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Part 3(a)

From next day Nandini started collecting her desired things which according to her was necessary to take revenge from Manik... and on same week she got her chance when Navya told her that she was going out tonight with cabir...


Nandu thought to execute her plan on the same night... An evil smirk came across her lips while thinking her plan... Cabir told her before leaving that Manik is not at home...he will be late...

And this information was enough for her... after they left she started executing her plan...


1st she cross her balcony and came in his... And then after checking the balcony door which was not locked at that time... she entered in his room... And then walked towards the sitting area of there flat...

At 1st she dropped a red liquid on different spots .From their main enterence door to his room on different places she poured that liquid which seems like blood...


Then she came back in his room and pulled out his towel from his almirah ... she poured a lil liquid on his towel too and then after folding it placed it back on his bed... then she hanged 2 different bony structures in his room with invisible strings...(one behind a curtain near window and other near his bathroom... In his bathroom she wrote scary words with same red liquid...


After completing her task she gave a satisfying look on his room and said to herself: Ab maza aye ga...


Then she came back in her flat through the same balcony route...

Manik returned from his office at around 8 pm... and after entering he noticed that complete silence and darkness in his flat... he immediately pressed button to switched on the light ... but only 1 dim light brighten at that moment...


With confused face he again pressed all buttons on the main switch board but same result..

Manik thought: strange... sirf yeh aik bulb on hoa... baqi kuch nahi...

In the same shocked condition he decided to 1st get freshen up and then to see this problem...so he started moving towards his room ... But again stopped when his eyes caught the view of that red liquid on the floor...


He sat near that spot and checked what was that but didn't find any reasonable answer...

With same confusion Manik put his gaze in whole sitting area and found different spots on the floor...

He thought: What is all this... kahein Cabir ne phir se koi prank to nahi tyar kiya kisi k liye...


He dialed Cabir's number and asked him his whereabout...

And he told him that he is with Navya...

After this call Manik's mind started thinking: Naaa Cabir to navya k sath hai to phir yeh sub...mujhe pata karna hoga...kuch to garbar hai...?


He started walking towards his room... After entering in he tried to turn on light but again same thing happened here also...Only a night bulb in his room brightened nothing else...

In this dim light Manik saw a shadow behind a curtain...


With calculative steps he moved towards that curtain and with a daring heart he moved that curtain at 1 side and got a heartattack when a bony structure fell in his feet with a bang ...

While gluping hard he moved back in reflex and gave a deep look on that bony structure...His breath as well as his heartbeats were not even now...then to get back a grip on himself he closed his eyes and tried to control his mind with deep long breaths... It helps him to relax a bit...


After calming down a bit...his mind started working... and he tried to gather all dots to come on some conclusion.

That red liquid spots ... almost no light in house... and now this bony structure...Hmmm

While thinking on this track... his eyes caught again an unusual thing... his balcony door was a lil ajar...


Manik with surprised expression marched towards that door and after opening it came out in balcony... he looked here and there ... And then a shiny small material caught his attension ...

He walked in that direction and after picking that material... Gave a thoughtful look to that thing...

And with that look his relaxing smile came back on his face coz now he knows what is all this and who did this... (Unknowingly he blabbers while seeing her bracelet)Nandini...Their Morning encounter played infront of his eyes like a film when he told her ... Mujh se revenge lena hai to kuch aur socho...


Manik blabber: So Miss Murty wants to take revenge... wo bhi aisey... ( a mischievous smirk came on his face) Not Bad... lagta hai os din k baad se kafi time searching pe lagay hai... aur agar yeh (he again looked at her bracelet which due to her negligence fell in his balcony) mujhe yahan nahi milta to main parehsan to zaror hota...hmmm... I am impressed... (while nibbling his lower lip) Dim lights... this bony structure... and that red blood like liquid...Perfect scary atmosphere...but I think aur bhi kuch baqi hoga... mujhe pahle dekh lena chaheye...


Aur waise bhi I know tum mujhe check karne bhi ao gi yahan... so ...( lopsided smile) I am waiting for you ... Miss NANDINIII Murty... he stretched her name while enjoying this scene...

After this he came back in his room and said to himself...Chalo beta Manik... dekhte haan k Miss Nandini ne aur kya kya plan kiya tha...


With this he started checking his whole room for anyother scary thing or material...

Here Nandini after completing her work looked at the time and said to herself: Ayiooo itna late... itna late kaise ho gayi... mujhe to Manik ko check karna tha na...(while thinking this a mischievous smile came on her face)Manik wapis a gya hoga... (with her cutest puppy face) mujhe os ka scary face dekhna tha...(then a thought came in her mind and she blabber)... but agar wo a gya hota... tou oski cheekh ki awaz to ani chaheye thi... Kya pata wo ab tak wapis aya hi na ho...mujhe ja k confirm karna chaheye...She came in her balcony and then after crossing it walked near Manik's room through his balcony...


She peeked into his room...but found totally darkness there... Coz after checking his room and then his bathroom Manik went out in sitting area and started waiting for her...

She came in with slow steps while blabbering: Ab tak nahi aya... But then her eyes caught the view of that bony structure on the floor...


In astonishment she jabber in a bit loud voice: huhhh yeh floor pe kaise gir gya ?

Mnaik heard her voice in complete silence and now he decided to march towards his room...

Nandini worriedly ran towards that structure and after picking up she again started to hang it on its place... She was on her toes while doing her work and didn't noticed that Manik has entered in his room...


Manik saw her doing something with that bony structure and at instant he switched on that night bulb for some light...

Nandini on this sudden brightness startled in her place... in panic she also looses her balance and was about to fell on the floor when 2 strong arms caught her in the way...

Nandini's eyes were closed in fear and her hands moved up in the air in fright...

Manik caught her in his arms and looked at her fearful face and her motionless state...


He jokingly said in his mind: tch tch mujhe darate darate ... khud dar gaye...

Manik with a smirk pulled her up in his arms to make her straight in her position...

Nandini s eyes opened at once on this pull and now fixed on his magical eyes...


Manik's eyes also gazed in hers and found an ocean of pure innocence there...Nandini in her dazed state looked at him without blinking her lashes ...In moon light which was coming from the window... His face was captivating her senses...


Manik saw her dazed state and his famous lopsided smile appears on his lips... to bring her back from her lala land he leaned near her ear and asked: We can continue this in this romantic atmoshphere if u want ...

At 1st a wrinkle appears on her face after hearing his words but when Nandini's mind registered his words her eyes become big like saucer...


She came out of his grip and with her puppy face said animatedly: O hello... Aisa kuch nahi hai ok... pata nahi khud ko kya samjhte ho... huh...?Badey aye Romance continue karne wale... Huhhh

Manik watched her talk with keen interest and enjoyed her antics a lot...


He placed his hand on her waist and pulled her again near him ... with naughty eyes he asked: Really Nandu... aisa kuch nahi hai...

Nandini: Hmmm (while trying to come out of his grip)

Manik leaned his face near hers and said: So itnaaa ghoor ghoor k mujhe kyo dekh rahe thi...

On his question she gave an unbelieveable look to him and said: Huh... kab?

Manik was now totally in a teasing mood so said: abhi... Kuch time pahle...


Nandini pushed him back and said with cute pouty face: G nahi... mujhe apni ankhein kaharab karni hai kya ... tumhai aise ghoor k..

Manik with amusinglook and smile said: Really... mujhe aise ghoorne se tumhari ankhein kharab hoon gi...?

Nandini like a kid nodded in yes...


Manik holds her hand and pulled her on himself with a jerk...

Nandini got shock on his act and in surprise she looked at him while blabbering his name...Manik...

Manik deeply gazed on her face and then said huskily: I don't think so... k mujhe aisey dekhne se tumhari ankhein kharb hoon gi...

Nandini s face wrinkled up on his strange behavior and in surprise she said: Manik leave me...

Manik shook in no and told her: Nooo ab tou tumhe merey sath yeh game khelna pare ga...


Nandini with sqyuinted eyes asked: Game? Which game?

Manik: yehi eyelock game...?

Her eyes widened on his demand but then she said in attitude: aur agar main na khelon to?

Mnaik with a smirk blackmailed her: To main cabir and navya ko yeh kah doon ga... k tum un ki absence me yahan...merey flat mein... Wo bhi balcony se aye ho...wo bhi raat ko... and then ... You know na k un k mind me kya kya kuch aye ga...


Nandini's eyes popped out on this and she replied in disbelieving tone: Nooo tum aisa kuch nahi karo gey...

Mnaik leave her and then stands infront of her with folded arms said: Try me sweety... tum ne abhi Manik Mal...(then stopped at once coz he knew that Nandini ko os ka full name nahi pata abhi tak)I mean Manik ko tum ne abhi jana hi kitna hai...


Nandini with angry puppy face: Aur mujhe janna bhi nahi hai...? she started leaving from there... but stopped in her track when she heard his voice...

Mnaik started pretending like he dialed cabirs number and now he was talking to him...


Manik: Haan cabir...kahan hai yaar tu? Mujhe tujhe kuch batana hai... Infact Navya agar terey sath hai to aur bhi acha hai...

Nandini's breath hitched in her throat... She a once turned and ran towards Manik... And then she pulled his phone from his hand and ended the call...

Manik smiled on his success and said Bingooo in his mind...

Nandini warned him: Tum Navya ko kuch nahi batao gey... Ok...


Manik like the most innocent and obedient kid: Ok... but u have to play that game with me...

Nandini thought for a while and then reluctantly said : Ok...

Manik's heart did a bhangra coz he started liking her company... He wanted to spend his time with this cute naughty girl...who was affecting his nevers on daily basis...and with this excuse he will get what ...he want...

Manik made her sit on his bed and said: Ok u wait here I'll be back... Change kar loon pahle...

Nandini : Hmmm


During this time she thought: hey ayiappa... Yeh kya kar rahe ho app merey sath... aur main kyo is kharoos ki baat maan rahe hoon... this eye to eye game...hmmm... Kya karon ab...(then it clicked in her mind that he went in bathroom but no scream came out of him) while putting her finger between her teeth she thought... Main ne to mirror pe os red liquid se kafi kuch likha tha... is ne read nahi kiya ya isey aisi cheezon se dar nahi lagta...Strange?


Manik came out of his bathroom in his vest and trouser...

Nandini unknowingly picked the same towel and fwded that to Manik...

But Manik with a smile refused to take that towel and mocked: No thanks...abhi fresh ho k aya hoon aur ab mera cartoon banne ka koi irada nahi hai...


And his mocking way and taunted words told her that he knew all what she did in his room...

Nandini in surprise said unbelievably:so... you know...?

Manik knew meaning of his words and in naughtyness he nodded in yes...

Nandini looked at him with surprise and that's when Mnaik came and sat with her...


He turned to face her and said: so lets start...

And Nandini who was in her thoughts said: Hmmm...

Manik : 1 2 3 and Go... And with this both started seeing in eachothers eyes without blinking...


Nandini was still thinking about him while locking her eyes with his: yeh sub kya ho raha hai... Manik... why is he not shouting at me... isey sub pata chal gya tha... And I think merey yahan ane se pahle hi yeh sub kuch dekh chukka tha... phir bhi ... Pahle mujhe girne se bachaya and now yeh game and all...(then unintensionally she tried to read the language of his eyes) how deep his eyes are...and some strange thing in there ...kya hai wooo? ... (then her mind asked to her) but Nandini tujhe kyu janna hai k kya hai oski ankhon me...

Here Manik was also lost in her eyes... and for him her eyes were like an open book... he read that whole book in a blink of his eyes... coz her eyes were giving the picture of her innocent and pure heart... she was not like other girls... she is special...(he accepted in his heart )yes she is special... very special...


There eyeslocking game got disturbe on the next moment when whole city turned black due to the sudden power failure...

Manik who was afraid of dark holds her hand in his and Nandini who was busy in his thoughts came back to the world... She observed a blackout there only a dim moon light was there which was coming through a window... And then she noticed that Manik holds her hand... and his touch told her that he is not fine ...

She called his name worriedly: Manik... but he didn't reply... Instead his grip over her hand tightened more... and this thing told Nandini about his fear ... she also observed in that dim light that his eyes were tightly closed and his breath was also not normal...


She immediately grabs his other hand and said in her soothing voice: Manik look...don't worry main hoon yahan... tum akele nahi ho... she placed her hand on his face and assured him warmly ... see... I am here...

And Manik tried to see her face in that moon light...

She slowly drag himout in the balcony... and said after looking all around: I think pure city ki light gaye hai...

But Manik's focus was only on her innocent face...The purity of her face increased in that moon light...The serene light emitted from her face helps him to overcome his fear...

Then Manik noticed that Nandini was still holding his hand and he liked her care for himself...


That's the time when cupid's arrow strikes his heart...and he confessed in his heart that yes this loveable , innocent girl is the love of my life...

Nandini looked at his face and noticed his dazed expression... She patted his shoulder lightly and asked: Manik U ok na... dekho I know u were not feeling well in dark but see yahan to kitni pyarai si moon light hai...

Manik heard her words and then after nodding his head said: Thanks Nandini...

Nandini confusingly: Thanks for what


Manik: Thanks for understanding me...(in very slow voice he told) u know Dad k alawa ajj tak kisi ko yeh nahi pata k I am afraid of dark ... aur tumhe bhi main ne nahi bataya but tumhe pata chal gya...

Nandini to make the atmosphere light said: Arey is me kon si rocket science lagti hai... aur waise bhi I am a very brilliant girl...so mujhe pata chal hi jata hai... and Mr Friend(she warned him at the end with playful voice)agey se mujh se bach k rahna... coz main tumhare sare secrets bhi na... aise hi jaan loon gi... so don't underestimate me next time... Ok...

Manik smiled on her words...


Then Nandini asked in concern: Now if u r feeling fine to main tumhe bata doon k wo tumhari game main jeet gayi hoon ok...

Manik saw her kiddish way to divert his mind and started laughing...

Nandini amazingly looked at him and asked like a kid: U r laughing at me... Manik u are so Bad... main tumhari help kar rahe hoon abhi bhi aur tum mujh pe hans rahe ho...

Manik's laugh stop at once and then while leaning over her said: Sorry... But u look so cute...(he pulled her chubby cheeks) jab tum aise karti ho...


A tint of pink shed came on her cheeks but on next sec after getting her composer she said in attitude: U better be...

Manik gave her his killer smirk in reply and his smrik teased her heart strings...In her presence Mnaik forgot all about his fear of dark... And her company started brightening his life...

Manik looked at her face and then said teasingly: Nandini yeh situation kuch filmy nahi lag rahe...

Nandini with raised eyes gazed at him and said: Kon si?

Manik: Yehi... Blackout... alone hero aur heroine ... and this moon light...


Nandini's mind alerted her coz he was true ... she saw in movies and dramas this type of situations always leads to form a love story...She averted her gaze from him and said in broken words: No... aisa kuch... nahi hai... aur waise bhi we are not hero and heroine of any serial or film ok...

Manik observed her expression and then her averted eyes and his smile brightened on this and he teased herfurther: Really aisa kuch nahi hai...

Nandini: Hmmm


Manik grabs her in his arm and said husckily while looking straight in her eyes: Imagine... I am hero and you are my heroine...( Nandini's heart beat fasten on this idea)... Manik continued with same dreamy voice... main aur tum... yahan moon light me akele...No one is here to disturbe us... neither cabir nor navya...(Nandini's mind also give atry to this idea and her faced showed him that she started visualizing that scene)

Manik: Tum aur main... Manik aur Nandini... Dono akele...merey room me...

Nandini'eye popped out on imagining this scene and she shouted at once: Busss... she like a kid put her hands on her ear and said: Mujhe aur kuch nahi sunna... Plzzz...(coz while imagining this her minds leads her into a totally different world)

Manik saw her condition and then while hiding his smile said:Y... kuch kuch hota hai kya?


Nandini gave an angry glare to him and said: Nooo kuch nahi hota ok...

Manik didn't like this angry face of hers at this moment so he raised his hands in defeat and said: Ok I am sorry... main bus mazak kar raha tha...

Nandini with angry eyes judged his face and then said: Ok...

Manik in surprise said; Itni jaldi maan gayi...?


Nandini smiled like a child and in her chirpiness said: Hmmm I am just like this...mujhe gusa karna acha nahi lagta...and then started telling him her childhood stories... all her naughtyness with her amms and chachi...

Mnaik observed in her whole talk she didn't mention about her parents... so he thought to ask ...

Manik: Nandini what about your parents...

Nandini stopped at once... all her chirpiness vanished in a thin air...and a lone tear came in her eyes... which told Manik that he asked a wrong question...


After controlling her emotions Nandini told Manik about her life... that she spent her childhood with amms and chacha chachi... Her parents lived in U.S at that time due to their business ...and after 16 years finally when they winded up their business from there and thought to come back ... Their plane crashed and they left her forever...

Manik heard all this with sadness but on seeing her condition his heart sank...he immediately placed his hand around her shoulder like a true friend and pressed it lightly to give her courage... then he said: hay Nandini don't be sad we all are here with you... And see tumhare parents' jahan bhi hoon gey tumhe aise hanste hoe dekh k khush hote hoon gey...


Nandini with unbelievable look asked: Really... wo happy hon gey na...?

Manik: with an assuring smile said: Hmmm... Bohat bohat bohat khush hoon gey... So now remove your tears and smile...




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Edited by cute-aly - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

yipeee i am first 😃😃
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Originally posted by: heemasomani


yipeee i am first 😃😃



🥳yipeee congratzzz 🤗
Edited by cute-aly - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wah I really love this bubbly and cute nandu
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Originally posted by: cute-aly



🥳yipeee congratzzz 🤗


ty dear 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow they are coming emotionally case..aew soo cute...continue soon..waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update api..
full on manan moments..
nandu's prank..manik thora sa darr gaya..
nandu caught red handed..
he he he..
eye to eye game..how romantic..
classic girne wala moment was adorable..
manik's fear..nandu's pain..
beautifully written..
well done api..
God bless you
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Posted: 8 years ago
WoW.. Interesting update. oh gosh. kya plan tha nandu ka.. kya dimag lgatii h Nandu to.. Kya atmosphere bnaya.. hehehe manik thoda dara bhi . but nandu ki ek choti si mistake se manik sb smjh gyaa. phir to manik ko.plan hi pta chal gya.. hahah. nandu bhi na kitnii cute h.. manik never leaves a chance to tease nandu .. Kaise eye to eye game.. hahah ... that wass fun. Manik is afraid of darkness. but nandu handled it. wow.. Manik told about nandu his fear. he confessed to himself... wow.. Nandu ohh poor baby. she doesn't have parents .. But manik h na use samjhane k liye. beautiful update. Waiting for next update. Update soonish
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Nandu's prank was superb
But manik is so smart
Eyelock game
Loved it
Loved how manik comforted her
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow...
Amazing...
Interesting...
Awesome...
Wat a scary set up for manik...lol..
Waiting for next eagerly😊😛

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