Ariya SS::Bas Mein Tere Kabil Nahi..(Completed)

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld
Very interesting
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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: madmadona
What happened to riya???
Why she is behaving different???
Glad sikky is dead
Arjun riya ke liye office aaya wahhh
Awesome update
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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

I know meine update pe comment nahi kiya ..lekin jab se tumhara naam baar dekh rahi hoon hamesha excited ho rahi hoon ke shayad tumne update kiya hai...lekin nahi tum to reply kar rahi ho... 😔

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[QUOTE=kaveriw2008] I know meine update pe comment nahi kiya ..lekin jab se tumhara naam baar dekh rahi hoon hamesha excited ho rahi hoon ke shayad tumne update kiya hai...lekin nahi tum to reply kar rahi ho...😔

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

nice update
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: kashvi19
nice update
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but ri ko kya hua
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LoveAriya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Awesome Mind blowing Superb

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Part 2:-

After 4 days..

Riya had completed sikandar's file..

She come to Sam's cabin with it..

Riya:-sir ye file complete ho gayi he..aap check kar lijiye..

Sam:-umm..Riya.. Mein chahta hu..ke Arjun ye file ek baar check Kare.. Baad me mein isse check karuga..

Riya nodded..

She knock on arjun's cabin door..

Arjun:-come in..

Riya enters in cabin..

Riya:-rathod sir ne kaha he ke ye file pehale aap check kar lijiye..

Without waiting for his reply,she put the file on his table n left from there..

Arjun check that file n come to Sam's cabin..he too check it..n then both come out of Sam's cabin..

Sam:-good work Riya..meine file pe sign kar diye he..mein aur Arjun file submit karne commissioner sir ke office ja rahe he..commissioner sir ne tumhe bhi bulaya he..

Riya slightly nodded..

Trio samjun n Riya come to commissioner office..their journey is abnormally silent..

Commissioner office:-

Commissioner:-very good work guys..I m proud of u..Arjun..iss case ke liye tumhe 3rd level officer ke liye promotion milta he..ye he official orders..(commissioner gives an envelope to Arjun)now u have become 3rd level officer acp Arjun rawte..n u will get bravery award on independence day..

Arjun(accepting the envelope):-thank u sir..

Commissioner:-sameer..jis tarike se tumne aur tumhari team ne ye case handle kiya he I will recommend ur team for best team award..

Sameer:-thank u sir..

Commissioner:-Riya..tumne prove kar diya he ke u r assets of police department.. I m really proud of u..n tumhe promotion bhi mil raha he..u will be senior inspector in etf..

Riya:-thank u sir..par aapne kaha tha ke sirf sikandar ka case khatam hone tak muze etf me rehana hoga..usake baad mein transfer le sakhti hu..

Arjun was about to say something when Sam glare him to stop..

Commissioner:-Riya..filhal mein tumhari transfer nahi kar sakhta. Issiliye filhaal tum etf ke sath hi work karo..

Riya slightly nodded..

Samjun n Riya back to etf office..Riya is looking upset..

Sam told Choree that Arjun n Riya got promotion n both will get bravery award..n their team will also get best team award..

Choree get happy..n they congratulate Arjun n then Riya..but Riya thanked then without even smile..

Same time they got a case..

Sam:-guys..new case..pune ke ek hotel me ek couple ki death hui he..they were belong to one of prestigious n political family from pune.. Issiliye hame ye case diya gaya he..local police ka kehna he ke ye socide he..hame pune ke liye nikal na hoga..abhi..pehale ham waha ki local police se baat karege..

All nodded except Arjun..

Sam took codriver sit..chotu n Riya sit on back side..shree was about to sit besides Riya but Arjun speak up..

Arjun:-shree..tum aage baitho..

Shree get confused but sit on co driver sit..n Arjun sit besides Riya..

All are now sitting in SUV..Sam is driving towards pune..

Riya close her eyes to ignore Arjun..n soon she fall in sleep as she was very tired because almost the whole week she had not slept properly because of sikandar's case..

Arjun sigh..

After sometime..

Arjun realized sunrays coming through window of SUV are disturbing her..(Arjun n chotu are sitting on both side window n Riya is sitting in middle..)

Arjun raised his hand in such a way that it blocks the sunrays hitting to riya's face..n he keep his hand as it is..

Sam n shree saw this through rare view mirror ..but act as they had not seen anything..n chotu who is sitting besides Riya act as he also sleeping..

Arjun keep staring to Riya..

N his mind drifted in past..

Flashback:-

(Consider Arjun is remembering this)

After some days of Riya joining etf after exora 2 virus case..

Arjun get hurt in some case out of city..his hand is badly wounded..they took him to nearby doctor..doctor treat him n ask him to take rest..

Team is now in SUV Sam is driving ..shree is sitting besides him on codriver sit..

Chotu,Riya are behind sits..n Arjun sitting in between chotu n Riya..Riya is worrily glancing to Arjun after each passing minute..but he had fall in sleep due to effect of heavy dose of medicines..

Suddenly Riya realized sunrays coming through window are disturbing him..she raised her hand in such a way that it blocks sunrays coming to his face..n she keep her hand as it is for long time..

Shree n Sam saw this through rare view mirror but act as they had not understand anything.. N chotu act as he is sleeping..

After sometime.. Arjun's nap suddenly get broke n he found Riya staring him lovingly..n has block sunrays by her hand so that his nap won't get disturb..

Seeing him awake..she immigiately lower her hand n started looking out of window..

Arjun tries to hide his smile..

Flashback end..

Arjun staring Riya lovingly with little smile on his lips remembering the incident..

Suddenly riya's nap get broke..n she saw Arjun staring her..n block sunrays so that her sleep won't get disturb..

Arjun lower his hand immigiately but still keep staring her..she turn her face not to look him..

He sadly started looking out of window..

They reach to pune..

They all are sitting in a cafe..sipping their beverages..

Sam:-guys..local police ko lagta he ye socide case he..but muze kuch doubt he..

Chotu:-kya doubt sir..?

Sam:-I doubt.. Its a murder..woh itne reputed family se the..aur apni shadi me khush the..koi wajah nahi thi socide ki..ho sakhta he family ka koi dushman ho jisane ye kiya ho..

Riya:-sir..jis hotel me unki maut hui he uss hotel me pichle 2 months me aise hi 2 couples ki maut bhi hui he..ye sab inteffak toh nahi ho sakhta..muze bhi lagta he ke ye murder he..

Arjun:-u r right Riya..

Choree n Sam look to Arjun shocked as if he had said the most impossible thing..aur kyo na shocked ho Arjun rawte kisike baat se agree hona..woh bhi Riya ke..ye toh suprize hi he..

Riya act as if she had not heard anything.. While Sam try to hide his smiles..

Sam:-shree,chotu,riya Jo bhi pichali deaths hui he muze unki details chahiye jaldi..

Choree n Riya left to their work..

At evening they back with all information..

Arjun:-hmm..isaka matlab he ye koi serial killer he Jo couples ko maar raha he..aur woh shayad ussi hotel me he issiliye woh itni aasani se ye kaam kar raha he..

Sam:-ham aise usse nahi dund sakhte..hamare pass koi surag bhi nahi he uss tak pahochne ka..ab sirf ek hi kar sakhte he..hame uss hotel Jana hoga guest bankar.. Chotu tum waha ke catering department me entry karo..shree tum waha ke security department me..mein waha pe as businesman jauga..aur aise dikhauga ke I m interested in investing my money in their hotel business.. Isse mein hotel management ke contact me rahuga..aur agar inn me se koi katil ho toh pata chal jayega..

Sam(looking to Arjun n Riya):-aur Arjun..n Riya tum waha couple banke jaoge..ho sakhta he woh killer tum logo pe bhi attack karne ki koshish Kare n range hath pakda jaye..

Arjun n Riya looking to him shocked..

Sam(mutter to Arjun):-aise kya dekh raha he..?Abe tera kaam ulta easy kar raha hu..

Arjun try to hide his smile..

Riya:-lekin mein..

Sam(cutting her in mid):-mein puch nahi raha..bata raha hu..its order..

Riya make face..Arjun get sad..

N his mind drifted in past..

Flashback:-

(Consider Arjun is remembering this..)

(After some days of precious flashback..)

All are sitting in conference room..n discussing case..

Sam:-ab ek hi rasta he uss gunehgar tak pahochne ke liye..ham sab undercover jayege uss hotel me kaha se ye drugs dealing ho rahi he..

He told all other their work..n then turn to Arjun n Riya..

Sam:-Arjun n Riya..tum dono waha ek married couple banke jaoge..

Arjun n Riya look to him shocked..

Shree(mutter to Riya in teasing way):-are shock kyo ho rahi he..tere liye toh accha hi hua na..man me laddu fut rahe he na..??

Riya try to hide her blush..

Arjun:-lekin mein..

Sam(cutting him in mid ):-mein puch nahi raha..bata raha hu..it's order..

Arjun make face..while Riya get sad..

Flashback end..

Arjun come out of his memory lane when he realized shree ,chotu n Riya are leaving for early preparation to go to hotel..

Choree n Riya left..

Sam:-sun Arjun..ye sahi mauka he..usse baat kar..aur sab sort out kar..warna kahi jyada der na ho jaye..

Arjun softly nodded..

They all come to hotel as per their plan..ariya come to their room..

Both get fresh.. N they all again discuss the case to whole team through ear piece..

Its already night..so all left to take rest..

Riya sleep on couch..

Arjun:-Riya..Sleep on bed..

Riya:-mein yahi pe thik hu..

Arjun:-Riya stop it..kya kar rahi ho..?aise uncomfortably sone se accha he bed pe so jao..

But Riya don't hear him n pull blanket over her head n act as she sleep..

Arjun sigh n turn to sleep on bed..

His mind drifted to past..

Flashback:-

(Consider Arjun is remembering this..)

Previous flashback scene continue..

They all come to shimla for the case..they had come to know that some one is drug dealing in that hotel so they decided to stay as undercover..

Ariya stayed their as couple in one room..

Its almost night..Arjun back from washroom n saw riya sleeping on couch uncomfortably..

Arjun:-tum waha pe kyo so rahi ho Riya..?bed pe so jao..

Riya look him shocked..

Arjun:-waha pe uncomfortably sone se accha he yaha bed pe so jao..tum right side mein left side..

Riya nodded with little shock(but man me toh laddu fut rahe he)

Arjun n Riya both sleep on bed turning back to each other..n pillows placed in between them..

But later riya shifted closer to Arjun..arjun open his eyes when his sleep get disturb.. N found Riya hugging him..he smiles lightly..

N cover her with blanket properly.. But she hug him more tightly because of cold..

Arjun just close his eyes..n try to sleep..

Next morning..

Riya get up first n get shocked seeing herself hugging Arjun..she try to get up..n due to that Arjun too wake up..

Both look each other lost..but his phone starts rings n they come out of trance..Riya run to washroom trying to hide her blush..

Flashback ends..

Arjun smiling remembering this incident..

But his gaze fell on Riya who is sleeping on couch.. He sigh sadly..

N goes to bed n try to sleep..

Next day..

Though Arjun n Riya are with each other all the time but riya get successful in staying away from Arjun..

N they solve the case to finding out one of the waiter who is little psycho murdering all couples by mixing poison in their food..

They all return back to etf..

Etf office:-

Sam:-guys..kafi time ho gaya he..so tum sab log ab nikalo..kal iss case ka paper work kar lena .

Choree ,Riya nodded..

Riya left without saying anything..

Choree look each other sadly..n they too left..

Sam:-chal Arjun..sath me dinner karege .

Arjun left behind him without saying anything..

Samjun both take dinner almost silently..

Sam:-mein tuze ghar drop kar deta hu..

Arjun don't say anything..

Sam stops SUV in front of arjun's home..

Sam:-tera chehara dekh ke saf pata chal raha he ke tuzse kuch nahi hua..itna accha mauka diya tha fir bhi kuch progress nahi ki tune..

Arjun glare him..

Sam:-muzpe kyo gussa ho raha he..sach hi toh kaha meine..

Arjun:-toh mein kya karu..woh muzse sidhe baat hi nahi karti he..baat toh kya woh mere taraf dekhti bhi nahi he..

Sam:-ab tune kaam hi aisa kiya he..

Arjun:-tu mera dost he ya dushman..?

Sam:-koi shaq..? Dost hi hu..

Arjun:-toh muze moral support karne ke bajay aise irritated kyo kar raha he..

Sam:-accha baba sorry..tu ek kaam kar..ghar Jake aaram se so ja..kal subah firse koi new tarika dundana Riya se baat karne ka..

Arjun sigh..n left to his home..

Sam shook his head in disbelief n drive to his home..

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balan04

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Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Aakhir kya ho gaya ariya ke beech...
Everything is happening in the same way.. in the past with riya and now with arjun...
Why is riya behaving so different
Is arjun reason behind her behaviour???
Thanks for the pm in advance
Continue soon 😊

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