The Burning Pain (Shivika)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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The burning pain

Na! Mera jawab na nahi hai. Mera jawab haan hai.
His heart beat paused. His ear were numb. His eyes were petrified. As if this was the last moment, there was nothing left in him.
Main aapse shadi karungi!
His world paused, those words were ecoing in his head. They were not just words but heavy bullets, that shot him unconscious in one go. "Is this a nightmare? Did I really hear her say this?" Were the only thoughts going on in his mind.
Something heavy was felt in his heart, an unknown unbearable pain. A pain only she could heal, a pain that would remain for the rest of his life. A film of scenes were happening in front of him. His heart was screaming but didn't have the energy to even speak a word. His grey eyes were crowded with tears. He didn't know what to do, he wasn't aware of where, who or what was around him, he only knew about the the fire inside him. He was burning, every part of him was burning. Pain everywhere. Shivaay couldn't take it anymore, no more and he left.

Life has given her soo much of pain. But this is new and it tears her apart. Recalling those discomforting incidents that happened in the past, a bunch of words flew out of her mouth. She knew nothing but knew whatever going happen in the next few minutes are totally against her heart. It echoed saying she can't be anyone else's, she was only meant for him but her brain defeated her heart saying he deserves no love from her. she tried to take a glimpse of him, wanted to know what are his reactions and what he felt.
She unwillingly raised her hand towards Daksh, his touch electrified her. Her hands were shivering, the skin is there best to prevent to cold hands touching hers. There was a new change in her finger, it had a ring which was beautiful and showed no beauty to her, no value or nothing special. Neither did it felt that the ring actually belong to her now. However there was an unknown wish from her heart, he will stop this. He can't let her go like this. " Shivaay will stop me"

The surrounding portrays happiness but there are two souls filled with tension. Too many unspoken words, too many misunderstandings and sudden decisions between them. Nevertheless two hearts tried there best to convince but had no choice but to move apart. Is this the end of love?

Hi guys,
Todays episode was brilliant, once again Nakuul and Surbhi proved no one can replace them as Shivaay and Anika. Hats off to them. Todays emotional episode provoked me to write this post. I hope u like it. 😊
Love
Roudy 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely episode, no words to describe Narbhi today.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First post hi this amazing! 👏

Loved it dear! 😃

Please do keep making posts! 😃

The episode really was touching. Brilliant but heart breaking at the same time.

Perfectly executed.

❤️

Waiting for todayyy!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishti_94

First post hi this amazing! 👏

Loved it dear! 😃

Please do keep making posts! 😃

The episode really was touching. Brilliant but heart breaking at the same time.

Perfectly executed.

❤️

Waiting for todayyy!


Thanx mishti. ❤️ 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful! Absolutely Beautiful!
U have just made the scene more intense...nd painful...
Beautifully expressed wrds to describe Shivaay's hearts turmoil nd Anika's pain.
Simply amazing...superb post Roudy👏👏
Yes the epi was indeed awesome...
Many emotions flowed today...nd yupp No one can replace Nakul and Surbhi as ShivIka...
Its like the roles were made for them..
Brilliant...nd hats off guyz..

Love Sharmi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Beautiful! Absolutely Beautiful!

U have just made the scene more intense...nd painful...
Beautifully expressed wrds to describe Shivaay's hearts turmoil nd Anika's pain.
Simply amazing...superb post Roudy👏👏
Yes the epi was indeed awesome...
Many emotions flowed today...nd yupp No one can replace Nakul and Surbhi as ShivIka...
Its like the roles were made for them..
Brilliant...nd hats off guyz..

Love Sharmi


Thanx Sharmi 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb post🤗 loved it👏😳
sorry for the late reply😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: yawfeh

superb post🤗 loved it👏😳

sorry for the late reply😭


Thanx dear
It's okay, happy to see u liked it. 😊

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