RoSid FF: Janam Janam ki sath Completed FF

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Dears,
Banu here with my next FF...

You all aware of the concept as i gave it in the end of my previous FF...

Yes.. its love between alive & not...

What is this??? how can this happen???

I know so many such questions are raised on your head...

Lets get the answers reading the updates...

Again this is my different take & hope you all like it...

I dont know how much it is practically possible...

Just accept as fictional story & enjoy...😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

Sky turned black...

Dark everywhere...

Thunder gave its loud voice...

It started raining...

The vehicles were finding difficult to move forward...

Water was falling on the glass making the vision unclear for the car...

Still the car was moving fast...

Inside the car...

Jamanlal divedi was driving with tension filled face...

He was turning behind then & there...

Jamanlal: Meena.. just few more minutes.. we will reach hospital...

Meena was shouting out in pain...

Meena: Aaa... Aaa... The pain is severe.. i am unable to bear it...

Jamanlal; Just bear for some more time... this unexpected rain too started suddenly... otherwise we might have reached till now...

He increased the speed to the extent possible...

Finally reached the hospital...

He parked the car & rushed out to reception...

Jamanlal: emergency.. my wife got labor pain... please rush...

The hospital staffs rushed towards car to bring Meena to labor ward...

The doctor rushed with nurses to look after her...

Jamanlal was standing restless outside the ward...

Meena was treated by the doctor...

After few more minutes of pain...

Finally Jamanlal heard the cry of the baby...

He joined his hand & prayed to God...

Nurse came out in sometime...

Nurse: Your wife delivered a girl child... Congrats...

Jamanlal: Thank you..

She rushed from there to continue her work...

In some time... Meena was shifted to the room...

Nurse bring the beautiful girl child wrapping with a new towel...

The baby was given to Jamanlal...

He took the baby & looked at her...

It was so beautiful...

Jamanlal smiled...

Pinky palm.. foot...

closed eyes...

Small flower the baby was looking like...

He hug the baby and got tears of happiness...

He looked at Meena who just opened her eyes...

Jamanlal took the baby near her...

He gave the baby to Meena...

Meena too got tears of happiness forgetting the pain she was facing all these time to deliver such a beautiful girl...

Jamanlal & Meena looked at each other...





After being in hospital for 2 more days...

Meena got discharged & now they are returning to their home with the child...

Jamanlal did arranged cradle like baby required items at home...

The baby was put in the cradle...

Meena slightly swing the cradle and admired the baby which was sleeping peacefully in the cradle...

Jamanlal: Meena... we need to invite close relatives and arrange the naming ceremony...

Meena: Ok...

Jamanlal: Lets think of some nice name for her...

Meena: Yes.. the name should be very cute for this cute baby...

Meena smiled...

Jamanlal: You think the name.. in the meantime.. i will call our close relatives inviting them...

Jamanlal took his mobile and went to hall for making calls...

Meena was thinking about the name & was looking at the baby...




After sometime...

Jamanlal entered into the room...

He saw the paper in the table...

He went near the table & look into it...

'ROLI'

This was written on the paper...

Jamanlal: oh.. name is selected.. nice name...

Jamanlal went near Meena...

Jamanlal: Meena.. Roli is nice name.. i liked it...

Meena think for a while...

She was thinking.. Jamanlal suggesting that name...

Meena: Roli... yes.. the name is nice.. lets keep it...

Jamanlal & Meena decided to keep the name of the baby as 'ROLI...'


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww cute update can't wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
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U r back thats great frnd. As usual u rocks. Waiting next frnd
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow di great start according to concept definitely roli name written by sid who's not alive poor guess na eagerly waiting for nxt di
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow it is super Sid kept name for roli I think
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awesome di loved the update I think sid suggested the name waiting for next eagerly update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

The baby was sleeping in the cradle...

after making the baby sleep.. Meena too slept in the bed...

Jamanlal went to his company...

Suddenly the baby wake up...

It was feeling hungry & started crying...

But Meena was tired and was in deep sleep...

She didn't hear the baby cry...

The baby was crying continuously...

After a while...

Suddenly the items kept in the table fell down with huge sound...

Meena who was sleeping got up with a jerk on the sound...

She looked around blinking her eyes...

And noticed the baby is crying...

She rushed towards baby & took on her arms...

Then looked around from where the sound came...

She saw the items which was on table all were on floor...

Meena was wondering how those items fell...

But as the baby was crying.. she got no time to think about it...

She rushed towards kitchen and prepared food for baby...

She started feeding baby and baby slowly stopped crying...



Jamanlal returned from office...

He looked at the items which he used to keep on table were disturbed...

Jamanlal; Meena.. what happened to these items...

Meena: I dont know... i was sleeping in the noon & suddenly all these items were on the floor...

Jamanlal: But how come!!! its not paper like light items to fly on the air...

Meena: I know that.. but i really dont know how it happened.. but as baby was crying.. i rushed to bring food for her & then forgot about these... now only i kept back all the items on the table...

Jamanlal: Its strange.. how something like this can happen... Anyway.. good that none were broken...

Meena: Yes.. i saw that... all hard items only fell down...

Jamanlal: Hmm... that is only strange.. how these like hard items can fell down by itself...

Meena: Leave it.. you have just come.. let me bring something for you to drink...

Meena gave the baby to Jamanlal & rushed to kitchen to bring tea for them...

Jamanlal started playing with Roli...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3

The baby started crawling...

Meena was busy in the kitchen...

The baby crawl towards her mother...

When Meena didn't noticed... she went near the place where vegetables were kept...

Baby took the chilli kept for cooking...

She took it near its mouth...

Suddenly the vessel which was kept in the table top fell down and scroll towards Roli...

Meena swiftly turned hearing the vessel sound and looked at the vessel...

That is when she noticed Roli trying to put chilli inside her mouth...

She rushed towards the baby & took the chilli from her hand...

Then wash her hand completely and took her out of kitchen...

Meena was wondering.. how the vessel which was on the top fell down and came towards Roli...

There was no reason that it can fall down...

Still in a way.. its good that she noticed Roli with chilli...

Otherwise... it might have become problem...

She gave some toys to baby to play with it and rushed to kitchen to finish the work she left incomplete...




The baby was sleeping in the bed...

Meena went to dry the clothes in the backyard...

The baby roll in the sleep and came till end of the bed from middle...

The baby if it roll once more will be falling down on the floor...

It started turning the side...

Now its just less than a minute for the baby to fall down...

Suddenly the pillow fell from the bed to the floor and the baby fell over the pillow...

On sudden falling.. the baby wake up and started crying...

Meena rushed towards the room hearing the cry of the baby...

That is when she saw the baby on the floor above the pillow...

Meena; OMG.. you fell down from bed...

She took the baby on her arms...

But she was wondering how the pillow fell down to hold the baby from falling on the floor...

She was thinking.. may be the baby might have kicked the pillow and then fell over it...

She consol the crying baby and took it to give food...

Roli slowly stopped crying...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Friends,
Hope you all liking this FF...

Further updates tomorrow...

stay tuned...

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