The Broom-closet (Shivaay&Anika - One Shot) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Messi2

unres ...ur really planning to kill me with these one shots

Drunk shivaay...now we are talking although I wanna see drunk ani too ...nakul will look so cute

So the great Shivaay would rather paint his room then let some random people do it ...aah d things love makes people to do... shivaay whined how cute...

Reply anju men have no taste for art I can vouch for it as I have an ass of brother at home too...paint fight dat too started by shivaay now dis is wat should happen Shivu being mischievous ani glaring him acting like a innocent kid and all of a sudden again pouring the paint...I really want dis ...nakul will portray dis with ease...

Omru...my baby still hitting on Shivu secretary (when will he see me ...gaah)... baby wants to disturb anshi... dis will happen...ani is smitten by bagar billa ...plz show dis gul...Omru confounded by the paint filled room hayee...

broom closet anju are u HP fan I was like man they should shag and they did...but honestly kissing when drenched in paint...can happen only in reel ...so they don't wanna accept their love interesting

I was half expecting rudra baby will burst open the broom closet chalo nahi kiya...


when are u updating toil ... kash Tere ideas gul ko aathe


HILARIOUS!
Holla darling, this is Red, not Anju!

Okay, before I start typing out how hard I am laughing right now, I'll get to the point! I am high on emotions tonight and I think you are in the same wonderland as me! LOL!

Shivaay Singh Oberoi would do some epic unimaginable stuff when drunk, i guess, owing to how brash he is when sober! Anshi would always kill it on screen! *fan-girl squeals*

I feel you! I know how annoying younger brothers can be! Rudra will always enjoy being the lady killer! Secretaries not an exception! *hahahahahahaah*
And Om has a permanent job of smacking some sense into his brothers!

Rudra would rather tape ANSHI and make them blush as compared to ruin their 'epic moment of utter humiliation'!

You give me high hopes sweetie! I wish I was on Gul's team!

XOXO
~Red

P.S. Hey Anju! Do update TOIL for this little one right here!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amreen...

Generally I don't read Anika Shivaay OS coz I am not really happy with their chemistry... but I read this don't know why... maybe because I've been studying the whole day and needed some fodder for my brain to relax... and it did the trick... amazing writing style.. loved it!!! 😊


Holla!

It's fine if you don't dearest!
My works won't bore you, I promise!

Ah, rough day! I hope you drop by more often and I'd love to write for you is it helps you relax!
Thank you for such a lovely compliment! I am glad you love it!

XOXO
~Red
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamred



HILARIOUS!
Holla darling, this is Red, not Anju!

Okay, before I start typing out how hard I am laughing right now, I'll get to the point! I am high on emotions tonight and I think you are in the same wonderland as me! LOL!

Shivaay Singh Oberoi would do some epic unimaginable stuff when drunk, i guess, owing to how brash he is when sober! Anshi would always kill it on screen! *fan-girl squeals*

I feel you! I know how annoying younger brothers can be! Rudra will always enjoy being the lady killer! Secretaries not an exception! *hahahahahahaah*
And Om has a permanent job of smacking some sense into his brothers!

Rudra would rather tape ANSHI and make them blush as compared to ruin their 'epic moment of utter humiliation'!

You give me high hopes sweetie! I wish I was on Gul's team!

XOXO
~Red

P.S. Hey Anju! Do update TOIL for this little one right here!




Yaar I was confused btw u too ...abb dhono itna accha likhthe ho so am confused ..
..ur both writing style are so similar and am glad u both are in dis forum...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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You know there are stories that connect to your heart and you imagine them as they go around... Well, this OS had some sort of a crazy effect on me... The kiss in the broom closet, the emotions, everything was in place and that's what made this OS so... Magical !
Loved it to the moon and back...
Please write more...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh my god
This piece was superb
I had a bad bad mood after watching todays episode but after reading this i feel much better
Great work girl

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