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Hi guys thanks for all ur comments and likes , if any grammatical error in this part iam sry.

PART 16


Before shot,Other side temple.

Adi, pinky, choti and Vicky enter in temple.dadi wait for her children.

Dadi look at four: Adi, Vicky u came beta and iam not search bride for u, so u itself searched for ur bride with teasing tone

Adi and pinky blushed for dadi comment and Vicky and choti shocked for dadi comment.

Adi: Dont tease me dadi, i already told to u iam love with pinky

Vicky look at choti: She is not my love and In my dreams also iam not think like that

Choti: Ha I don't want like monkey for my love

Dadi smiled both fighting.

Dadi: Both are stop.i want bless my babus first

Vicky: Dadiii

Dadi: Ok pinky bahu

Dadi blessed both pinky and choti.

Dadi inmindvoice: Where is my badi bahu till now she not come I think she struck in traffic jam.i want introduce my bahu everyone but she not come

Adi: Dadi lets go inside .in few minutes moon also arrived lets start pooja

Vicky: Dadi Shona not come with u

Dadi: U know very well she not come with sad voice

Adi: Dadi lets start pooja and pinky stay away food its eight wonder.she saw any food now she will break her fast in her own food with teasing tone look at pinky

Pinky glared to Adi and Adi gulped his saliva

Dadi: Dont tease my bahu.if u tease I will beat u.

Vicky: Dadi iam also hungry

Dadi: U also fasting

Vicky nods puppy face : Iam fasting for my future love.idont know where is my love.with dreaming face

Dadi look at choti: She is here na

Vicky: Kya

Dadi: Lets go start pooja.

Everyone finished poja and moon arrived

Pinky : Dadi moon arrived with excited voice.

Dadi: Ha beta start ur ritual.

Pinky and Adi infront each other and Vicky and choti separate each other doing ritual.

Choti finished her ritual but not break her fast & looking Adi and pinky breaking fast

Both are feeding each other to laddu

Vicky come stand with choti.if u want ladu I will u give u why u starring my pb laddu yaar

Choti: U... (not finished yet Vicky put laddo in choti mouth.vicky run to save his life).

Choti : Iam not leave u idiot and pickup more laddo in her hand and run behind Vicky.

Vicky runs fast and choti unknownly hit her foot in temple pillars

Choti: Haaa..sit down look at her foot

Vicky come near her: What happen Jhansi rani.

Choti: My foot hurt

Vicky checked her foot and helped to standing.

Choti: Ouch.it is paining

Vicky lift choti in his arms

Choti: Hey duffer what are doing put me down

Vicky: Chup iam helping ,both are eyes meet.both are searching something in each other eyes

Dadi : Cough

Both come out dream land.vicky not put down her in ground

Dadi: What happening yaar with teasing tone

Vicky:dadi , u think like that anything Oh..she foot hurt that only I help her.

Pinky: Kya what happened baby ,u hurt so much with worried tone

Choti: No didi iam alright

Vicky: PB, u said really baby to her.but she so heavy .i think now my arms both are broken.

Choti: First put me down and Vicky put her down to ground and choti pinch his arms hardly.

Vicky Shout: Haaa

Choti put four ladoo in Vicky mouth.

Vicky munching laddo: Tum

Choti : Tit for tat

Both unknowlingly break their fast.

Dadi: U all hungry ,lets go dinner ouside and went out

Choti: But angel not come till now

Adi:ha...she already call me.she struck to traffic jam and said to me break ur fast

Choti: I will waiting for her,aj

Adi: If u not eat , pinky also not eat anything and come lets go dinner outside .ur my lovely saaliji.u dont denied ur jiju wish right

Choti nod her head: Ok jiju.

All r went for dinner outside

Other side swara come and sitting alone ( same place both swasan celebrated kw in previous year)

Swara reminding love incident and chat with sanskar.

Man: what are doing here alone

Swara look at man: mind ur business.leave me alone

Man: u stay alone this is not good for u with harsh tone.

Swara standing and grabbed his collar : what do want mr sanskar mageshwari, u already snatched my happiness and now u worried about me said swara faints in his arms

Sanskar tapped her cheeks: shona wake up dear, plz wake up yaar.carefully put down in ground and bring water in his car and splashed water to her face .

Swara come to conscious: water

Sanskar offered water to her and shona drink slowly then come out free from in his arms.

Swara: tell me why u worried about me, u only break up with me

Sanskar: just shut up Miss khurana,go to home now.

Swara:miss khurana two seconds before only u told shona wake up dear and plz wake up yaar with lovely voice now miss khurana with harsh tone, wow super acting mr maheswari with taunting tone

Sanskar slient with angry face

Swara search something in her bag.

Sanskar: iam not worry about u with angry face.

Swara: plz open ur mouth and then I accept ur not worried about me.

Sanskar: u become mad

Swara: ha I mad with u and u open or not , now I am understoodd , oh great mr mageshwari scared with miss khurana so funny yaar

Sanskar:iam not scared u and also ur bhai and open his mouth

Swara put laddoo in his mouth in fraction of seconds and said happy karwachauth and thanks for break my fast and kiss his cheeks , bye dear , see u later and went out quickly.

Sanskar smiled her childish acting and carries his cheeks said: I love my pagal shona

Other side maaneet pairs

Maan: geet u like this necklace

Geet nod her head and plz break my fast iam hungry

Maan bring water pot give to her at time saw one man point geet head through gun .man triggerd gun and maan push geet to ground,the bullet hit to maan shoulder.

Geet hears bullet shot and saw bullet hit on his shoulder.

Geet come to maan and bring his head in her lap: maan ..wake up and her hand close to his wound place.

Maan open eyes slowly: mishty. .i love u. closed eyes

Geet: I love u too maan plz go away from me anyone help me with heavy voice

Geet shout help me save my maan.

Bodyguard hears bullet sound and come to place.

Bodyguard: mam what happended to sir

Geet: help me bring him to hospital

Bodyguard pick up maan in his arms and in car,maan in geet lap & went to near hospital and admitted icu to maan and geet waiting outside for saw her life ,her soul in danger at ICU

Doctor: mam, mr khurana in danger, if not remove bullet in his shoulder immediately otherwise he will die

Geet catched doctor collar: don't say once again that word in ur mouth, doctor and save my maan otherwise I don't know what do with u with angry voice.

Bodyguard remove her hand : mam plz come down, nothing happened to sir ,plz doctor start operation now.operation starts and geet waiting for her love even not single drop tears in both her eyes, she not cried but she has pain in her heart.

Other side everyone enjoyed dinner.

Adi phone ring and pickup phone and come to lonely place.

Adi: this time u call me what happened.

Man: maan shot

Adi: what, when will happened

Man:just now bodyguard call me and informed maan shot and operation starts to maan in xyz hospital.

Adi: maan alright.

Man: I don't know yaar.

Adi: sanskar, u did anything to him or anyone tried shot to maan

Sanskar: I don't know whose shot to maan.u go to hospital and give me maan health detail

Adi: iam going now and I call u later.

Adi went to others and said to Vicky: go to dadi car and drop girls in apartment.

Choti: jiju geet di till not come

Adi: u and pinky go to ur apartment and Vicky drop both of u.she went to maan,don't worry about her

Choti: ok, if she will call u and said to her call me.

Adi went out place and Vicky dropped girls to apartment then Vicky and dadi went to mansion

Doctor come out of operation thearte and geet stand up went to near doctor.

Doctor: mam nothing to worry he is safe now and after few hours he wake up and u go to see ward.

Geet: thanks doctor, u save my life.iam sry i talked harshly with u

Doctor: its ok mam ,I understand ur feeling,went to his cabin.

Geet went to maan room and kiss his forehead , sit chair near to bed, one hand hold his hand and other hand carrying his hairs and starring to him

Adi reached hospital and see maan in bed ,geet sitting next to him,adi went to doctor cabin.

Adi: doctor, how is he now

Doctor: he is safe now,time god,that bullet not deep in his shoulder so don't worry, his shoulder only hurts ,if he take rest fully ,it becomes alright.

Adi: thank u doctor

Adi call to sanskar

Sanskar : u reached hospital adi, how is he now

Adi: he already and geet with him

Sanskar: kya geet with him what happened to her

Adi: nothing to her, how u know geet

Sanskar: ha ,I know every moments of maan ,bodyguard told me

Adi: ok and cut the call

Adi don't want disturb to geet so he wait outside and slept in chair.

Early morning 5' clock maan open eyes slowly and geet starring to him.

Maan: where iam here, who are u , why u hold my hand

Geet removes her hand and light slap to his cheeks and maan left hand touched his cheeks said mishty with puppy face

Geet :ha ur mishty, why u did with me ,tears rolled flowing in eyes , last night reserved tears come out this time ,if u not push me that bullet hurt me only, in ur sake that bullets hurts ur shoulder and ask me who am I , now I told what relation with u,iam madly love with u.iam pagal.iam pagal...kneel down into ground cries vigrously

Maan: stop cry mishty , iam not see ur tears maan tried get up bed ,haaa ...his shoulder hurts

Geet get up and carefully helped him to sit in bed .

Geet: why u tried get up to bed, u hurts urself but I am in pain. Plz don't did it once again maan ,I cannot alive without u.her head placed in his bare chest and cried

Maan: mishty , look at me yaar

Geet look at maan face with crying face

Maan: my crying baby stop ur crying ,u r not good in crying face with teasing tone

Geet: chup bilkul chup, I go to call doctor

Maan: no u stay with me, idont want doctor, I want only u and give me water first

Geet put glass to maan mouth but maan not open his mouth and geet raised her eyebrows and maan get glass in her hand

Maan: first drink , iam not break ur fast till now,i know u not have anything yesterday

Geet sip water said: I will bring juice for u,

Maan: u give ur water that enough to me

Geet: but I already I have sipped that water, how will u drink that water

Maan: I want ur water only else iam not break my fast with cute anger

Geet smiled his cute anger: offered to water and maan drink

Maan: mishty ur water so sweet like ur name ,stay with me mishty and hug her

Geet blushed: I always with u maan but u need doctor now and removes hug went out

Geet come with doctor and doctor checks maan

Doctor: how is feeling now mr khurana

Maan: iam alright doctor

Geet glared to maan: no doctor he is pain in his shoulder, give any tablet reduce to his pain

Doctor: ok mam I give injection to him and then pain will be reduce

Doctor injected maan , maan shout ouch, geet come to maan and rub his injected spot

Geet: it is paining

Maan starring to geet and doctor starring both of them

Doctor: mr khurana, really ur luck person, she not tolerate ur little bit pain

Maan : I know doctor,she is my angel

Geet: doctor iam sry once again I badly behaved with u yesterday.

Maan: mishty why u asking sry to doctor

Doctor: I told u mr khurana and doctor narrates everything yesterday night incident and left out

Maan thought: why mishty u so much love me

Geet : why u starring me

Maan: my wife is beautiful that sake only I cannot remove my eyes with u

Geet blushed his comment and u need rest , sleep maan

Maan : iam not sleep , u come sleep with me

Geet: how can I sleep with u, u already ur shoulder hurts

Maan: ha, my right shoulder only hurts and u sleep with my left arms.open left his arms gestured to come

Geet unwillingly come to maan arms ,maan hand protectively to geet waist and geet head to maan chest.both are slept.

After some time middle age nurse come maan room and saw that both are sleeping peacefully

Nurse: both are made for each other, hey bhagwan plz keep save masti Jodi & evily thing away from them and went out

Morning 8 clock

Adi sleep ouside incomfort position and some one tapped his shoulder

Adi with closed eyes: chandu donot wake up me, I need sleep.

Vicky: chandu nahi Vicky hai

Adi opened eyes quickly and saw Dadi, swara, Vicky infront of adi with anger glared eyes

Dadi: why u not told maan shot,itna badi hogiya tum with angry voice

Adi: oh dadi, iam sry but how u people know about maan shot with hestitate voice

Dadi: u forgot it iam ur dadi savriti devi singh khurana ,where is maan know

Adi pointed maan room and all three banged maan room

Maan wakeup three of them shout and adi come to maan room now remember geet also in same room with maan but thank god geet went out few minutes back to outside

Dadi: maan beta, u alright

Maan look next to bed but geet is not in his arms and scanned whole rooms she is not here.

Vicky & swara: bhai dadi asking u only but who are u searching

Maan: oh.. interput nurse voice same nurse come to maan room

Nurse: mrs khurana

Geet enter room same time and dadi unison: yes sister

Everyone shocked their place, geet shocked dadi, Vicky ,swara all are together in maan room and dadi, swara and Vicky shocked geet in front of them

Nurse voice all r come out shocked world said mam mr khurana prescription give to geet and went out.

Geet: all are together in this room

Dadi, swara and Vicky: u here

Adi and maan, both don't know what happening between them

Dadi: geet beta, what r doing here, why nurse give u maan prescription

Swara: ha di,what r doing here

Vicky: yeh shona this is not ur di , this is my GB

Swara: shut up

Maan cough heavely and geet went to maan , give water to him

Dadi, swara and Vicky shocked in their place,maan accepted girl help.

Swara: dadi plz pinch me I have doubt iam in real world or iam dreaming

Dadi: iam also same state

Adi: geet is maan secretary, yesterday she only admitted to maan in hospital

Geet: app maan dadi i means maan sir dadi and shonu u come dadi it means ur

Swara: ur maan sir sister

Maan thought: everyone already know mishty, mishty also know my family members, what happening in my life

Maan: what happening yaar with confused face

Dadi come to geet and touch her shoulders: she is my temple mate, geetanjali

Swara side hugs to geet: she is my gudiya di. She is one save me in Chennai

Vicky: bro u already know she is my GB with other side hugs to geet

Geet nods her head to maan and maan smiles his family already accept geet in our family.

Doctor come to maan : everyone what r doing here, everyone go out, he need rest. All are went out and geet only stay with maan

Outside

Dadi : iam alright told u,my choice is best, u saw how much she carrying to maan

Swara and Vicky: iam also told my choice is best because iam also select maan bhai to geet bhabhi

vicky:we all are selected same person to maan bhai but both are comfortable each other, how it is possible and maan bhai not denied geet bhabhi help

Swara: di come to delhi in two weeks ago only , maan bhai also meet after party I thought how it is possible

Dadi: one person only know all look to adi

Adi: I don't know anything dadi and I need to call pinky about geet in hospital ,went quickly save his life to devil khuranas gang.

Dadi: leave it him.he not tell anything about maan matter .we will find out what going between them.

Inside

Maan: plz give me phone with pleading face

Geet glared to maan: I give permission only half hours .u accept I will give ur phone otherwise iam not

Maan: no yaar,half hours not enough to me,I will check my mails and important calls,u r my secretary ,u know very well my schedule and important meeting

Geet: ha iam ur secretary but first iam ur wife and then ur secretary. I will rearrange all ur schedule in after next month.

Maan: no mishty,not next month ,reschedule in twodays after

Geet mouth open wided: kya two days after, u think u have any cold,that only iam reschedule ur work.i remind u mr khurana u have bullet shot yesterday with moist eyes

Maan: mishty, ok reschedule to after next week

Geet nods her head negatively

Maan: ok fine ,reschedule to after two weeks and not more plz...ur my darling,my mishty ,my sweetheart.

Geet give to his phone: I will think about reschedule day with fake angry and wentout to join others.

Maan checked yesterday missed call and one unknown voice message and open message

A male voice laughed evily

How r u msk , u think that my bullet missed to ur ladylove. U think u saved ur ladylove with me.ha MSk iam not see her face but she has sexy structure in saree itself.if she wears modern dress .i will deal with her later.i thought she passing cloud for u.but u saved her to my bullet not consider that bullet hurts u.i understood how much u love that sexy girl.now I will target only her. l want to see ur fear face MSK.fear face MSK...laughed evily. I will back MSK

Maan anger raised hears his every word and body stiffned ,blood boiled in his anger and his eyes become red.

Maan selfthought: u want touch my mishty first u face MSK , MSK never fear anything and not safe mishty stay in apartment. Today itself she stay with khurana mansion only,she stay with me ,infront of me.

Precap: geet entry in KM ,maaneet romance, sam entry ,dadi supported to sam.


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Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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thanks for all ur comments and likes .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update..
Dadi gave pinky blessings..
Maan got shot in his shoulder for saving geet..
Geet with help of bodyguards took maan to hospital..
Doctor treated him & he got saved..
After maan came to sense geet cried a lot..
Maan's family came to hospital & saw geet there..
Adi handled the matter..
Interesting precape..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Karwachaut aur sabki masti ,,,wow I loved it
Someone trying to kill Geet
Who? &Maan hosh mein atey he
Where m I ? Who you ?😆
Behaving Like he he lost his memory
Ooo such a cute couples all are
& who is threatening Maan that
he try to hurm Geet,,,someone in Danger😲
Edited by MGMahika - 8 years ago
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amazing update... maaneet confessed their love but someone tried to shoot them... maan in hospital and geet taking care of them.. pinky and adi along with Vicky and choti broke their fast in temple. sasnskar called up adi and told him abut maan.. how adi is in contact with sanskar... swara and sanskar in love with each other... what happened between maan and sanskar...who are the people who called geet and maan and warned them... dadima, Vicky and swara in hospital after knowing about maans condition.. all are shocked seeing geet taking care of maan...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful update..
maan save geet..
temple part was cute..
who is the man ?
early waiting for next update..
thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Maan got shot
But Geet took him to hospital
Maan is happy that his family like Geet plan got threatened message
Nice precap
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful update. So it was maan who was shot. Thank u so much for not killing and memory loss track. Geet admitted him with bg's help. All the khurana's are shocked seeing geet with maan and geet was shocked seeing them and then came to know they are family. Maan was happy as they all know each other. But why din't maaneet tell about their marriage to their family? Precap is interesting. I think dadi is supporting sam to make geet jelous so that maaneet can come close. Update soon.
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Nyc update
Loved it
The gang along with dadima completed the rituals of karvachauth
Dadima was teasing vicky with choti's name
Unknowingly vicky and choti's broke each other's fast
Sanskar to broke swaras's fast!!
The gun shot hit maan on his shoulders
Sanskar informed Adi abt maan's situation and got to know that geet was with maan
Geet and maaneet moments
The Khurana's suspecting abt maaneet's relationship
Maan got threatening call from his foe
Nyc precap
Is dadima supporting Sam to reveal abt maaneet relationship!!?
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Thanks for pm
Will be waiting for the next update
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