MG SS Ye Rishtha Kya Kehalatha hai? UPT Epilogue Sep 15 pg 52 - Page 8

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Nice update
Maan became their tour driver 😊
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splendid update, well written! Maaneet always arguing! Poor Maan! he is nw a tour driver!
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nice
daadi make msk hr personal driver
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Part - 10

Geet is very excited as she loves these mini-trips exploring your localty more and preferably getting to meet new people...having made a few friends already in a completely new place Geet is more than happy to have known sweet dadi...

But everything is not so sweet and at times you also come across undesired people too with all their bitterness...Get suddenly turns her attention to MSK at this thought...

Then she is only happy that it's also good for her that she realized the value of good people more in her life after seeing such morons...

On the other hand Maan happens to see her animated antics and is amused that she could change her expressions so quickly and her eyes never fear to convey her heart so openly that sometimes Maan wonders how it's even possible for her...

she is a dramaqueen for sure and that is all the more entertaining though sometimes he is irritated by her stupidity and his anger soars as he couldn't understand why she acts spontaneously without even bothering to think not twice but atleast once before blabbering constantly...she could make a great lawyer if only she could make use of her tiny brain a little...

Geet is perplexed to see the expressionless face of Maan, she could have been more comfortable even with a professional driver for that matter...by now she would have known his history and became friends already...

Dadi wants to break the ice for these too seem to be on a mauna vradh...

Dadi: it's so refresing to come out in the sun after a long time

Maan has taken his driving too seriously and never takes his eyes off the road even to see whose sitting beside...that's not what dadi wanted...

And this Geet is pretty happy to get the front seat and is enjoying it like a victorious 2nd std girl winning the front seat all for herself from his 4th std brother...

She is looking outside all the time and enjoying the sights rather than what she should have sighted given the opportunity to accompany the most wanted bachelor of Delhi according to dadi atleast...

Dadi is skeptical that Geet also thinks like dadi...but dadi has to give her some time...for Geet is not calculative like some girls weighing the pocket of the guys and who are always desperate to get close to the MSK as a matter of fact...

Dadi is trying hard to start a conversation and this Geet puts an end to it with her shouts...

Geet: hare rukho rukho rukho

They are in the middle of a busy traffic and Maan almost got a heart attack hearing her shrieks...

Maan slows down as he knows applying the breaks will lead to collisions behind...

Maan: what's wrong with you?

Maan shouts at her...

Dadi: Maan

Dadi stops him and she knows Geet is more than excited and what Dadi loves is this, her kiddish innocence and her honest expressions...she is still nave and doesn't know to wear that mask of dignity, diplomacy or civilization whatever it may be...

Geet goes on ignoring MSK altogether...

Geet: dadi, look, it's a beautiful park out there, let's go there na

She shows the park on the right...

Maan: you can't go anywhere just like that

Geet: I shouldn't have got into this car first of all, this seems to be a non-stop roller coaster

Maan couldn't believe it...what the hell does she think...that MSK should stop as and when she orders and even if he does stop ,how would she even get to that place jumping over the barrigade?

Geet: some people don't know how to live and don't let others also live, babaji aasie logong ko bhi aap ne hi banaya hai kya?

Maybe babaji wemt on leave that time leaving the job to his assitants...

Dadi: Maan bete, she's right, I aso want to feel the fresh air

Maan: what dadi? You too? What will you do in a public park

As if it's some alien land...yes, for Maan any place that is full of people is alien, he can't understand why people like social meetings...isski shadhi, usski namkaran, sharma ki grahapravesh...it's just gossiping and feasting all the time...then why wouldn't India be the diabetic capital of the world...

Geet: it's just a park not a jungle

But for Maan a jungle is more peaceful and beautiful without this madness...

Maan: you are right Ms.Geet, this is not a jungle that you park your car and jump out like tarzan as and when you wish

Geet: tarzan? Mein? And who's the Ape then? Someone resembles a GEM though

Luckily Maan doesn't now what is GEM...but Get and dadi exchange glances and smile to themselves...

Maan takes a U-turn and stops at the entrance...he helps Dadi out and returns to the car...

Dadi: Maan, it's a beautiful day and why don't you come with us for a change

Geet: you don't worry dadi, I'll take care of you

That itself scares Maan...Maan can't trust this stupid...she'll leave dadi and run after some butterfly...

Maan: I'll park the car and come Dadi, you wait for me

Maan gives a stern look to warn Geet not to move from that place come what may...

As Maan comes back he finds dadi left unattended and Geet missing...

Maan rushes to dadi's side...and Geet too arrives with colorfull cotton candies on both hands overjoyed as if it's some heavenly amrut smiling like a 4 yr old...

Maan: what are you doing? I was right, I knew you would do this only

Geet: what?

Maan: how can you be so irresponsible?

Get doesn't understand a word...she just blinks...

Maan: how can one be so stupid? You left Dadi for this?

Maan snatches the candies from her and she's so upset...so is dadi...

Dadi: Maan, stop, it's mine, give that to me

She nows he'll first dump it in the bin else...full of sugar...full of calories...and how unhygienic...staright from the dusty lane...but that's the fun...

Dadi tries to get that from his hands...

Maan is shocked to see dadi too behaving like a kid, in public!!!!!

Maan: where the hell am I struck?

Geet has already passed the rest to dadi...

Geet: here you go dadi

Dadi: thanks beta, I have been missing them since Khuranaji left

Dadaji used to get her all her favorite items while they strolled thru the streets in the cold winter evenings of Delhi...

Dev used to have all the fun with his grandparents while poor Maan was confined to his boarding school campus...but it's not all Maan's fault...with little Dev left under their care after their DIL died in an accident...thier father became a workaholic to forget his wife...he also soon followed her and went to his beloved Sheetal, not able to come out of that tragedy...

She is reminded of dadaji's favorite hot badam milk from one corner shop...

Maan: but dadi, you can't eat that

Dadi has already dug in...

Maan: what? I can't believe this, dadi, it's loaded with sugar

Geet: I like it dadi, and you should have seen that man making them, I think he just loves his job, he is overjoyed seeing the smiles on the kids that were lucky to got one of his first candies, I had to wait till the kids got their candies, it was so nice of him to give me this big candy to me for my patience

Dadi: oh I missed it, but this is so good, I'm loving it

Geet: hmm delicious

Maan looks at Geet's latest blush...that pinkish candy that she had all over her cheeks...

A smile slipped thru his lips without his knowledge watching Geet and he could only see a kinder garten kid instead... Maybe her brain stopped growing then itself...

A part of him has started admiring her while he is still not ready to acknowledge that...

Maan comes out of that madness and feels awkward seeing fully grown adults competing with children in that candy eating feast...

This whole society is insane...

Maan doesn't know why he chose to come with this girl even after knowing that she is sure to make a fool out of him with her madness...

Don't know how dadi likes her and loves her company...

Then they go ahead as Maan takes dadi's wheels while Geet walks along...

Geet is realy enjoying it and is excited to the plants in full bloom...it's fascinating to see such rich colors and so many varieties of plants and flowers...

Geet is seeing some of them for the first time and runs towards each one of them to admire nature's wonders as if it's some magic...

Maan is confused as to what's new for it's the flowering season and it's expected for the plants to be at their full bloom...it happens every season and it's part of life as they say...

However Maan has never taken the time off to waste in such minial things as he was busy in his job...

And to top it all Geet started taking pictures of those flowers to show it to Pinky later...

Thank god she didn't go on a selfie freak...

She did take some selfies with dadi...Maan stayed out of focus all the while causiosuly...

Geet too didn't bother him as she is happy looking at the beauties of nature trying to ignore his attitudes completely...still she couldn't stop noticing his strange behavior...he's nit only indifferent to her but with the whole world... one thing that stikes her is his contrast distancing from women in general, it's unbelievable considering the fact that he is the elder brother of Dev...

A group of beautiful young ladies ontour even caught Geet's attention but Maan didn't mind them at all...

Geet kept a watch on him while they were close to them as it did bother her but she didn't know why...

Our smart dadi didn't fail to make a note of it though...

Part11

Edited by ghsp2fan - 8 years ago
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lovely update. superbly written! Dadi notices everything!
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amneet with dadi for outing
dadi want both to talk
geet asked him to stop in park
maan amused to c differrent side of dadi
maan started to admire geet
n geet too noticed maan
nice part
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Lovely update..
Waiting for next update..
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nice
daadi wants maan geet to talk to each other
geet making maan .irritated with his weird demands
but daadi also wants to go in ppl psrk and have cotton ball
maan amazed by geet nature and geet also noticing maan daadi just observing
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Beautiful updates.
Dadima'a plan has started working.
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Part - 11

Dadi: Maan bete, what are you doing there standing alone? Come join us, look Geet is very good at photography

This made Maan smirk as he knew Dadi has just cracked the biggest joke to make him smile...

Maan has been keenly observing Geet and her photoshoot...everytime she made a blunder and struggled with Dadi's mobile which by far is too good for her if only she knew a few tricks...

Maan always had this urge to go and tell her the stupid mistakes she has been repeating and show her how it' done the Maan way, that's the perfect way as we know...

But his ego stopped him as he didn't want to waste his valuable time and energy on this stupid girl who is no match for him...

Geet comes back and hands Dadi her mobile after being tired of clicking...

Geet: Dadi, I'll go get water, I'm feeling thirsty

Maan: haan she's too tired of all the hardwork from morning

Dadi: OK beta, we'll wait here

Geet turns at Maan, glares him and leaves...

Dadi scrolls the pictures that Geet took...Maan couldn't control himself from snatching the mobile from Dadi and pointing her silly mistakes...

Maan: look Dadi, she didn't even spare the mali

Actually Geet saw this mali curiously looking at her taking snaps and she felt like inviting him for a snapshot...

He was actualy very happy and even adjusted his hair while he came to pose...Geet happily took some pics and showed them to the mali who was so excited at that sight...he told that the park looked more beautiful in the pics for which Geet gave full credit to his dedicated work...

He was very pleased for his work being appreciated and this is like a boost for him though he is paid for his odd job...

Dadi: did you see the smile on his face Maan, that's what I like about Geet, she can bring a smile on anyone's face in a moment

While Dadi said that she looked surprisingly at Maan grinning t the silly pictures of Geet's selfies...it's obvious that she is not a selfie expert and is just trying out for the sake of it...

After a while Get didn't return and Dadi is worried...

Dadi: Maan, where's Geet?

Maan: she'll come back Dadi, you just chill, she's not a kid, she is big enough to take selfies

Dadi: but Maan, it's been an hour or so

Maan: she'll be chatting with everyone in the park

Dadi: can you go and see what's wrong

Maan: how can I leave you alone?

Dadi: or I'll also come along

Maan: no no Dadi, don't know where that Geet might be, I'll go get her

Maan is sure that she would have lost her way in this not so big park...

As he strodes thru the park looking out for her he spots her green duppatta fluttering in the air...she always wears simple salwar kameez that she likes as she feels much comfortable in them...though they are not stylish and are not designer made they look perfect on her as if it's been specially made for her...and they speak about her simplicity and earthy nature which seems peculiar for Maan as he had thought that girls are always fuzzy about their looks and mostly their costumes...

Geet looks elegant and beauturiful today and that color complimented her natural beauty very well...

As soon as he finds that duppatta his eyes automatically long to see it's owner and Maan rushes to that spot...it's the play area and Maan couldn't believe Geet is playing here while dadi is worried for her...there's no limit for her stupidity...

Before he could reach her he hears her voice...she is used to speaking aloud and she would never need a loud speaker for she owns one already...

Maan is angry for her carelessness and is not ready to spare her this time...

But Maan's anger turns towards the thugs that are causing nuisance and also bothering Geet...

Maan is not happy to see them misbehaving with Geet...actually one of them had snatched her duppatta and thrown it away and luckily Maan saw it...but that guy is not so lucky it seems...Maan wishes he crushed that guy like that duppatta and flew him in the air...

He ran towards that guy with his fist up ready to thrash him...but Maan is too late...he is already smashed as Geet slaps him with her sandals...kadak reply...

Maan expected Geet to be helpless and frightened but this is Geet Handa who believes in giving back then and there...but that triggered his gang and they all came to his help...they were about to attack Geet when Maan pounced on them as they struggled to save themselves from Maan's iron fists...

Just as Maan is surprised to see our sherni Geet too is surprised to see Maan coming to her help and supporting her instead of giving his gyaan like other men...

As they ran to safety Maan turned to Geet and gave back her duppatta...

Maan: now you know it's not a good idea to come here, haina?

Geet: why? What's wrong in that? It's good that we came, those people would have learned their lessons now

Maan: it's not out duty to teach everyone, but what are you doing here? Dadi is worried and here you are playing like a child, when will you grow up Geet?

Geet: I don't want to

Maan stares her...and those girls who were hiding behind Geet come out ...

Girl1: thanks didi

Girl2: you are too good, I wish I could be like you

Girl3 is looking terrified...she is covering herself with her hands and shivering...

Geet: don't be scared, you haven't done anything wrong, see what they were upto? They didn't spare me either, haina? It's just an excuse for those rascals

Girl1: haan, didi is right

Maan wanted to ask what's going on...one girl narrated the incident to him on her own thinking that Maan is unnecessarily angry with Geet

Girl2: didi didn't do anything, it's that fool, we were playing on the swing when they surrounded us and when we stopped and tried to move away from the place one of them caught her hand and tried to touch her, he is not like you, you know that rascal's got evil eyes, he said he has all the rights to admire anything under the sun, khullam khulla khoobsoorti

He was pointing to her uncovered kurti...she didn't wear a shawl...but that was unnecessary for that kurti...

Geet thinks that all the girls have noticed Maan's gentleman behavior and they too like him for that matter...and after his stunts they are actually smitten...

Geet: Ok Ok let's go, Dadi must be waiting

Geet wants to move before the girls get Maan's autograph

But the girls want to tell the whole story to Maan...

Girl1: just then didi stepped in and dared him to stop, he looked indecently at Didi, saying that beauty is to be admired and not hiden, he threw away didi's duppatta

Maan's face turned red in anger...he would have chopped those fingers had he known the truth...

Geet is amused to see that anger...he is also disturbed by the unjustice metted out to women...strange as he hates women and doesn't have high respects for them...

Girls3 holds Geet's hands and thanks her...: if not for you I don't know what would have happened

Geet: ohh nothing to worry as far as you got good quality sandals. You know why girls are so particular about their footwear

That girl finally smiles and she has also learnt her lesson from Geet...

Geet: OK OK, I think you all should be getting late

Geet forcefully disperses them and Maan is delighted to see her dedication to clear the place as she had an eye on Maan all the while...she was a bit nervous too...

Maan: Ok let's go

Geet: but I didn't get the water, Dadi must also be thirsty

Maan: so you do remember that Dadi is waiting

Geet moves in a hurry...: I'll get it

But Maan stops her getting hold of her hand...

Maan: wait, I'll come with you

Geet: but it's not necessary, I can handle myself

Maan stares and bang comes the orders... I said I'm coming

Maan accompanies her and as they reach the cafeteria Geet's eyes rest in the Gol gappas

Maan gets the water and truns back to see Get missing...Maan panics for a moment and is angry...

He then finds her at the chaat stall gulping gol gappas one after other...now Maan knows where she got her strength from...

Maan stands there admiring her expressions as she enjoys her sweet gappas and the hot gappas in different ways...she is also chatting with the vendor as she enjoys them asking him to make it more sweet once and more sour once...

Maan is surprised to see her so happily savouring the humble chaat as if it were som e fine dinning delicacy...he knows many who keep complaining even the finest and richest of foods...

This girl is different in all aspects...

As she keeps dumping them into her throat one after another Maan interferes...

Maan: I think you have planned to finish your lunch now itself, think again, I'm taking Dadi for lunch and you may join too

Geet speaks with ease even with her mouthful...: why don't you try this for a change? Bhaiya, ek meeta for him

Maan: what?

Even while Maan is shaking his head Geet stuffs his mouth with one big gol gappa...Maan is clueless to how to handle a mouthful of pani...he reaches for the tissue when Geet gives her handkey...

Geet: look here

She demonstrates him how to enjoy duniya's most favorite snack...

Maan likes it somehow...maybe it's b'coz of Geet , seeing her relishing no one can resist them, haina?

Maan eventually gets one for Dadi too...Geet too likes that idea...

Dadi is so happy to see MSK in a different avatar after such a long time...carefree and most importantly finding back his lost emotions...

Part12

Edited by ghsp2fan - 8 years ago

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