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Jinan

@Tashfee

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Hello Lovelies! 😃

Well I'm here with an...OS. Yeah! My very first writing. 😛

It's just a random thought of mine. Even though I have numerous kinds of thoughts 😉 this one just popped into my mind suddenly during a Gtalk session.😳

And Yeah! This is not a G OS! *I think so*😆

So I wrote it down but It's really messed up so I didn't wanna post but Zoha...! She tried to convince me to post it but when I didn't agree she got ready with the whole army the next day...😲🤣*poor me*

So I had to post this one.😆

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@Tashfee

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Bhuvana

@manishwari2014

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chotu! So you are going to post the os. Right. Good girl.

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

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Sorry for the delay Jinnu

Thank god I was ready with my army to make sure u posted this OS

As I said earlier its beautiful and awesome

Loved it

Ishita antics were cute and her cravings made me remind my self during my pregnancy period 😆

So they had a baby girl awww 😳

I will now persuade u to write more now 😈

Congratulations on the century baby 🥳 🤗

Edited by sarunholic_arhi - 9 years ago

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Priya

@priyadarshini.r

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Chalo choti bachi, post it soon... Waiting😊

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-K.13-

@-K.13-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

omg J

this was honestly beautiful! 😳 I can't tell why you were hesitant to post because I legit loved reading it!

Can't wait to see what else you write! 😉

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Divanru

@Divanru

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

Unres .

That was beautiful Jinan dear .

Such a sweet ,cute and romantic OS .

Ishra are going to be parents .

Ishita and her cravings omg .

At first she wanted ice cream ,after that she had chat also .

Then they had a debate on the choice of movie and raman has to give up .

As expected she cried in the middle of movie and then he took her to bed and patted till she slept .

Its was so nice .

Atladt they are proud parents of their daughter .

Ishita cursing raman was too hilarious .

Keep writing

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Balasri

@Sri1091

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Posted: 9 years ago

Omg choti bachi writing OS??
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Choti bachi tumne Kamala ka likha yaar I jst loved it ishita ka tantrums and puttar ka smile it was jst awesome he fulfilled her every wish awww how cute it was yaar kitna nautanki karti hein yaar biwi and puttar is letting her do it in her way and he was adoring her I jst loved it yaar and ishita ka labor pain 🤣 🤣 bechara puttar yaar hahaha but he was smiling and wen their princess is finally here both were happy and puttar was back being naughty asking wether she will kill him now awww so cute

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Jinan

@Tashfee

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Updated on the first page. 😆

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#10

Good attempt sweetheart.
Enjoyed reading the way you have penned down this.
Concept:-) Dialogues:-) everything was amazing.
Nice done 😊

Love
- Harshada

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