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Posted: 8 years ago

Dreams could come true

Ranveer was in a good mood. He had slept magically well for some reason. It felt like a natural high he was on. In the shower he thought back at last night's events. The new lead to the Chhabra's, his sweet and simple dinner with Priyanka. He could swear he had dreamt of her. Her beautiful face near his. Her soft lips kissing his. He smiled by thought of that happening in real life. His dream felt so real, he could almost taste her sweetness.

"Beta Ranveer...! Don't even go there.." he spoke out loud to reprimand himself, as he switched the water to a cooler temperature. He could not afford to believe in dreams, especially not when his eyes were wide open.

A dream is dream. It can never become reality. He even dreamt of his sister Ippy. This time it was different though. Not a nightmare. He would always wake up screaming, bathing in sweat by seeing her lifeless body covered in blood. But yesterday, it was for the first time he had allowed himself to be slightly positive. As if he finally dared to think of what else could have happened to her, besides death.

In his dream Ippy was alive but not able to breathe independently. If only dreams could come true. If only he would find her, he would make everything right again.

"Wake up Ranveer.. You know better than to believe in fairy tales. She is dead. And justice is what she deserves!"

Today, he was on a new mission. The Chhabra's. He needed to collect as much information as possible.

He looked in the mirror one final time. White pants, slim fitting soft pink shirt, open collar. Dark brown leather suspenders. Gun. Cuffs. Badge. Wondering what she would wear today, he reached for the final accessory to complete his outfit. With his dark sunglasses on, he was good to go.

"Shinde, I will meet you and Varma in an hour in front of the Chhabra Villa."

Edited by RishuDarling - 8 years ago
twerping thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Rishu! Amazing updates! Love this insight into the minds of the duo!
Good morning y'all!
dimaag thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Those emotions which were buried deep inside for a long time came to see the light due to that note attached under her photo. I liked how u described each of her emotions which are conflicting among themselves but now it seems much needed because of his description. He is the world for her now . I liked how u said everything without making her say
" haan mujhe fark padhta hai " . Also his inner feelings and his excitement relating to her,her dress etc even if that is amidst the case but yes! 😊
And I was ROFLing when I read dreams can't be seen wide eyed. Sacchi kaha Mr.ACP abb dekho kaise sapne tootte hai tumhare. Bahut khushi se weak link likh k rakha tha na! abb dekhna sapbe salone 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Prinku is determined to break out of her shell and ACP is falling for her unintentionally. I love this so much!! Rishu you are making my original PriVeer dreams come true. Thanks girl!
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Posted: 8 years ago
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4773285 Guys this is the link which now I know how to post 😆. Do check PriVeerians if you are low in dosage for PriVeer 😉.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dimaag

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4773285 Guys this is the link which now I know how to post 😆. Do check PriVeerians if you are low in dosage for PriVeer 😉.


Read and commented. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Guys!
I wrote this story on PriVeer about 2 -3 days ago, posted it, but now after I got back to it, I am honestly having second thoughts.
I don't know how to take it down, I don't think you can delete a post 😕 which means it will remain on the forum forever.

Would you mind taking a look at it, when you get the time?
Could you read it and let me know what you think, if you get the time that is?
I am posting the link below (I dunno where else to post it 😕)
and guys, if the story is bad, please let me know that it is bad.


Good luck reading!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tahiti-1

Guys!

I wrote this story on PriVeer about 2 -3 days ago, posted it, but now after I got back to it, I am honestly having second thoughts.
I don't know how to take it down, I don't think you can delete a post 😕 which means it will remain on the forum forever.

Would you mind taking a look at it, when you get the time?
Could you read it and let me know what you think, if you get the time that is?
I am posting the link below (I dunno where else to post it 😕)
and guys, if the story is bad, please let me know that it is bad.


Good luck reading!


Read it, Tahiti! Left a comment as well :)

Please, don't delete that! Actually, don't ever delete what you write, there is always someone, anyone, who will love what you write😊 And a PriVeer story? We will never let you delete that 😆😆

You can always post the link of your story here, at the ACP AT, or PM us. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: emerald39


Read it, Tahiti! Left a comment as well :)

Please, don't delete that! Actually, don't ever delete what you write, there is always someone, anyone, who will love what you write😊 And a PriVeer story? We will never let you delete that 😆😆

You can always post the link of your story here, at the ACP AT, or PM us. 😳


Awww!
Thank you SO much emerald!
This actually teared me up! 😊


❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Tahiti, Rishi, Anu - I have been lax on catching up with your works. Will try and do so over the weekend and leave my comments. 🤗

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