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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome part
Loved the way NaiRa's journey is proceeding... n their understanding

Waiting for reception drama coz i think hangama hone wala hain
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Posted: 8 years ago
Firstly sorry once again for being late...
Coming to the update, it was lovely, romantic and full of Raina moments...once again i felt it was a bit short...but never mind...it makes us eager for the next part😛
The way he gives her an option of breaking this unwanted relationship...shows his maturity...👏

The necklace story...i loved it😆...it was sooo cute😊

Thanks for the update and for the pm my dear😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
first of all I'm sooorrryyy for being late...actually too late...I was at my grandparent's home...and I didn't realize how time passed...but now I'm back home and u guys will get regular updates...so I have bored u a lot...here goes the 7th chapter...


Chapter 7

naina becomes surprised to see a lot of people in the hall...some are Indian and some are Austrian...

suddenly a young Indian girl comes to her...

"tum naina ho right?veer's wife?by the way I'm anika...ira ki friend..."

naina becomes a bit confused...as the girl doesn't know about all the marriage dramas...

"ummm...nice to meet you...but...",naina hesitates..

ira comes to them who was hearing their conversation...

"but yeh veer bhaiya ki wife nahi hai..."ira completes naina's statement..

"but tune toh bola tha uss ladki ka naam naina hai.."anika asks ira...

"haa..kaha tha...but forget it... ek waitress kabhi veer bhaiya ki wife nahi ban sakti...",ira says as if naina weren't there...

naina felt very bad...her eyes have become full of tears...but she is trying her best to stop them from flowing down...

"toh fir yeh yaha kya kar rahi hai?"anika asks..

"raghav ne jo shadi kar liya isse..."

"raghav who?that servant?"

"ya..ya...by the u enjoying the party right?let me take u to veer bhaiya and his new wife..."

"but tell me na who is this lucky girl?"anika says excitedly...

"sanjana...my cousin."

"woh chipku...but veer hated her...then..",anika cannot complete her words..

ira stops her fearing naina will understand the whole plan...

"woh toh bahut pehle ki baat hai na...but now veer just loves her...",ira lies..

"but..."

"yeh sab hum baad me discuss kar lenge...pehle tu veer bhaiya se mil toh le..."

ira is about to take anika with her...but suddenly she notices naina's attire...

"why are u wearing this sari?sudha chachi ne tumhe meri ek purani gown di thi...",ira says...she is actually feeling jealous of her as she is looking very beautiful...

"ha di thi...lekin woh.."naina tries to explain...

"whatever...tum jo bhi pehno lagogi toh typical Indian behenji...",saying this ira leaves the place with anika..

naina has become quite used to taunts in a day...so she does not feel that bad...

naina's eyes search for raghav...who went somewhere with dadi...at last her eyes find the destination...as she sees raghav in the hall...

raghav also sees her and is about to come to her...but before that sudha and pam reach her...

"naina yeh tum kya peheni ho?where's the gown I gave you?"sudha asks her angrily..

"chachi mai..."naina tries to speak.

"sudha bhabi maine apko kaha tha na...middle class logo ki mentality kabhi change hi nahi hoti..."pam instigates..

"u were right pam...these cheap people.."

"isme naina ki koi galti nahi hai...maine hi usse sari pehenne ki liye bola tha?"raghav comes in the conversation.

"but why?tumhe pata tha na humne usse gown di thi..."

"ha chachi...lekin mere didi ne kaha ki yeh humari family tradition hai...shadi se related har function me ladki ko sari hi pehenni padti hai..."

"yeh kaisa tradition hua?"sudha asks raghav annoyed..

"bhabi ap bhul kyu jati hai...raghav ki family bhi toh middle class hai...toh unke traditions bhi middle class honge.."

"who cares?do whatever you want with your traditions...pam chalo main tumhe mere kuch friends se mila ti hu..."

"tumne juth kyu bola?"naina asks raghav after sudha and pam leaves...

"woh tumhe blame kar rahe the aur mujhe yeh bilkul accha nahi laga..."

their conversation stops as naina's family come there...naina becomes very happy seeing her mother and runs to her...

"maa tum agayi...but itni late kyu kardi..mai kabse wait kar rahi hu.."

"woh chanchal ne ready hone me der kardi...woh chor tu kitni sundar lag rahi hai...nazar na lage meri bacchi ko...",naina's mom almost cries...

balraj with some of his friends are passing by them when one says..

"balraj tumne bhikariyo ko bhi invite kiya hai...",he indicates naina's mom who is wearing a simple sari...

naina's mother hears this and feels very bad...but not more than naina...she can tolerate anyone taunting her but she cannot tolerate when her mother is being taunted...

so she goes in front of the guest...

"apne abhi jisse bhikari kaha...woh meri maa hai..."

everyone in the hall stops and looks at naina...

"apko koi right nahi hai...meri maa ko aisa bolne ka..."

"naina koi baat nahi...",her mom tries to stop her but in vain..

"nahi maa...inhone galat bola..ab inhe sorry bolna padega..."

"naina yeh tum kya baatein kar rahi ho?Mr.Kumar humare business partner hai.",balraj says..

"waise bhi galat kya bola?tumhari maa koi bhikhari se better toh nahi hai...",says veer.

naina then does a very brave job..

she goes to veer and slaps him...

everyone in the hall becomes more than shocked...

"how dare you?"veer gets mad..

"naina yeh tune kya kiya?"says dadi,"tune sirf ek thappad mari...mai tujhe bolti hu...tu aur ek mar dusre gaal par.."

"lekin maa...",sudha tries to defend veer..

"kyu kisi ko koi problem hai?"dadi asks angrily...

"mujhe koi problem nahi hai...veer toh yeh deserve karta hai...",says madan.

sudha looks at him with anger but he signs her to do accordingly...

"ha maa...mai toh keh rahi thi naina ko taklif karne ki kya zarurat hai...mai hi kar deti hu...",sudha says and slaps veer...

veer remains silent but fueling with anger...

"aur ha Mr.Kumar agar ap naina ki maa se mafi nahi mangi toh ap humare partners nahi rahenge...u get that?"dadi says..

Mr.Kumar apologises to naina's mother as he does not want to break the partnership with the mehras...

after sometime everybody forgets what happened and starts enjoying the party...

raghav feels very proud of naina as he thinks she has done the right thing...


veer is standing at a corner trying to control his anger when his mother comes to him...

"mom mai uss waitress ko chodunga nahi...I'll make her pay for this..."

"khabardar kuch ulta sidha kiya toh...agar usse upset kiya toh maa bhi upset ho jayengi...and we can't let that happen...",sudha warns him..

"but mom..."

"suno tum kuch dino ke liye...Moscow chale jao...waha humara jo branch hai...usme kuch din kam karo...isse tumhare mind bhi fresh ho jayegi...aur dadi bhi sab bhul jayengi..."

"ok mom...but I cannot take that sanjana with me..."

"thik hai..mai manage kar lungi..."

finally the reception comes to an end...the guests departure and everybody in the house goes to their respective rooms..

after raina enter their room...raghav sneezes...it is perhaps the 100th time naina saw raghav sneezing today...

they change and get ready to sleep...raghav is going to sleep on the floor again when he sneezes again..

101th time..

naina feels bad for him...

"tum chaho toh bed par so sakte ho...",naina says with a lot of hesitations...

"kya?"raghav asks shocked...

"nahi mera matlab...tum apne side me sona...aur mai apne side so jaungi...warna zameen pe tumhe aur thandi lag jayegi..."

"ummm...OK...mujhe toh koi problem nahi hai...by the way thanks a lot.."

"par tum apne side me hi rahoge na?"naina still hesitates...

"arrey yaar tum padosi ke sath nahi so rahe ho...tum apni pati ke sath hi bed share kar rahe ho...mai kasam khata hu mai sirf apne side me rahunga...apne side ke siwa kisi bhi side nahi jaunga..",raghav jokes.

raghav and naina both laugh loudly...and go to bed..

after sometime naina hears that gentle snore and assumes that raghav has already felt asleep..

she too closes her eyes and goes to sleep...


like that...their marriage passes three months...



plzz don't throw tomatoes and eggs at me😛I know it is not that good...but plzzz don't forget to like and comment..


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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update. ..
everyone taunt naina. ..
naina slap veer. .
last part is cute. .
early waiting for next part. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
thank you for the update but it was not that good
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Waiting for an update😊

sorry dear I updated a bit late this time 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Awesome part

Loved the way NaiRa's journey is proceeding... n their understanding

Waiting for reception drama coz i think hangama hone wala hain

hey dear thnx a lot...by the way sorry 4 replying late
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Firstly sorry once again for being late...

Coming to the update, it was lovely, romantic and full of Raina moments...once again i felt it was a bit short...but never mind...it makes us eager for the next part😛
The way he gives her an option of breaking this unwanted relationship...shows his maturity...👏

The necklace story...i loved it😆...it was sooo cute😊

Thanks for the update and for the pm my dear😊

thnx dear...I am happy that u liked it...but I'm not sure if u will like the new chappy
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

awesome update. ..
everyone taunt naina. ..
naina slap veer. .
last part is cute. .
early waiting for next part. .

u liked it 😲 I'm feeling very happy...thank uuu dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cutieharshitaro

thank you for the update but it was not that good

yeah I know...actually I'm not a good writer and this chapter was the worst...hope u will like the next ones...

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