NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 15~CHAPTER 20-UPD 12th Nov

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Prologue

Three Great Emperors had toiled hard to build the vast and flourishing legacy of the 'Mughal Empire', keeping relative peace by unifying its Mughals and Hindus. However; by mid 1600s, cracks began to appear in its solid foundations. Insecurities crept in through the gaps, widening the gulfs between the two religions once again.

With the old Emperor becoming too feeble to take charge and his jealous successors remaining preoccupied with expansion and power, the damage was never repaired. Not surprising then that new rebellions arose every day. Violence escalated, claiming many innocent lives.

Yet; in the midst of such turmoil and peril, there bloomed a beautiful story - much like a lone flower blossoming upon the steepest edges of a cliff - a story of love, of sacrifice and honour!

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Forced to flee from her motherland, the one home she knew... forced to leave behind her people, for whom, she was their only hope...forced to grievously abandon the last rites of her loved one while the flames on the pyre were still ablaze...the orphaned heiress of 16 overcame grief and many shortcomings, as she embarked on a long dangerous path... setting out to seek help and support, for her people and her lands...

Till a chance stay with a complete stranger would change the course of those very plans forever!

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Being the most shrewd, determined and unforgiving of the lot meant he was formidable... a force to be reckoned with... it also meant he could have owned it all - riches, power, women and fame... but, he fancied none of it...

As a recluse with simple tastes, the rich life held no real appeal... power didn't tempt him... women didn't interest him... his passion was work and his only family were a few loyal friends... he had decided that he wanted little else in life...

Till a chance visit from a complete stranger would change that decision forever!

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GLOSSARY OF TERMS

Takht-e-Sulaiman - Solomon's seat i.e. Emperor's throne (Urdu/Persian)
Shehzade - prince (Urdu/Persian)
Shehenshah - Emperor (Urdu/Persian)
Wazir-us-Sultanat - Chief minister (Urdu/Persian)
Farmaan - official decree/document (Urdu/Persian)
Maharaj/Maharani - King/Queen
Maharaj - Chef/Cook
Kunwar - Prince (Generally used in Rajputana)
Baisa - Lady/Miss/Mrs/Madam (Marwari)
Banna - Mr/Sir (Marwari)
Sahib - Mr/Master/Sir (Urdu)
Sahiba - Ms/Mrs/Lady (Urdu)
Dams - copper coins
Vaid - Doctor/Healer
Ustad - Teacher/ Master of arts (Urdu)
Caravansarai - Caravan site
Kotwal - Town chief
Kos - old measurement system of distances, used in India
Tahar - battle axe (Urdu/Persian)
Khuda Hafiz - Farewell greeting which translates into 'May God be your protector' (Urdu/Persian)
Adab/Adaab - Words of Salute/respect (Urdu/Persian)
Taslim - A salute (Mughalian)
Hukum - Sir (Used commonly to address Rajput royalty)
Salaam - A form of greeting that translates to 'Hello/Hi' (Urdu/Persian)
Shubh Ratri - Good evening/Good night (Marwari)
Padhar jo Sa - I shall leave now (Marwari)
Zergul - Calendula flower
Chulho - Wood fire stove
Ganjifa - A card game, slightly similar to poker
Ahadi - Elite bodyguard, who've received specialist training
Muqannis - Specialist canal diggers/workers
Masaka - Mosquito. (Masaka fever - Malaria)

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Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Teaser Picture for Chapter 21

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Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Chapter 20.


Image result for pictures of separated lovers




The story goes thus...

The author has sculpted the chapter in such a way
It had taken the readers to a place very far away
We saw the leading lady leaving her sojourn with a heavy heart
And the protagonist going in pursuit of the farman like a dart
Both unable to get rid of their inner feelings towards the other
The Sahiba often pervaded his thoughts and his heart together
"She is not here, and everything is so empty and lost.."
She reached Bansi, and in Kaakisa's love, relived the past..

He took a disguise and reached Parnagarh with the sole thought
Of getting the farman with the help of the clue he got
From the paheli she told him some days ago
Hoping to find it before anyone about which would know
Kaakisa announced her wedding thinking it would be for her best
But it was a thunderbolt , which Kaakisa couldn't have guessed
She tried to voice her protest to her godmother somehow
The reason, in the innermost heart , only she did know.

The brief meeting of Shezadi and Kalil, the muscleman
Makes the readers guess about the action that will be taken
By the Prince to speed up the process of finding the farman
Which functions as the vital organ of the story from the day it began
Will he succeed in getting hold of the farman?
And hand it over to the Prince as an honest man?
What will she do when she meets the proposer?
Will she find out that he is an imposter?
Thus Part two has begun with lots of questions
That the readers in their mind have in succession.
"Will the lovers meet and will they succeed to find
The love that had sprouted in their virgin minds?
The story is like a luxury liner, smoothly sailed by the Captain
Who carefully handles the high and the low tides with a passion
We are the passengers who enjoy the cruise
And carry the experience we love to muse!

Karkuzhali.

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wow lashy another fresh new thread 🥳congo fr thread no 15...😎
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congrats lashy Di for new thread
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congrats for new thread, Lashy...
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for whom??😕
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Thank you girls... 🤗
@ Diksha ...😆

I've reserved it, in case I need it, for Chapter 21 😳

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