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Part 14



As he stood in the kitchen, finding his wife puckering her lips to blow onto one of the dishes she had made, he leaned onto her side and pecked her lips.

"Raman!!" she whined not able to withstand his tease and turned around quickly and kissed him fully on his lips. Taken by surprise, he couldn't respond before she broke off and turned to the slab casually.

"kya tha wo?" he asked naughtily nuzzling his face into the hollow of her neck.

[What was that?]

"Bahooth miss kiya tha aapko!!" she hissed as he rubbed his beard over the back of her neck.

[I missed you a lot!!]

"Maine bhi..." his fingers leaped into her Saree rubbing her waist sensuously while his lips latched onto her neck again.

[Me too]

"Ahem..!!" Shagun exclaimed, seeing them while Ishitha tried to get out of his arms that were cuddling more into her. Shagun couldn't help but go green by Raman's ignorance and made faces.

Struggling out of his hold, Ishitha ran to their dining table holding a dish only to dash into Romi who held it before it could make its place on the floor.

"Thankew Romi!!!" her lashes cast down, unable to hide the hue of her cheeks.

"Welcome, Bhabhi!! Lekin aap kiisi se bhaag rahi the kya?? Bhai bhi kahi nahi dikh raha hai??" he asked looking around for Raman while he (Raman) made his way towards them, smiling.

[Welcome Bhabhi!!! But from whom are you running?? Also, Bhai couldn't be seen!!]

"Hmm...waise kitchen me kya kar rahe the bhai??" Simmi teased.

[Hmm...What were you doing Bhai!!??]

"Cricket khel raha hoon!! Fielding karogi?" he replied spreading laughter across the table and his wife smacked him playfully, settling aside him.

[I was playing cricket!! Would you field??]

"ouch!!" he said touching the food with his wounded hand and screamed another ouch' when Ishitha hit his shoulder for his carelessness.

"Chot se jyada iss se lag rahi hai!!" he cutely pouted, pointing to the place she had just hit.

[This hurts more than the wound!!!]

"Mujhe achi tarah se patha hai aapko kitna Dard ho raha hai !!" she said tearing a piece of parantha , while rubbing there, though knowing she didn't hurt him at all.

He smiled eating the piece she fed holding her rubbing hand. While the family smiled at their banter and continued their dinner, Raman started teasing Ishitha by holding her fingers for a long time in his mouth and biting them lightly.

[I know well how much it hurts!!]

"Bacha nahi hoon Madrasan!!!" he told her with his eyes studying her curving up lips.

[I'm not a kid Madrasan!!!]

"Arey!! Ek tho bechari inna pyaar se khila rahi he aur upar se tu use tang kar raha hai!!!" Toshiji shouted which broke their trance.

[Arey!!Poor she is feeding you and you are troubling her??]

"Hmm..umm...Mummiji!! Kya kiya Raman ne??" Ishitha couldn't help but get embarrassed as she thought her mother in law caught them romancing.

[Hmm...umm...Mummiji!! What did he do??]

"Meine suna puttar kaisa who tujhe taane mar raha hai!!Bewakoof!!!" she slightly hit him on his head.

[I heard him taunting you!! Idiot!!]

Ishitha sighed relieved while Raman gobbled the piece she was holding and said,

"Tumse hi seekh rahe sab log!!!" pointing towards baffled Ishitha.

[Everybody is learning from you!!]

The family and Ishitha laughed at his cuteness while he was left the dining hall.

"Papa!!" Ruhi's low voice and tug at his shirt stopped him. Taking his daughter into his arms he asked her the reason of her sadness.

"Papa!! Mei Ishima jaisa kyun nahi hoon!!? Shagun mamma bol rahe hai ki babies apna mummy jaisa dikhna chahiye, toh mei kyu nahi dikhti??" she asked innocently while everyone stared at Shagun disgustingly.

[Papa!! Why don't I look like Ishima?? Shagun mamma told me that babies look like their mothers, then why am I not??]

"Pagal ho!!??Kyu meri puttar ko tang karthe ho??" Toshi shouted at Shagun.

[Are you mad?? Why are you bothering her??]

"Chod dijiye ma!!! Shagun jaise aurathein se baath karna hi bhekar hai!! Cheap people se aap unche wale soch expect math kijiye!!" Raman said glaring her, while rubbing Ruhi's back who was now in her mother's arms.

[Leave her ma!!! People like Shagun don't deserve to be talked!! Don't expect great character from cheap people!!]

"Oh!! Please!! Meine ne wahi kaha joh sach hai" Shagun couldn't complete as both Raman and Adi yelled.

[Oh!!! Please!! I did tell her the truth!!]

While the whole family including stood shocked, Raman and Adi looked at each other and Ishitha placed her palm on Raman's shoulder calming him.

"Mom!!! Aap kyun aise behave kar rahe ho?? App dekh nahi sakthe ki Ruhi sad hai!!" Adi said gazing at his sister who was on the verge of crying.

[Mom!! Why are you behaving so?!! Can't you see that she is disturbed!!]

"Adi!! Tum bhi mujhe blame kar rahe ho?? Tumhari mom kho?? I jst can't believe this!!" Shagun exclaimed shocked of his behavior.

"Just shut up Shagun!!" Raman shouted and took Ruhi in his arms.

"Ruhi beta!!! Shagun mamma sahi keh raha hai!! Babies apni mummy khi jaisa lagtha hai!! Lekin aap bhi tho ishima jaise hi lagthe ho!!" he said wiping her tears.

[Ruhi beta!! Shagun mamma is right, babies look like their mom!!! But you do even look like your Ishima!!]

"Sachi papa!!??" Ruhi asked hopefully.

[Really papa??]

"Raman aap...!!" Ishitha tried to intervene.

[Raman!! What...]

"Arey madrasan mei jantha hoon mei kya keh raha hoon!!! Thoda bahuth mera bhi dialogues sunaya karo na!!" he winked at her while she pouted and Ruhi giggled slightly holding Raman's shirt.

[Hey Madrasan I know what I'm talking!! Listen to me sometimes!!!]

"Ruhi!! Hum ab ek kaam karenge!! Aap aur Ishima me similarities dekhenge!!" he pulled both Ishitha and Ruhi closer to him and started to examine their features seriously with everyone looking at him curiously.

[Ruhi!! We will find similarities between you and Ishima!!!]

"Dekho Ishima kha lambe baal do teen jaadu ban sakte hei isse" he chuckled as Ishitha hit him and continued, "Aapka bhi baal tho bahooth lambe hai, soft aur silky bhi bilkul apni Ishima jaisa!!! Issliye tho aap hamesha unse kalthe hai!!"

[See the hair of your Ishima, how long it is!! Two three brooms can be made out of it!!!]

[Your hair is also long, silky and soft, just like your Ishima's that is why you always play with them right?]

"hmm...papa!!" she replied once again taking few strands of Ishitha's hair and turning them around her finger which made others smile.

"Papa!! Eyes...eyes...!!" Adi helped his father earning a wink from him while the family was grinning with happiness warming up their hearts especially Ishitha.

"Hmm...eyes!!! Ishima khi tho judail jaisa bade ankein hai!! Aur apka bhi ankein bilkul Ishima ke tarah bade bade, khoobsorat aur poora pyar se bhare!!! Aur aap dono khe lips pe joh smile!!! It never looked better upon anyone!!!" he said looking at them admiringly.

[Hmm...eyes!!! Ishima possesses ghost eyes!! And yours just as her big, beautiful and love filled.!!And the smile of you people!! It never looked better upon anyone!!! ]

"Lekin Ruhi!! Sabse important yeh hai ki aap mujhe nahi sabko Ishima jaisa pyaar karthe aur care karthe ho!!!Muhje tho Ishima jaise daant the bhi ho!!! Haan thoda aap Shagun mamma jaise dikthe ho kyunki who bhi aapka mother hai!!! Lekin mujhe aap me jyada meri Ishitha dekthi hai!! Aap mera jr Madrsan ho!!!" he chuckled and wiped his tears stealthily.

[But Ruhi important among all these is you love and care like Ishima!! You even scold me like your mother!!Yeah!! You look a bittt like Shagun as she is also your mother!! But I see my Ishitha in you!! You are my junior Madrasan!!!]

The little girl's happiness knew no bounds and hugged both of her parents tightly while Raman rubbed the moistened cheeks of Ishitha. Adi couldn't help but join them while Romi did the same.

"Arey!! Utho bail jaisa soyi ho!!!pagal!!!" Raman said pushing Romi away from Ishitha and in turn pulled her to him possessively.

[Hey!! Get up you log!!!Are you mad?!]

"Haww...bhai!!!" Romi whined like a kid.

"Papa!! Toh mai badi hokar Ishima jaisa saadi pehnunngi!!" Ruhi cheerfully exclaimed.

[Papa!! When I grow up, I'll wear a saree like Ishima!!]

"Badi hokar kyun?? Abhi pehan lena!!!" he said taking the loose end of Ishitha's saree he draped it around Ruhi's shoulder and kissed her cheek, calling her pretty.

[Why after growing up Ruhi?? Wear it now itself!!]

"Kuch bhi papa!!!" Ruhi imitated Ishitha cutely.

"Arey meri beti kuch-bh bhi bolne legi!! Bilkul apni Ishima jaisa!!!" he laughed.

Seeing her husband half-sleeping position, placing the laptop on his stomach, Ishitha quickly closed the door.

"Hmm...Raman I'm sleepy!!" she uttered and without waiting for his reply, slept flatly on him replacing his things.

"Acha...agar um sleepy ho toh mujhpe kyun soyi ho?? Uss side pe so jathi!!" he naughtily asked making her open her eyes and cutely look at him.

[Oh!! If you are sleepy, then you could have slept on the other side of the bed!!!]

"yeh mera side hai!!!" she caressed his cheek giving him room to run his hand on her bare stomach.

[This is my side of bed!!]

"Acha!! Aaj aise saadi me sona hai kya!?? Seedha irada bathavo na Madrasan!!!" he gave a knowing grin pushing her pallu onto a side and nipping her cheek slightly.

[Oh!! Are you planning to sleep in a saree today!?? Can't you directly let me know your intentions Madrasan!!?]

He sighed as she turned to his side, instead of answering him and nuzzled the side his face. He, loosening her blouse, started running his fingers along her neck and back. Slightly pulling her hair, for her to face him, he fused their lips for a sweet kiss. Panting for air, she leaned her head onto his and said,

"Aapka work important hai kya??"

[Is your work important?]

"Tumse jyada nahi...!!" he said pushing her head closer to his and kissing her ear.

[Not than you...!!]

"Kya maine aapko disturb kiya??" she husked breathing heavily.

[Did I disturb you?]

"Tum mujhe disturb nahi karthi ho!! Mei kudh hi disturb ho jaunga!!" he winked at her while she smiled.

[You can never disturb me!!! It's me who gets disturbed!!]

As he was about to kiss her laughing lips, they parted hearing a call. He sat up, as she received the call,

"Mihika!!! Abhi kya baath karna hai??" she asked exasperated as her sister wasn't revealing anything.

[Mihika!! What do you want to talk now???]

"See Mihika I'll talk in the morning!! Aaj ke liye sojavo!!! Bcoz I can't come now!!!" she stated and cut the call.

"Kya hua Mihika kho??" he expressed his concern.

[What happened to Mihika??]

"Bas shaadi ki tension Raman!!! Mei kal baath karoongi!!! Ab aap..." she sat in his lap, leaning onto his shoulder.

[It's just the worry of marriage Raman!! I'll talk to her later!!! It's you now...]

He couldn't be happier as she proved him once again that she places him above everyone and everything. As he gazed at her innocent face, he couldn't help but pull her softly and peck her lips continuously. Moaning out his name, she turned the moment passionate while he started caressing her ankles pulling raising the cloth she wore. Unable to wait anymore she cupped his face fiercely and kissed him with all her pent up love and desire. Flicking the skin of her stomach, he leaned back onto the bed taking her along.

Next part

Thankew for the 92 likes for the past update!!! Love you all!!! This is dedicated 2 akriti as I had disappointed her!!!! So a loong update 4 u dear!!!

Do comment and like!!!


Edited by shreya303 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Update asap dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
welcum dear!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yippee I was first
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
shagun is as always disgusting
but raman made ruhi happy by finding similarities between her and ishu and also adi helped him in that
do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
I just love love love love love the update
actually I love this story
I liked how give it an interesting twist to the track
loved how Raman openly shows ishita importance in his life
waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi sweetheart.Finally u update...
L just love u the way u insulting shagun ur story...
Raman and ruhi are so pure and I just love their relationship...
And ishra kya kahu yeh log kahi pai bhi romance suru kar dethe hai...Update soon next part ...love u...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
IshRa having sweet nothing moment
Shagun then interrupted them
Raman was being shameless

Siblings dont need anything apart from teasing their dear Bhai Bhabhi
Raman is nautanki now a days
Ishu feeding him
Ruhi was sad
Shagun was scolded, Adi too shouted
Seeing Adi warming all are happy

i loved how Ishu and Ruhi was compared. And the Kuch Bhi and saree. So cute

IshRa later moments so lovely

Edited by sririt - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb lovely update...
Awesome...
Adi z totally changed..
I loved when he spoke to shagun...
Awesome...

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