Kaya FF : Gustaakh Dil , A Fairytale Lovestory(Part 7(2): Page 32) - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

awesum
kabir n dangerous 😆
update soon
thanks for pm

Thank-you so much dear 😊
Ya right 😆
Will surely update soon
No need to thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali25899

Its sooo awesome

Just loved it😳

Thank-you so much khushboo
Glad you loved it 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Agnishikha007

Haii vaishnavi , this story is very different & very interesting also. But this one too short. Next time we need long update. Nice ,very nice start. Please pm me when u update. Update soon please.

Thank-you so much dear
Glad you loved it
I will try to give long updates next time
Will surely pm you 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Superb update

Loll ananya got shocked by shocked
Knowing kabir knew abt her
She was so confused why kabir suddenly start conversation with her
On the other hand kabir was in ananya's dream
He thinks ananya is best choice for him
Loll he knew ananya scared of him & he checked himself in mirror so funny
Even asked his brother poor rajveer was so confused by kabir behavior
Continue plz

Thank-you so much dear
Ofcourse afterall he has to make sure that he is perfect for ananya 😉
Ya right poor rajveer 😆
Will surely continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sutapabanerjee

Hi

a nice update.
the last portion was hilarious, Ananya making a lame excuse and Kabir waking up Rajveer to know how he looks.
Ananya is in dilemma.
its turning interesting.
Hope you update soon,
Love
Sutapa

Thank-you so much sutapa 😊
Glad you enjoyed it
I will make sure that it will be interesting for you till last 😉
Will update in 2-3 days
You know as I am in 12th, don't get much time to write 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: zoyaimran21

Lovely update
Poor ananya was so confused about kabir behaviour 😉
And kabir was sooo funny in the last part 😆
Poor rajveer can't understand why kabir was behaving like that
Thanks for pm
Plz update soon

Thank-you so much dear 😊
Glad you enjoyed it 😊
No need to thanks for the pm
Will update in 2-3 days 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Zannat.

Another

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update👏

so ..Kabir thinks Ananya is perfect for him
Ananya is dreaming about Kabir
so KaYa...

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Thank-you so much zannat di
Glad you liked it 😊
Haha lets see how will they get together 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Arohi6

ab iska b update de do...after "hmko pyaar hua"...I m waiting despretly. ..pretty please:)

You will for sure get update in 2-3 days 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Santa Clause is hear with few gifts for you
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha😆
So today you are going to get three updated of Gustaakh Dil
You know Diwali Bonus😉
But a sad neews also that these 3 updates will be the last updates of this year
As my pre boards are going to start so now I will not be able to update till April 2017
So its like a compensation to all of you more than a gift😉😛
Big Big Shollie😭




CHAPTER 3

NEXT MORNING

9:00 am

We can see a girl sleeping on the bed with a sweet smile on her lips . Her daadi calls her numerous times to wake her up but she was in her own sweet world . Then she started shaking her and with a irritated voice girl said

G-kya hai daadi sone do na

D-ab chup chap uth jao anu , subah ke 9 baj gaye

A-par mujhe sona hai

D-bilkul nahi , chalo utho .

Ananya woke up half open eyes and pouted

A-kya daadi , thodi der aur sone deti

D-bilkul nahi , chalo utho , aur shayad aaj tumhara test hai na classes mein

Ananya while standing up said "hmm"

And goes to washroom to freshen up , when she came back she went to her phone

A-chalo dekhe zara koi notification ya msg aaya hai kya

She sat down on sofa talking to herself when suddenly she jumped out of shock seeing the message of "HIM"

A(making a crying face)-not again yaar , ab yehi bach gaya tha ki Mr Kabir Sharma mujhe Gud Morning bhi wish kare , ek to vaise bhi mujhe inka behaviour kuch samajh nahi aa raha and now this too .(Then with a determined face)aaj to main Rajveer se baat karke ye sab clear zaroor karungi .

She took a deep breath and goes to her room for revision.

Here At Other Side

A man dressed in Red plane T shirt and blue jeans was sitting on his dining table with his phone in his hand .

K(talking to himself)-hmm msg seen kiya but reply nahi bheja ,(then mocking himself) Mr . Kabir Sharma aapne kya socha tha ki aapka msg dekhkar vo khushi ke mare uchal padegi aur aapko fir fatafat reply degi (sighing)Kabir try harder man , there is long way ahead

And then sighing he rested his head on the chair edge untilll the breakfast arrived.

Afternoon 4:00pm

Outside the Classes

Ananya and her friends were discussing about their paper

(okay guys sorry for interrupting but here some more characters are there which are also the part of story , not much but at some time their appearance also matters . So here are the names: Jyoti(J) , Divyata(D) , Ekta(E) , Shruti(S) , Sunil(Su) . You can imagine anyone coz I cannot think of so much characters )

T-anu tera paper kaisa gaya

A-thik thak Trisha

D(laughs a little)-jabse yaha joint kiya paper thik thak ke upar jaata kaha hai

J-correct

And then they all shared a small laugh , but Ananya seems lost somewhere which didn't go unnoticed from Trisha

T-kya hua anu , itni lost kyu lag rahi hai

A-nahi yaar kuch nahi

T-arey aise kaise kuch nahi , tu pehle bhi mujhe lost dikhi , even
in school also . Baat kya hai.

A-nahi yaar kuch bhi nahi hai , tu khamkha itna soch rahi hai .

Chal chalke kuch khaate hain , mujhe bahut bhuk lag rahi hai.

E-ha mujhe bhi

S-Ekta ko to hamesha bhook lagi rehti hai

They all laughed at Ekta who pouted cutely and then they all enjoyed their snacks and went home.

At Night

Ananya was talking with Rajveer on Whatsapp

R-kya sachmein

A-ha , I mean mujhe aisa lagta hai that he likes me

R-ye to bahut acchi baat hai

A-ismein acchi baat kya hai

R-arey tumhe nahi pata , mera bhai bahut accha hai

A-to main kya karu

R-arey vo tumhe hamesha khush rakhega , he is very nice man and a kind hearted person , tumhe pata hai vo jaldi ladkiyo se mix bhi nahi hota and he cares for every person he ha in his life

A-rajveer maine aapse ye nahi pucha ki vo kaise insaan hai , main aapse itna puch rahi hu ki kya vo mujhe like karte hai , kyuki agar aisa hai to mujhe unse duri maintain karni padegi

R-duri kyu

A-arey mera 12th hai

R-to vo tumhare studies ke bich mein nahi aayega
A-ugghh forget it mujhe abhi kisi se baat nahi karni , bye gn😡

R-ok ok gn

And Ananya again started thinking

A(pov)-agar ye bat sach hui ki he likes me to main kya karungi . Arey kya karungi matlab sidha sidha unse bol dungi that I am not interested

She came out of her thought hearing her phone beeped , She now raised her brows seeing the msg "AGAIN FROM HIM"
Ananya muttered "Ab kya gud night wish karne ke liye msg kiya"

She opened and whatsapp and read his message of one word
"hi"

She rolled her eyes seeing the message and again mutters "Men and their egos , bhale hi baat karne ke liye tadap rahe ho lekin kabhi bhi khud conversation start nahi karte , inko kya lag raha hai ki ye hi bhejenge to main turant inhe reply kar dungi , agar aap aisa soch rahe hai to ye aapki galat fehmi hai Mr.Sharma , main koi reply nahi karungi"

And she huffed crossing her arms.

Her phone again beeped and when she saw she went mad receiving another "Hi" from his end

She shook her head and replied

A-hi

Kabir got happy finally receiving her reply

K-hi

A(angrily typed)-aur kitni baar hi bhejna hai

Kabir creased his brow receiving this msg and thought "Is she angry on me , (then pouting)par ab maine kya kiya

K-Ananya tum mujhse naaraz ho

Ananya rolled her eyes and then muttered "huh jaise ye aise behave karke bade khushi dene waale kaam kar rahe hai"

But controlling her anger as she was still scared of him though little bit , typed

A-nahi aisa nahi hai

K-hmm , to school kaisa raha

A-school , aaj Sunday tha

K-ha pata hai

A(getting irritated at his common sence)-to Sunday ko school thodi hota hai

K-really lekin mujhe laga tumhara school Sunday ko bhi open rehta hai

A-kyu mera school kya duniya se alag hai

K(smiling at her sarcasm)-nahi , but tumhi ne to kaha tha kal raat ko jab hum baat kar rahe the ki tumhara school hai , you have to sleep early for that

Ananya bite her tounges and closed her eyes realizing her stupid action , but now how to overcome so she typed lamely

A-okay gud night , kal sach mein mera school hai , mujhe sona hai ,bye

Kabir smiles and then deciding not to embarrass his girl further he only replies "Bye and Gud night"

Kabir again smiles thinking about his girl , ofcourse she is his , He don't know where his feelings are going to take him but he is definitely sure that he has fallen deep in love with her.

Here At Other Side

Ananya was chatting with her bestie Trisha on Whatsapp

T-hahahaha

A-tujhe hasi aa rahi hai , kaisi dost hai tu

T-to aur kya karu , yaar tera saath kya ho raha hai mujhe to
kuch samajh nahi aa raha , I mean ye 2-3 mahino mein tujhe 3 proposal aa chuke hai , hahaha

A-very funny

T-ya it is

A-trishu yaar , stop laughing

T-ok ok , to ab bata is baar kaun hai

A-yaar usne mujhe abhi tak propose nahi kiya hai

T-to tujhe kaise pata ki vo tujhe like karta hai

A-mujhe uski baton se lagta hai

T-hmm , to tu kya karne ka soch rahi hai

A-what do you mean , tujhe pata hai main in sabbaare mein abhi nahi sochna chahti

T-yaar vo mujhe bhi maalum hai lekin tu use kya kahegi

A-yaar vo sab baad mein soch jaayega tu mujhe aur stress mat de

T-hmm , vaise naam kya hai tere boy friend ka

A-he is not my boyfriend

T-ok ok would be boy friend

A-He not my would be , will be or any be boyfriend

T-hahahah ok baba lekin naam to bata

A-Kabir Sharma

T-hmm nice name , dikhne mein kaisa hai

A(excitedly)-yaar he is too handsome , bahut accha dikhta hai

T-oho boyfriend nahi hai , like bhi nahi karti but he is too handsome , right

A-tu mujhe chidhana band kar , ok

T-ok baba and tu zyada stress mat le , aur chup chap soja , good night

A-good night

And she went to sleep

END

Next Chapter is coming up soon

Edited by vssdp - 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 4

Days are pasing and Ananya and Kabir are now talking
regularly. Ananya is now comfortable with Kabir . She enjoys to talk to him

One Night

K-arey main ach keh raha hu

A-aapko nahi lagta aaj aap kuch zyada hi flirty ho rahe hai , aapko ye suit nahi karta

K-kya flirting karna

A-yup

K-madam aapko apne aapko khush kismet samajhna chahiye ki main aapke saath flirt kar raha hu

A-oh aur vo kyu

K-kyuki main bahut kam ladkiyon ke saath flirt karta hu , and you are one of them so consider yourself lucky

A-"ladkiyon" and I am "one of them" , can you please elaborate

K-kyu jalan ho rahi hai

A-main kyu jalungi

K-to fir

Ananaya don't know what to type now , she seriously don't know why this sentence of Kabir made her so angry

A-vo isliye kyuki Ananya Kashyap sabse alag hai aur uska comparision baaki kisi ke saath nahi kiya jaa sakta

Ananya after sending the message realizes how stupidly she gave him answer and on the other side Kabir smiles reading her msg and thought "vo to hai , meri Ananya sabse alag hai aur sabse pyaari bhi", Kabir again blushed at his cheesy yet romantic thought . His heart beat always increases when he address Ananya as "Meri Ananaya".

Here on other side Ananay was also thinking about Kabir . She knows that he likes him but she wanted to confirm it because if this will be not a truth then she will definitely get hurt , don't know but she will definitely feel hurt and sad.

A-Kabir aapse kuch puchna tha

K-ha pucho

Ananya was typing and deleting , she has no courage to ask him but she wants to ask him , she needed to ask him

A-Do you like me?

And Ananya closed her eyes , she was making herself ready to read his reply . After gaining some courage , she took a deep breath and open her eyes . Her heartbeat got more increased when she saw no reply from his side . She then thought "kahi maine kuch galat..." and she got tears in her eyes.

Here on other side when Kabir received the message he initially got shocked , and then a charming smile crept on his lips.He decided that it was the time and then instantly wrote "Yes I like you" and sent her .

Ananya's beautiful eyes were brimming with tears when she heard her phone beeped . She gasped and instantly saw the notification and got happily shocked reading the message . The words in the message that is "Yes I Like You" now means the world to her , means a lot to her.A beautiful smile crept on her face and she become so happy that she squealed .

Due to this squealing thing Avanti who was sleeping beside her got up with a shocking gasp. She then turned towards her dear sis and says

Av-pagal ho gayi hyo kya , aise kyu chilllaya

Ananya now realized that in excitement she squealed way too loud so to cover up she said

A-arey kuch nahi avu tu so ja na , tu kyu jagi

Avanti looked at her with suspicious and angry eyes

Av-ek to raat ko 11 baje itna zor se chiullati ho and then you expects me to sleep

Ananya looked down in embarrassment

A-sorry na avu , ab so ja na

Av(crossing her arms)-no , pehle mujhe batao kyu chillayi

A-arey ..

But her words not got completed as they heard a beeping sound and they both looked at the source of voice . It was none other than the sweet phone of Ananya. Ananya's eyes turned big as saucer when her sis snatch the mobile from her hands.She tried to grab it back but not needed now because Avanti had read the recent msg came from Kabir .

Avanti got shocked reading the content of the message , it was THE question that Kabir had asked her .

Avanti read out loud "Do You Like Me Too" and then looked at her sis shockingly. Ananya lowered her eyes in embarrassment and bite her lips in nervousness.

Avanti then again looked at the phone and reads the previous msg . She got at least 100 times thunderous shocks reading the pre msgs.

Avanti then hit Ananya on her arms and said

Av-youuu , mujhe pehle kyu nahi bataya aapke boy friend ke baare mein

A-no avu , he is not my boyfriend

Av-to?

A-just a casual friend

Av-ohh , to do you like me , yes I like you , do you like me too , ye sab to casual friends ke beech mein hone waale chats hai na

Ananya again lowered her head sheepishly

Av-rehne do di , huh sab samajh mein aata hai mujhe (giving her mobile)ye lo aur karo apne boy friend se baat , meri to koi value hi nahi bachi

And she lied down again and slept facing opp to Ananya.

Ananya gets tensed seeing her , she thought that Avanti is agry and hurt. She started thinking what to do now when she heard her sis voice from inside the blanket

Av-vaise nice choice ha

Ananya smiled realizing that she was not angry with her but just teasing her , she shook her head at her dramebaaz sister.

Then her attention went back to the apple of her eye , her phone from which he can talk to the person whom she had started liking . She started thinking for some appropriate words to answer him .

Here on other side , Kabir started getting impatient , he started walking to and fro in his room because of tension

K(pov)-oh god kahi use bura to nahi lag gaya , kya mujhe thoda aur time dena chahiye tha use , ho sakta hai vo abhi is baat ke liye ready na ho aur mere reply se use gussa aa jaaye , agar usne mujhse baat karna band kar diya to..(he shook his head removing these negative thought out of his mind)Kabir be calm , aisa kuch nahi hoga , ya kuch nahi hoga

He came to halt when he heard his phone beeped , he closed his eyes and after taking a deep breath checks the msg .

And as he read msg he jumps out of shock , a sweet shock . His mind and heart did a jingle dance together and then his smile widened thinking that his Ananya also likes him

K(pov)thank god Kabir like tak to pahuche ab jald hi pyaar tak bhi pahuch jaaoge.

He again reads the most precious message he had just received
"Ya I think so"

He smiled and then replied

K-I liked this I think so

Ananya blushed and then replied

A-ok so bye , kal school hai ,gn

Kabir smiled and decided not to tease her more

K-ok bye , gn ,tc ,sd

END
Edited by vssdp - 8 years ago

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