DESTINY PLAYS A BEAUTIFUL GAME(ShraMan Story ) Chapter 4 updated pg 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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HEY GUYS I AM NEW HERE ...I THOUGHT TO WRITE SOMETHING ON OUR VERY OWN SHRAMAN SO I AM HERE WITH A NEW STORY...
HERE I BEGAN WITH A SHORT INTRODUCTION OF THE CHARACTERS ...


SUMAN MEHRA : A girl of 19 years having height more than normal range 5 7", very beautiful and have pure heart , doesn't hurt anyone's feelings , full of enthusiasm but have a fear of darkness , loves to enjoy life,innocent,full of secrets(that are going to be revealed further in the story ),she don't like surprises , loves music and her best friend guitar and also sings very well , lives with her brother cum friend (Anuj) in delhi , wants to fullfil her dreamI(to become an architect) at any cost .

SHRAVAN MALHOTRA : A very tall (6 4" ) , smart and handsome guy of around 20 years , lives with his parents in dehradun , full of passion , loves to draw sketches , drama king , loves adventure , fun loving , give respect to girls , not that much good but have a sweet voice to sing , loves to do pranks on others , want to become architect .

ANUJ(Brother of suman ): A very caring person , only family of suman after her parents death , earns living of 60 thousands with loans lacking behind , loves suman full heartedly.

MR RAMNATH MALHOTRA( Father of shravan) : A big businessman , loves his son a lot , wants to give him the best, also wants shravan to join his business after him , big hearted man .

MRS NIRMALA MALHOTRA (Mother of shravan ): A very good cook , runs a very big restaurant , can give her life for her son , want to live simple life but god gifted her luxurious life .

ADITYA(A student of trinity college): Have a crush on suman , cruel natured man , want suman at any cost.

SANA(Best friend of shravan ):Have a crush on shravan from class 12th ,but shravan treats her as his only bff in school nothing else more than that, stylish , short hieghted , lives in dehradun.

(OTHERS WILL BE INTRODUCED IN THE STORY ITSELF)

PLS IGNORE ALL MY MISTAKE AS THIS IS MY FIRST FF...I WILL TRY MY BEST TO IMPROVE IT...😛😛

HOPE YOU GUYS WILL LIKE IT ...AND LEMME KNOW HOW MUCH YOU LIKE IT BY COMMENTING AND HITTING THE LIKE BUTTON..PLEASE DO COMMENT...😊😊

AND MAKE SURE TO TELL ME MY MISTAKES ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome into a group of wonderful and very talented writers!!!!
your introduction makes it all the more interesting!!!
So continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all welcome to the EDKV forum🤗...
U'll enjoy every minute u spend here admist all the talents here...😃
Coming to the update...
Loved the character sketch...Seems intruging...😊
Yaha bhi aditya hai..😡Kab picha chaodega malum nahi..
Do update soon...
Till then 🤗
ANU😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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cannot wait
sounds awesome
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Safire

Welcome into a group of wonderful and very talented writers!!!!

your introduction makes it all the more interesting!!!
So continue soon...

Thanks i will try to update soon...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anukulgr8

First of all welcome to the EDKV forum🤗...
U'll enjoy every minute u spend here admist all the talents here...😃
Coming to the update...
Loved the character sketch...Seems intruging...😊
Yaha bhi aditya hai..😡Kab picha chaodega malum nahi..
Do update soon...
Till then 🤗
ANU😳

Thank you very much anu di... Aditya nahi hoga to meri story mai villian kaun banega 😃...
I will update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Arreee my utawli panchi... Riya..first of all, sorry for being sonlate... . Loved the characters sketch...now waiting eagerly.. For the first chapter. Update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Arreee my utawli panchi... Riya..first of all, sorry for being sonlate... . Loved the characters sketch...now waiting eagerly.. For the first chapter. Update soon...

Thank you di... I will update tomorrow... I know mai aapke jaisa nahi likh sakti but i will try my best hope you will like it... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi welcome to IF & EDKV family...
Actually I read this story long back on wattpad & recently in FB page also...

Keep writing...

Vinu


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi! Really liked the idea of your story :)
The best that had me read it was that Suman is aspiring to be an architect! Being a 4th year architecture student, that makes me ecstatic!
Really looking forward to see the story unfold. 😊

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