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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Nice update
Poor Maan hope he is ok
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
finally Arnav n khushi had their babies
Maan is not that foolish to go out when he knows danger is lurking around
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

emotional update...

with arnav crying...so sad...

but good news... all 3 saved...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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and the 3rd attack ... on maan ...

oh please hope this is not going to be worst...

arnav have lot to take ...
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WOW!! beautiful update dear...loved it
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Superb update. Glad babies are fine. Hope Maan is alright.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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update wen u can, thanks
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CHAPTER 4.

"MAAN!", came a shout and everyone in the reception room of the Hospital turned to see a woman running crazily. Her eyes had tears streaming from it and her hair was half undone. But she did not care. She simply kept running. Behind her, a small boy came running too.

Half an hour earlier, Geet Khurana nee Handa was happily dicing vegetables. She was to visit Khushi and the babies during lunch time while bringing food for her and Khushi's husband. Dono ne kal se kuch nahi khaaya hoga! Khud ko samajhte kya hain! Machine hain kya jo bina khaaye peeye chalte rahenge! Behtar hoga main hi kuch khaane ko le jaaun! Between me and Khushi, dono ko pet mein kuch na kuch toh ghusa hi denge! Geet didn't worry about Khushi's lunch as hospital served food for their patients. So Geet focused on feeding her husband and her brother in law. Just then her phone rang. Ab kaun? Raizadas honge! Anjaliji pooch rahi hongi ki Arnavji aur Maan ke liye main kya le jaa rahi hun! Unhein bhi toh apne Chote ki fikar hogi! She picked up the phone and her eyes widened at a private number flashing on her phone. Ab yeh kaun hai?

"Hello!", Geet chirped into the phone.

"Arre meri Geetto rani!", came the voice that shook Geet to her core.

"Dev...", Geet whispered as she felt her anger welling up. How dare he kidnap her son! How dare he!
"Haan kudiye! Main!", Dev let out a loud chuckle and Geet was unable to stop herself.

"Sun kameene! Tu kaddi mere kol ni aana! Warna main jo tera hashr karungi na tu soch nahi paayega! Himmat kaise hui teri mere bete ko agwa karne ki..." Geet was cut off by Dev, "Arre meri Geet! Tennu jo karna hai karlena lekin iss waqt tennu apne pati de naal hona chaahida."

Geet felt a sense of foreboding, "Ki?", What the hell is he talking about!

"Arre bechara tera pati! Apni aakhri saansein gin raha hoga! Aur tu itthe ghar wich baithke aaraam kar rahi hai! Arre re!", Dev spoke and Geet felt her heart stop for a second.

"Ki bakwaas kar raha hai tu? Maan nu kuch nahi hoya!", Geet spat in anger.

Dev let out a loud laugh and then explained, "Tennu pata nahi! Chal koi nai! Main tennu bata deta hun! Kuch der pehle mere aadmi ne tere pati ko uda diya truck se!"

"Kya?", Geet mumbled feeling as her whole world shattered.

Dev continued, "Haan bhai! Ab tera pati nahi raha! Teri nanad aur uske bachchon ko toh meri Anvesha ne maar diya! Ab teri zindagi mein bacha kaun? Tera puttar! Haina! Ek kaam karte hain! Tu mere naal aaja main tere puttar di jaan baksh deta hun! Ki boldi hai?"

"CHUP CHUP! AUR KUCH MAT BOL DEV! TU JHOOTA HAI! EK NUMBER KA JHOOTA! SAMJHA TU! Waise main tujhe ek khushkhabri deti hun! Khushi aur uske bachche bach gaye! Teenon zinda hain! Lagta hai tujhe kisi ne jhooti khabar dedi ki woh teenon marr gaye! Aur agar yeh khabar jhoot hai toh Maan ke marne ki bhi khabar jhooti hi hogi! Samjha tu!", Geet spat and disconnected the call. But as she cut the call, she slid down to her knees. What if he was right? What if something happened to Maan? Geet shook her head. With worried expression, she dialed Maan's number. When no one picked up after three times calling, she felt fear gnaw her heart. Just then the call connected and Geet felt relief.

"Maan! Maan aap theek toh haina? Maan!", Geet worriedly spoke. But the voice that came from phone was an unknown man, "Hello! Who is this speaking?"

Get gulped. What happened to Maan? "Yeh phone mere pati ka hai! Woh kahaan hai?"

The man replied, "Ma'am! Main Sanjivani Hospital ka security bol raha hun! Main abhi aapka hi number iss phone pe dhundne waala tha! Aapke husband ka Hospital ke saamne accident hogaya tha! Behtar hoga aap jald se jald yahaan aa jaayein!"

The phone fell from Geet's hands as she started shaking her head. Nahi! Maan ko kuch nahi ho sakta! Mere Maan! Geet didn't know for how long she sat on the floor denying what she heard while tears flowed down her cheeks. Geet was brought out of her stupor when she felt a small hand wipe her cheeks.

"Rona nahi Mummy! Sab theek hoga!", Samar cheerfully spoke as he continued to wipe her eyes. Geet let out a sob as she dove forward and hugged her child. Samar was right! She couldn't loose hope. The security didn't say anything about Maan's death. He only spoke about accident. She cannot assume things. She had to go to the hospital. She scrambled up and with Samar in her arms, she ran to the door. Ordering her security detail to take her to the hospital, she got in the car and the car drove off.

Meanwhile at some hidden house, a man looked at the phone in shock.

"Ki hoya boss?", his henchmen asked.

"Khushi aur bachche bach gaye!", Dev whispered in shock. How is that possible? His sister had pushed the woman down so many stairs. How the hell did she survive? Dev could not understand.

"KYA!", a screech came from the door and Dev turned towards it with worry.

"Anvesha!", Dev whispered, the worry reflecting in his tone as he stared at the glowering Anvesha. Gone was the beautiful princess that was his sister. He remember the days when she used to look so put together and perfect. And today she didn't resemble the Anvesha he knew. Her unkempt hair, ill fitting clothes, pale skin, dark circled and crazy looking eyes made him feel like he was looking at a monster. Love! It was love that destroyed her! Love does it to everyone, Dev thought. As he looked at his sister, he shook his head. Love is a menace, menu bhi kahaan choda! As he thought so, he looked down to his leg which could never move anymore without a limp and then winced as the skin of his cheek pulled. There he had to take 24 stitches and the skin in that area still pulled. He remembered the fall and how his faithful henchmen somehow managed to get hold of him lying almost dead in the forest and save his life. Yes, he cannot walk without limp and yes, his lovely face was destroyed but he would have his revenge. Geet was his and he would get her.

"KAISE WOH BACH GAYI?", Anvesha roared bringing Dev out of his thoughts. Anvesha started pacing and mumbling about murdering them. Dev didn't need to be a genius to guess who Anvesha wanted dead. He moved towards her and tried his level best to calm her down. He didn't want her to loose her life because she struck preemptively. He didn't go through so much hassle of helping her escape the mental asylum just to see her thrown back there. But Dev couldn't calm his sister down. Before he know it, she stormed out of the house with murder in her eyes.

"Jaao! Uska peecha karo! Aur uska khayaal rakhna!", Dev roared and half of his men ran off behind Anvesha. Then Dev turned to three men standing behind him and ordered them, "Jaao! Jaake Geet pe nazar rakho! Tumne Maan ko kuchla hoga lekin mennu toh proof chaahida! Jaake uske marne ka proof laao! Jaao!" His men nodded and scrambled off. Dev took in a deep breath. Maan had to be dead! If he wanted his Geet back, Maan has to die!

Meanwhile Geet ran into the hospital with her son following her. She reached the reception and blurted out her husband's name. But before she could get the answers she heard Arnav's voice, "Bhabhi! Aap yahaan?" Geet turned and let out a sob of relief at seeing Arnav, "Arnavji! Maan kahaan hai? Woh theek toh hain? Bataayiye na?"

"Maan!", Arnav whispered as he frowned, "Lekin mujhe kuch pata nahi! Kuch der pehle fruits lene baahar gaye the lekin waapis aaye nahi! Infact, I just came out to look for him!"

Just then the nurse told them the room number where Mr. Khurana was staying. Arnav and Geet shared an alarmed glance and then stormed off to the room which the nurse mentioned. Geet entered the room and heaved a sigh of relief. Maan was halfway leaning on the bed with his right leg in cast lifting into the air while a bandage covered his forehead.

"Maan!", Geet sobbed as she ran to him and hugged him. Behind her, Arnav heaved a sigh of relief.

Maan winced and Geet noticing it, pulled back, "Kya hua? Aap theek toh hain?"

Maan shook his head, "Mera accident hua tha! Luckily koi internal damage nahi hua! Thode bruised ribs hain, leg pe hairline fracture hai aur sar thoda bleed hua!"

Maan chuckled as Geet started checking his head to make sure he is fine. Maan let her do it. She needed to assure herself that he was ok. He grinned as Arnav lifted Samar into his arms and Samar grinned at his father.

"Khushi kaisi hai?", Maan asked and Arnav grinned happily, "Very very happy! Dono bachchon ko dekh kar bahut khush hogayi! Abhi use apne kamre mein chod aaya hun!"

Maan nodded just as Samar wiggled down from his Phoophoo's arms and climbed his father's bed. Maan hugged his wife and son tightly and wondered how his sister would react if she came to know about his accident.

While Maan thought about Khushi, Khushi was also thinking about Maan. But her thoughts were not about his well being or his location. She was simply screaming his name mentally as a nurse with her mouth covered with mask smothered Khushi with a pillow! Maan Veerji! BACHCHAO!

And there ends the update with another cliffhanger! Ab kya hoga? Keep an eye on this thread to know more!

Take care, have fun and leave comments,

Kalpana

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