new akdha os Yunhi Achanak updated 2nd part 18/12/16

Yunhi Achanak part 1

Aaj zindagi ke iss mod pe kabhi socha nahi tha tumse phir se mulakaat ho jaayegi. Pure 10 saal beet gaye hai par maano yun lagta hai kal ki hi toh baat thi jab har roz ki tarah nadi kinaare baitha main suraj dubne ka intezaar kar raha tha kyunki har roz jab suraj dubta tha tabhi mujhe mere chaand ka deedar hota tha, tum har roz ussi waqt toh raat ke halke andhere me chipkar mujhse milne aati thi na uss roz bhi main nadi kinaare ret pe baitha humari aane wali khusnuma zindagi ke haseen sapne sajo raha tha jab tum chum chum karti huyi dhire dhire meri aur chali aa rahi thi aur mera dil khushi se paagal huye jaa raha tha tumhe yeh batane ko ki maine apni maa se humari shaadi ki baat kar li hai aur woh ek accha sa mahurat dekhkar jaldi hi tumhare ghar rishta lekar jaane wali hai main tumhe apne gale se laga kar yeh khabar dena chahta tha par uss din tumhari chaal mai ek ajeeb sa dheemapan tha maano jaise tumhare kadam tumhe mere pass aane se rok rahe ho par jaise jaise tum mere kareeb aati jaa rahi thi mere dil ki khushi ek ajeeb se darr aur dard me badalti jaa rahi thi meri dhadkaney jo kuch waqt pehle tak khushi me jor jor se dhadak rahi thi meri aur badte huye tumhare har ek kadam ke saat dhimi huyi jaa rahi thi aur jaise hi tum mere pass aayi aur maine tumhari aankhon me dekha toh woh dhimi dhadkaney kuch pal ke liye tham gayi thi woh aankhein jo har roz pyaar se bhari rehti thi jo mujhe dekhte hi khushi se laakho sitaaro si chamak uthti thi aaj unnme pyaar ki jagah dard tha aur khushi ki chamak ki jagah udaasi thi aur dard ka viraana tha woh aankhein woh aankhein nahi thi jinnme meri zindagi basti thi woh aankhein jo bin bole sab kuch keh jaati thi aaj khamosh thi main samajh nahi pa raha tha aakhir tumhe huya kya tha par mera dil mehsush kar raha tha kuch toh huya ths aur jo huya tha woh bahut bura huya tha par meri himmat nahi ho rahi thi ke tumse puchu kya huya hai phir bhi badi mushkil se himmat jutakar maine phirse tumhari aankho me dekha aur puccha kya huya jodha aur tum turant mere seene se lipat gayi aur rone lagi maine bahut koshish ki tumhe chup karane ki par tum bus yahi bole ja rahi thi mujhe rone do jalal apne seene pe sir rakhkar mujhe rone do aur na jaane kitni der tak tum yunhi roti rahi ar main yunhi tumhe apni baahon me samete chup chap mann hi mann me rota raha aur achanak se tum ne khud ko mujhse alag kiya aur munh pherkar jaane lagi maine tumhara haat pakadkar tumhe roka aur apni aankhon me dekhne ko kaha aur khuda ka vaasta dekar kaha jodha aakhir huya kya hai batao toh sahi tum pehale roye jaa rahi thi aur ab bina kuch kahe vaapis jaa rahi hu khuda ke liye kuch toh kaho mera dil baitha ja raha hai aur tumne meri aankho me dekhte huye kaha jalal aaj se tumhara aur mera rishta khatam humare beech me jo kuch bhi tha woh sab bhul jana baauji ne mera rishta apne dost ke bete ke saat pakka kar diya hai aur hum sab kal subah hi humesha ke liye yeh sehar chodkar apne gaon jaa rahe hai wanhi baauji ke dost se ke bete se woh meri shaadi karwa denge jisski tarhik bhi tay ho gayi hai aaj se 10din baad, mujhe bhul jao jalal aur apni zindagi me aage badhkar kisi acchi ladki se shaadi kar lena aur ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena aur itna keh kar tum wanha se bhaag gayi aur main ek zinda laash ki tarah wanhi pe khada reh gaya aur jab tak main hosh me aaya toh tum jaa chuki thi aur mera sab kuch loot chuka tha main samajh hi nahi pa raha tha kya huya kyun huya kaise huya aur jab tak samjha aur tumse baat karne tumhare picche picche tumhare ghar pahucha toh wanha tala laga huya mila tumne kaha tha tum subah jaa rahi ho par tum tabhi chali gayi thi tumse milne tumhe rokne ke liye tumhare baaujji se baat karne ke liye main railway station bhi gaya par tum log mujhe nahi mile bus kuch ghanto me meri zindagi badal gayi thi shaam ko main apni jiss mohabbat ke saat nayi zindagi ke sapne bun raha tha raat hote hote meri woh mohabbat mujhe chod kar chali gayi thi aur mujhe ussko rokne ka na mauka mila aur na kabhi maine pucha aur na tumne kabhi apne gaon ka naam bataya aur na tumhare kisi padosi ko pata tha phir bhi na jaane kanha kanha main dewaano ki tarah tumhara pata dundhne ki koshish karta raha par meri har koshish na kamyaab rahi mano jaise tum kabhi uss sehar me rehti hi nahi thi aur dus dino baad yeh sochkar ki tumhari shaadi ho gayi hogi maine tumhari talaash band kar di thi aur khubsurat yaad banakar tumhe dil ke ek kone me chupa liya tha aur uss chote sehar ko chodkar iss bade dilli sehar me aa gaya tha par yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai ki aaj achanak yun dus saalo baad tum phir se mere saamne khadi ho mere na jaane kitne sawaalo ke jawaab apni aankho me chipaye huye...

To Be Continued ...
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amazing
Jalal was waiting for Jo
& she left him forever
poor him
update asap

Yunhi Achanaka Part - 2.


Aaj bhi yaad hai dus saal pehle ka woh din jab tumhe humesha ke liye kho dene ka dard itna jyada tha ki ek pal bhi uss seher me tumhare bina rehna namumkin ho gaya tha wanha ki har cheez thumhe khone ke dard ko meri har aati jaati saans ke saath aur badhaye jaa rahi thi toh bus ussi pal sab kuch chodkar tumhari yaadon ko saath liye main aur ammi yanha delhi chale aaye the shuru ke kuch dino ki mushkilo ke baad yanha ek badi architecture firm me mujhe assistant architect ki job mil gayi 4 saal ki kadi mehnat ke baad maine apni ek choti si architecture firm start ki aur meri din raat ki mehnat,ammi ki duao aur khuda ke karam se mera business accha chalne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte humari firm delhi ki ek successful firm ban gayi ek taraf janha kaamyaabi mere kadam chu rahi thi wanhi dusari taraf ek din yunhi Achanak kismat ne meri ammi ko mujh se cheen liya tumhare jaane ke baad ek ammi hi toh thi jo mere jeene ka sahara thi phir yunhi Achanak main iss bhari duniya me tanha reh gaya tha aur uss par kismat ki woh dohari maar jab ammi ke inteqaal ke baad humare purane padosi yanha mujhse milne aaye aur jab unnhone yeh bataya ki tum ab iss duniya me hi nahi ho toh mano mujhe aisa laga jaise ek baar phir maine tumhe kho diya tum mujhse juda thi yeh ehsaas main kisi tarah bardasht kar raha tha yeh sochkar tum janha bhi ho khush toh ho par yeh ehsaas ke tum iss janha me hi nahi ho main bardasht hi nahi kar pa raha tha tumhare maut ki khabar aur ammi ke jaane ke baad ka woh ek saal maine kaise kata tha bata nahi sakta meri zindagi bina kisi khwahis bina kisi maqsad ke unnhi tanha bezaar kate jaa rahi jab ek din woh meri zindagi me aayi jisske kadam meri zindagi mere ghar me padte hi sab kuch badal gaya meri viraan padi zindagi me mano bahar aa gayi aur mujhe phir se jeene ki vajah mil gayi usski hasi usski khushi ke liye jeena meri zindagi ka maqsad ban gaya usski ek jhalak mere saare gum bhula deti aur ussko gale se lagate hi mera har dukh har taqleef dur ho jati par phir bhi zindagi mai tumhari kami humesha rahi tumhari yaadon ka saya humesha mere saath raha jab bhi kabhi udaas huya ya kabhi koi khushi mili sabse pehle tumhari tasvir se aakar apne dil ki baat ki zindagi tumhari yaadon aur meri zindagi ki uss nayi khushi nayi umeed ke sahare acchi gujar rahi thi jab teen din pehale humari firm ko ek bhut prestigious shopping complex project mila aur aaj meri uss project ke financer company ke finance manager Ms. Rathod se important meeting thi par do din pehale phir se kismat ne apna rang dhikhaya aur maine apni khushi apni zindagi apne zindagi ke sahare ko lagbhag kho diya tha jab ek accident me woh bal bal bach gayi par uss haadse se woh itna darr gayi ke mujhe ek pal bhi khud se dur nahi jaane diya par meeting itni important thi ke humne Ms. Rathod se request ki ke woh meeting office me nahi mere ghar pe kar le aur woh maan gayi aur aaj subah se mujhe na jaane kyun aisa mehsush ho raha tha jaise aisa kuch hone wale he jo maine kabhi nahi socha ho aur dekho tum khadi ho mere saamne Ms. Rathod ke roop me jaise hi humne ek duje ko 10salo ke baad dekha toh humari aankhein khushi ke aansuo se bhar gayi hum dono ek dusare se bahut kuch kehna chahte the par hontho se lafz nikal hi nahi pa rahe the hum bus aise hi ek duje ko dekhe jaa rahe the aur humare dil dimaag me na jaane kitne sawaal chal rahe the aur mujhe toh yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha kya yeh sach he ya sapna kya sach me Ms. Rathod meri jodha he ek minut par meri jodha toh ab iss duniya me hi nahi thi phir yeh kon? aur main ektak bina palak jhapkaye tumhe dekhe ja raha tha aur tab tum mujhe dekhkar muskurayi aur kanha kya dekh rahe ho main hi hu maine achraj bhari nighaaho se tumhe dekha aur kaha tumhari toh m...aur tumne mujhe beech me roka aur kaha kya yanhi pe khada rakhoge baithne ke liye nahi kahoge aur maine sharmakar kaha oh maaf karna aao baitho aur hum sofe pe ek dusare ke saamne baith gaye aur tumne meri aankho mai dekhte huye kaha main jaanti hu jalal tumhare dil me bahut sawaal honge aur main aaj tumhare har sawaal ka jawaab dungi aur tum ne ek lambi aah bharte huye kaha tumhe yaad he jalal humare alag hone se pehale main apne gaon gayi thi ek shaadi me toh uss shaadi me shaamil hona meri zindagi ki sabse badi galati saabit huyi uss shaadi me humare gaon ke sabse bade zamindaar ka beta suryabhaan bhi aaya tha aur mujhe dekhte hi ussko main pasand aa gayi thi aur shaadi me woh mere kareeb aane ki koshish karta raha aur jis din hum vaapis laut rahe the woh humare ghar mujhse milne aaya aur mujhse shaadi karne ke liye kehne laga aur jab maine mana kiya toh woh mujhse jabardasti karne laga toh maine ussko thappad maar diya tab ussne gusse me mujhse kaha aaj tumne mujhe na kaha hai par yeh mat samajhna maine haar maan li hai tumhari shaadi mujhse hi hogi aur iss thappad ka hissab tumhe zindagi bhar chukana hoga aur woh wanha se chala gaya aur hum sab vaapis laut aaye aur main woh sab bhul gayi par woh nahi bhula tha jalal aur uss din jab main nadi kinaare tumse milne ke liye ghar se nikal hi rahi tabhi achanak se 10 15 log haato me hathiyaar liye humare ghar me ghus aaye aur unnhone mere pure parivaar ko pakad liya hume samajh hi nahi aa raha tha kya ho raha he tabhi suryabhaan aankhon me badle ki aag liye huye andar aaya aur mere pass aakar bola tumhe kya laga raat gayi baat gayi tumhe sayad laga hoga uss din jo humare beech huya jo maine kaha woh wanhi khatam ho gaya nahi jodha nahi uss din jo kuch bhi maine kaha tha uss ka ek ek shabdh main pura karunga aur usski shuruyaat aaj aur abhi se hoti hai toh jodha agar tum apne gharwalo ko zinda dekhna chahti ho toh tumhe mujhse shaadi karni hogi aur hum aaj hi gaon jaayenge aur 10 din baad humari shaadi hogi aur tab tak tumhara yeh chota bhai mere kabze me rahega aur agar tumne ya tumhare gharwalo ne kisi se bhi kuch kehne ya karne ki koshish ki toh isski maut ke jimmedaar tum log hoge aur woh mere bauji ke pass gaya aur bola uncle ji sirf 2ghante he aapke pass gaon chalne ki tayyari ke liye mere aadmi sahi do ghante baad aap sabko lene aa jayenge aur woh mere chote bhai ko apne saath lekar jaane laga aur jaate jaate ussne mudhkar dekha aur kaha koi hoshiyaari mat karna nahi toh apne bete ko humesha ke liye kho doge aur woh chala gaya hume samajh nahi aaya kya kare aur hum kar bhi kya sakte the mere bhai ki jaan bachane ke liye humne usski baat maan li par jaane se pehale main ek baar tumse milna chahti thi aur jab sab apna apna samaan baandh rahe the main chupke se picche ke darwaaze se nikal kar tumse milne aa gayi thi aur usske baad jo huya woh toh tum jaante hi ho par tumne mujhe uss din yeh sab kyun nahi bataya jodha kyun? jodha ne dard bhari aankho se meri taraf dekha aur kaha main darr gayi thi Jalal main tumhari jaan khatare me nahi daalna chahti thi kyunki mujhe tab tak yeh toh samajh aa hi gaya tha ki woh suryabhaan koi mamuli insaan nahi tha woh bahut khatarnaak tha par main yeh bhi nahi chahti thi ke tumhe bina bataye chali jaau main tumhe batakar jana chahti thi ki hum humesha ke liye juda ho rahe hai taki tum mere intezaar me apni zindagi barbaad na karo aur apni zindagi mai aage badhkar nayi shuruyaat kar sako tabhi uss din tumhare pass aayi thi woh sab kehne aur jodha phir khamosh ho gayi aur Jalal bhi khamoshi se ussko dekhe ja raha tha dono apni uss aakhiri mulakaat ko yaad kar rahe the har ek lamha har ek pal unnki aankho ke saamne ek film ki tarah chal raha tha jab jalal ne khamoshi todte huye puccha phir kya huya jodha tumne uss suryabhaan se shaadi ki jodha ne jalal ki taraf dekha aur na me sar hilate huye kaha nahi jalal meri shaadi nahi huyi uss shaitaan se kyunki mere bachpan ka dost saahil farishta bankar na jaane kanha se aa gaya uss ne hi mujhe uss shaitaan ke chungal se bachaya aur mujhe yeh nayi zindagi di jalal ne phir jodha ko beech me rokkar kaha par tumhara woh dost saahil toh mumbai me rehta tha na toh woh wanha tumhare gaon me kaise jodha ne muskurahate huye kaha tum aaj bhi nahi badle jalal har cheez me jaldi meri baat puri toh hone do tumhe saare sawaalo ke jawaab khud ba khud mil jaayenge...jalal ne apne munh par ungali rakhte huye aankhon se jodha ko apni baat kehne ko kaha jodha ne phir muskurakar kaha haan batati hu par ab jab tak meri baat khatam na ho jaaye mujhe beech me mat tokana samjhe, jalal ne palak jhapakar hami bhar di aur jodha ek baar phir 10 saal pehle ke uss waqt me pahuch gayi janha usske liye saare raaste sari khidkiya aur saare darwaaze band ho chuke the apna pyaar toh ussne khud hi dur kar diya tha aur gaon pahuchkar ussko pata chala iss sabme usska parivaar bhi shaamil tha woh chup chaap jalal ko chodkar shaadi ke liye aa jaaye isiliye woh sab drama kiya gaya tha asliyat toh yeh thi ke jodha ke bade bhai ki naukari aur apni pushteni zameen bachane ke liye usske parivaar ne usska sauda uss suryabhaan ke parivaar se kar diya tha aur iss saude me usska aur jalal ka pyaar koi mushkil khadi na karde isiliye ussko jhoot bolkar chote bhai ki jaan ka vaasta dekar yanha laya gaya tha woh bahut royi bahut minnate ki par usski baat kisi ne nahi mani, jodha ne kai baar bhaagne ki bhi koshish ki par naakam rahi aur aakhir me haar maankar jodha na chahte huye bhi khamoshi se dhoom dham se ho rahi usski shadi ki tayyariyo aur rasmo ka hissa banne lagi, jodha puri tarah toot chuki thi ussko chaaro taraf sirf andhera hi andhera nazar aa raha tha aur nazar aa rahi thi usski aane wali narak se battar zindagi usski har umeed har sahara usska saath chod chuka tha aur woh jo usske saath hone ja raha tha usse apna naseeb samajhkar gale lagaane ko tayaar thi par tabhi na jaane usski ya kisi aur ki dua rang laayi aur usske bachpan ka dost saahil jo mumbai me rehta tha kisi jaruri kaam se gaon aaya tha aur jab saahil ko pata chala jodha ki shaadi hone jaa rahi hai toh woh jodha se milne usske ghar aaya aur jab woh jodha se mila toh usski dard bhari aankhon ko dekhkar samajh gaya kuch toh galat ho raha he aur mauka dekhkar ussne jodha se akele me baat ki aur jodha ne saahil ko sab kuch bata diya aur tab saahil ne jodha se vaada kiya ke woh jodha ko iss shaadi aur inn sab khudgarz logo se jarur bachakar yanha se bahut dur le jaayega par jodha ko darr tha abhi ya baad me usske parivaar ya suryabhaan ko pata chal gaya toh woh phir se ussko yanhi vaapis le aayenge aur tab saahil ne ek aisa plan banaya jisske baad jodha humesha ke liye iss sabse bahar nikal sakti thi aur bahar nikalkar bina kisi darr ke apni zindagi jee sakti thi saahil ne jodha ke kaan me kuch kaha aur yeh bolkar woh kal shaam ko aayega aur jab woh ishara karega tabhi jodha unnke plan ko shuru kare woh wanha se chala gaya aur jodha dil hi dil bhagwaan se ussko yeh sab karne ki himmat aur har kadam pe usska aur saahil ka saath dene ki dua maangi aur besabri se woh saahil ke aane ka intezaar karne lagi par tabhi besabre jalal ne phir se puccha aisa kya plan banya tha saahil ne, jodha ne ghurkar gusse se jalal ko dekha aur kaha tum chup nahi reh sakte na jao main tumhe ab kuch nahi batane wali jalal ne dono kaan pakadkar bola sorry jodha pakka ab kuch nahi bolunga please batao na jodha ne phir gusse se jalal ko dekha aur kaha yeh last time he jalal ab agar phirse tumne mujhe toka na toh phir dekh lena ab chupchaap meri baat suno aur jodha phirvse puraani yaadon me kho gayi agale din saahil shaam ko jodha ke ghar aaya uss waqt ghar me agle din hone wali haldi rasam ki tayyari chal rahi thi aur sabse chupte huye saahil jodha ke pass gaya aur jodha ko ek choti si bottle dete huye kaha issko apne munh me rakhkar dhire dhire hontho ke side se bahar nikaalna bilkul aisa lagna chahiye jaise tumne zehar piya he aur dhayan rakhna isski ek boond bhi tumhari body me nahi jaani chahiye ab main bahar jata hu aur 5min baad kisi ko andar bhejta hu bus tum itna sambhal lena aage sab kuch main sambhal lunga maine saari tayyari kar li he jodha ne sir hilakar kaha main sab sambhal lungi bus tum apna dhayaan rakhna kisi ko bhi tum par shaq na ho main nahi chahti tumhari jaan ko koi khatra ho saahil ne jodha ke dono haath apne haath me lete huye kaha kuch nahi hoga uss upper wale pe bharosa rakho sab thik hoga bus aajki raat kal subah tum azaad hogi jodha ne aasu bhari aankho se kaha bhagwaan kare aisa hi ho aur saahil bahar chala gaya aur 5min baad ussne jodha ko bahar bulane ke bahane jodha ki maa ko andar bheja aur jaise hi jodha ki maa jodha ke kamre me aayi woh apne saamne behosh padi jodha jisske munh se kuch safed jhaag se nikal raha tha dekhkar dang reh gayi aur jor jor se chillakar sabko bulaane lagi aur thode hi der me saara ghar jodha ke kamre me aa gaya aur saahil ne jodha ko dekhte hi kaha arre jodha ne toh lagta hai zehar kha liya he issko jaldi se hospital lekar chalo kanhi der na ho jaaye aur woh jodha ko uthakar apni car me hospital le gaya aur usski maa aur bauji bhi usske saath aa gaye baki sab dusari car me unnke picche chal diye bus 20min me woh hospital pahuch gaye aur nurse jodha ko operation theatre me le gayi aur doctor ne usska ilaaz shuru kar diya aur kuch hi der me suryabhaan aur usska parivaar bhi hospital aa gaya kareeb 2 ghante baad doctor bahar aaya aur ussne jodha ke gharwaalo ko bataya ke bahut koshish karne ke baad bhi woh jodha ko nahi bacha paaye kyunki zehar saare sarir me phel gaya tha aur zehar itna khatarnaak he ki agar jald se jald usska antim sanskaar nahi kiya gaya toh usski body pani banke phat sakti toh main aapko salaah dunga ki aap patient ka electric daah sanskaar abhi kar dijiye jodha ka parivaar jo samajh hi nahi paa raha tha aakhir unnke saath achanak kya ho gaya he bina kisi sawaal jawaab ke doctor ki baat maan gaya aur sabko jodha ka chehra aakhiri baar dhikha kar usska electric daah sanskaar kar diya gaya aur sab wanha khade hokar nam aankhon se ussko aakhiri vidaayi dekar kuch der baad hospital se chale gaye yeh sochkar ki ab jodha iss duniya se humesha ke liye chali gayi he par jodha dur khadi chupkar yeh sab dekh rahi thi jab kisi ne picche se aakar usske khandhe pe haath rakha aur jodha ne ghabrakar mudkar dekha toh paya woh saahil ka doctor dost tha jissne iss sabme jodha aur saahil ki madad ki thi aur usske parivaar aur suryabhaan ko yakeen dilaya tha ki jodha mar gayi he aur electric plate pe body rakhne se pehale jodha ko kisi lavaarish deathbody se badal diya tha doctor ne muskurahate huye jodha se kaha azaadi mubaarak ho aur ussko ek package dete huye kaha yeh lo saahil ke ghar ka address aur mumbai ke train ki ticket abhi tumhe yanha se nikaalna hogavsaahil kuch din baad tumhe mumbai me milega taaki usspe kisi ko shaq na ho, jodha ne dono haath jodkar doctor ko jo ussne jodha ke liye kiya tha thanks kaha doctor ne usske haatho ko pakadkar kaha jodha maine kuch nahi kiya saahil mera sabse accha dost he aur tum usski toh bus tum meri bhi dost huyi na aur dost ek dusare ke kaam nahi aayenge toh kon aayega jodha ne apne aasu pochte huye phirse thanks kaha aur doctor ko jalal ke naam ek khat aur usska pata dekar woh chupchap raat ke andhere me mumbai ke liye nikal padi iss umeed ke saath ke jaise hi jalal ko usska khat milega woh daudkar usske pass chala aayega aur woh phirse apni zindagi ki ek nayi shuruyat karenge aur apne saare sapno ko pura karenge par ussko kya pata tha usska yeh sapna bus ek adhura sapna aur kabhi na puri hone wali umeed bankar reh jaane wali thi...

TO BE CONTINUED. ...

P. S. Once i completed this story i wiil try to gv small summary in english for those who cnt understand hindi...

Originally posted by: swetiii

amazing
Jalal was waiting for Jo
& she left him forever
poor him
update asap

thank u mushkaan for liking n commenting...
Updated 2 nd part just now n will update 3rd n last part most probably tomorrow...

Originally posted by: sau1234mya

Awsome os

thanks a lot saumya...

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

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Amazing os Di 👏

Beautifully written Di ⭐️

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Awesome part dear
Loved it
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