

So he dial to Sam..Sam is in his cabin

Sam:-ha uncle..

Riya's papa:-sameer ji Riya ko abhi hosh aaya he..aur doctor ne kaha ke woh bilcul thik he..

Sam(happily):-really..?mein abhi aata hu..bas abhi aaya..

Sam cut call n run out of his cabin..he accidentally collide with aayesha..

Aayesha blush .

Sam:-sorry aayesha..

Sam run out without waiting for her reply..

Aayesha puzzled n staring to his direction..

Here the nurse of Riya..

Nurse(in mind):-iss patient (Riya)ko hosh aa gaya..aur woh rawte saheb..Jo inhe (to Riya)ko chupke chupke dekhne aate the..unhone kaha tha jaise hi patient ko hosh aaye mein unhe phone karu..

She dial arjun's number..

Arjun is in his cabin..

Arjun:-hello..

Nurse:-sir mein city hospital se bol rahi hu..woh uss patient ko hosh aa gaya he..

Arjun(excited):-kya sach me..?mein abhi aaya..

Arjun cut phone n run out of his cabin..

He too collide with aayesha..

Arjun(hurrily):-sorry..

N he left without wasting any second..aayesha keep staring in shock thinking what happened to her bosses today..why they are in so hurry..n more over that the happiness n excitement on their face is shocking her more..

(Sam is driving n singing..)

Hua he aaj pehli baar..

Jo aise muskuraya hu..

Tumhe dekha toh Jana ye

Ke kyon duniya me aaya hu..

(He stops SUV in front of florist shop..n buy bouquet of red color roses ..)

Ye jaa lekar jaan meri

Tumhe jeene me aaya hu..

Tumhe dekha toh Jana ye

Ke kyon duniya me aaya hu..

(He imagine Riya sitting on co driver sit..n he sing looking her lovingly..)
Zameen se aasama tak

Dund aaye ham jahan sara

Bana paya nahi ab tak

Khuda tumse koi pyara..

(He imagine riya's face near her face..n she caressing his face by his fingers..)

Baato me Teri he badmashiya..

Sab bewajah ki he tarifiyan

(But she get vanished..n he realized its his imagination.. He smiles n shook his head in disbelief..)

Mein likh du aasama pe ye

Ke padh lega jahan Sara

Hua na hoga ab koi

Yahan ham do sa dobara

Mein duniya bhar tarife

Tere sajade me laya hu..

Mein tumse ishq karne ki

izazat rab se laya hu..

(Here Arjun is driving his SUV..n his heart is singing in joy)

Tu he Jo rubaru mere..

Bada mehfoos lagta he..

Tere Milne ka shukrana

Khuda se roz karta hu..

(He imagine Riya near him..n she fondly pull his nose n giggles..)

Hamko pata he ye nadaniyan he..

Aawara dil ki he aawariyan..

(He realized its his imagination.. Arjun smiles n shook his head in disbelief..)

Yeah dil pagal bana baitha.

Isse ab tu hi samza de..

Dikhe tuzme meri duniya..

Meri duniya tu banja re..

(Arjun stop SUV in front of florist shop n buy pink color roses bouquet for Riya..)

Hu khushkisamat Jo kismat se

Tumhe aise mein paya hu..

Mein tumse ishq karne ki

Izazat rab se laya hu..

Here in hospital..

Riya is lying on bed..n her parents sitting near her ..n talking to her..

Same time someone hurrily open door..n enter in room..n said happily.."Riya.."

(Now keep imagining ke Arjun he ya Sam he..)

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Superb
What's Sam also loves Riya?
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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Hey bhagwan yaha to pura raita phail gaya hai...i know mein hamesha se riya and sam ki jodi chahti thi lekin ye to love triangle ho gaya...mujhe abhi se rona aa raha hai teeno ka dil tutane wala hai and ayesha poor girl uska to koi thikana hi nahi yaha