MG SS Ye Rishtha Kya Kehalatha hai? UPT Epilogue Sep 15 pg 52 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
lovely update, superbly written! Maan goes 2 see dadi n talks abt Geet! Dadi wants Maaneet together! Nautanki dadi! Maan hates Geet! dadi's thoughts well portrayed! y doe shed hate women?? wt is his past?? Maan is elder 2 Dev! Dadi speaks 2 Maan! Maan knows its dadi very well! Geet taunts Maan! Maan leaves!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Superb update
Dadi is such a darling!!!!
Loved the update di :)
Happy Pongal
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Awesome ud
both fight like Tom&Jerry
daadi loved his pota get irritate by geet
maan don't want to listen about geet but he him self
keep talking about hr
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Congrats for the new story 👏
Loving it 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
loved it
tom and jerry so much

try to take part

dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
awesome update...dadi;s name for maan-geet was perfect...tom and his jerry...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Part - 7

Next day at KC...

Geet is as usual late and this time it's not b'coz of Pinky...

Geet woke up very late this morning as she couldn't sleep peacefully as she was reminded of her family after meeting Dadi and that Dhust Danav's thoughts deprived her off the little sleep that she usually gets...

Pinky: Geet, I'm going to get left & right from Mini, tut oh bahut spane dekhthi hai Geet

Geet: shut up Pinky, the lift, someone stop it, stop, stop

Geet runs towards the lift that's about to close and stops it in time inserting her foot, a technique she recently learnt...

Pinky didn't bother to rush and took the stairs instead

The lift opens and Geet enters in a hurry and runs over the lone occupant...he is not amused at all...

He steps aside and poor Geet had to go bang her head into the wall then...he is least bothered...

Geet: andhe ho kya? can't you help me, selfish fellow

Maan: who's blind? Me or you? can't you see that I'm standing here

Geet looks up to find the owner of that familiar voice...yes, it's him again...

Geet murmurs...aagaya subhe subhe, chain se jeene bhi nahi detha aur chain se sone bhi nahi detha

Maan stares her...: by the way Ms.murmur I don't repeat my mistakes, I'm MSK

Maan reminds her of his mistake of helping her the last time she was in the lift...

Geet starts complaining to her babaji...babaji aap ko subhe subhe yahi zaleem khurana ko bhejna tha...aaj toh din hi karab hai...

Geet to herself...Geet, tujhe itni mushkil se lift ko rokhna tha kya? tut ek hi kafi hai apne app ko barbad karne ke liye

Maan: cowards, you women are always like that, spineless species, never have the guts to speak directly

Geet: what did you say? You think you are the only brave heart in the whole universe? We are not afraid of you? we women just like to stay away from undesirable pests like

Maan: like? Come on, complete it

Geet: you

Geet is not scared at all...why should she be? Haina?

Maan: yooou

Maan is about to loose his temper when luckily for Get the lift opens and she escapes...

Geet: Pinky oye Pinky, where are you?

Maan keeps staring her not knowing that the lift doors are shuting infront of him...

Geet turns back and bursts out laughing at him...

Maan hits the door with his powerful arms making a loud noise that instantly puts an end to Geet's laughter and sends a chill down her spine...this man is no ordinary...

Geet is happy that Mrs.Mini is on leave today...

She is free to roam around and is surprised to find everyone working so sincerely even in the absence of the dictator Mrs.Mini...

Geet finds Pinky missing and goes in search if her...

Geet: Pinky, kahan gayab ho gayi tu?

Pinky comes out of the pantry...and Geet goes to her...

Pinky doesn't seem to have noticed Get or did she ignore her?

Geet is after her...

Geet: toh tum yahi ho, mujhe patha tha

Geet rukho Pinky

Pinky is rushing to the conference hall...but even Dev is not here then why is this Pinky acting stange?

Geet: hare Pinky, kya hua?

Pinky: shh jao

They are standing in front of the conference hall door...

Pinky tries to open the door with one hand but Get tries to stop her...

It's half open and Pinky decides to warn Geet...

Pinky: Geet, tu jao yahan se, let me finish my job first

Geet: achcha ye kya hai?

Pinky: black coffee

Geet tries to get that mug from Pinky...

Geet: thanks Pinky, mere liye hi haina? tum bahut achche ho, subhe subhe uss Dhust danav se milke mera shir goom raha hai, I needed this coffee very much

Pinky: Geet, it's for Maan sir

As Geet pulls the mug from Pinky's hand, someone who has been over hearing them form the other side swings open the door suddenly...

Geet is taken aback and she leaves the mug that falls on the ground and breaks splashing the hot coffee all over MSK who is already brewing...

Pinky runs away leaving Geet alone...

Maan shouts...how dare you?

Geet: uff babaji, ye kya ho gaya? Jab bhi iss ko dekhthi sab gadbad hi hotha hai

Maan stares her...but she wouldn't stop...

Geet: you always like to open doors, haina? ye aapka shok hai kya? or maybe you are a janitor ? newly appointed, haina?

Geet tries to ease the situation laughing at her own silly joke...

Maan: pagal ladhki

Maan literally barks at her and she realizes her mistake...

Geet: oh sorry, coffee achcha haina?

Maan: what?

Geet: nahi coffee garam hai kya?

Maan: nahi, bahut tanda hai

Geet tries to help him...she offers her rumal but Maan is burning inside...

Maan: you just get lost from my sight

Geet leaves but is angry how he kept shouting at her even after she apologized...full of attitude...

Geet goes back to her cabin and decides not to leave until it's time for her to leave for college...

The intercom beeps and Geet takes it...:Ms.secretary, come to the conference hall

It's Maan...Geet's anger raises...who is he to order her?

Geet: I'm not your secretary, I'm Dev sir's secretary, no one else has any rights to order me

Bang she drops the phone...

Now it's time for the lion to roar...

Maan comes staright to her cabin, throwing open the door so hard that it almost broke apart...

He is holding a file in his hand...

He just enters and throws it on her table...he doesn't even bother to look at her...he had to give that file to Dev as it's an important one about the business deal he had signed on the tour...

Maan: now just give it to Dev, it's very important

Geet: ohh is it? That's why you threw it with utmost care?

Geet is sarcastic which doesn't go well with Maan...

Maan looks and finds Geet there...

Maan: it's you again, what are you doing in my office?

Geet: that's right, what are you doing in my office?

Maan: you fool, it's a waste of time arguing with you

Maan leaps ahead and gets hold of the file...

Maan: thank god I didn't give it to you, you irresponsible idiot, call sasha

Geet stands still...she is not taking any orders from him...

Maan: I said call sasha, Maan says candidly...

Geet then calls sasha without much interest...

Sasha comes and Maan hands that file to her...

Maan: please keep this safe and give it to Dev, I think I can at least trust you

He says looking at Geet sarcastically...

Sasha grins...: sure sir

She is proud that Maan chose her over Geet...

Geet is still staring him...

Maan leaves heading straight to his punching bag...

Pinky comes to meet Geet...she was afraid to even go see her friend until Maan was there...

Everyone is at ease now...

Pinky: Get, tuh teek toh haina?

Sasha has spread the news of Maan's distrust with Geet already to the whole of KC...

Geet: who is he to order me?

Pinky: sshh Geet, don't say like that, he is Maan sir, Dev sir's elder brother

Geet: so what? where was he all these days? He just enters KC once in a blue moon and proclaims "it's my office", ha ha ha, then what about all of us who sincerely work for KC day in and day out? I know it's all the hardwork of his dadi, he just gets to enjoy all the benefits just b'coz he is her potha and to top of it all he throws such tantrums?

Pinky: Geet, he is not like that

Geet: oh I know him better

Pinky: what do you know?

Geet: he is a loafer who comes here once in a while just to brush up his ring master skills

Pinky: Geet, Maan sir has just struck gold for KC, do you know that?

Geet: what?

Pinky: he just got us a huge deal sighned from an overseas client just as Mrs.Khurana wanted, he has just succeeded in finalizing it after a month long hardwork in Germany. that client was so skeptical but somehow Maan sir cleared all their doubts and secured this deal

Geet: he was not home for a month, that's why Dadi said she didn't see him for a month

Now Geet understands she has been ignorant of the facts and she blamed him for everything...

But still he doesn't deserve any sympathy...the fact is that he is still arrogant, self-centered, rude and stubborn...

Geet is still convinced that MSK is one big Dhust Danav...


Part8

Edited by ghsp2fan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
lovely update, well written! Maaneet fight again! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Super ud
Geet Maan hot argument every time wen ever they come infront of each other's
Pinky told hr he's not their fr month he
have gone fr an important deal fr Germany and he got that big deal
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
maan n geet always poles apart
n geet n her big mouth with maans anger didnt go well
pinky tells geet maan was abroad to get the big deal
clearing her misassumptions
nice part

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