Ishra os-jab tum hotey ho on pg 10 updt on Jan 22

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raksha

@cutieruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi everyone, I am here again to wish one of my buddy,and she is none another then sush aka sush_rddt.

Hey sweetie,many many happy returns of the day.

May all ur wishes come true .

A small gift from my side,an os ,actually not OS but it's prolouge as I am short of time,hope u will like it.

JAB TUM HOTEY HAI

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raksha

@cutieruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

PROLOGUE

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Ishita was crying and hugging him tight.

Ishita- why u r going Raman.

Raman- someone want me badly ishita.

Ishita kept his hand on her tummy and said- I too want u badly,our baby want u.mat jaaiye.

Raman- u know I can't stop.agar ruk paata toh jarur ruk jaata,par meri jarurat wahan jyada hai.

Ishita- aap kab wapas aaoge.

Raman- I will try to come back as soon as possible. Now be a good girl and stop crying.warna meri baby bhi crying baby hoga.I want her to be like me.

Ishita- ofcourse,she will be a fighter like u,lieutenant Raman Kumar bhalla.she said smiling a little making him wear his cap.

Raman smiled and kissed her forehead, she close her eyes to feel his touch.then he bend on his knees and kissed her tummy saying- bye baby,Papa will come back soon.saying so he went while ishita was just looking at his retreating figure.

Aati hai saans mein saans
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho

Main jeeti hoon mere paas
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho

That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and hit like.will wait for it.and don't forget to wish the birthday girl.

CLICK FOR OS

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arreddy

@arreddy

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Posted: 9 years ago

HAPPY BIRTHDAY SUSH...

AWESOME PROLOGUE... WAITING FOR FULL UPDATE...

THANKS FOR OTHER AWESOME STORY...

Edited by jaidarling - 9 years ago

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Pasoori

@ChanChanMan

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Posted: 9 years ago

Emotional 😭

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lalibhaskar

@lalibhaskar

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Posted: 9 years ago

Happy birthday sush

Interesting Prologue

Raman army officer

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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Posted: 9 years ago

Happy birthday sush...
Prologue is very emotional...
Update asap

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Happy bday sush
Interesting prologue
Update soon

Edited by gargpoo - 9 years ago

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Sharmin

@fSharm

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Posted: 9 years ago

Happy birhday sush...
May this birthday bring u lots of sucess...

Awesome prolouge di..
It looks like raman z leaving ishita & going for any camp...
Interesting..