Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Man And Wife - Page 12

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-

so, so amazing! loved it!

AWESOME... i just loved both the OS... a special hug for the first one though... 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: evaviego

AWESOME... i just loved both the OS... a special hug for the first one though... 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Hi! I'm new here, and your OS 'Man & Wife' is the first one I read. I must say, it was super cute. Great job! :)

Originally posted by: notready.

Hi! I'm new here, and your OS 'Man & Wife' is the first one I read. I must say, it was super cute. Great job! :)

Originally posted by: orion23

Aww thank you!

Well I hope I created a good 1st impression for the writers of this forum😆

Hey hon!

I'm zoya..

You are?

Do read the other two as well from the series 😃

Originally posted by: notready.

Haha. You did for sure

I'm Ayesha, nice to meet you Zoya 😊

I am about to read 'The Burden of Guilt' 😊

P.S if you have recs of any other writers, do let me know 😃

thanks a lot zoya for the pm...warna kv pdh hi ni pati ye sare OS's :( n beginning me ur dialogs aise lgra forum m sbki shadi ho ri..really I was feeling the same... ;) now about os .. wow ...I guess I had read it that time when u had wrote it...but comment ni krti thi so I didn't comment...but ab to haq hai ji mera ;) starting se ab kya .. finally they broke the silence...n smirking shravu ...how he tried to take the advantage but lil did he know that its hard to control ur hormones Mr malhotra...especially for boys :-p n how sumo was angry...wanted to slap him because he didn't kiss her...lol... n how he was blanklessly staring at wall n was murmuring biwi ...oh my how badly I wanted to hear this word from his mouth...arrgfhh but serial khtm kr dia Sony beda garg ho tera... n then how sumo was calling out to him n he was repeating biwi n smiling like a mad...lol... n how he refused I didn't say anything...ur dreaming...ha beta u always had dreamt of her as ur biwi n she too did of urs as her hubby... n how he said khalo warna blame mujhpe lgega...whoa that was awsm ...ek ki ego n ek ki self respect...pranam hai dono ko ... n then how they were bickering over sleeping...n finally sharing of bed...jaw dropped shravu...lol...n how he was staring at his sleeping 'biwi' ...God reminded me of episode 116... n finally she woke up...wasn't sleeping...God akhir kbtk feelings control kare ... n finally biwi n pati went to sleep...sometimes guilt covered him...was dying in guilt especially when he heard that she trusts him, n still remembers where he sleeps...but somewhere was happy that finally sumo is his forever... it was amazing zoya ...going to read another works of urs ...thanks a lot for pm :) love, anju ...

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

thanks a lot zoya for the pm...warna kv pdh hi ni pati ye sare OS's :(

You're welcome Anu!!

n beginning me ur dialogs aise lgra forum m sbki shadi ho ri..really I was feeling the same... ;) now about os .. wow ...I guess I had read it that time when u had wrote it...but comment ni krti thi so I didn't comment...but ab to haq hai ji mera ;)

Even I had read this comment and thought I replied but I didn't😆

starting se ab kya .. finally they broke the silence...n smirking shravu ...how he tried to take the advantage but lil did he know that its hard to control ur hormones Mr malhotra...especially for boys :-p n how sumo was angry...wanted to slap him because he didn't kiss her...lol... n how he was blanklessly staring at wall n was murmuring biwi ...oh my how badly I wanted to hear this word from his mouth...arrgfhh but serial khtm kr dia Sony beda garg ho tera... n then how sumo was calling out to him n he was repeating biwi n smiling like a mad...lol... n how he refused I didn't say anything...ur dreaming...ha beta u always had dreamt of her as ur biwi n she too did of urs as her hubby... n how he said khalo warna blame mujhpe lgega...whoa that was awsm ...ek ki ego n ek ki self respect...pranam hai dono ko ... n then how they were bickering over sleeping...n finally sharing of bed...jaw dropped shravu...lol...n how he was staring at his sleeping 'biwi' ...God reminded me of episode 116... n finally she woke up...wasn't sleeping...God akhir kbtk feelings control kare ... n finally biwi n pati went to sleep...sometimes guilt covered him...was dying in guilt especially when he heard that she trusts him, n still remembers where he sleeps...but somewhere was happy that finally sumo is his forever...

So glad you liked it!

it was amazing zoya ...going to read another works of urs ...thanks a lot for pm :) love, anju .

Aww Thank you!!!

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