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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Monucute


Updating now only... sorry

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Posted: 8 years ago
...Chapter - 52...
(Last Chapter)




"Why wouldn't I care?"




*****





This silence treatment is getting on her nerves now... Her husband hasn't uttered a single word after that question, just keeping that stupid grin intact... Argh!



"Why have you brought me here?" she yelled out frustrated...



Applying the breaks, he parked the car in driveway and getting down he opened her side of door in front of his oops their house...





Huffing and puffing angrily, she folded her hands and turned her face away, throwing a complete refusal at his way... Widening his grin, he gently tugged at her elbow and tried to pull her out... Glaring with squinted eyes, she eyed the palm holding her hand...





"Don't. Touch. Me.!!!" she stressed every word along with the intensity of glare increasing...



"Look! We need to talk. Ok?" He said calmly while lending his hand yet again to be graced by hers...



"Didn't I..." And that's it! Next moment she was being pulled out of car, was being dragged towards the entrance... Though he has developed a soft corner, doesn't mean temper had lost its place in his majestic persona...



He just can't help it! She always seem to rub on him on his wrong side... Finally standing in front of the main gate, he raised his eyebrow intriguing her with that mere glare...



"Now would you yourself enter inside? Or should I have my way?" the warning tinged with finality caught her off guard, reminiscing her very first entry sends chill down her spine... Gulping the bubbling fear, she entered, pretense of non affected self adorning her dainty figure...





Finally smirk turned into a full fledged smile, watching her stand in the middle of their big hall and gazing everything in awe, seems like drinking the serness of memories of their togetherness, which each nook and corner of this house is bestowed with... But then her orbs shifted towards the scattered clothes, some at sofa, some at dining table, his tie hanging on the door knob... What the hell he'd done with her once beautiful house???



Leaning lazily on the door, he starred at His wife, who seemed disappointed watching the wretched condition of house, he can't maintain it... She turned around almost immediately and asked the same question, whose answer is with her only...



"Why wouldn't I care Jalal?" the awe on her face replaced with an indifferent poker expression... Sighing loudly, he shook his head at her behavior and walked straight to where she's standing...



"Leave all this jo! For now, go to our room... I'll prepare the dinner till then..." And before she could open her mouth...





"And yeah! My almost all clothes are being scattered here, so don't worry, I'll use guest room... You'll get your much needed time and privacy..." Sarcasm and edginess was clearly visible in his stance... And again he shut out her by speaking before a word left her mouth... Walking towards kitchen, words flown out of his mouth...





"Today you seem tired... So, today I'll make the dinner... But from tomorrow take up your food department!!" he tried to lighten the situation... God! He's fed up now eating the same junk food daily and his cooking skills can't keep his hunger satisfied... Before her, he doesn't know about deliciousness of homemade food, but now when he knows... He's yearning to have it!





"Stop all this Jalal!! Will you?" her loud yell stopped him dead in his tracks... Taking few long strides, she reached in front of him...





Looking straight in those black bluish calm pools which was so calm moment ago was now boiling with rage... Damn! How could She didn't noticed it yet!! Whenever he wanna curb his anger, he neglects her!! Mentally noting the point... She gathered the shredded courage...




"Jo! We'll talk later ok?" Trying to dodge his restless wife, he again started to walk towards kitchen but she stopped him, holding his elbow...





"If you wanna talk, talk now... Otherwise I won't mind going back to my brother's place at this hour of night!" The last straw of patience snapped up with this, clenching his knuckles to white, he controlled the urge to harm her... No! He had had enough! But he can't hurt her... Damn you wifey, you're yourself inviting trouble... Cursing her under his breath, to escape this fit of rage that had hit him with that statement... He slowly opened his knuckles and cupped her face gently, pressing a peck on her forehead, he backed off...





"Jo! Please... You wanna talk, we'll do it... But not now..." he tried to coax her with sweet tone... Squinting her eyes at his audacity, she gritted her teeths and stormed towards the main door... What the hell he thinks he's??? Ugghh.. Throwing all the known profanities under her breath she opened the door knob...





But next moment, she was being pulled back with a gentle force and her fragile form nestled in his taut self turned, closing the door by his leg... He turned her around, jerking her away not so gently...





"You're bloody not going anywhere... Samjhi tum?" He roared, she's sure with this their whole neighbours would have crowded outside... Shivering with the intensity of his she took two steps back... After what seem like decades she'd come face to face with The devil...



"Jalal you're scaring me!" she squeaked out...





Running his palm in his unruly curvy hairs... He turned around much more calm and composed... Gripping her shoulders with utmost tenderness, he pulled her closer...
"Jaan! You're important me... Very much special... I told you that remember..." Dazed with the sweet endearment she nodded...





"And when I said that then I meant it!" he embraced her tightly, while her hands laid on her either sides with a war going inside herself... Wether to embrace this bubbling and bright feelings or hold grudges against the past...



Though she could never forgive for what he did but can't even punish him... Her conscience would never allow her... Never ever!





Fighting with the inner demons who're pulling her from moving forward to the brighter future... She gently snaked her arms around his waist... While his all rage and anger was out of windows, filling his heart with so much of warmth that seems so beautiful at that moment...





Overwhelmed with the feelings, he almost collapsed, going on his knees, he gripped her waist and dug his face inside her curve of waist... Wetting her side of kurti, he murmured something, which she can't understand...
Sitting beside him, coming to his eye level... She stared questionably in his glistening orbs, her own shining with a sheen of tears...



"I was... I was incomplete... You comp... Complete me... Jo! I missed you... Missed you so much..." Her body shuddered with inaudible sobs, and her head was buried in her neck... While he held her tight, afraid to let her go...





That incredible moment, marked the new afresh beginning of their relationship... This time together, with affection and love enveloped in their hearts...





That night witnessed tears of regrettion, calmness after restlessness of desperation... Pouring of hearts, love notes, complaints, anger everything exchanged between the two... Misunderstandings were cleared !





Finally, everything is at its place...





*****





Sitting silently they watched the moon with jalal resting his back on the wall, where he'd been sitting when missing her... And between his legs, her back was nestled in his chest... His hands were circled around her waist caressing her sides...





Today moon looked brighter than usual, breeze seemed more calmer and cooler than usual, celestial bodies were twinkling more than usual... She thought admiringly...





"Jalal..." She whispered softly...
"Hmm.." he hummed with his gaze fixed on the moon...
"What if you wouldn't have found me at Mrs Sharma's house?" She said turning in his lap, to face him...
Tearing his gaze away from the bright white ball, he watched her amused... Tucking the stubborn fling of hair behind her ear, he caressed the soft planes of her high cheekbone...





"Then I would have gate crashed into your brother's house... And would have punched that chit of your brother for still hurting you..." he said chuckling, she could feel the rumble of his chest due to laughing at her palms, as they were rested on it... Frowning cutely, she punched his arm lightly that had been holding her close...



"Don't tell me that shy kitten brother of yours had finally sorted out everything!!" And laughed out loud, watching her fuming at the endearment he's bestowing her brother with...





"Shy kitten... Like seriously" Her face was scrunched at imagining her brother at the body of a small kitten shying away with redness on his cheeks...
And the couple burst into fits of laughter...



*****





She turned around and panicked finding his sullen face...
"Misha! I'd even called at her office and they informed me that she'd left from there around 2 hours ago... God! Keep her safe.." Sujamal mumbled worriedly... They had been calling his sister for a while she isn't responding... Usually she would have been home by this hour of night... And his phone buzzed with her name... Immediately he picked up the call...



"Hello doll... Where are you? Why aren't you responding to my call?" And what he heard from other side left him flabbergasted...





*****





In all this sweet moments, she suddenly remembered that she hadn't informed him... Her brother about her whereabouts...





"Omg!" She gasped with sudden realization... Jalal frowned with the change...
"What happened?" he asked, care oozing out from his each word..





"I didn't informed him about me coming here!" she panicked... While he shrugged nonchalantly...
"So do it now!" he coolly said while planting a sweet kiss on her shoulder...





Immediately picking her phone from the floor, that they had kept she opened the screen lock and found numerous miss calls from him... Instantly calling back she waited for the person on other line to pick up the call...
"Hello shy kitten!" she said almost immediately as she heard his string of questions...





"Whattt???" she heard a loud voice and hold the phone a little away from her ear... Jalal who till now was successful in suppressing his laugh, cracked up hearing the horrifying reaction... Realizing her blunder she corrected herself...





"So.. Sorry Bhai! Jodha here!!" she said while pressing her hand on his mouth, so that her brother doesn't hear that, she glared at him when he bit her hand gently and as soon her hand came off... He cracked up yet again this time much loudly to be heard by sujamal...





"Doll! Who's there with you? Where are you?" A concerned brother voiced out his doubt not understanding a bit of that shy kitten part...




Chill Bhai... I'm with Jalal... woh hua yun ki" And she narrated whole part, skipping their private moment... Whilst jalal just sat nuzzling his nose in her neck... Tickling her, for which he received glares, light slaps but he just can't control it... Omg! This feels soo amazing!!





*****





Sujamal smiled sensing the happiness in his sister's voice... Nothing more he want... She's finally getting what she deserves...




"Ok bye doll! Convey my regards to Jijaji as well!" he teased her...
He could imagine his sister going all tomato red...
"Bhaiii" she whined cutely at other line... Whilst he just laughed and disconnected the phone... Misha was simply watching this silently with raised brows... Hearing the half sided conversation she could make out Jodha was with her best friend...





As soon as his happy eyes met with her questioning gaze, he sighed loudly... And engulfed her in a bear hug...
"Finally she's happy misha! My doll is happy!!" while a silly grin adorned her face hearing the good news...





****





Like her brother had imagined she'd almost turned red as kashmiri apple, making jalal to raise his brows at her red face... He could make out she's being teased but kya bola usne?





And next moment his wife whined embarrassingly... Making him grin, at her flushed expressions...
As soon as the call got disconnected he voiced his doubt...



"What does your brother said to make you all red?"
"Uh.. Nothing like that!" she said, badly wanting to dodge this question and start to play with his waist...
A devilish smirk adorned his face watching her flushing... Now he'd to know... His fingers reached towards her sides and she was being mercilessly tickled...





"Say jo! Bolo what your brother said?" he asked watching her squirming like a fish beneath him... While laughing her lungs out and flinging her hands everywhere as to stop him...





"Ah! Leave me..." she rasp out in between her laughs... And immediately coming her toes she ran downstairs from being bugged by more by him...
Whilst he ran behind her , wanting to know the reason for her blush... The brighter sky fully fledged with celestial bodies seemed like finally celebrating the togetherness of two souls in their own way of twinkling brighter...




*****



Ok! So here revenge ends!!
Hope you all like the last update... And are satisfied by its ending😊
I've for the first time written some cheesy stuff... Hope it's not so cheesy... Sorry if it's more than required...
secondly please forgive me... if you didn't found logic in this update😆

A reader asked me about jalal being short tempered... In my opinion being short tempered doesn't mean being bad... I'm a jita jaagta example😆😆 ok bad example but on a serious note Anger is something he won't leave because that's his personality... And I don't want to make him a love sick pup...😃 hope this clears your doubt..

Damn! I'll miss writing this... But many told me to continue... I'm really sorry to say but nothing left in the story to write more... so here I finally posted the last chapter of revenge..😃😳

I wanna thank every single person... even silent readers some of whom had appreciated revenge through their pms... I don't want to take names as it would be injustice to others... So finally A hearty Thank you to everyone for making this story a success...😳

Will post a epilogue if anyone wants...

Sorry if it's not worth reading😊
Edited by Monucute - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sooo sweet update cutie... loved it..ja learned to control his anger ...am sad because u end it... eagerly waiting for epilogue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely end. And pls do write an epilogue as soon as possible😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

UNRES
AWESOME CHAPPY
CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S LAST ONE
FINALLY ALL MU R CLEARED


OF COURSE WANT AN EPILOGUE DEAR
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P


UNRES
AWESOME CHAPPY
CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S LAST ONE
FINALLY ALL MU R CLEARED


OF COURSE WANT AN EPILOGUE DEAR


THANKS FOR PM NEETU
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Posted: 8 years ago
Gosh! You completed this story. 😲
I seriously need to start reading and writing now.There was a time when we all used to discuss after every chapter. I am missing those days now

I have to read previous chapters, I don't remember where I left reading🤔

But I will find and read and comment.

Neetu darling🤗 Congrats for completing this story dearie. I know this story must be very close to your heart because after this story you got many lovely readers like me☺️


Love ya sweetheart!🤗


PS: Don't stop coming on IF. Tumahari story khatam hue h.. meri abhi bhi padhi hen😭😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
wooow my sissy you did a very beautiful last chapter muaaah loved it very very much its marvellous just marvelous enjoyed it to the core plzzz plzzz plzzz sissy write an epilogue as soon as possible na plzzz and bohat bada wala thanks for pm me and now plzzz continue your other stories na as you promised plzzz
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update neetu
just loved it
JJ reconciled
so cute
waiting for epilogue
Hehe
update asap buddy
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful 👏👏
Finally all problems are sorted out😊
Thanku for pm
I WANT EPILOGUE 😳

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