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Okay...so after watching today's episode, I just have one comment. Really poor editing.
With Nakuul and Surabhi's such a wonderful portrayal as Shivaay & Annika, if they'd paid a little more attention to editing, this episode would've been unforgettable forever.
There were so many separate frames for Shivaay, Annika and Daksh when Daksh was proposing her. We saw Shivaay & Annika in one frame for a few shots, but during the conversation where Daksh was trying to cut off Shivaay and asking him to stay out of his business, it would've been nice to see Shivaay's reaction if that was shot in frame, especially we (at least I) did not need to see close up Daksh.
Also, Shivaay's "congratulations" to Annika looked a little bit choppy. I mean they just showed it randomly right after his departure from the sangeet where they had at least 100 people and everyone one was curious where did he disappear and then boom...here he is wishing Annika "congratulation" right after that in the same hall and sangeet is over. It wouldn't look so choppy had they shown Shivaay's internal turmoil in his room even for 10 seconds before showing him wishing to Annika. The scene would've been more impactful than what it was.
One more thing I noticed, of course not about editing, but in the end when Sahil put his hand on Annika, her expressions almost looked like she thought it was Shivaay whose hand she felt on her shoulder. At least that's what I deduced from her reaction but since we could see the black thread and a small hand, we know that it's Sahil and not Shivaay.
With Nakuul and Surabhi's such a wonderful portrayal as Shivaay & Annika, if they'd paid a little more attention to editing, this episode would've been unforgettable forever.
There were so many separate frames for Shivaay, Annika and Daksh when Daksh was proposing her. We saw Shivaay & Annika in one frame for a few shots, but during the conversation where Daksh was trying to cut off Shivaay and asking him to stay out of his business, it would've been nice to see Shivaay's reaction if that was shot in frame, especially we (at least I) did not need to see close up Daksh.
Also, Shivaay's "congratulations" to Annika looked a little bit choppy. I mean they just showed it randomly right after his departure from the sangeet where they had at least 100 people and everyone one was curious where did he disappear and then boom...here he is wishing Annika "congratulation" right after that in the same hall and sangeet is over. It wouldn't look so choppy had they shown Shivaay's internal turmoil in his room even for 10 seconds before showing him wishing to Annika. The scene would've been more impactful than what it was.
One more thing I noticed, of course not about editing, but in the end when Sahil put his hand on Annika, her expressions almost looked like she thought it was Shivaay whose hand she felt on her shoulder. At least that's what I deduced from her reaction but since we could see the black thread and a small hand, we know that it's Sahil and not Shivaay.
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