'Khyaal Rakhna Chahiye Tha na Uska':Shivaay

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys!
Thanks for the overwhelming comments on my FF😃 I'll update tomorrow morning.
Will keep this post short as I'm unwell, and rather sleepy😆
BTW, ADHM is amazing, watch it😃

Just for a few more seconds, he ordered himself to be patient as he saw her drenched face and too warm body. Her hand was about to slip from his and he gripped it harder, without hurting her. Only one thought kept him from collapsing that moment: Anika needs his help. And so, armed with an ice pack, he cooled her down, feeling each bead of sweat that made her skin glisten like burnished gold. Why did it feel as if half of him was burning with her while the rest of him was made to live through these moments of living hell?
He did not know what was worse: The earlier moments when he'd been informed that Anika was missing, the time when he sensed she was around but could not get to her, or the moments now when she was right in front of him, unconscious and barely breathing.
Another part of him was livid at not being with her. Fear for her in his absence had been haunting him for some days now and each day brought some new near-injury in its wake.
It dawned on him that she could take care of herself but somehow, somehow, he needed to help her do it. He didn't even realize when the need to keep her safe became stronger than anything else. This worry for her that was exposed every time she's in trouble, it tore apart the cool mask he tried to maintain only to reveal her pain mirrored in him.
Taking a deep breath, focusing on only the feeling of her hand in his, Shivaay Singh Oberoi prepared himself to go through the next excruciating set of seconds till she finally opened her beautiful eyes and looked at him, justifying his presence in the world that had begun to matter to him more than the world he lived in.

Okay, that's it.
I truly loved the scene. I don't know how Nakuul ups the intensity every time Anika is in trouble or is about to be hurt. It's wonderful.
P.S: 'Khyaal rakhna chahiye tha na uska'

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Narbhi and esp Nakuul nailed it today.
Khayal rakhna chayie tha na us ka omg shivay is totally mad abt him
Plus he sensed her again. He is gonna be ideal husband. I m telling u this
When he saw her fainted and rushed towards her, was mind blowing
Before lifting her, he gently stroked his hand on her hair. it was sweet adorable gesture
Then ice pack scene. Eyes of Shivay was telling that if something happened to her, he would also not able to live.
NAkuul is an awesome actor.
Proud to be shivikian, NArbhi and NAkuul fab
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks geet for this lovely post🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonikins

Narbhi and esp Nakuul nailed it today.

Khayal rakhna chayie tha na us ka omg shivay is totally mad abt him
Plus he sensed her again. He is gonna be ideal husband. I m telling u this
When he saw her fainted and rushed towards her, was mind blowing
Before lifting her, he gently stroked his hand on her hair. it was sweet adorable gesture
Then ice pack scene. Eyes of Shivay was telling that if something happened to her, he would also not able to live.
NAkuul is an awesome actor.
Proud to be shivikian, NArbhi and NAkuul fab


I agree.. there are so many shifts to his expressions and gestures..the whole team is brilliant..the direction, his acting, the writing of the characters, its so good that Shivaay is seen as crazed, more and more each time, when something happens to anika.
Wonderfully sketched and acted out👏👏

And thank you Soni! Glad you liked it🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet.a


I agree.. there are so many shifts to his expressions and gestures..the whole team is brilliant..the direction, his acting, the writing of the characters, its so good that Shivaay is seen as crazed, more and more each time, when something happens to anika.
Wonderfully sketched and acted out👏👏

And thank you Soni! Glad you liked it🤗


I always like ur post. Due to my busy schedule i m not able to reply regularly but ur posts are treat to read. 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonikins


I always like ur post. Due to my busy schedule i m not able to reply regularly but ur posts are treat to read. 👏


Aw, that's okay! As long as you like to read my work, it's all good😳
I did start writing a FF if you're interested😆 ab self promotion toh karni padegi thodi na?😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely post Geet ❤️ ..
It was very telling to OmRu who just watched him fuss over Annika with matching empathy. They can see how far gone Shivaay is in his feelings. But he has to go through this battle , sselfless loving heart vs calculatingly arrogant brain.

I kept wondering, there was that episode that he woke up shouting her name , like he had a nightmare that she was on trouble. Since then , he's been on high alert around her for signs of danger. He's worried for her, but doesn't want to talk about feelings...

I need a jealousy track so badly !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I loved the way he sensed her today..

he always does.. but today this power of his senses helped him.. and it definitely proved that Shivaay and Anika are connected forever.. they are connected into a unbreakable bond.. coz he can never erase this feeling and power of sensing her and always being their either purposely or by destiny...

I loved the way SHIVIKA are going ahead..

even I thought that the scenes are repeated BUT
after watching the episode ... I am happy that its repeating because ealthough each time the scene repeats but The Connection gets stronger and even more "MEANINGFUL"

sensing Anika at home was romantic
but sensing anika in problem is Connection to eternity and each passing day its getting stronger

❤️


lovely post babe (AS ALWAYS)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnnzSageflower7

Lovely post Geet ❤️ ..

It was very telling to OmRu who just watched him fuss over Annika with matching empathy. They can see how far gone Shivaay is in his feelings. But he has to go through this battle , sselfless loving heart vs calculatingly arrogant brain.

I kept wondering, there was that episode that he woke up shouting her name , like he had a nightmare that she was on trouble. Since then , he's been on high alert around her for signs of danger. He's worried for her, but doesn't want to talk about feelings...

I need a jealousy track so badly !


Thank you Ann!🤗
Absolutely agree with you!

I so so wanted to know what he had seen too. But he's become protective, he watches Anika all the time and is sensitive to her tiniest moves.
Feelings se kaafi aage badh chuke hain SSO. Ab toh junoon dikh raha hai😳

Possessiveness might happen in the future, but I doubt there will be jealousy so soon. Maybe when Tia leaves😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritzz

I loved the way he sensed her today..

he always does.. but today this power of his senses helped him.. and it definitely proved that Shivaay and Anika are connected forever.. they are connected into a unbreakable bond.. coz he can never erase this feeling and power of sensing her and always being their either purposely or by destiny...

I loved the way SHIVIKA are going ahead..

even I thought that the scenes are repeated BUT
after watching the episode ... I am happy that its repeating because ealthough each time the scene repeats but The Connection gets stronger and even more "MEANINGFUL"

sensing Anika at home was romantic
but sensing anika in problem is Connection to eternity and each passing day its getting stronger

❤️


lovely post babe (AS ALWAYS)


@bold: FEEELSSS!!!!

Yes, the meanings have been changing and becoming more visible to OTHERS too.. It's wonderful..
and shivaay can sense anika through closed doors as well.even when she's unconscious, that HAS to happen only in case of a deep connection, sigh..I'm giving myself more shivika feels thanks to you!

LOVE you🤗

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