MG SS Ye Rishtha Kya Kehalatha hai? UPT Epilogue Sep 15 pg 52 - Page 5

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Part - 5

Geet returns unsuccessfull...

This man has disturbed her very much...afterall he is also a male...

She shouldn't be surprised for she is used to these men born with a sick mind and that inferiority complex which make them cowards and always in a fear of their weakness being exposed, so they try to scare and dominate the genuinely stronger women.

Geet goes back to Dadi, after meeting whom Geet really felt very proud and got a confident boost...

How come such an idiot come to this place? What's he doing at KM, definetly he must be some threat to the family and specially Dadi...

Geet's imagination is ignited...

Dadi must have got some kind of a loan for the business from this rougue and he must be blackmailing her for more and more interests...

When Dadi raised the issue of paying a lot more than what's in due, he must have attacked poor hepless Dadi and by that way Dadi is also paralysed...

Geet should do something about that...what's this Dev sir doing then?

Dev sir ke paas waqt hi kahan hai? He msutn't have had the time as he is always busy flirting...

Geet is charged and her face is red hot in anger...

Dadi: what happened Geet?, Dadi asks innocently...

Dadi expected this reaction already...

Geet: you don't worry m'am, I'll take care of him

Dadi is happy and also surprised...how long had she waitied for someone to take care of him...haina?

Dadi: thanks Geet, you are such a darling

Geet: why did you let him inside KM first of all?

Dadi: but Geet

Now Dadi is puzzled...

Geet: I know m'am, this one doesn't have the decency to seek permission

Dadi: Geet, what are you talking about? Did you meet my grandson?

Geet: forget that m'am, he didn't even respect your age and see what he has done to you?

Dadi: I don't understand anything Get

Geet: but I understood everything m'am, you need not say a word but still iknow it, i know these kind of people

Dadi: where is my potha?

Geet: sorry m'am, Dev sir must be at KC

Dadi: I know, he must be at KC this time

Geet: then shall I make a call to Pinky?

Dadi: no no bete, I was just talking about Maan

Geet: Maan? Now who is Maan?

Dadi: didn't you find him at the OH?

Geet's anger returns...: I don't want to hear about him

Dadi: did you tell him that I wanted to meet him?

Geet: you want to meet him? Why?

Dadi: it's been a month since I saw him last

Geet: ohh you need to pay the interest

Dadi is even more confused...: what are you talking about Get?

Geet: I'm taking about that Gunda who has occupied your OH

Dadi bursts out laughing...: Gunda?

Geet: yes, zaleem kayinka, dhust danav

Dadi: oh Geet, he is not a gunda

Geet: what?

Dadi: he is Maan, hummara potha, I've been waiting to see him but he doesn't seem to care his Dadi

Geet: dadi?

Geet couldn't believe Dev has such a rude brother...they are poles apart...atleast Dev gives some respect to women but this man!!!!!! What a moron?

Dadi: yes, did you inform him to come and meet me?

Geet: no, but

Dadi: it's OK bete, I can wait

Dadi pretends to be disappointed...

Geet thinks that that stupid Maan doesn't even have the courtesy to come and meet his own Dadi once in a while...she said it's been a month or so...haina?

What kind of a man would neglect his ailing Dadi like that? Haan men are always like that...insensitive cold blooded fools...

Geet: you need not wait any longer m'am, I'll get him immediately

Geet rushes back to the OH...

By now that stupid has gone upstairs finishing his workout...

Did she miss his workout session by any chance? No...never...she is not any weak girl...she is Geet Handa...

Geet climbs the stairs thinking about her ineraction with him...

She thinks he doesn't deserve to be a khurana at all...why is Dadi so much worried about him?

Anyway he is her blood,but he doesn't look like a khurana scion at all...

As she reaches the top thinking about him, she accidentally missteps and is about to skid when a strong pair of hands pull her up in one go...

She stumbles and somehow regains her balance...

She finds herself almost hitting his broad shoulders and how much she would love to see the results of his strenuous workout that she could easily feel even under those black waist coat that transformed that tarzan into a uber cool dude...that's why clothes make half you personality...

But still his expressions haven't changed a bit...infact it has only worsened on seeing her again...

Maan: who let you in again?

Geet: Dadi

Hearing the word Dadi his anger is tamed a bit...he thought he should atleast show her some mercy and a little respect atlast...

Maan: what? I told you that you have come to the wrong address, dadi is in the mansion

Geet couldn't respond properly as she is reeling in some unknown change in her all so feminine being due to his proximity...it's absolutely natural...

Geet gains her strength back and lashes out at him for being so uncaring about dadi...

Geet: what do you think of yourself? You know who she is? She is your Dadi, oh how can I forget that you don't even realize the value of that word, it's not just a mere combination of letters like you think, it's something more than that, "Dadi" means a lot, it relates to respect, to love, to that comfort, that constant yearning soul that is always thinking of us, wishing for our happiness and praying for us all the time

Maan is not used to hearing bashans...he is frustrated...

He keeps staring her but she woudn't stop at all...

Geet: you forget that you got a Dadi , you didn't even have the time to meet her, she's been yearning to see for months, (Ok it may be just a month but Geet's anger is doubled here),but poor Dadi expects that love and care from you, you don't even care that she exists

Maan: finished? Now I don't want to hear a word more, or I don't know what would happen

Maan gets furious...

Geet: oh let's see what happens

Geet stands there like a statue of Rani Lakhsmi bhai, ferocious ...

Maan stares her...she stares him back...

Geet: come on Mr.Khurana, I'm waiting

Maan moves towards her in anger staring into her eyes that dare to bow ...

Geet freezes and couldn't even breathe ...she is gasping and trying hard to put up a fight...

Maan: want to see what I can do?

Geet nods her head...yes

Maan: so you are not afraid?

This is new to him too...the girls he had known either surrender in fear or try to seduce him with their drama...but this girl is different...she looks like his mirror image...lady MSK? Maan likes to fight...he is a fighter...he likes to let his opponents open the game and let them play a while when he could catch their weakness and strike back to knock them out...

Geet: why should I fear, I haven't done anything wrong, you must be scared I think

Maan: what? come again

Geet: I don't fear anyone, specialy those who just bark as they don't have the stuff to fight staright

Maan's ego is hurt bad and he almost hits her...:youuu

He always thinks that raising a hand against a women is a weakness of men, strong men don't show their might against weak creatures...it's an insult to their bravery...

But this stupid girl has exposed his weakness instead of hers...

Geet: men are men, you are not different, come on go ahead, you people always use your power since your armour is empty, you are not a human, you are a janwar like the millions out there

Even though Maan couldn't understand her anger he is not going to take this idiocracy anymore...

Maan: Dadiii

Geet: in the end you have to always go back to your family only

Maan leaves that place as he thinks he would also go mad if he stays there even for a second more...


Part6

Edited by ghsp2fan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
great update! superbly written! Geet goes back! she is angry! dadi asks abt her potha! Geet thinks she is talking abt Dev! Dadi clears mu! dadi pretends to b sad! Geet goes 2 get Maan as dadi wants 2 see him! Geet n Maan argue! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Superb update!!
Finally Maan got someone who gives takkar to him 😃
Loved it!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
geet thought maan is gunda and wen daadi getto know about wat geet thinking about maan she laughed and correct hr mu
and geet again went to call him and gave him big lecture that he get frustrated and rry to hit hr
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Posted: 8 years ago
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geeet came back thinking maan as to be some stupid gunda
n said same to dadi
but came to know him as maan..
she again went to get him back
n gave him an earful of lecture
which he hate
he like her being straight n ready to face him
nice part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow seeing Geet standing up to Maan was just awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb update
geet is not scare of maan
in this quality like maan

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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Part - 6

MSK goes to see Dadi as he also missed her...

Dadi is eagerly awaiting the duo but only Tom is her not followed by Jerry!!!!!! What's wrong?

Let's first hear Tom's story...Jeryy's will eventually be unveiled soon...

MSK: Dadiii

Dadi: that's what I wanted to see, a much more emotional MSK breaking his monk mode once for all, now that I got my arrow hit the bull's eye I need to keep aiming further

Ohh wicket Dadi...

So the drama queen continues her act...

Dadi: gud morning Maan bete

Maan: not a good morning Dadi

Dadi: Maan, what happened?

Maan: Dadi, you know I'll come once I got ready, why would you send that idiot early in he morning to irritate me?

Dadi: oh Get such a sweetie pie

Maan: sweetie pie

Maan grinds his teeth...

Dadi: oh fo Maan, you think she is a cutie pie, haina?

Maan: where did you find her Dadi?

Dadi: you also like her, I knew Maan, isn't she Angelic?

Maan: Angel?

Dadi: I see, but no one can deny that she looks divinely beautiful

Maan: looks always deceive you Dadi, she's a demon in disguise

Dadi thinks...so, first round won, he likes her...dadi pats herself...her choices never go wrong...

Maan: I've never seen such a person

Dadi: that's what I also thought, she's as beautiful inside as she is outside

Maan: I mean I have never seen such a arrogant stupid girl in my life time

Dadi: there's always the first time bete, and mind you, this is just the beginning

Maan: doesn't she have at least a pea size brain? She is so dumb

Dadi: she's so smart

Maan: smart? You call this smart? I doubt if any part of her brain works at all?

Dadi: but she is a very calm girl

Maan: calm? if only she stops gives a b her break to her non stop nonsenses and starts using her brain

Dadi: she's a quick learner bete

Maan: how dare she talks to me like that? Who is she to question MSK?

Dadi: ohh she questioned you? the MSK?

Dadi is happy Get has done her job well and made Dadi proud...

Maan: how dare she answer me back like that? Dadi, why did you send her? Why? What's she doing in my house?

Dadi: don't you think she matches you in every aspect? Perfect Jodi

Maan: dadi? Don't keep talking about that useless stupid girl

Dadi: Maan bete, I'm not the one who us talking about her

Maan: I don't want to hear anything about her, just want to forget this forever, don't you talk about girl again Dadi

Dadi: look what's happening? Oh babaji, I thought my potha is here to see his Dadi, but he is here to inquire about some Geet and is blaming his poor Dadi unnecessarily, only you can help me

Maan realizes that he had forget why he came and is only concerned about that stupid girl...

Maan: sorry Dadi, I forgot everything, all thanks to that moron

Dadi to herself...that's what I want bete, you forget everything and think about you life again...

Dadi: ohh yes bete, you forgot something

Maan: no Dadi, you just keep forgetting these days, you knw how I hate women, that too she's one peculiar specimen

Dadi thinks...so are you bete...Dadi puts her sad face on...

Dadi: so now you too feel that I'm old and useless

Maan: ohh no, not again Dadi, why you always keep thinking like that

But MSK doesn't know that the wounded sherni is back on her feet but only acting to fool him and win her next match...last one was a complete disaster where she failed terribly since shewas ill equipped...now that she has got the cannon(Geet Handa) she knows she is going to be the winner...

Wonder what these wars are about...gurukshetra between Dadi and potha...and you all know what's it that they always differ, marriage...yeah...MSK is not going to budge whatsoever, he has once made the mistake and he never repeats his mistakes...

Maan bends down and hugs Dadi which is what he had forgotten...

Dadi: beta, iss haal mein toh sab ko aaise hi lagtha, and now you know I won't be able to run in the Olympics

Maan knows Dadi is trying to emotionally blackmail him but he is also MSK, same blood...

Maan: why not Dadi? You have got a lot of champions coming out of the paraolympics, you know mariappan?

Dadi won't accept defeat...

Dadi: but I have become dependent, for everything I need help, see even now I had to depend on someone to call you

Maan's anger emerges from hibernation...

Maan: Nakul, Chandu, where have all these idiots vanished?

Dadi: they are on leave

Maan: what? all of them? Who the hell let them go on vacation

Dadi: I only gave them leave

Maan: but Dadi, you should have asked one of them to stay back

Dadi: Maan bete, poor guys wanted to go to the bank, it's all the demonetization effect

Maan: Dadi!!!!!!!!!!

Dadi: see, you also accept the fact that I'm at the mercy of the servants

Maan: but Dadi, you know how Dadi, I never wanted to leave you, you forced me to go on this business trip knowing very well that business never amused me, Dev should have gone instead

Dadi: Dev is still immature Maan bete, you know how playfull he is, how can I trust him with such a big deal, I was so much stressed out you see, thank God you set everything right

Maan: that's why I say you take a break from business , let Dev take over it completely, then only he'll also become responsible

Dadi: you are the elder one. First you take the responsibilities

Maan: I know my job Dadi, I've talked to Mr.Khanna about Dev, he is also keen to have a relationship with us

Dadi: what about you Maan?

Maan: what about me? I'm always a free bird

Dadi: but Maan, even birds have their own nest

Maan: what dadi? Don't you have anything else to talk?

Dadi: what else this old women want except her granson's happiness

Maan: don't you think I'm the happiest person on earth

Dadi: Maan, don't attempt to lie again, you know you can't

Maan: why do you think so Dadi?

Dadi: you are all alone, lonely and sober

Maan: Dadi, you are there for me always

Dadi: I'm talking about your life Maan, come on, get your own life

Maan: I have one and I'm happy with that

Dadi: this not the real life, this is just the fake one that you created to fool others that you have a wonderful life, but in the end you are only fooling yourself Maan

This Dadi always gets the better of him...she's Dadi, you know...

Maan: OK, it's time for your medicines, now, take then and you need to rest now

Dadi: now all the time I'm resting only

Maan: oh come on dadi

Maan is fed up with her slef-pity and enters Geet Handa at the right time...on seeing that she knows this man is rude with even dadi...but she anticipated this...luckily for Dadi Geet is here...

Now Geet will teach him a lesson...

Geet: I was right Dadi, he doesn't deserve this, this admi is insensitive and uncivilized, just forget it Dadi, even a kutha would have been more loyal

Maan couldn't believe this stupid ladhki entered his house and interfered in his personnel affairs...it's his Dadi afterall and she didn't even have the manners to knock the door and seek permission to enter Dadi's room...what the hell is going on?

Dadi: oh come on in Geet

Maan: she has already come in Dadi, look who is speaking about civilization, and looks like someone never bothers about invitations and happily pokes her nose in other's life

Geet: it's better than being an egoist waiting for an ivnitatin even from his own Dadi, to your kind information I'm here as Dadi called me and as far as the others are concerned I just don't damn care

Dadi: oh I'm so glad that I met you Geet, I know Maan too is lucky today, haina Maan?

Dadi teases Maan...Maan thinks that it's better for him to leave as he doesn't like a fool's company much

Maan leaves staring Geet...

Geet too keeps staring him and Dadi likes the clash if the titans as that's how all begins...

Dadi: Geet bete, he's gone

Dadi brings Geet back to reality as she kept watching his exit long after he vanished from her sight...

Dadi: it seems you still have a lot of conversation left, Maan always has this habit of leaving in the middle. Should I call him back?

Geet: no Dadi, it's not advisable to hang out more with bad company

Dadi: Maan is not that bad beta, is he?

Geet: I think you don't see the true side of him as he is your blood, they say love makes you blind

Dadi: anger can also deceive us Geet, you just cool down and clear the smokes of your anger off your sight to get the real picture

Geet: whatever Dadi, why should I bother? I have no business with him, I hope this is the last time I saw him

Dadi: oh yes, but Geet you should not punish this Dadi instead, you come to see this Dadi often, I don't think you need an invitation next time

Geet: no Dadi, I love my Darji and I miss him very much, I'm so happy to meet you, you are just like him, I missed his affectionate words of wisdom, I always look forward to his advice but now it all has changed, you never know how times change

Geet looks worried...

Dadi: don't worry beta, as you just said nobody knows how times change, believe me Geet, your good times have begun, you don't worry about anything for you have your Dadi, you can just come to me whenever you wish, KM's doors are always open for you

Geet: thanks Dadi

Dadi calls her closer...: come here kiddo

She hugs Geet and places a kiss on her forehead...t...: never forget that babaji is always with you

Geet: thanks Dadima

Geet feels much relieved now, now she has someone to shoulder her and show her the right path...

Happy Pongal guys...

Part7

Edited by ghsp2fan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update
heee maneet tom and jerry but yes they fight like that only
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awesome update
heee maneet tom and jerry but yes they fight like them only

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