Shanav-COLLAB SS YEH DOSTI HUM NAHI TODENGE (PART17 pg72) - Page 48

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -VisheshTippani

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Unres
Extremely sorry for commenting dis late Sam


Kal hi story padhli thi bt again comment karna bhool gayi

Coming to update...


Super update...year emotional kardiya
Wo tym yaad dila diya jab real me ghotala ne sach reveal kiya Tha...pritesh ko pachtawa
Bt loved the way manav ,bhairu & kids supported them

Ana ko gussa b sahi bt in k raaz chupane Ka b reason reasonable hi he...
Khair chodo baad me she will understand

Or ye bhadresh ko koi roko man...ye Bair agents ko call karing baar Barr...
Accha kiya bandh diya 😛
Gud bharu bhavna aunt & baccha party 😉

Haha..thanks for the lovely comment..
Bhadresh ko bandhne ka idea mera😆mere dimag me aur khurafati ideas aa rhe the bt mai wo krishu ko bayan ni kr pai n wo chap me b ni aya..kash meri imagination museum hoti n mai tum sbko invite kr pati😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: To-Barobar

anju di ek question h
aapne index ka editing kaise kia?
mujhe sikhna h

konsa..? Tell me in pm mai bta dungi..👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Superb update

Loving it...

Reading & commenting ..
Dono saath me...


Rustogi aaya ghar Khali karwane
Lekin khushi ke maare Ghotala house ki jagah Bhatt house me gussa gaya

Haha achha hua Bach gaya warna Bhavana aunty uss ki pitai karti...

Bhadresh accompany rustogi to Ghotala house...

Rustogi telling Ghotalas to handover d house...
Haha ghotalgiri shuru
Finally Hemant ne bataya...

Mast bhadresh ne recording delete kar di...
Bhadresh promises of help to Ghotalas ...

Karwachouth ki Tyari
Ghotalgiri shuru
Baap re Samar bhi join Kiya...
Bhavana aunty ka be haal
Shruti to rescue
Agar yeah na hoti to Bhavana aunty kya karti...

Detector doing timi
Yeah Hemant ka dhyan hi humesha sab jagah jata h
Baki sab toh khali time pass hi karte h yaar

Samar Shruti fly away
Vava shanav miss 2015

Ohh ...
Nice scne
Could imagine it all

Shruti to gaya doubt on Ghotalas
Arey waah
Ab yeah detection karegi...
Maja aayega

Aww Samar Vava feel belongingness towards each other
So sweet
Shanav decide to watch Samar


Oh new entry
Victor, Anna ka childhood frnd
Nice

Mashru fight superb
Loves it
Ojha Lajjo now want to make Manav realise his hidden feelings
Maja...

Omg ladies vs gents fight...
Thode din.pehle hi Tmkoc me dekha tha...

Waiting for next part already
Continue soon
Thnks 4 pm


thanku for the super lovely comment..
iss pure updt ka full credit jata h krishu mishu ko😳
mast likha usne😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Krish58

Yr my ig is getting errors I m trying to refresh it it's not working

acha mai pm bhejti hu phr..waits
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -VisheshTippani

Hmmm ...

will read tomorrow oki Sam & anji 😉

meko samaj ni aya..y u calling krishu Sam🤔
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Superb update Krishu aur Anji. Mazaa aa gaya padke 😆
Ab kya hoga aage?
Wait nahi hota. Jaldi update dena

Mta😳kaisi ho!?
Iss wale updt ka full credit Krishu..usne likha😃n mast likha❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

RECAP: Colony Men Vs Colony Women Food Competition

Enjoy🥳

Chap17: The Competition

@Bhatt house

The colony ladies are all sitting together and enjoying themselves. They have called some parlour ladies and are getting massages and manicure pedicure done..

Bhavna- Haash...aj kitne din baad hum sab ladies aise baithe hain gappe maarte hue..warna roz bas khana banana aur kitchen mein busy rehte hai..

Lajo- Sach mein Bhavna Bhabhi...aaj to aaram karne ka maza hi aa gya..hame na har saal aise aur holiday jarur karni chahiye..

Liza- Yes man..tum thik bolta hai...hum na ek kaam karte hain..chalo kal na picnic par chalte hai..adventure park..bahut maza aayega man..

Varsha- haan haan chalo chalo...chalte hain...waha na camp lagaayange aur wo aag jalaynge aur apna khana khud banayange...

Liza- ye kya bolta hai tum man...hum pados wala park nahi ja rahe ghumne..jaha camp laga sakte hain aur khana bana skte hain...adventure park ja rhe hn...waha rides hoti hain masti hoti hai...

Bhavna- haan haan Liza..superb idea hai..ae chakudi.ae chakudi..khane ka samaan pack kar le...kal hi nikal padte hain..

Bhairavi- Haan baa...aur ye na kheera aur kakdi b baandh lenge...ye ankhon pe lagaa ke rakhne mein itni asani hoti hai...jabhi mann kare utha k kha lo...

Bhavna- ae chakram..ye kheera ankhon pe khane ke liye nahi lagaya hai dafod...ye ankhon ko thandak pauhchate hai isliye lagaya hai..

Bhairavi- Toh barobar 😛

Bhavna(turning to Lajo) Acha Lajo..sunn..Arre Lajo kaha kho gai

Lajo(startled)- Kuch nahi Bhavna Bhabhi...mein sochu hoon ke waha ke haal ho raha hoga.maareh ko laage hai ke..kitchen ko yudh ka maidan bana dia hoga unn logo ne!!

Liza- haan man..kya chal kya raha honga waha!!

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@Ghotala Kitchen

All men are trying hard to cook food...Manav is trying hard to keep everyone focused..

Manav- please please sab thik se khana banaiye na..mil kar banaiye sab thik hoga...

Ronnie- Manav..ye wo ba wo ba...

All- tch tch tch

Ronnie- Arre chup na man..wo He comes and goes ko Hindi me kaisa bolnga..

Hemant- Rastogi uncle aye tha..

Ojha- huh..ye Rastogi beech me kaha se aya..

Hemant- wo hm jb b ghar khali krte hai phr Rastogi uncle ko phone krte hain..phir mana kr dete hain...to he comes and he goes na..islye kaha..

Ojha- oho lambe ghotale..usne example nahi manga..aur ae Ronnie..uska hindi hua wo ata jata hai..

Vasant- Haan to Hemant ne b to wohi bola ...Rastogi ata jata hai ya Rastogi aya tha..ek hi to hua...

Ojha- oho tum chup rho na Hemant pita..

Vasant to Sharad(whispers)- Ye insan..inko kuch bhi kaho inko galat hi lagta hai...patah ni kya hai inko..

Jacky- aur uncle kabhi bhi apni galti toh maante hi nahi..Yeh Insaan..Inke har ek baat me alag alag meaning hai

Ronnie- Ae chup karo na man...Ae Manav..ye ata ghundna kitna difficult hai man..

Ojha- Ae jhallar wo atta hota h atta...na k ata..

Bhadresh- haan wala...ache se usme pani daal aur usme ache se hath se hila...ho jayega..meri qutub minar b aise hi krti hai..

Ojha- areee O rakhshas... Tujeh ata hai to tu kyu ni kar deta..aaram se leta hua hai..tujeh bhi kaam krna hai samjha..

Bhadresh- Arre murli kaka...aap log banao na..same majja aayega..

Manav- Suniye suniye..aap sab kya ek dusre ko dosh de rahe hai hum sabko ek sath ho kar kaam karna hai..tabhi yeh kaam ho paeyga..Vasant bhaiya ..aap ache se pyaz kaatiye..

Vasant(crying)- Kya katu haan...kya katu mai pyaz ko...itne der se katne ki koshish kar raha hoon ..kabhi idhar ludak jata hai kabhi udhar..aur chalo kabhi pakad me aa bhi gya to aise...aise kaat ke(starts crying harder)

Hemant starts crying

All- ab tujhe kya hua..

Hemant- Mai papa ko company de raha hoon.

Sharad- Acha sun sun..Hemant sunn..wo upar na..Shishir k room me ek superman ki doll rakhi hai..wo na akeli bore ho jayegi..tu na usko ja ke company de..Hoon!!

Hemant- heeeiiinn hooon..okay chacha mein usko company dene jaata hoon aap papa ko company dijiye...(Hemant leaves)

Sharad- ab bataiye bhaiya..aap ro kyu rhe ho

Vasant- Mai ro nahi rha hu!! Pyaz ki wajah se ankh se pani aa rha hai!!

All- hey bhagwan..

Manav- Acha Vasant bhaiya..yeh kaam papa kar lenge...aap bhindi kaat dijiye..papa...aap aloo kaatne ke baad pyaz kaat dijiye...tab tak mai daal gas pe chada deta hu..Sharad tum aao..hum mil kar decide karte hain ki sweet me kya banana hai..Aur Jacky please tu insab ko madad karna aur yeh sab kaam kare woh dekh..


Shanav go towards the kitchen

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@Bhatt house

Megha- Umm..mai kya keh rahi hoon..ek baar check kar ...ke aaye waha ladko ne kya banaya hai..

Bhawna- Arre chod na beta..unko apna karne de hum apna aaram karte hain..

Shruti- nahi nahi aunty..Megha thik keh rhi h...hame dushman ki har chaal ki khabar rakhni chahiye..

Varsha- dushman..kaha hai dushman..!!

Bhawna- Ae Hemant mata..tu chup kar na...Shruti..baat to tu thik kar rahi hai kya patah kahi cheating ki in logo ne toh..chalo.chalo chalke dekhte hain..

Shruti-nahi nahi aunty aap log yaha rukiye..mai aur Megha dekh ke ate hain


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@Ghotala house..

Shruti Megha enter to see a mess in the hall of ghotala house..Vasant is crying in a corner..Ronnie is playing with atta..Ojha is struggling with the potatoes...and Bhadresh is sleeping in a corner...

Shruti Megha start to laugh out loud...

Hearing the noise..Shanav enter...

Manav- Kya hua..kyu has rahi ho...

Shruti- tch tch tch Manav...abhi se ro rahe ho..age kya hoga...!!

Sharad- hum ...hum log darte nahi hain..aur abhi bhi waqt hai..khana banna lenge..

Megha- Haan woh toh dikh raha hai bahut acha khaana banaoge!!..

Shanav get angry listening to them

Manav- hum banna lenge chalo chalo..Abhi jaao .hame kaam karne do..

Shruti- haan..Chalo Megha...hum na apne ghar chalte hai mujeh na posters banna ne hai losers ke ...Kal orphange mein bhi lagwaaungi ki ladke khaana banna nahi sakte

Shruti and Megha leave...

Sharad- yeh dono samajhti kya hai...hum acha khaana bana kar dikhaynge..chalo boys back to work...

All return to their respective work..

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1 hour later..

Ronnie..who is making dough for rotis..is irritated by the wet atta...frustrated he keeps his hand on Bhadresh's shoulder to wake him up..


Ronnie- Ae bhadresh man..utho na..

Bhadresh wakes and looks at his shoulder and is angry- ye kya kia vala..

He gets up takes some atta and throws towards Ronnie..Ronnie dives and the atta lands on Ojha...ojha angry picks up the cut potato and throws towards Bhadresh...Bhadresh dives and all the potato land on Vasant..Vasant starts crying more...Ronnie picks the cut onion and throws towards Ojha..Vasant is angry at Ronnie as he had cut the onion with so much effort and he picks the atta and throws whole content on Ronnie...

Jacky is trying to control them..But becomes victim of their food fight

All the men are playing with the food items..shouting hurling abuses and wasting time..

Hearing the noise Shanav come out...looking around they get shocked..

Manav- Ab toh ban gaya khaana... Sharad..

Sharad- Manav baki sabka mujeh nahi patah par mujeh Megha k liye acha se khaana banana hai.

Manav surprised looks towards Sharad..

Sharad- Mera matalb hai ki Shruti Megha Varsha Bhabhi..sab ke liye..

Manav(smiles)- Haan mujeh bhi Shruti ke liye acha sa kuch banana hai...

Sharad raise his brows..

Manav- Maa..Bhavna aunty..Bhairavi didi..Shruti..sab kitna kaam karti hain na..isliye bola..

Sharad(smiling)- Mein samaj gaya..dont worry

Manav- Toh ab Sharad..hum apna khana khud banate hain..

Sharad- Par Manav..itna sara khaana kaise..

Manav- Aa jao kitchen me..plan hai mere paas

Shanav go in the kitchen...

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1 hour later

@Bhatt house

Bhavna- Chalo bhai...2 ghante beet gaye..Chalke dekhte hain k yeh mardo ne konsi chakki peesi hogi..

Shruti- Kuch nahi bana hoga , Bhavna aunty...jab hum gaye the to jo haal tha unka..m damn sure ek roti kya uska ek tukda bhi nai bana hoga..

Lajo- Aise na bol Shruti..mahara beta hai waha pe...usko khana bannana atah hai..woh jaarur kuch banna ke baitha hoga..

Shruti- woh dekh lenge aunty...baki mujhe unse koi umeed nahi hai

Liza- Acha to chalo na man dekh lete hain..

Bhairavi(picks a bag)- haan chalo chalo...

Liza- yeh kya man..tum apna bag kyu uthata hai..

Bhairavi- Liza bhabhi iske baad hum ghumne ja rahe hain to wahi ghotala house se hi nikal jayenge na..wapis yaha bag uthane kon aayega..

Liza- ghumne par kaha??

Megha- woh mera plan tha Liza Bhabhi..khaana toh banna hoga nahi .toh Maine aur Shruti ne socha bahar hotel me khanna kha lenge..

Bhairavi- Haan Liza Bhabhi..aur maine khali tiffin bhi rakh diye hain..wapas aate samay khanna pack karvaa lenge .woh Mitesh Pritesh ke papa aur baki sabko bhi toh bhookh lagi hogi na ..to unke liye bhi khaana le lenge...

Bhavna(happy)- Haaye haaye meri chakudi..sabke baare me kitna sochti hai...!!

Bhairavi- Thanku..baa mention not..toh barobar 😛

All laugh..

Shruti- chalo chalo..its show time!!!

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@ghotala House

All the women enter and are shocked to see the mess in the house...

Varsha(angry.. shouts)- VVaaasssaaannntt...

All men get scared seeing the ladies and all try to hide..

Bhavna- yeh kya haal banaya hai aap sabne ghar ka..

Vasant- wooo aaa wooo aa

Liza- lo inka musical night shuru ho gya..

Vasant- nahi nahi..woh nahi woh thoda sa khaana banna rahe the to thoda sa ho gya...ganda..

Lajo- Haan woh toh dikhe hai..thoda sa ganda ho gaya..baki jo saaf bacha hai uspe sirf mai apna kajal laga sakti hoon

Bhavna- Mitesh Pritesh jab chote the to bhi woh aise gande ho kar nahi aate the...aisa lag raha hai vaccum cleaner se saaf karna padega baba..

Bhairavi looks towards Bhavna with wide eyes..

Bhavna- wrong number hai chakudi phone rakh de..

Bhairavi- toh barobar. 😛

Bhavna- yeh kya haal banaya hai...hume patah tha aap logo se khaana nahi banega...par ann ka itna apman..

Liza- Sahi bola tum man...hum ne sahi kia...k hum ne apna plan pehle hi banna lia...chalo chalte hain woh Desi Rox restaurant pe aur jam k khate hai...aur Bhairavi man..yeh dibba idhar hi chod jao man..inn mard logo k liye khana lane ka koi faayada nahi hai man..

Shruti- Sahi kaha aapne Liza Bhabhi..woh Manav..kitne Josh se keh raha tha .ki.hum khaana banayenge acha banayenge..ab dekho..

Megha- Pehle hi kha ke aa jana chahiye tha..khamkha time waste kia hum logo ne..ab tak to hum juhu pe aaram se ghum rahe hote..

Shruti- Sahi kaha.. megha Inn mardo ko bas bolna aur nakhre karna aata hai..Lekin jab khud khaana banna hua tab under kuch nahi nahi hua...

Shanav enter

Manav- tumse yahi umeed thi...woh kya hai na dimaag ki kami ki wajah se u jump to conclusions too easily..

Sharad- kam se kam puch toh lo..kya patah tum logo ki kismet achi ho aaj

Megha- tumhare hote hue toh hamari kismet kaise achi ho sakti hai

Manav- acha aisa...Sharad..inhe dikhana padega.. Hum bhi kya chizz kya hai

Sharad- haan manav chalo...

Shanav go back to kitchen and bring back some dishes..

Sharad goes and stands in front of Bhavna aunty and varsha and Manav in front of Lajo..

Manav- Maa..aaj tak tumne mere liye khanna banaya hai..aaj mere hath ka khana kha k batao kaisa banna hai..

Sharad- Bhavna aunty..aap Hamare liye kitna kuch bhejti hain..aj hamara gift accept kijiye..Varsha bhabhi aap hamre liye itna sab kuch karti hai..Hum sab ko haroz alag alag khaana banake deti hai...

Manav- hame baaki sabka patah nahi par hum samjh gaye hai ki aap haroz kitna kaam kare hai.. Hamara aur ghar ka kitna khayal rakhte hai...

Sharad- haan aur sach kahe yeh ghar aapke bina ghar nahi hai sirf ek makaan hai...

All colony ladies are emotional ...

Shanav uncover the dishes..

There is peas pulao in one dish and rice kheer in the other..

Manav- hum zyada kuch nahi banna paye kyunki papa aur baki sab cricket khel rahe the khane ke saath..par jitna kitchen me hame material mila..hum ne use thoda sa khana banaya...colony ki sab se beautiful ladies ke liye..Bhavna kaki...aap khaaiye..aap sabse badi hai..

Bhavna eats the pulao and is surprised by the taste...she then tastes the kheer and is super happy..

Bhavna- ae Manav Sharad..yeh jab chakudi pehli baar shaadi k baad ghar aayi thi to use maine kheer hi banwai thi..kya super kheer banai thi usne..jaisi bhi ho woh..dafod..akal thodi kam hai .par khaana bahut acha banati hai..yeh kheer kha ke mujeh bilkul uss din ki yaad aa gai!! (Takes out her purse) yehlo...shagun hai tum dono k liye..mana mat karo le lo..nayi dulhan ko aise hi shagun dia jata hai

All laugh

Manav- to Bhavna kaki..ab inn nayi dulhano ko aashirvaad bhi de do..

Bhavna- haan haan..khush raho..aur hamari bahu ko jaldi ghar le aao(winks at Lajo)aur ek baat likh ke rakhna lajo teri bahu aur varsha Teri devrani bahut nasib waali hogi jinhe manav aur sharad jaise pati milenge..

Shanav make everyone eat the food and all gets happy by them

At end..Manav goes towards Shruti and Sharad towards Megha..

Both the girls eat the food and are stumped...they both are guilty of taunting them..

Manav- Sharad..Mujeh lagta galti se ..hum ne khaane me gum milaa do hai dono ladkiyan chup Hai...

Sharad- waise Manav. Ek baat toh clear hai ..aage se yeh tape recorder band karna ho to hame yahi banana hoga...hame rasta mil gaya dono ki bolti band karne ka..

Shanav laugh..

Meshru while eating

Megha- Agar tum roz aisa khaana banna ke khilaaoge to mein zindagi bhar ke liye chup rehne ke liye ready hoon

Sharad is stumped by Megha's words and both share an eyelock..

MaShru look at them and smile..

Shruti- Zindagi bhaar only rice..na baba na.. but yes..mein toh chef se shaadi karungi roz ...roz new dishes banna ke khilaye mujeh

Manav- Acha..aur tum kya banaogi?

Shruti- mein ..Mmm mein usse Roz ullu banaungi aur ..roz naye naye khaane ki farmaaish karungi (laughs)

Manav(whispers)- iss smile ke liye koi bhi ullu banne ke liye ready ho jaye..

Shruti listens and stops laughing and blushes..

MaShru share an eyelock and MeSha look at them and smile..

Bhavna- chalo chalo...bahut hua.. Chalte hain hum late ho rahe hai..

Bhadresh- baa..hame bhi le chaliye na..

Bhavna- ae baba..tu pehle ja jake naah ke aa ...hame late ho raha hai..Aap log sab yeh ghar saaf karke aur ek dum chakaa chak hona chahiye aur phir aap sab .Khud apna huliyaa thik karo aur yahi intezar karo...hum parcel le aayenge ..kaa baba

Bhadresh- haan baa..

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Next day

@orphanage

Shruti and Manav are teaching the children maths..and the children are enjoying the class a lot..

Shruti- Chalo bacho..aj k liye itna hi..kal apna homework karke aana..okay..bye.

All kids hurry out of the class..

Shruti stands and is about to go out but stops...she is about to say something but hesitates..

Shruti-(in mind)shruti tu toh aise nervous hi rahi hai Maano tera result aane wala hai..Cool down..Cool down..Aur bolke aaja..

Manav- Tum bol sakti ho jo bolna chahti ho..mai kaat nahi khaaunga..

Shruti- woh mai umm.woh Mai..

Manav(senses Shruti's discomfort and stands and goes close to her and speaks in a soft kind tone)- bolo na Shruti..mai sunn raha hoon

Shruti gets all tingly as Manav is standing too close to her..she blushes and lowers her eyes

Manav notices her blush and smirks..he blows air in her hair and that makes Shruti close her eyes..

Manav- Acha lag raha hai?

Shruti still eyes closed nods her head

Manav- To ek kaam karo..pankhe ke age khadi ho jao..mai tumhara personal fan nahi hoon jo tumhe hawa dunga(steps back)

Shruti(opens her eyes angrily)- haan haan to maine kaha hai tumhe kuch karne ko...bhalai ka zamana hi ni h..ek to sorry bolna chahti hoon and samne se yeh response...

Manav- Sorry? Tum mujeh? Kyu..ab tum kya karne wali ho?!

Shruti- karne wali nahi hoon kia hai..woh mein kal ke liye sorry bolna chahti hu..i know I was very much rude..to you..but mujeh nahi patah tha ki tum itna acha khaana banaoge..really it was so yummy food..(closes her eyes and makes cute expression)

Manav smiles seeing her expressions...

Manav- thank you madam ..and yes..bade bade deshon me aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai..so maaf kia..

Shruti(laughs)- haha..DDLJ..meri fav movie..the plot..the romance..hayeee..shahrukh khan mera fav...

Areee .romance se acha yaad ayaa.tumne kal Megha aur Sharad ko dekha tha..haye..how cute..Lag rahe jab ek dusre ko dekh rahe the..

Manav- yes yes yes..Shruti..u know woh khaana banate waqt Sharad keh raha tha..ki woh Megha ko impress karna chahta hai..isliye mehnat kar raha hai...

Shruti-...dekha kaha tha mera jaadoo chalega bas ab Sharad accept kar hi lega ke woh abhi bhi Megha se pyar krta hai..

Manav- Right..And Shruti..thank you..tum nahi hoti to I don't know mai akele kaise ye sb krta..

Shruti- Wow..aaj sooraj kaha se nikla...Mr Oh-I-Am-So-Perfect-I-Can-Never-Be-Wrong thank you bol rahe hain!!

Manav(smiles)- Nothing is perfect..mai bhi nahi...but two can make a perfect u know..

Shruti widens her eyes trying to interpret what he is trying to say..

Shruti- matlab?

Manav- umm wo umm..Sharad..Megha..dono perfect nahi hai..but sath me..ek dum top class..woh I said..

Shruti-..ohh..mujeh laga u me.. rehne do ..

Manav- u me? Matlab..Tum kya soch rahi thi..Aur tumhe kya lagaa...

Shruti- kuch nahi..(angry) sawal sawal..by god...aur koi kaam nahi hai mahashay k paas..sb tumhari tarah velle nahi hote..huh (angrily goes away)

Manav(confused)- maine kya kia!?

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MeSha are playing with the kids but are stealing glances towards each other..

Sunny- Megha didi..muje pakdam pakdai khelna hai..

Megha- okay done..chalo khelte hain..

All kids force Megha to wear the blindfold..she is trying to catch a kid but no one is coming near her..Sharad is standing far and looking at her..he is smiling

Megha while playing comes near Sharad and is about to fall but Sharad catches her..

Megha removes her blindfold and is shocked to see Sharad..both share an eyelock..

All kids laugh and MeSha stand straight listening to them..

Sharad- Chalo chalo bacho..tum log dusra game khelo..hum dono abhi aate hain..

MeSha walk together towards the kitchen to check if the food is prepared..

Sharad is tasting daal and makes faces.

Sharad- Arre kaka..isme to namak bilkul nahi hai..ache se banaiye na...bache acha khana khaynge tabhi to strong banenge..haina Megha

Megha- Bilkul..ab to tum kitchen king ban gaye ho..tum bana do na sabke liye khana..

Sharad- Arre woh to ek baar banaya khana..baar baar thode banaunga..

Megha (laughs)-acha acha okay..acha suno..mujeh sorry kehna tha...kal tumhe bahut galat kaha uske liye

Sharad- are Megha koi baat nahi I am just happy ke sabko khaana acha laga..mujeh aur kuch nahi chahiye...and Bhavna aunty to ek dum khush ho gai thi

Megha- Haan haan aur Shruti bhi..woh rice pulao kha ke to bilkul chup...baad me she was saying ke usne aise pulao kabi nahi khaye..

Sharad- U know woh pulao Manav ne banaye the..and he was so excited ke Shruti unhe khayegi..Keh raha tha Shruti kitni mehnat Keri hai..she also needs a break..

Megha- Sharad.. Matalb tum bhi wohi dekh rahe ho jo mai???

Sharad- Bilkul..Mai to Manav ko khush dekh ke itna khush hoon ki ...yayayayayayayayayaya..

Megha(laughs)- Sharad...stooopp..i just pray...pathar wale bhagwan Manav Shruti ko aise hi khush rakhein.. .and I hope Shruti ko Lajo aunty jaisi hi saas mile..jaisi kya..wohi mile...u know she misses her mom the most..

Sharad- Don't worry..Lajo aunty ka jo bond ban gaya ha Shruti k sath...woh use kahi bhi jane nahi dengi..dekh lena..ek din sb kuch track pe aa jaye kaa baa

Bhavna(echo)- haan baba



Next day

At orphange garden...

Mali kaka -areee areee yeh shaitaano ki toli 'Kahaa jaa rahi hai..kyu pure orphange ko sar pe utha liya hai

Bitu-- kaka fluffy kaha hai aur Jacky bhaiya kaha hai...

Mali kaka- fluffy ko leke Jacky aur hemant waha tree ke niche baithe hai...par yeh toh batao hua kya..

Pinky- kaka fluffy bahut bimaar hai...woh kal thoda bimaar tha aur Aaj bahut bimaar hai..woh subha se kuch kha nahi raha hai

Mali kaka- areee baapre jaao jaldi jao usse doctor ke paas le jaao aur madad chahiye toh bulaana mujeh ..jaao jaldi jaao...

All kids leave...

They reach near tree...

Vandana- Jacky bhaiya ...Jacky bhaiya ..fluffy kaise hai ...

Jacky- vandana fluffy ki tabiyat thik nahi hai woh bahut bimaar hai..dekho na woh kuch kha nahi raha aur bas baitha raha hai...

Chintu comes with sharad and samar

Samar- kya hua Jacky... chintu mujeh kuch bata nahi raha hai...

Jacky-- Samar fluffy bahut bimaar hai...kuch dino se woh bimaar hai lekin Aaj kuch zyada hi bimaar hai..subha iss se usne apna nasta bhi nahi khaya ...

Samar- lagta hai fluffy phir se bimaar hogaya hai..

Hemant- samar bhaiya woh kya pehle bhi bimaar hua tha?

Samar-haan pehle bhi bimaar hua tha toh mein usse doctor ke paas legaya tha toh unki dawaai se thik hogaya tha.

Sharad- Samar hum usse doctor ke paas le jaate hai...mein ek bahut ache doctor ko jaanta hoon ..samar ..hum fluffy ko uske paas lejaate hai..woh fluffy ek min thik kardenge...

Samar- haan ..toh mein bhi chalta hoon tumhare saath... sharad...

Bitu-- samar bhaiya fluffy thik hojaayega na?

Samar- haan bilkul thik hojaayega..hum usse abhi doctor ke paas lejaa rahe hai...

Sharad- haan haan kyu nahi bas ek min phone karke unhe puch loon woh free hai ya nahi...Jacky dr..ko phone karna...mera phone ghar pe reh gaya hai...

Jacky- mere paas no. Hai..mein phone karta hoon

Sharad-.. haan haan jaldi phone karo ...

Samar asks other kids to go their room...

Sharad - patah hai dr.fernandis bahut ache doctor hai samar, unhe toh dekhte hi patah chal jata hai ki kya hua hai...Ronnie bhaiya ki unse bahut achi jaan pehchaan bhi hai

Hemant- haan dekhna woh fluffy ko bhi jaldi thik kar denge...samar bhaiya... heeein

Sharad - haan aur dekhna hamara fluffy bhi jaldi thik hojaayega .ek din mein hi...

Hemant - haan bilkul jaise pritesh thik hogaya tha ek din mein..

Samar- pritesh ?? kya???aap sab log pritesh ko vet doctor ke paas legaya the???

Jacky- nai nai samar .woh toh bacho ke specialist hai samar... .

Samar- toh iska matalb woh insaan ke baccho ke specialist hai ..

Sharad- haan ...

Samar- areee ,sharad , jacky toh phir hum unhe nahi dikha sakte fluffy ko kyuki woh child specialist hai..aur naahi animal doctor.

Sharad- kyu nahi dikha sakte hum fluffy ko??fluffy bhale hi puppy hai par uski toh bhi toh feelings hai..woh samjh sakta hai sab kuch ..aur aakhir fluffy bhi toh baccha hai farak sirf itna hai ki puppy lekin hai toh baccha hi na...

Samar- nai nai sharad tum samjh nahi rahe ho..animals ke alag doctor hote ..unhe aise insaano ke doctor paas nahi dikha sakte...

Jacky- lekin waha woh doctor ke waha likha nahi hota na ki animals are not allowed...toh hum lejaa sakte hai...

Samar- Jacky , bhale hi na likha ho ...par hum nahi dikha sakte ...kyuki insaano ke doctor alag hote aur animal ke alag doctor hote hai hum lejaayenge na phir bhi woh check nahi karenge fluffy ko...

Sharad-(in mind) lagta hai hum kuch gadbad kar rahe hai. ..bhaiya aur manav bhi nahi hai...samar ko doubt na hi usse pehle kuch karna hoga..

Sharad-(whispering) Jacky ,hemant hum kuch gadbad kar rahe hai... ghum jao ghum jao...jaldi ghum jao...

All ghum jaate hai..and starts their conference...

Sharad- Jacky,logically mujeh lagta hai hum kuch gadbad kar rahe hai...

Jacky- haan sharad .. mujeh aisa lag raha hai ..hume toh patah hi nahi ke animal ke doctor alag hote hai aur insaano ke alag...hote hai... Samar ko doubt hua toh gadbad hogi...

Hemant- heeein chacha toh hum bol dete hai na hum toh mazzak kar rahe the..

Sharad- nai nai hemant isse toh aur doubt hoga..hum aisa karte hai hum bol denge hum confuse hogaye the..kyuki suryanagar mein insaan aur animal ke doctor ko doctor hi bolte hai aur issliye hum confuse hogaye the...

All turns around...

Samar- kya hua aap log aise ghum kyu gaye...

Jacky- woh samar kya hai na hum thoda confused hogaye the...

Sharad- kyuki kya hain na suryanagar mein animal ke doctor ko bhi doctor hi bolte hai ..toh thoda aise confuse hogaye..the ...hum fluffy ko animal doctor ke paas le jaate hai na...jaldi lejaate hai..

Samar- haan haan bahut der nahi karni chahiye mein abhi fluffy ko aise ek sec mein fast udd kar hospital lejaata hoon..

Sharad Jacky and hemant are surprised ...

Hemant- heeein samar bhaiya aap ek sec mein udd kar kaise lejaayenge fluffy ko..

Samar realises what he spoke

Samar- nai nai udd kar nahi ...woh jaldi jaldi udd kar bola .. mera matalb tha ki mein tez bhaag ke auto le aata hoon..aur phir hum jaldi aise ek sec mein fluffy ko leke hospital pauch jaayenge.. Tum sab yahi wait karo mein auto leke aaya jaldi ...

Sharad- haan haan jaldi jaao... Samar

Samar leaves

Hemant is thinking something and does heeein

Hemant - heeein chacha mein fluffy ko abhi thik kar doonga ...apne healing superpower se...

Sharad- aeee hemant dhire se bol...kisi ne sunn kiya toh ..aur nahi tu aisa kuch nahi karega hum ke jaa rahe hai na fluffy ko...

Jacky- haan hemant ..tu aisa nahi karega aur agar kisi ne dekh liya toh aur musibat hogi...

Hemant- chacha , Jacky bhaiya aap tension mat lo kuch nahi hoga..mein ne kaha na mein fluffy ko sirf heal kar raha hoon..aur chacha agar mein ne fluffy ki madad nahi ki aur fluffy aur zyada bimaar hogaya toh mujeh dukh hoga ki mein help kar sakta tha aur help nahi ki ...

Sharad- areee hemant tune to mmm baat ki...

Jacky- hemant tu heal kar fluffy ko...lekin dhyan se koi dekhna le...

Sharad- haan hemant samar aaye usse pehle tu superpower use kar ...

Hemant uses his powers and heals fluffy..

Hemant was healing fluffy when samar enter...

Samar- chalo...mein auto le aaya...

Sharad Jacky Hemant are shocked ..

Samar- areee kya hua sab shock kyu hogaye chalo jaldi karo ...hame jaldi jaana hoga mein fluffy ko pakd leta hoon chalo sharad bahar auto khada hai ..

Sharad- haan haan..chalo.. samar...- ( whispering) Jacky ..fluffy Jo abhi samar ke paas mat lejaaye dena hemant heal kar raha hai..aur tum dono bhi aao hamare saath...

Jacky--thik hai

Samar goes to take..fluffy but...

Jacky- nai. .nai... Nai...

Samar- kya hua Jacky..hame late ho raha hai...

Jacky-- woh kya hai hum sab aa rahe hai..samar..mein aur hemant bhi suite mein ne kaha nai nai nai...

Samar- oh toh thik hai..chalo chalo bahut late ho raha. Hai..

All goes to vet hospital...

At hospital,

Sharad-(using power) hemant tune fluffy ko heal kiya?

Hemant-chacha pura heal kar diya mein ne ..

Samar- areee fluffy toh thik lag raha hai ..abhi ..lekin thodi der pehle toh bahut bimaar tha ...phir kaise

Sharad and Jacky are clueless about what to answer...

Sharad- woh...kya hai..na samar ki shayad hospital dekh ke fluffy ko thik lag raha ho.. woh kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai...phir bhi hum doctor ko dikha dete hai

Doctor checks fluffy .and gives some medicine...

While leaving for orphange...

Jacky-- dekho fluffy Ab tum yeh dawaai loge aur tum jaldi thik hojaaoge...

Hemant- haan aur tum bahut jaldi hamare saath khel paaoge... ..

Here, Samar was thinking something .

Samar-(in mind) aisa kaise hosakta hai fluffy bahut bimaar tha phir acahank se..thik...

His trance is broken as sharad was calling him...

Sharad- samar...samar...kya hua chalo auto mein baitho ...

Samar- haan..haan..chalo ...



At night

At ghotala house,

Sharad- bhaiya ..bhabhi mujeh kuch baat karni hai aapse

Vasant- kya baat hai sharad sab thik toh hai na...

Sharad- haan bhaiya sab thik hai.

Varsha- toh phir kya baat hai sharad..kahi Tera aur megha phir se jhagda..toh nahi hua na ..

Sharad - nai bhabhi, aisi koi baat nahi mujeh samar ke baare mein.. baat karni... Bhaiya..mujeh samar ka behaviour .kabhi kabhi uska behaviour ajeeb lagta hai..

Vasant- kaisa ajeeb behaviour sharad?

Sharad- patah nahi bhajya par mujhe kabhi kabhi lagta hai samar hum se koi baat chuppa raha hai...aur yeh baat toh manav ne bhi notice kiya...aur bhaiya jab mein aur megha usse pehle baar mile the tabse mujeh uska behaviour ajeeb lagaa

Sharad tells about about their first meet..and samar ajeeb behaviour which he and manav noticed

Varsha- sharad kya samar ne kabhi bhi hum aliens jaise mmm kiya hai ya phir hamare jaisa ghotala kiya hai jabhi tumhare saamne?

Sharad- nai bhabhi ..ussne aisa kabhi nahi kiya..

Vasant- acha hua sharad tune bataya tu samar par nazar rakhna ..shayad ho sakta hai samar kuch 2015 ke baare mein jaanta ho ya phir wohi hamara beta ho..

Varsha- vasant toh hum ek baar uske saamne alien lanaguge mein baat karte hai na...

Vasant- nai nai varsha hum aisa nahi kar sakte ..agar hum aisa karenge toh usse doubt jaayega hum par aur hamara raaz khul ne ke bhi chances hai..

At orphange,,

In samar room...

Samar was giving food go fluffy

Samar-(talking with himself) yeh kaise ho sakta hai...fluffy bahut bimaar subha ko mein khud dekha tha..phir achank se kaise thik hogaya...iske pehle bhi fluffy aise hi bimaar tha aur woh doctor ki dawaai se hi thik hua tha...(looking towards fluffy) kaash tum bol paate toh tum se hi puch leta ki tum thik kaise hue...

Samar thinks about how fluffy is cured..then

Something strikes to Samar...

Samar- kuch samajh nahi aa raha.. fluffy aise thik...wait a minute.. jab mein auto bulaake wapas aaya tab fluffy Hemant paas tha aur phir uske baad se hi fluffy thik hai..Hemant ne aisa kya kia Fluffy ko jo wo?? Kon h wo..Kahi wo??

Nahi Nahi..Hemant to insan hai..

Samar- Hemant and uski full family thodi ajeeb to h..Shruti b bata rhi thi wo log strange harkate karte hain..but aise kaise..wo log insaan hain phir ye sb?

Bahut confusion Ho raha hai kuch samjh nahi aa raha ..

Jo bhi ho mujeh ab ghotala family pe nazar rakhna hoga...shayad unse mujeh kuch patah chale mere parivaar ke baare mein..

Aur iss kaam ko karne ke liye muje sabse pehle unke weak link ko dhundna hoga..Megha..wohi bata sakti hai inn sbka raaz


Precap:

Samar is in danger will the colony people be able to help Samar or will he be separated from his parents forever..?

Manav Shruti Sharad Megha are standing on crossroads..will they realise their unknown feelings?

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