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nishita23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Nice promo... Jldi update Karna... and thanks for the pm

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Fairy...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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pls update

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vinii01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#213

Superb updates...loved it.
Thanks for pm & sry for late.

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sneha lokwani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 24

And around 2 days has passed Rey has given chance to kriya that was shock for all and taani was all broken but somehow she managed to stay strong and it was most difficult for Rey to be distant from taani and talk with her like stranger and be with kriya which was making him more uncomfortable

Rey: "ok last one day I can't do this anymore at night or max to max till tomorrow I will tell truth to everyone"

Swayam: "are you mad or what Rey 2 days are passed and more 3-4 days max to max taani will not be able to control please Rey"

Rey: "no I can't and taani isse hurt hi ho rahi hai no use is there" he said and while arguing he left room and got bump with taani she was about to fall when Rey hold her, both were lost in each other forgetting about their missions about 5 minutes they were like this and kriya came there she was uncomfortable she called Rey name which brought Rey back but taani was still lost Rey left her and taani falls which brought her back in world Rey went to kriya while taani was burning in anger or we Should say jealously

Rey; "wo taani gir ne wali thi that's why...aur Kuch nahi" he said while giving clarification so taani can hear

Kriya; "I understand Rey...Taani are you fine?" She asked while moving towards taani.

Taani: "yea" she said with forced smile

Rey: "mmm kriya we have to practice our routine so shall we? And taani need your favour can u please record our dance please?" He asked her while kriya and taani both were uncomfortable kriya was thinking how can he tell her ex to record their dance and taani was hell confused how will she see them together but having no option she went with them

Firstly Rey was uncomfortable but then he reminded of his mission so he started dancing and kriya was very happy that after so long Rey was dancing with her without any hesitation taani was not able to see them so close..."mm guys I have urgent work I am keeping here mobile u continue dancing recording ho jaayegi" she said and ran and here Rey become uncomfortable again with kriya so he spoke "mmm kriya my leg is paining can we practice tomorrow?" He said making kriya sad but she smiled and nodded and rey ran from there too.

At night

All were doing pizza party at rehearsal hall taani was doing all preparation seeing this chance Rey went to her

Rey: "mm taani am sorry for afternoon woh maine intentionally nahi giraya tumhein wo kriya aagayi thi na so wo uncomfortable hojati isliye maine chod Diya am sorry"

Taani: "it's cool Rey chod toh aapne muje pehle liya tha" she said while giving fake smile which angered Rey

Rey: "choda maine tumhein tha ki tumne muje tha ache se yaad karo" he said and went leaving regretting taani behind,he marched out of rehearsal hall leaving teary taani behind she controlled and continued her work...

Rey's pov

There is something major nahi toh ab tak taani sach bol deti, but kya hua hai aisa taani please sach bol do jaldi

I was murmuring within myself when someone called me from behind and that someone was kriya

Kriya: "are you fine Rey aap achanak aise chale aaye...Kuch hua hai kya?" She asked me her questions were irritating me

Rey: "nah Kuch nahi hua hai" I said while not looking at her

Kriya: "nahi Kuch toh hua hai re aap bata nahi rahe hai kya hua hai..."

Rey: "kaha na Kuch nahi hua hai there is nothing like that leave me alone for god sake" I shouted at her which make her run from there in tears ahh Rey control on your anger and focus on your mission,please taani jaldi sach bolo...he prayed and went in there they were eating and doing fun...

Armaan: "hey Rey maine suna hai you and kriya were very famous in couple dance I mean tu aur taani hai and aap dono ka dance dekha hai maine I want to see yours and kriya dance also now so please can you" ahhh ye armaan ki toh I don't want to dance with kriya I want to dance with my sweetheart aur ye hi kiii...god main kya karo

Rey: "wo actually muje leg main pain hai thora,so...aaj hamne rehearsal bhi nahi ki isliye so next tym pakka" hash Kuch toh bahana mila muje thank God nahi toh pehle se hi taani upset hai aur upset hojati

No one's pov

They started playing game truth and dare and rey chooses dare

Sharon: "mmm ok i have dare for you dance now wo bhi with taani,dekhe aap log ki chemistry same hai ki wo bhi..." She said with evil smile and here our Romeo was on 9th cloud without thinking anything he got up which make kriya and all shock because few moments ago his leg were paining and now...he got up and went to taani taking out his hand asking for dance taani was looking here and there but she closed eyes and decided to live this moment and gave her hand to his and they danced on beintehaan song...you guys can imagine their valentine day dance...all were very impressed and here taarey were lost in each other and were back in world by their claps everyone were clapping except kriya and saara

Armaan: "tumhare toh leg main pain tha now...?" He said while teasingly

Rey: "yea...wo actually challenge tha na otherwise I wouldn't have done...auuch" he said while acting

Taani: "yea jaise toh main mare jaa rahi thi aap se dance karne ke liye" she said while giving him I don't care look

Rey: "pehle bolne ka na I would have dance with you ismein Marne ki kya baat hai" he said while giving her sarcastic reply while taani pointed her finger to him and said "you" while Rey came closer and said "main?" Making taani lost in him he was about to bite her finger when taani put it down and gave him angry look and left from there while Rey also left to find Sharon but swayam and Sharon already left for home all were left only Rey,kriya,taani were left

Rey: "so girls sit in the car I will drop you both"

Taani: "no thanks I don't want to be kabab main haddi you guys Carry on" she said that while kriya blushed which makes her more angry while taani started walking Rey went behind her followed by kriya

Rey: "toh tum kaise jaugi?" He asked angrily because it was 12 already

Taani: "mm you know auto or cab wo aaj bhi available hai I will grab it ...see ek aabhi gayi" she said while signaling auto to stop she was about to enter when Rey stopped her

Rey: "tum ismein jaaungi ye auto wala shakal se hi kidnapper lagta hai...no" she said while kriya and taani were like what he is saying? He signalled auto to go from there

Taani: "Arey kya problem hai aapki itni mushkil se ek auto Mili thi"

Rey: "meri nahi tumhari kya problem main tumhara rape nahi karunga,tumhein mujse jyaada un auto walon main vishwas hai? Faltu ki zidd kyun kar rahi ho? But if you won't let your stubbornness down today na and won't come with I will be here only...and you know how stubborn I am" he said angrily taani and kriya were shock seeing so much angry Rey they both were fighting forgetting existence of kriya while taani went and sat in the car backside while Rey give smirk and praised himself but got sad seeing taani is sitting behind kriya sat beside him...whole journey taarey were arguing over one or other thing like only they both exists in car while kriya also didn't interrupted them...

Hope you guys liked it do leave your feedback guys ignore 1-2 words comments I have updated this after ages I know sorry for that will try to update soon...

Edited by Snehalokwani200 - 9 years ago

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Amazing update :)

Superb :)

Very nicely written :)

I lived it :)

Update soon :)

Thanks for the PM :)

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sakshivrimar98

@sakshivrimar98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#216

Fantastic update , thanks for pm . Update next part soon.

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Angeline124

@Angeline124

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Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Nice update
Swayam this plan of jealousy is so bad, it is hurting Taani when already she is in pain
Now this plan is increasing her hurt
When truth is come in front of all
Everyone is playing with Taani's feeling knowingly or unknowingly
Hope Truth come out fast
Continue soon