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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
fantastic updates..
but first am glad that maan and geet finally are with each other thanks to all the friends and family...and manse...what to say about her..adorable showing her anger on geet because she did not visit her...

so she is geet's daughter is it for real...how and who is the father...what does maan's dad know about this...why is he looking at manse so much...what does he know about sk and geet...whats going on waiting eagelry

interesting is how maan and geet have still not talked about manse even tho all three are together in front of their family and friends and especially annie...they both have stuck to maan in front of annie and they all do not mind it too...

waiting eagerly to see maan and geet talk
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
amazing parts
maaneet together with the gang n maansee
luvd it
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Bookmarking . ..😳
Have to read 4rm beginning
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
so sk tried her best to go away
but failed :v
anny n the gang rescued geet from that witch :D
n also ranjit saw her face as well ;)

n mansi got her maa :D
but also angry at geet :(
geet so much wanted to touch her but madam so angry :(

now geet was even j seeing mansi with maan
now feeling guilty :I


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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

WOW!! Fabulous update...loved it dear

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing, beautiful, emotional n lovely updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
All parts are fabulous...👏 👏 👏
Plzz add me in ur buddy list...
Sorry for late cmnt...
Eagerly waiting for the next part...
Continue soon...Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Thanks for pm sparkle. today i finished reading its 59 th part and feeling like where are the rest parts. such a heart touching story. so many shades of feelings love jealous hurt humour friendship. all are blending here to form a beautiful picture. a picture where maaneet together still they are miles away from each other. maansee who bridge between them they both unknown with the reality of her with other. insecurities, the wounds of past n present misunderstandings every time make their path hard to walk still they try to move on holding the hand of their love.
i m waiting for ur revealation about their past that too with each other not in dreams or flashbacks like always. if their love is true n their family is also supporting them then they should meet without major loss. update next soon.👏
Edited by Risingsun626 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
awesome story

just read all the parts

cont soon

pls do add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Adhoori zingadi



Risingsun626 and sweet scorpio
Thanks for reading my story
@ Rising I am happy as you liked my story Revelations were made
@ Alamelu Hope your questions were answered ehaha only 5%

PART 60


That's too much to handle he all ways takes care of her every single things but look what she is doing...
Maan tried to get up but his body discomfort didn't helped him as he is sleeping in same position keeping her in his arms.
"Geet please don't go" He called her softly feeling helpless... She ran away not even looking back...Is she doing what she supposed to do?... Her heart cried..
Maan's wound seems to be heavy he felt the pain when he tried to make some moment. "Damn.. Great timing" He cursed the time for grounded him like this.
He wished she would be fine soon, "Did she?" He thought watching the water droplets on near his wound. He is sure she saw this because nothing can hurt her, It does only if it matters related to him.
Later in the dinner
He saw all got busy to try which dish first "Crazy" no other option he is struck with these fellows. He continued feeding mansee, while his eyes searched for her. He is searching from the evening but his angel nowhere to be seen. He thanked his stars as his hand pain lessened lightly.
"Guys this is dining hall for god sake not a war" Meer lost the thread of patience. All gave her cheeky smile she continued when none gave up. maan laughed mentally meer is really coping up to meet khurana bahu challenges.
"Bhai ye lo aap ki favourite Italian" Aniee served him when he is done feeding mansee. He let out a deep sigh, not in a mood to eat anything no matter how hungry he is. He had some un finished work and how he can eat without her...
"Kya hua bhai don't you like it?" Aniee waiting for him to eat and say something after all she made it especially for him. "My baby doll deewana deewani ko chod ke kuch karega kya?" Sia's words made all laugh.
"Per deewani hai kaha?" Amy was curios as he saw there is coldness in between maaneet. He wished things will go well..
"Not sure she is sulking on some serious issue it seems..I tried to console her all vain" Aniee all most cried in helplessness. Maan stood instantly "Shhh I am here na will take care and my crazy people don't spoil the fun" Maan eyed Arjun to keep an eye on his baby sister.
Arjun was reluctant but maan know Arjun and his love for his sister. The genuine and true love in arjun's eyes its high time Arjun should take steps now. Arjun wants to bow down in front of maan His simple straight way of gesture clearing the cloud.
"Man at least now took up the storm speed" Amy chided Arjun there story sl*gging like anything..
"See who is talking" Sia eyed Ritz naughtily, "Stop being a snail" She wants her nautanki bro to get settled soon, and she knew Ritz is just perfect match. They continued there nok jok and Amy entertained his little princess.
Maan searched for geet in all possible places as she is not present in the room, but she is nowhere to seen. He checked the time it's going to be all most 10pm and the winter cool winds making their way to the cosy rooms. He made his way towards to open lawn the cool breeze made him shiver slightly.
The lawn decorated with sparkling lights his eyes shined high with the beauty and those blinking stars, these decorations everything was for mansee and its Amy's plan to divert her from maan. Amy spent good amount of time with his little princess as well in the evening.
. The perfumes of fresh flowers from garden touched his nostrils. He breathed in the fresh air it was such an awesome night.
"Tu hai kaha" His eyes searched for her he hoped she would be somewhere near to him. His heart would never cheat him.
"Aachii" he heard her faint voice, His eyes instantly shifted to that direction. He couldn't trace out where she is and then he again heard the voice.
He made his way towards the direction for all most 15 mins of search he finally found her. She is sitting beside the pond throwing pebbles, He is standing behind her there is useful amount of distance between them. The light was enough to for him to see her face.
He observed her keenly. She is sneezing badly her nose is running because of this cold winter weather.
She watched her hands searching for the tissue she kept besides her not even glancing on it. Her whole concentration was on her shadow which is visible in the pond. He chuckled when she crushed all most a packet of tissues, He wondered from how long she is sitting here.
He silently walked up to her extended his white neatly folded hanky to her. She stiffened but there is no need to see if that person was him or not. Her fragrance filled air she breathed in was enough to recognize, she felt alive but she don't have guts to face him. She couldn't refuse him either silently took the hanky wiped her nose lazily.
He sat beside her closely, she looked down not even sparing a glance at him. His body temperature insanely picked up when he sat near her. He didn't said anything, nor did she.
He made her lean on his shoulder supporting from back with a jerk. She got startled with sudden advancement.
She don't have any energy to cry or to fight, well for what she needs to fight. They stayed together in the same position, this time she don't have heart to throw pebbles in the pond.
There shadow is dominating the visible shadow of the bight moon even. It felt soo beautiful she snuggled close to him seeking the warmth.
He saw how easily she can get settled in his arms, Ummm just like mansee... He chuckled... Their eyes met in the pond... She lost herself looking in to his hazels which only shows the love he had for her. She broke the eye lock feeling miserable.
He didn't complained either..
"Sir everything ready" Raj informed him keeping shawl around them securely. Maan didn't protested not she felt embarrassed, they don't want to spoil this perfect moment.

"Thanks" Maan said with clear tone, Raj bowed looking down "It's my duty sir and please dont get cold" Raj vanished giving them space.
Maan stood on his feet covered her securely carried her in his arms.. She hugged him by his neck tightly. "Damn" He supressed his wound pain, carried her in the small hut that was resided beside the pond.
For a name you might call it as hut but it was built with glass and heavy curtains were enough to hide people inside.
He waited for her to see the place we are, He wants to see her reaction..
"Open your eyes love" His voice was slow and calm her body shivered.. She took her own good time, her eyes twinkled in amazement. He kept her on the big cozy bed. The cabinet had all necessary things a human needed.
Around the cabinet it's all greenery and the shining stars in the sky, Cool wavy winds of the dark night making wonders. She hugged herself inhaling the feel of everything she witnessed. She fell back on the bed the bright shining moon winked at her.
"I love it" She mumbled looking at the moon. Geet stretched her hands as if try to touch that far moon. "Achi lagi?" She heard his question.
"Of course" he no need to ask her that question. He sat beside her resting his back on bed post. She glanced at him laid keeping her head on his lap.
"How this happened?" She straight away asked as he still hiding away his wound from her. He looked away well his guess is right... she saw it.
"It's just an accident" He combed her hair with his long fingers. She felt relaxed constant crying making her head spin. She hugged him by waist...
"Kab hua?" she is not ready to leave this soo soon. "I am fine now just sleep please" He tried to distract her mind.
"I am waiting" He knew she wants to know..
"I got this wound when we are playing game but it's not your fault. It happens while playing games.." He said finally.
Guilt ate her up first she is not able to take care of him and she is the reason for his pain. Great she shed tears silently..
"Shhh don't cry please that's why I haven't told you I don't want to see tears in your eyes" He wiped her tears feeling sad to reveal this.
"Its not like I am hiding anything or don't want to share its just the decision to avoid tears in your beautiful honey eyes. " He kissed on her both eyes passionately.
"Sachi?" She knew he loved her but the depth, no one can imagine. She felt blessed, here she is thinking all the crap crying badly, but the scenario is different. "How stupid"
"I have asked you told you many times never ever cry for anything and if you have anything in your mind talk with me first" His tone was calm but his eyes saying how serious he is. She nodded her head like a baby making him smile.
"You will say yes now but it comes in terms tu apni manmani karthi ho" He knew she could never stand on her words, her emotional turmoil makes her weak.

"Isa nahi hai I will do everything you say" maybe he is right but she will do everything he says.
"Pakka?" He asked for one last time again. "Yes" She is determined, with her stupidity she faced soo much. Its high time she should tell him about her. He hugged her tightly "I love you please don't cry for anything. Your one drop of tear is like thousands needled pinning to my heart"
"Shhh I would never isa mat kaho" She kissed on his heart, He shivered with sensation. They stayed in the silence looking at the moon.
"App ne khana nahi kaya" He looked away cursed his stomach for crying like anything. She glared at him...
"Raj bhayya get all his favourite food fast" She asked raj over his mobile "Inka bhi" Maan screamed before she hangs up. Raj couldn't stop but laugh happily and her calling him as bhayya...He had mixed emotions.
"Teek se" She helped him to drink water , He is on cloud nine today.. Things were changing... She is feeding him lovingly.
He actually protested when she is about to fed him but her one glare. The great MSK enjoying his moon light diner with his love.
"Ab tho khalo yaar I am done" He asked meekly after sometime when she is nowhere to stop feeding him. She stopped after her heart content much to his relief.
She finished her food within no time. "Stretch your arm and keep here" geet ordered keeping pillows beside him where he laid. She applied hot oil on wound massaged his hand slowly.
"Is it paining?" She asked when he hissed in pain. He nodded for a no after massaging for few minutes, she given hot water treatment. He kept on staring at her while she did her work with at most sincerity. He is amazed to see this side of her she is doing everything as if she know by doing in which way the pain will reduce.
Ones done she applied ointment carefully, Maan already feeling the wound is nothing now the pain already long lost.
"Kya hua?" She asked when he is watching her without any blink. "Kuch nai I love you stay with me" Maan confessed, He couldn't live without her in his life.

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