HaYa FF: The Fading Whisper (Chapter 1, PG 2)

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Saraa.

Aishuuu Yes I killed her but don't worry Soumya is gonna be one interesting character just wait and watch😆

Thank you for the compliment. Hopefully I will update these ffs regularly 😆

@ bold - Name mein confuse mat ho sara . Its ishu 😆

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sara rafeek

@Ooolalala

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Chapter 1

Harman is sitting on his table with a his old typewriter, writing a poem.

Someone knocks on his door.

Harman: Who is it?

Harman...its me Sonia

Harman: Sonia come in

Sonia: Harman are you okay?

Harman: I am breathing. It means I am okay

Sonia: Harman I am your sister. I am concerned for you

Harman: I get it but I am not interested in talking to anyone. Kindly leave!

Sonia: Harman at least listen to me

Harman: I know what you will say. See I don't care I am not going to come with you

Sonia: Why? Maama, Papa, Ravi, Sahir are waiting for you. What are you going to do here?

Harman: I don't think I have to provide anyone any clarifications! This is my life and I want to live my life. I am not obligated to provide you with any explanations

Sonia: Harman we care about you. we love you. That is why we are asking. Its been 10 years...

Harman: 10, 20, or 50 I will not leave until I get my answers. Until she comes back to give me my answers!

Sonia: For some stupid answers you have wasted 10 years of your life!

Harman: THOSE ARE NOT SOME STUPID QUESTIONS! LEAVE RIGHT NOW

Sonia leaves angrily without saying anything

Harman continue writing

All of a sudden, Harman hears some noise from back of the house. He gets up and goes toward the backyard

He reaches there but does not see anything!

Harman is not convinced. He searches and searches but he finds nothing.

Harman: Why do I FEEL she's here? I can feel her. I can sense her. She is around. She is somewhere

But he finds no one. He goes back to his room.

He lies in his bed and closes the light

Finally a vase broke. Harman wakes up again and he see someone.

Precap: Harman: SOUMYA WHERE ARE YOU? COME INFRONT OF ME?

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Kashis

@Kashish_shine

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

intriguing... Dark fictions genre I adore always! thanks for this beautiful fiction. Do PM me when you update further! Though Saumya has never seen him still Harman is waiting for her... Is Saumya any character in Harman novel or what's on store? don't know.. better I will be waiting for the next chapter.

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sara rafeek

@Ooolalala

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Kashish_shine
intriguing... Dark fictions genre I adore always! thanks for this beautiful fiction. Do PM me when you update further! Though Saumya has never seen him still Harman is waiting for her... Is Saumya any character in Harman novel or what's on store? don't know.. better I will be waiting for the next chapter.

It is going to be dark but I assure you it will also be humorous. With this FF, I planned to combine two opposite elements. Lets see how it works out. I hope it turns out to be well

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Kashis

@Kashish_shine

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Saraa.

It is going to be dark but I assure you it will also be humorous. With this FF, I planned to combine two opposite elements. Lets see how it works out. I hope it turns out to be well

Sure dear! do continue! I will be waiting...

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usha

@ushasri

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

wow interesting saraa
looks like harman missing soumya nd waiting for answers
precap oh hope its soumya only

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

OMG 😲 After reading the 1st chapter it looks like a ghost stry where Saumya is a spirit 😲😲😲 Am I right or Am I right ?? 😆

Well I really don't mind that what you want to show your leads as ... If they are spirits , flowers , aliens , planets etc etc 🤣🤣🤣 All I care is some romantic moments and that they are together in the end 😆😆😆

Quite an intriguing start baby 👏 After reading the last para where Harman hears some noises and the breaking of flower vase I'm somewhat sure that Saumya is spirit 🤔🤔 OR is it all a part of his imagination where her feels Saumya's presence ??? 🤔

Hope to see the 2nd chapter soon so that I can confirm my doubts 😆😆😆 I wish I had read this chapter at night to get some spooky feelings 😆 No worries , I'll read the 2nd chapter at night 🤣🤣 Hope to see an update ASAP ...