#2 FF: Unspoken EPILOGUE pg 48

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chilukuripuri

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Posted: 9 years ago

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superb story just loved it

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Akorshi Oroni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#342

Hi,

I just read your this story fully...

i just loved the concept...

you are a lovely writer...👏

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chsweety22

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Posted: 9 years ago

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sonali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#344

hey dear ..can i except more stories from you with such awesome story line

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Farah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: Sonalikarhi
hey dear ..can i except more stories from you with such awesome story line

Hiii, I've kinda left the story writing realm but I can always do smaller stories like one shots, if you'd be interested in that. :)

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virka_luv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#346

one of the bestest stories I have ever read

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Farah

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: 9950649757
one of the bestest stories I have ever read

omg thank youuu! That's one of the greatest compliments I have ever gotten! ❤️

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gprs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#348

Hey,

it's so sweet and lovely..initially i was like,omg was she engaged to anyone before meeting him and had doubts about the settings and time..but by reading it i imagined a beautiful village..the falls and the village reminded me the movie"bahubaali"😆but after reading it, i realised it's not in the era..

frowning face Arnav and sweet and cute Adi stole my heart in first chapter itself..adi is so cute😳

loved how you developed the feelings between them and the story..i too believed that Vijay initially..disgusting he was..Avni was a lovely mother and Akash looked like a bro more than a buddy..i was afraid of the truth revelation..but you did it perfectly..the hurt,betrayed feeling,anger,tears,explanation,realization,acceptance everything was awesome👏👏

more than it,i loved how khushi indicated Arnav's faults to him,how she made him realize his rough approach hurt others..i had a small verbal fight with my friend..and fuming inside..but when i read it, i realized that i should make her realize how her approach hurts others,instead of fight with her..i don't know it makes any sense to you..but Thank you❤️

one thing disturbed me from the flashback..but you surprised me by revealing Khushi's father..superb suspense..Arnav came a long way from being a moody and short tempered man to a lovely father..Khushi was so lovely and kind..when she caught by the men i was afraid that they might harm her..but you made our Arnav's entry at perfect timing and the blows to the man who harassed Khushi was highlight..

absolutely,it's a good treat to me..thank you

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