Ishra OS:Aftermath of the kiss

The first half of the OS is very nice and the way you describe their feelings, hesitation, fears...yet the excitement in waiting is too good. 👍🏼

But, I feel that the second half you quickly completed... I didn't mean that you need to describe the action part more😉. Actually here you concentrated on dialogues n action...and ignored explaining their inner feelings a little bit...which made me think you completed it in hurry...

Usually the benefit of reading is we can get to know 'what the characters are thinking & feeling at the moment' which keep us connected to the chars.. While watching its bit difficult , because we have to assume on our own based on their expressions/monologues which is always not possible.

I really mean no offence by my comment above, and I wish you will take it as constructive critism. I m waiting for the sequel again... may be this time how IshRa are eagerly waiting n trying for continuing their romantic-journey, where Ruhi - Adi busy becoming haddis everywhere😉 n asking them innocent questions, where they can't answer directly n need to find some bahana😆 to escape from embarrassing situation...

So IshRa finally took their relationship further

Loved their talks

It was so Happy to see you with Prequel.😊

Ishra Feelings were so Beautifully explained.😳

Ishra Conversation was so Nice.😊

The way Ishra Love Moments explained was so Lovely.😳

The Whole Os was so Awesomely explained.😊