Maaneet New ss HOPE- part 12- page 146-24-feb-17 - Page 35

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice updates looking for next updates
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Originally posted by: sneharjun92

amazing updates. loved it.
maaneet just pretended to not know each other.
maan thinks that geet has moved on in her life seeing her with yash n manu.
geet thinks he is with tara...
vicky was so angry on tara hearing her bullshit about geet.
he made maan understood that geet is his only.
geet told manu about his family.
tara came at wrong timing. just manneet were about to talk.
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precap is interesting.
waiting for next part.



thanks dear😊

yeah nt came always wrong time 😡and my maaneet will mu clear 😉soonn

i will try update soon😊
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Originally posted by: avlreddy09

Nice updates looking for next updates


thanks dear😊
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thanks dear😊

iam also love ur fabulous picture dear. love it 😃
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part 5

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Khushi shocked face: U r yash

Yash shocked: What r doing here

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Khushi: first u run away from me now asking me what r doing here , wait u try to cheat my di with angry face

Yash: What I try cheat ur di ,who's ur di

Khushi: Dont act smart and u dont know my di

Geet enter the house: What 's going on

Khushi: Di he is cheating u, don't trust him

Yash: Geet why khushi calling u di.

Geet: Yash u already know Khushi.

Khushi: Di,he is not Yash and he is Arnav.


Geet: Khushi come down and I know his name arnav

Khushi:di u not understand

Geet: I know he is Arnav Yash Singh khurana.

Khushi: He is khurana but he never told me

Yash: Yes iam arnavyash Singh khurana alias Vicky.( padmaroa 's ur guessing is right)

Khushi: But u said that just Arnav and I live in Delhi.

Yash: In London college everyone call me Arnav only.

Khushi: Then why di calling u yash

Yash: She don't want khurana tag insake only she call me Yash not Vicky nor khurana.

Khushi confused face:iam not understand

Yash: She is my Bhabhi and my maan bhai ka patni.

Khushi: Kya

Geet :Vicky and Khushi shut up

Yash: Geetu u call me Vicky, omg u call me Vicky long back yaar

Khushi: Arnav why u excited so much, di call u Vicky not president

Yash: U dont know she called me Vicky after 2 yrs back.

Geet: Both are stopped and tell me how u people know each other.

Yash: in London college she is my junior nothing else.

Khushi popped her eyes: Kya iam just junior for u

Yash: Yes

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Khushi show her phone to geet: Di see this photo and then u tell me that iam just junior for him.

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Geet mouth open wided : Vicky what is this

Yash: Khushi u keep this photo

Geet murmuring to Yash ears: Oh she is ur Pari right

Vicky sheepish smile and nod his head said :dont tell her till now iam not propose her plz

Khushi: Why u both talking in murmuring ways.

Geet: Nothing sweety, Vicky she is Khushi Gupta Neil sir ka daughter.

Yash: Khushi u not told me.ur Gupta

Khushi: U also not told me ur khurana

Geet: Both r mistake and slap her own forehead: Oh shit I forgot ,I need pack my things.

Yash: Why u packing

Geet: I need go Manali and some issues going in manali branch.

Yash: My champ

Geet: Manu also coming with me

Yash: u stupid , in manali have snow fall so my champ not come with u and u also not go anywhere.

Geet: Yeh u right but I need to go

Khushi: No problems di I will take care of my boyfriend

Yash: Boyfriend with harsh tone

Khushi: Ha ur champ is my boyfriend with teasing tone

Yash: u need anyone take care of u and u said that u take care of my champ what a joke

Khushi: What u said

Yash: Geet I have a idea and but I need ur permission with hesitate voice

Geet: No Vicky iam not

Yash: Plz think about dadi.she have right.

Geet: But iam scared Vicky.

Yash: Nothing happening plz accept

Geet: But one condition ,u not tell anyone Manu is my baby.

Yash: Ok iam not tell anyone with sad voice

Khushi: Di where r u going

Geet: Iam going Manali and u and Manu stay with Vicky in khurana mansion

Khushi: Why i stay in km and we have Gupta mansion

Geet: u stay in alone it is not good.so u stay in km

Khushi: But I don't know anyone

Geet: U know Vicky very well opps ur Arnav with teasing tone

Manu starring everyone like they are aliens

Manu: Haaa shout

Geet: Manu what happened dear why u shout

Manu angry face: Forgt me

Geet: Iam sry baby,u want to see ur badi dadi,dadi,dada na

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Manu excited voice: mummaa papu

Geet sad voice: Ha ur papa but Manu baby remember if u see mummaa photo in km or anyone show mummaa photo to u and ask whose is this to u.u said geet not mummaa

Manu: U Tel lol is wrng ( u told that lie is wrong)

Geet :ha baby lie is bad manners but iam not say lie

Manu confused face

Geet: What is my name

Manu: Jeet

Geet: That it tell my name not mummaa and ask ur mummaa name , say to them GS

Manu nod his head: Ok u not cum me

Geet: Iam coming later u go with ur massi and ur yasu

Manu nods his head with sad face

Geet kiss his forehead and said today u see ur papa so cheer up baby.

Yash pickup in his arm: Iam come with u and we r going to park , mall and buy ur favourite toy

Manu smiled and kiss to vicky cheeks.

Geet: Yash I packed Manu things and take care of him with worried voice.

Yash: I will update about my champ to u in every one hour ,ok my geetu

Geet: I trust my buddy and u never break ur promise.

Yash: But I already break ur promise with pain voice

Geet: This is not ur fault that is my fate

Khushi: Iam not like emotional talks

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Vicky enter km with Khushi and manu baby sleeping in his arms

Nakul kaka see three enter in km and shout maaji..

Priya maa, ram papa, Annie and our dadi come to hall

Dadi: Nakul why u shouting.

Nakul: Maaji see Vicky baba come with bahu rani and his child with shocking face

Everyone look shift to entrance and starring to Vicky with popped eyes.

Vicky: Hi mom why everyone starring me

Priya: Vicky, iam not except this and u break my trust

Vicky confused: When i will break ur trust.

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Annie: We not denied every ur wish bhai then why u did it.

Vicky: What i did it with confused face

Dadi and ram glare to Vicky and Vicky confused face

Nakul kaka come with arati plate and give to priya: Talk Vicky baba later , first arati to bahurani

Vicky: Who is bahurani

Nakul pointed Khushi: Vicky baba ur wife

Vicky: She is not my wife and Khushi tell them ur not my wife.

Khushi smirked face and winked to Vicky.

Khushi: Ji why u telling lie to them and iam ur wife and our baby in ur hand

Vicky: Khushi don't irritate me and said truth to them

Khushi crying face: U only said ur family members accept me and our children

Everyone unison : Children

Khushi: Ha maaji, papaji , dadiji , kakaji and nanaji ,iam three months pregnant.

Everyone shocked face to Vicky and Vicky in horror face

Vicky: Khushi just shut up.stop ur drama.

Khushi: See maaji he shout me infront all of u

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Priya: Vicky why u shout my innocent bahu

Vicky: Maa

Khushi laughed and said sry uncle, aunty, granny and annie

Khushi: Iam not Arnav wife and Manu is my di child

Dadi: Manu

Manu wake up in sleep and rubbed his eyes

Manu look huge mansion and looking everywhere.

Manu: Yasu where am

Vicky: We r in km champ.

Manu: Khulana mason

Vicky: Ha champ

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Everyone starring Vicky and Manu talking except dadi starring Manu only.

Vicky: My champ and Khushi stay in km after 2 days and Manu mom is my college friend and she is going to urgent trip to Manali.if u dont mind and otherwise I will arrange some other place to them

Priya: They r ur friend family and how can I denied beta

Vicky mind voice: Sry mom I lied to everyone

Manu: Yasu. Dade, dadu , boo , badedade

Vicky: Ha champ ur dadi, dada , bua and ur badi dadi

Nakul: Manu is ur friend child but how baby said everyone to relation name.

Vicky: Oh nakul kaka he know everyone and iam already show our family photo to him.

Priya pickup Manu in her arm: Ha iam ur dadi and call me dadi

Manu kiss her cheek and dade

Priya: Ramji if geet and Manu happy each other in their life this time we have also grandchild like him

Ram: Ha priya but god not give this happiness

Vicky mindthought: God already gave that happiness but u all stay away that happiness and few more days everything become normal and our family got their happiness soon.my champ is bridge between bhai and geet.he bring our happiness back.

Priya: Nakul arrange guest room to Khushi and bring snack to my little star

Ram: Priya give me manu

Priya: No ji iam not give u and my little star stay with his dadi na

Ram: Hey rock star u come to me, I will give u more toys.

Manu mind voice: If u stay with dadi she will give snacks to u and but u go to dadu ,he will give more toys think Manu think Manu toys or snacks but iam not hungry so choose dadu

Manu gestured his hand ram to pickup him.

Ram pickup Manu in his arm and kiss his forehead and said to priya: See come to me

Priya: Little star u going to ur dadajj and its not good.

Ram: Rock star, I will give more toys .

Dadi starring Manu continuously and thinking about geet antics

Manu kiss his ram cheeks with happy face

Annie: Papa give cutie pie to me

Ram: No Annie beta iam not he just come with me

Annie angry face: Papa

Ram: Why show ur face like ur maan bhai

Vicky: Everyone stopped ur fighting and my champ stay 2 days in km

Dadi pickup Manu in her arm: Manu baby what is ur maa name

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Vicky scared that dadi found about Manu with tensed face

Manu: GS badedade with innocent face

Vicky relaxed: We call her GS and geet also call her GS only

Dadi: My kibo know Manu maa with doubted face

Vicky: Obviously sexy , geet , Manu maa and me are classmate

Dadi: Ok Vicky and priya bahu bring snacks for my little manu

Priya : Ji maa

Other side geet in flight think about manu and her family flash back starts

Vicky shout to everyone name and everyone gather in hall

Dadi: Why shouting Vicky , u not come in normal way

Vicky: Sexy If u know this news and u also shout like me with happy face

Ram: What news vicky

Vicky: First where is geet

Geet come to downstairs and iam also here

Vicky hug geet : U got admission in London college

Everyone happy except geet

Geet: Iam not going

Dadi:why beta it is good opportunity to u

Geet: But Vicky not come with me

Vicky: Who's said iam not come with me and iam also got admission in London college

Bua: Vicky beta u also got admission but first u told about ur admission not drama queen admission

Vicky: Bua ,my happiness behind my geetu happiness only

Dadi: When will u both join

Vicky: After 3 months

Ram: My both children selected and u people tell me what do u want from me.

Geet: U give anything uncle , promise

Ram: Pakka promise iam not denied my princess

Geet: I am in love and u will ask papa for permission to marriage and he take care of his family business and one year before both parents died in accident .he have no one and he is not rich compare to my papa but he is nice and good hearted person.

Bua: Boy is good person enough to marry and not money

Vicky: Bua u saying money is not important with shocked face

Bua: Vicky money is not important for life.

Geet smirked face: Everyone acccept my love specially sunitha bua

Everyone nods their head and bua thought iam waiting when u go away from km

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Bua: Ha geet beta iam also accepted ur love and iam talk ur papa if papa not accepted then I will arrange ur marriage with sugar coated voice

Geet : Iam not talked about my love and iam talking about Annie love

Everyone: What except dadi

Bua: Iam not accept this marriage.he is orphan and also not in our status

Geet:just few second before u only told that money is not important for life.

Bua: Oh ..

Geet: Because iam not in ur family members so everyone accept my love but u people not accept Annie love because Annie is ur daughter and iam not

Ram: So u trapped us very well and Annie come beta

Annie come to ram side with hestitate walk: Sry papa really he is good person

Ram care her hair: I trust ur word and what is my son in law name

Annie smiled and hug thanks papa.

Annie married fixed Arjun singhana .first maan angry but accept for Annie happiness.bua fuming for see everyone happiness .arjun have noone every marriage ritual done by geet parents.

Day after tomorrow marriage.

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Rano: Geet beta we need go hosiphur

Dadi: Rano if any urgent matter u going hosipur.

Mohinder:ha maaji we return back Annie marriage day.

Dadi: Ok beta but geet stay in km. I will take care her.

Geet: Papa, I stay with darling plz.

Rano: But

Mohinder: Rano , geet u stay with maaji.

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Rano carrying geet hair: Geet , u obey maaji every word.behave good girl and kiss her forehead with emotional voice.

Dadi: What happening rano this is not first time geet stay in km.

Rano: I don't know maa, something bothering me.

Geet hug rano and mohinder

Geet: I miss u maa and papa

Rano: Maa, today onward she ur responsibility plz take care my princess.( unknownly said that word)

Dadi: I promise rano, she is my kibo.my sweetheart.I will take care of my child.

Flash back end.

Geet come back in flashback in sake of airhostess voice.her flight landed in Manali.

Geet come out airport and first call to Vicky.

Vicky pickup geet call.

Vicky: Geet u landed safely.

Geet: How is Manu, I miss my Manu so much.

Vicky: Dont worry about Manu, he mingled our family.even he not come.to me.

Geet: What he said...hestitate voice

Vicky smirked: U talk about papa, papa not leave champ even one second with me

Geet: Vicky, iam not asking about papa..oh maanji

Vicky: What geet iam not hear anything with teasing tone

Geet : Hey duffer, iam asking about Manu papa.

Vicky: U talk about maan bro but till now he not come .

Geet sad face: Ok I talk u later. Cut the call.

Vicky turn and shocked seeing that person

Vicky: Oh...ia.m..

Person: Where is she...with angry voice.

Part end.

Precap:

Next part - part 6

Past- geet crying vigrously and Annie marriage masti


present - Manu naughtiness start in km

If u want Manu and maan scene in delhi or maaneet scene in Manali.plz give me ur suggestion.

If u likes this part plz press like button and also comment.😃

Pm tomorrow only sry my lovely buddies...😃

Plz see note below.😊

Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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NOTE

First I want know u likes this ss or not and why I got less response compare to my MFS .if anything lagging in my ss or story not even little bit interesting😕

If u dont like it plz tell me I will complete my ss next part itself.😭


if any one have doubt my story already written in another author, it really coincidence only. if u have doubt tell me, i will clarify ur doubt., if iam not clear ur doubt then i will delete that part.ok guys😊


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if u dont want pm plz tell me, i am not give pm in next update😭


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Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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Lovely update dear
Loved it!!
So, yash was vicky @ Arnav yash Singh Khurana
It was a sweet Surprise
Khushi and Arnav loves each other but yet to confess it
Khushi got to know abt geet being Mrs. Maan Khurana
Arnav took Manu and khushi with him to KM as geet had to attend some important work in Manali regarding office work
The trio scene was cute they thought that Arnav got married and has a child too
All loved Manu to the core and welcomed him whole heartily
Dadima had her own suspension abt Manu being Maaneet's kid but shrugged it off with Arnav's and manu's words
Lovely FB
Looks like her parents trip to HP will be the last day geet sees her parents
Geet and Vicky's talk regarding Manu and maan
Cliff hanger!!?
Nyc precap
😊

Edited by anu5 - 8 years ago
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Would love to see Maan and his baby's Camaraderie and love relationship
Thanks for the update
Will be waiting for the next update😊

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