Kisseh kahu Haya ss chapter one on page 2

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Prolongue
What happens when one daughter is discriminated with other daughter by her own father??
What happens when that Daughter's everything is snatched by other daughter??
What happens when that daughter's only support ,her mother dies??
Will she get her share of happiness??
Will she get that someone who will take her all pain away ,take care of her and cherish her??

To find out more do read this short story...




Hi there,
sana here, i am writing this stort story on haya on the celebration of hundred episodes

hope u all like it
do like n comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Introduction

Nimmi aaj aakhir kar woh din ah hi gaya , jis k lye mai mahino se intazaar karatha... Aaj tum ne mujhe woh kushi di hai, joh mujhe koi au nai deh sakta said Mohinder happily to Nimmi

Suddenly a nurse came running towards them and said Sir aapke judwa bacho ki halat bohot nazuk hai.. aap please humareh saath chalye and both of them ran towards kids ward where both the kids were kept in incubator ... When Both Mohinder and nurse reached there doc came out of the ward and said to mohinder aapki beti ko toh humne bacha lya lekin aapke bete ko hum nai bacha paye , am sorry , he patted mohinder's shoulder and went from there...



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Character Sketch

Ayub Khan : Maninder

Reena Kapoor: Nimmi

Rubina Dilaik: soumya

Vivian Dsena : Harman

Kamya Pinjabi : preeto

Sudesh Berry : Harak singh

Seema Mishra : Surbhi

( I dont like roshini sahota at all so instead of her i took seema mishra as surbhi but her surbhi is elder sister of soumya not younger sis)


Garima jain: Raavi


these are the main characters of the story...


rest of them will be introduced as the story continues


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting... Waiting to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: zubeada

plz continue
waiting for update..


sure dear will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting waiting for the update
pls continue soon
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Chapter one

12 years old soumya crying sitting near her mother's death body and saying mumma utho na please mumma mujhe chor k mat Jao

Nimmi died by giving birth to her third child but both the child and mother couldn't survive...

Men started to take body for funeral , soumya started crying hestyrically calling her mumma ko chorro mat lejao screamed crying soumya ...

MAAA... Screamed soumya waking from her sleep , this was the dream seen by soumya daily...

Same nightmare she used to see from the day she lost her mother...

Soumya drank water and saw the time it's 4 am , it was her daily routine to wake up by this nightmare and get started for new day...

Morning 9am

Soumya got ready for college but before that she prepared breakfast for everyone and arranged it on the dinning table , she had her bf in kitchen itself and no one likes her presence in front of them...

SOUMYAAA! screamed kalsi enter the house
Dadi got irritated by this behavior of kalsi and shouted at her and said Sharam Naam ki koi cheez nai hai kya jab Dekho muh utha k chali aati ho and ush manhush ka Naam chilati ho subha subha...

Kalsi smiled and said dadi aap shayad bhool Rahi hai aap jisseh manhush bol Rahi ho woh ish Ghar ki Malkin hai and dadi made bad face and went to her room

( Yes soumya is owner of the house not only house but whole property because nimmi was daughter of rich business man she made soumya ower of the house and owner of whole property to save her from maninder's hatred as maninder owns nothing he runs nimmi's company just as a care taker as soon as soumya turns 21 she will be owner of every single thing and if anything happens to soumya ,maninder's and his mother will be held responsible)

Kalsi is soumya's childhood best friend , she is more like protector of soumya...

Kalsi tu yaha said soumya happily and hugged, kalsi to smiled and hugged her back and asked her kaisi ho aur ab tumhara bhukar kaisa hai , keeping her hand on soumya's forehead

Mai ab bilkul theek hu said soumya and smiled

Soumya noticed dadi cursing her going to her room

Kalsi tune dadi ko aisa kya bola k woh aise room mai chailgai?? Asked soumya
Kalsi replied mai toh bus yahi bola k tu ish Ghar ki Malkin hai aur woh muh bana k chali gai ish mai Meri kya galati hai...

Kalsi tune aisa kyu kaha , unhe kitna bura lagraha hoga said soumya sadly

Oye soumu tujhe unlogo ki fikar hai, hummeh yeh tak pata k tu pechle do din se bhukar mai tarap Rahi hai said kalsi angrily

Acha chor ye sab , chal ab college Jana hai certificates collect Karne said soumya picking her bag and held kalsi dragging her with her

On way to college,

Soumya tujhe Pata hai na k Meri shaadi teh ho chuki hai said Kalsi

Haan pata hai aur jeeju bhi bohot handsome hai said soumya mulching her favorite chocolate

Woh aaj na college k Baad woh mujhse Milne arahe hai apne friend k Saath said Kalsi nervously , fearing soumya's reaction

WHATTT!! Screamed soumya , making auto come to hault with a jerk

Soumya apologize to the driver and her started to drive again

Tu pagal hai , last week hi tu mili thi unseh ab phir se, tu toh maregi hi Saath mai mujhe bhi marvayegi whispered soumya angrily

Please na soumu chalna, woh DurgaMa k mandir k pass toh cafe Haina waha woh 2:00 ko ayenge please chalna Raavi bhi hummeh mandir k pass hi milegi please chalna pleaded kalsi making cute puppy face

(Raavi is soumya's and kalsi's college best friend)
Soumya couldn't resist that face and finally agreed to come

Yeyy kalsi rejoiced

They reached college and went to meet principal and collected their certificates and meet all their teachers and batch mates, it was already 1:30 pm , they hurried out of the college and when to the temple

Raavi saw kalsi and soumya coming and waved her hand to them... They too saw her and came near her and hugged each other ... Soumya saw her watch it was 1:40 so she said tum dono yahi wait karo mai mandir ho aati hu, they nodded and soumya went to mandir and did her darshan , while coming back she got hit by a lady

She said sorry sorry Aunty ki Maine aapko jateh hue Ni dekha , aapko lagi toh ni... Ni beta mai bilkul theek hu said the lady and soumya bend down to pick up the thaali and collected the things and gave it to the lady...

Auntyji aap sorry dekha Ni , kaisi hai aap??? Asked soumya as she hugged her...

Mai bilkul theek hu putar tu kaisi hai?? Asked lady mai bhi theek hu...

Acha aunty aaj thori jaldi mai hu Kal pakka mileage said soumya and hugged the lady again and went

Pagal larki sab ka khayal hai lekin apna Ni said lady smilingly and shook her head and went from there

Kya yaar soumu kitna late kardya tune said kalsi and all of them hurried to the near by cafe...

Sorry guys to make u all wait for so long because !y students exams were going on and last week my aunt passed away so I was pretty occupied with all these

Please do not like and comment
Love sana



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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing upadate dear
nice decision by nimmi kept entire property on the name of soumya
waiting for next part eagerly update it soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update Sana
kalsi, ravi nd soumya are frnds. what about surabhi ?
where is she ? soumya nd surabhi bonding is strong or not?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Supervampire

awesome update Sana

kalsi, ravi nd soumya are frnds. what about surabhi ?
where is she ? soumya nd surabhi bonding is strong or not?


Thanks dear

About surbhi's and soumya's bond u will get to in next chapter

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