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BreakingBlue

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Posted: 8 years ago

*sighs dreeamily*

Loved this Aru! Simply superb!

Not gonna lie, but somewhere in the middle I half expected it to be 18+. 😆

But brilliant! I loved that Chakor stepped down from JM role in this one. 😆

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Zephyr8

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice one. It would be nice if you continued the story.

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SukiDakanya

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Posted: 8 years ago

So glad you posted it... I loved it!

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JazzyM

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Posted: 8 years ago

A start of a journey...beautifully written.

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Innocentgirl_10

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Posted: 8 years ago

Heyyy guyzzz...m new member of this forum...jst joined right now
Vry well written
Loved it 😊 👏

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kavya_989

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Posted: 8 years ago

Sorry for the late comment
Its awesome,just loved it...imagining chakor in that black dress , sukor scene and imli Devi reaction in last scene while reading

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Kavya

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow - this was amazing!!Felt as if the entire scene was unfolding right before me😳.Outstanding writing!

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