AsYa Story: Striking Back- Part 11- Page 61- 16th April - Page 20

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Originally posted by: Linsie


5..

tanveer is marking with farhan...

zoya and farhan.. troubling her...
Tanveer just wants a rich n handsome guy for herself n her baby. Farhan saw her lusting over him so he n Zoya r troubling her by playing games wid her.

asad feel sad and jealous... same time happy that zoya is happy..
Zoya is purposely reminding him of how he favoured Tanveer a lot over her in d past by recreating d same scenes in front of him to hurt him.

both dumb women just confess the crime...

now zohan have proof..
I think one of d proofs may get lost for some time so Razia will not get caught soon. Also, she has more role to play along wid Gaffur in making their daughter Zoya come to them.

Farhan has a bad past to
Yaa, he has a bad past which ruined his childhood😭


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Originally posted by: Linsie


Najma can see changes in zoya..

zeenat can see something different about zoya...
Yaa, they can see but Zoya don't care abt wat they see

The dowry part is good...
It was really very disappointing of Asad giving dat bungalow to Bhaiseena😡

now farhan is also troubling asad...
If some guy had troubled Najma like he troubled Zoya for 7-8 months then Asad wud have killed him. Here, Farhan is Zoya's childhood friend so he can't let Asad go easily.

asad already doubting tanveer...
Yaa, he is finally using his brains😆

can asad do something before zoya teach him to think...

at least prove him not that dumb...

when he carry the business men inside of him...
[Sadly, Asad was dumb of d highest order in d show who always needed proofs to believe sumthn. Even in d end, he was not ready to give Gaffur a benefit of doubt n was not listening to Zoya wen she doubted Tanveer of killing Rashid by saying everyone in house hates Tanveer so she is thinking like dat. It lukd like he forgot wat all Tanveer made them go thru. He only believed d truth after Haider showed him those photos as proofs. In dis story, though Asad is using his brains after all lectures 4m Zoya of never trusting her n wat a dumb man he is but now he will use his brains on his own like in d precap he wants to know abt Tanveer's doctor n her abusive husband. In future, he has a lots of brain to use in dis story wen d spoiler part will be shown of GaZia claiming Zoya as their daughter.]

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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precap is good...

zoya wishing like the couple..


Not just Zoya but everyone will wish to have a good life partner
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spoiler 1...

shocking twist...


Dis twist will be test for Zoya whether she will bcum evil or remain good as her evil parents can influence her on how she never got anything by being good to others.
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Thank u😊
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Awesome update
Loved reading it
Finally zoya is making everyone realize of what they have done with her
Loving this side of zoya
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pm😊


Thank u😊
Zoya has simply stopped seeing d world wid rose-tinted glasses n is behaving more realistcally wid d ones who r responsible for her state in some way or another.
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Promo 3: ZoHan's prank on Imraan, Asad finds out ImVeer's secret

Its Imraan's birthday party. Asad, Zoya, Najma n Farhan enters d house which was d same house given by Asad for Nikhat n Imraan's relation. Asad is in a black suit while Zoya is wearing a sleeveless peach gown wid her hair tied in a bun. She did make-up on her right hand to hide her burn. No one commented on Zoya's clothes as many girls in d party wore western clothes.

"Everyone is praising Qureshis thinking it to be their new home. Bechaare ye nahi jaante ki ye mere pati k taraf dahej hai Qureshis k liye," whispered Zoya in a mocking tone.

Asad is speechless unable to say anything.

Its time for Imraan to cut d cake. As he was abt to cut d cake, Zoya signals Farhan. He smiles n puts a cockroach in Imraan's shirt making his shake n causing his face to dash in his own birthday cake. Imraan is shocked to find his face covered wid cake. Everyone except his family, Nikhat n elders of Siddiqui family starts laughing.

"I never expected such an exciting birthday party," said Haseena's one friend.

"Imraan luks so funny," said Haseena's another friend.

Haseena gets embarrassed. ZoHan smirks at d scene.

"Dis fatso insulted me in Quran Khwani n now her son is insulted," whispered Zoya.

"Imraan always remained silent for Nikhat's insult n now he is facing insult," said Farhan.

Asad tapped on their shoulders shocking them.

"So u both did it," said Asad.

"Awww, Asad is getn concerned for his future jeeju," teased Farhan.

"Do wateva u both want. I don't care," said Asad.

"Why?" asked Zoya teasingly, "I thought u will lecture n insult us for our prank."

"Cuz I agree wid both of u on why u did dat," replied Asad.

ZoHan lukd Asad wid disbelief as he supported their prank.

As d party went on, Asad spotted Tanveer in burqa calling Imraan by signaling him wid her hand. Imraan went to her. He followed him till d garden.

"U have not still given me 10 lakhs. Give me now or I will tell ur secret to everyone dat I am 4 months pregnant wid ur baby. No one knows dis secret. I failed in trapping Asad on his wedding night to make it luk like we slept wid each other n passing our baby as my n Asad's baby as Zoya locked me in d storeroom as she had doubt dat I am upto sumthn to stop her wedding. I can't trap Asad anymore as Zoya is not letn me do dat. I am trying to trap Zoya's friend Farhan but Zoya is not letn me do dat also. So I want u to give me money weneva I ask u otherwise I will expose u in dis party only," said Tanveer.

Asad was shocked at wat he heard. He cud not believe dat his own childhood friend has such a dirty face behind her innocent face. He remembered how Zoya told him many times dat she is more to wat she shows but he only brushed them off as her childishness. He need to talk it wid Zoya even though she hates him very much.

"No no no, don't tell anything. I will give money to u now," said Imraan.

"Good," said Tanveer wid an evil smirk.

Imraan went inside n came back after some time wid a pouch containing money.

"Take them n plz don't say anything," requested Imraan.

"I will come again so be ready," said Tanveer wid a smirk n left leaving him tensed.

Imraan went inside. Asad went inside after some time.

"Its ur birthday & u were outside," said Zoya.

She n Farhan saw him cumn 4m outside wid a tensed face. They did not saw Tanveer in burqa or him going outside so they cud not follow him outside like Asad did.

"III...wwent to a...attend a...a...a call," said Imraan while stammering n went to his friends.

"I think he is hiding sumthn," said Farhan.

"I think d same," said Zoya.

All d guests had left except for Siddiqui family n Asad's family including Farhan.

"We had to tolerate u people in dis party," said Razia.

"We feel d same for u people," said Zoya.

"U have no manners in talking to elders," said Razia.

"1st u go n learn manners then teach me," said Zoya.

"See how ur wife is talking," said Razia to Asad bitterly.

"Its u started so don't blame only my wife," said Asad firmly.

Zoya was puzzled at Asad supporting her dis time as last time he nearly got her deported to New York even after it was she who was slapped by Razia.

"By d way, its Qureshis who invited us so talk to them not us. To impress Qureshis, u did not argued wid them but after d party u r irritating us," mocked Zoya.

Youuu," said Razia angrily n raised her hand to slap her but Zoya caught her hand mid-air.

"U really think dat u can slap me everytime, u dirty woman," said Zoya angrily.

All were shocked to see Zoya talking like dis to Razia. Razia tried to free her hand but Zoya only tightened her grip on her hand. Zoya left her hand roughly.

"U better control ur filthy mouth n hand otherwise I will show u how I slap," warned Zoya.

"U did not stopped ur wife 4m hurting my wife," said Gaffur.

"U did not done d same to ur wife wen she tried to slap my wife," said Asad.

"Wat kind of a zoo is Siddiqui family!" exclaimed Farhan shocking everyone.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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Nice
Glad to see asad is using his brains for some good now
And not under thr witch spell
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very interesting promo
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