#2..Manan Love Stories ..Teri aadat hai updated@pg60 27th jan - Page 21

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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing story
Luvd both of ur updates
N m really really sorry for not commenting on your stories coz I don't have net on my phn
N i use net when I come home
So sorry for dat dear
But ur all stories r awesome
Thnkx for pm
N plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww
Loved Manan moments
Nandu and Cabir are just awesome pranksters
Loved the update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update..
Cabir teasing manik..
Cavya nd manik shockrd..
Manik teasing..
Luvd it..
Thnkz 4 d pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing on both the works..loved both of them...yaar manik teasing in this is too cute...and pyaar ka intehaan.. kya kahu uss ke bhareme...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very hilarious and romantic update dear. Nandu thinks that he is doing to take revenge from her. Then what will she do next? Take care and keep smiling. Bye
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Posted: 8 years ago
plz dont discontinue ...
i love ur short stories...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi friends

you guys said that you like these short love stories... toh bhi response kahan hai... ?achi lagti haan to atleast response to acha do... i'll not discontinue my anywork... but is ka matlab yeh nahi k response kum milne p bhi update milte rahein gey... so give me your response if u want me to update these on weekly basis

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Posted: 8 years ago










Sorry in advance or mistakes




Part 3(d)

After breakfast Cabir and Manik went out for some work and Nandini again came in that garden area which was her fav place now a days...

After spending her time with different pets she got bore ...that's when her eyes caught that thing...

She saw a pipe of water ... then thought a goofy idea to play with Navya and after this she started shouting Navyaaa Navyaaa Bachaooo.

Navya was in her room at that time when she heard her shout... She ran outside...

Nandini according to her plan was ready with a pipe of water and as Navya came out she started showering water on her...

Navya started shouting: Nandu...Nandu yeh kya...tu cheeki kyo...Ahhh... Kya kar rahe hai tu... Band kar isey...

Nandini : shouted: No... main bore ho rahe thi aur tum ne bhi mujhe company nahi di so yeh tumhari punishment hai...

Navya now marched towards Nandini ... Nandini when saw this she leave that pipe from her hand and started running ...

Navya picked the same and ran behind Nandini... she also showered water on her and now Nandini started shouting like a kid...

Nandini ran and hide herself behind a tree...

And all this scene was watched by 2 pair of eyes...

Manik and cabir just came back from their secret work... and saw both the girl with delight...

Both girls were running and playing like tom and jerry...Cabir noticed that now again Nandini snatched that pipe from Navya's hand ... and it means Navya to gayi... and here Manik have a beautiful smile on his face while watching this cute friendly moment...

Cabir ran towards Navya and by holding her hand he drags her inside... coz he saw those adoring expression on Manik's face after seeing Nandini like this...and he wanted to give him this chance , 2ndly as now Nandini again got the upper hand in this game so... Navya ki band baj jati ... and 3rdly after seeing Navya in this wet form he want to spend some time with her...

Manik saw them leaving ... He came fwd in his dazed state and picked that pipe which fells from her hand when she saw both boys there and moved with slow step towards that tree where Nandini ran for hiding...

Manik started showering water on her... and Nandini came out from her hiding place...

She walked towards him with irritated face... she thought to teach him a leasson... But when she reached near him forgetting about her wet form... she felt her body started burning under his eyes...She stopped in her track after feeling his intense gaze on her...

And this thing jolted her whole body... Her eyes moved up and meet his... his eyes speaks a volume at that time...but here Nandini was not ready to read that foreign language...

She was all wet due to this water game and her dress stick to her body like a 2nd skin...Manik started losing his control on seeing this beauty infront... here Nandini was also spellbound when she look in his intense eyes... today her mind started reading that language which was there in his eyes... their proximity started effecting her... all that she planned in this morning for taking revenge... She forgot all that with his magical gaze...

She shivered when she felt his hand on her waist... And when he pulled her to himself... she moved fwd like a magnet... in that moment she placed her hand on his heart while locking her eyes with his...

He leaned his face towards her and placed his lips on the corner on hers...And his action gave a heart attack to her... she stilled in her position...

he leaned back and saw her at a halt ... so with a naughty smile he again started showering water on her which broke the spell around her...

She looked at him and he challenged her to catch him...

Nandini started chasing him in the whole garden...

Inside Cavya while hugging Navya saw this scene and then Cabir explained the whole story to Navya... Navya also noticed some change in Nandini in last few days but now she knew what was that...

Here outside... Manik saw a mud bucket near a tree ... he stands near that bucket and started waiting for Nandini... And When Nandini come near him and thought that she caught him... He pour that whole bucket on her...

Nandini again started shouting: Manikkk main choron gi nahi tumhe...

Manik: tou main ne kab kaha k mujhe choro tum...but pahle pakar to lo...

Nandini again ran behind him and then finally she caught him... But Manik missed his balance and slipped on wet grass on same moment and pulled Nandini with him...

Now Manik was on grass and Nandini was on him...

Her face covered with mud... and when she moved back her head and gazed at his clean face...she immediately picked some wet mud from nearby and paste it on MANIK FACE...

Manik: Nandini ... yeh kya kar rahe ho... leave me...

Nandini is excitement: Leave me ... acha... mujh pe mud dala tab nahi yaad aya... badla to ab main le k rahon gi...

Manik: Soch lo... main revenge lene pe aya to tum bhag jao gi...


Nandini wo baad me dekhein gey Manik pahle main apna revenge to le loon...pahle subha me wo sub aur ab yeh...Badla to banta hai... and again she paste some mud on his face...

Now Manik changed their position with force ... and he came on top of her...

Manik: Now Miss Nandini murty tumhe kon bacahe ga mujh se...( he showed his naughty smirk)

Nandini with a lil open mouth: No Manik... ab aur nahi dekho pahle hi tum ne bohat puri bucket mujh pe girae hai... now leave me...

Manik leaned more near to her face and stopped just a centimeter away from her face... His hot breath started fanning her skin...and their closeness started affecting her ...she moved her face on 1 side and started thinking how to escape from his grip...


Manik reads her mind and said: what Nandini murty bhagne ka soch rahe hai... kaha tha na main revenge lene pe aya to tum bhag jao gi...

It triggered her once again and she looked back in his eyes with challenging glare

Now its like a challenge for Nandu so she said: Nahi bhag rahe ... Yahan se aur dekhti hoon tum kaise mujh se revenge lete ho...

Manik with a smirk picked some mud and pour it on her face and then on her neck whereas Nandini started struggling under his weight...

Manik then paste more mud on her arms and then while looking in her eyes asked: Tumhe mujh se revenge lene ka bohat shok hai na... so ab is ka revenge isi style me le k batana...


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Edited by cute-aly - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow...wow...wow ...
Thanks dear for Manan moments and full of Manan update...
Manan moments are so much romantic and cute.. .
Their revenge...hahaha...
Now Manik challenges her to take that revenge in his style...
Now what our baby doll do...
Continue soon. .
Can't wait. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome mere manan kitne cute lag rhe hai..
Bahot acchi pics hai specifically Nandini ki she looks so adorable..

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