Dutta monologue: Gun, noises and the deer

Dutta s monologue..guns, noises and the deer

taz.. quite a bloody start ..yes he was like an angel of doomsday from hell itself, for those he deemed as crooks. Yet there were many widows in Patil wadi he looked out for, got their orphaned daughters married off. His foster mother often remarked, Dutta dodged many a near miss assassination attempts because the prayers of the vulnerable acted as his shield around him. Taz you gave an engaging peek into his seedy underground world of crime. I almost found you justified Dutta's criminalities .. a plea of survival on his behalf in his musings that you have penned rather interestingly. Your reference to Dutta being a witness to a death of a loved one did not go unmissed as a possibility of contributing to his insensitivity.. I loved the final paragraph where the known predator actually fell prey to the vulnerable deer..What a strange predicament where the hunter felt compassion for the hunted.. but could this liaison work? or would Dutta's inherent weakness of distrusting all loved ones pose a threat to his long term happiness? His character needed further fine tuning whereby he would receive his redemptive message that in life one has to trust someone...

finally taz, its great you posted your creative musings again, inspired writing should be shared all the more now, as the intent should be to run the Ishq forum ,like you ,zajendo, mishfan, dazzling,Barbie are doing.. so very beautifully

oh the song from Devdas .. is to do with Dutta wallowing in booze to keep at bay the deception throes he had suffered. Regards hammie