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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AlooMatar

Loved the update. Paro is clear in what she wants, Rudra is confused. It's nice she met those kids and they cheered her up.

Waiting for their reunion.
Good luck for your exams


Ya, Rudra is confused bt vry little bit..
Thank u..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Rudra's maasa's betrayal has made Rudra cynical of Paro's claim of not leaving him. But Paro will be waiting for him. For the present the children and her jijas child are helping her to find her strength


Ur right..
Thank u.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aasiyadeva

interesting chapter... Rudra is disturbed... that means paro still in his heart... but how he understood her feelings? he trust her.. but , why he is keep a distance ? when will paro returns to ranawat haveli? Is Dr.Varsha helps that?paro is so fast... he know her feelings to Rudra... am waiting for the next chapter...


I'll ans ur questions in upcoming chapters abt returning ranawat haveli & Dr. Varsha..
Rudra avoiding Paro bec he thought that Paro leaves him as like his Mother..
Thank u..
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks for the pm ll read all pending part soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
What happened? eagerly waiting for your update... It is so long...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pavinitishiv

What happened? eagerly waiting for your update... It is so long...

nxt chap is ready bt Devi sis is nt corrected it, she s busy wit her new life..
i'm nt at al satisfied wit my English so that i jus hold it...
i need some1 to correct my grammar mistakes...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Do u need any help? I can assist with the grammar if you need. Feel free to PM me.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 16


Sumeer goes to some place which was mention in that visiting card. He meets her again. She is an Asst manager of Happy Wedding so she appoints him. He feels happy and says thanks to her. She smiles and says you got this job because of your involvement and interest towards this job and guides him to his cabin in the office and explains all his reasonability and rules related to his work. In between Sumeer asks her name. She slaps her head and says I forgot to tell you, ok let me introduce myself, I'm Shatabdi, Asst manager of Happy Wedding. He silently murmurs her name and says it's nice. She asks what? He says nothing nothing. After explained,she leaves them. Ajay and Sumeer started their new job happily within their new small cabin. She saw Sumeer from her cabin and smiles. He too smiles. He was appointed as a Supervisor in Happy Wedding. Ajay is satisfied with his new job so he happily works with his friend.

Every morning Parvati calls Aman and ask about Rudra's well being. After Rudra left to Pakistan, she calls Aman and asks everything about Rudra, his well being, when will the case end and so on. Aman patiently answered her all questions. Todays is 20th day, and its morning, Aman getting ready to go to BSD. His phone rings and he says it's Parvati, My sister. He attend the call, she asks him about Rudra. He says yeah Parvati, I know your upcoming questions too, wait a minute. She says ok bhaisa. He says last night Rudra Sir didn't attend my call Parvati,I tried many times but it's not reachable, I think, he is busy, I will try tonight. Parvati's smile disappeared because she got all information about Rudra last 20 days but now it's become tough to know about his well being. Her eyes filled with tears. Aman calls Parvati you there. She couldn't talk so that she cuts calls and sits on sofa for minutes. Aman feels for her.

After few hours, Geetha and Parvati reached service centre, Parvati leaves Geetha and straightly goes to the temple at back of the service centre. She prays for Rudra's safety, please safe him and return him back to me, I need him, I want to meet him, I want to talk to him, please safe him. She starting crying and kneel down in front for God. Geetha hides herself behind the big tree and witness Parvati's state and remembers Nandhini's state when Barath left for mission and leaves from there. After few minutes, Geetha calls Parvati. Parvati weeps her tears and standup and says I'm here mom.

At service Centre, all children surrounded baby and started playing with her and asks her name. Parvati come there and says we will do her naming function very soon. Geetha says yeah, you are going to attend my granddaughter naming function that time you will know her name. Children turns to Parvati and ask Di, when and where you going to conduct the function. Geetha says maybe after 10 days, Naamkarann function will be conduct, you are all should come there. Parvati try to smile a little but her smile didn't reach her eye. Geetha notes her dull face.

Last 20 days are hell for Parvati, she didn't understand her inner feeling for Rudra. Other side Varsha knows more about Rudra's character with the help of Ranavat Haveli members. Service Centre Children are attached to Parvati, they are all called her DiDi. Mohini didn't have a chance to kill Dilsher, so many times she tried but all times, she falls to reach her goal and become irritated.

At Pakistan, Rudra strikes Nandhini's name in document and says didn't cross the border and saw Payal name and strikes her name too and says she is sold, and he ticks Aarthi name and says she is in Pakistan Mental hospital. He says remaining 14 girls are sold, in it 6 girls are died and 8 girls are not in Pakistan. He sighs and close the document and says report completed. Pakistan Solider brought dinner to Rudra camp, Rudra thank him and ate a bit in it for checking it and then he had it. Finally came to his small bed and saw his moblile, and thought that Paro's brother will call me but he didn't call yesterday and today also. He lies on his small cot and says Parooo... mission is over now, maybe within 5 to 6 days I will be back, but I will not come to you,Paroo.., I know you are waiting for me but I am not at all ask you to wait, nothing is there between us, everything is over and he sits on his cot. He saw her illusion and extend his hand to touch her he holds it back. She says nothing is over Rudra, I didn't do anything wrong, you know that Rudra then why you try to avoid me, Why Rudra? He very softly says "Paroo". Paro's illusion disappeared. He sighs heavily and he try to sleep but his mind is occupied by Paro's memory. After few hours, he slept.

In these days, Aman investigate about Parvati's Mamisa missing case, he investigate neighbors and comfirmed that she didn't return to Birpur after meet Parvati at BSD. He says so Parvati's Mamisa alas Chandrika kidnapped by Tejawat men. Solider asks Sir, what our next plan is. Aman says we have to know more about her so we need to search her home. He makes a call and got permission. All soldiers are searching here and there in that small home, but they didn't found any valid information. He thought that something happen in between BSD to Birpur way, so that she didn't reach home, she must travel from BSD to Chandangarh bus stand, then she will reach Birpur but where she is?, ok, I need investigate from beginning. He leaves.

At V.K home, Parvati spends her time at Pooja room at home. She didn't get to know about Rudra last three days which hurts her feeling and she got afraid about his safety. If she is in home, she sits in front of God and prayer, at service centre, she prays for him at that small temple. Geetha saw her state and she didn't digest it anymore so that she decided to question about Rudra to V.K Singh.

At BSD, Aman thought that she must be use Riksha for travel from BSD to Chandangarh, and then she only use Bus, so I have to start from Riksha stand at outside of BSD. All Riksha men are assemble at BSD HQ. Aman show Chandrika Photo to them and asks about her. All are says they didn't saw her, but one confused Riksha man says I think, I saw her at that particular night. Aman asks other Riksha men to leave. He says I saw her at Chandangarh bus stand where I dropped some people. Aman says ok, how you remembered her after so long. He says Sir, I picked her at bus stand and dropped her, she asks me to wait, I said ok, but I need waiting charge also, she says ok bhaisa. After one hour, she came back happily and I dropped her at Bus stand and she gave me Rs.200 and asks me to take remaining amount, she gave me 50.Rs extra so that I remembered her till now Sir. Aman says ok, can you remember the timing when you dropped here and then dropped her at bus stand. He says I don't know exactly sir, but it's around 10 to 10.30pm.

At night, after dinner, Geetha slowly asks her husband about Rudra's mission. He says Geetha, it's all most over now, and he will be back soon, maybe within two, three days. Geetha says thank god. V.K asks why you are asking about my job. Geetha says Rudra is in Pakistan, I felt, this was a dangerous mission so... V.K says yeah, it's dangerous but BSD did all the safety arrangements for him. She felt relived.

At Chandagarh bus stand, Aman look into bus details which are operating between Chandagarh to Birpur and spot three bus details at that particular day and timing. He interrogates all drivers and conductors but he didn't got appropriate information but he got confirmed information that is all passengers are dropped at correct places. Aman thinks that again case moves to Birpur, ok, finally Parvati is there with us, she will help to untie some knots in this case and make a report. He calls V.K Singh and asks his permission to investigate Parvati. V.K agrees but Parvati will not come to BSD. Aman says I can understand Sir, tomorrow morning I will be there at your home sir. V.K says ok.

At Ranawat Haveli, Samrat tells his new business ideas to Mohini who is busily checking her pickle business accounts and signs him to stop and leave. He leaves. At his room, Maithili folds his dresses and saw him and asks him so today your work got over every soon. He throws files and sits. She stunned and asks him what happen, why are,. Before she asks, he scolds her. She pours water and gave it to him and says now you're in anger so you can't able to think straight, have it. He saw and took the glass and drank. After few minutes of silence, she asks him now tell me what happen. He explains his ideas for new business. She says embroidery saree insists of normal one, its nice idea, we can prepare some women for this work so that they can get some money to run their home. He says yes, but. She says what? He says mom did not accept my idea. She says Maajisa will listen you; maybe she is in worker pressure, you can explain her again, so that she will understand it. He holds her hand and thanks her. Varsha overhears their conversation.

At office, Sumer thinks my life become more colorful because of you; yeah it's you, Shatabdi. She asks what? Are you dreaming at day itself? He says not like that. Both are discussing for new decoration idea and now she is become his best friend not Ajay who always teases Sumer. She says we got an order for new function; it's very big function and happily hugs Sumer who is stunned. She breaks hug and says if we done this function well, our Happy Wedding company moves to next level and smiles. Sumer smiles and says we will put our best to done it well.

Precap : Rudra returns to India. Geetha invites everyone in BSD for Naamkaraan function.

Author note: If u are all interested to read this story, pls cmt or Pm me..

I'm nt al satisfied with my English so that i'm planning to stop this story..

Frnds pls Forgive me for worst English..

Edited by -BhavyaEsther- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Plzz dnt stop this story it's very good. I don't find any problem with ur English we cn understand it's not some literature competition then y u r so much worried about all dis English it's all about parud dear nd we all cn understand so don't u dare to stop in middle
Edited by Filmy_girl - 8 years ago
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Plzz dnt stop this story it's very good. I don't find any problem with ur English we cn understand it's not some literature competition then y u r so much worried about all dis English it's all about parud dear nd we all cn understand so don't u dare to stop in middle

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