Arshi FF- BREACH OF VOWS- Is posted again.

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saack

@saack

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Posted: 8 years ago

#471

Another very beautiful update...actually, I am tired of saying the same words of praise. Wish I was a writer too like you and then I would have praised you more eloquently as you deserve to be.

I love Arshi in this story so much. Their bond is something to die for. It almost feels that this kind of relationship is impossible to have. Don't mistake me...I love my husband a lot and he too loves me but somewhere, this Arshi almost makes me envious.

I wish my husband loved romantic stories. I would have made him read this story.

Raja does seem to be their lost baby. Knowing how he has spent his life so far, makes me so so angry on Khushi's nana. How could she be so heartless?

The description of the oasis and village, almost makes me want to visit India and this village for sure.

I am so sad that this story is coming to an end. But thanks once again for sharing your beautiful story with all of us.

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DilLoveRomance

@DilLoveRomance

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#472

Wow the update is here

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#473

I cannot believe that the story is going to end , I am Happy and sad at the same time , Happy because there will be an end to Khushi and Arnav's sufferings , sad because one of my Fav FF is going to end.

Coming to the update So Arnav also got some clue about Raja but he is not ready to share it with Khushi as that information is not of much use. Khushi I am really impressed with the way you have characterized her character , there is a gradual change and maturity in her and I am in love with this Khushi too but I still love the old Khushi. I am happy that she is open and is ready to talk about her not having Kids it is really a positive sign in her.

Devi Mayya has granted her wish to be a mother before she went to the temple as Suraj found Raja. Ritu yaar seriously I cannot wait for the union of Raja , Arnav and Khushi it is a much waited scene.

Muralidhar is a nice person he took them to his in-Laws place ,, in this year it is very scary to take someone home especially strangers , and Arnav and Khushi dared to go with him as it is a very risky thing to do , they dont know him I am happy that everything turned out to be good , in real world it is a night mare to go with a stranger what Arnav said is correct there are people like Murali and his in-laws in this world so that we still have faith in humanity.

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amita

@star_fan1

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#474

Wonderful updates

Just read last three parts together

Sorry was little busy so didn't able to respond

But glad that read it on time before you removed it

Very sad to know that this story is going to its end

So Finally Arnav and Khushi are going to meet their son Raja

Waiting for that unforgettable and lovely moment eagerly

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matosarah

@matosarah

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#475

Thank You guys, for liking this story. It is indeed a very special story for me. When I wrote it, I wanted it to be a story where love would be palpable between this couple. And I think I somehow managed to depict that unique bond and love between this couple. There was lot of pain in their life but then there was so much love also and when that kind of love is there in life, you do have an ability to overcome the hurdles.

No there would be no reincarnations, that idea did come into my head for a minute moment but I didn't want that. For me Sundari's story would flow right into it and that's what you would get to read in the next chapter which is going to be posted later.

When I posted it for the first time, I wanted to right an epilogue. At that time, I had an idea also, what I would want there...but somewhere I lost heart to write anything after their apt ending. 😔 and now there would be no point. I think , most of the things were given a closure at the end of this story.

Thanks again!

R❤️

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matosarah

@matosarah

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#476

Thanks for being a part of this story...

But now since this one is coming to an end, this story is removed from this forum.

As of now, it is not available on blog.

Thanks again for reading it and appreciating it.🤗

R❤️

Edited by matosarah - 8 years ago

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Piya love

@Westallen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#477

Just wow that was such an emotional story so sad I cried so hard even now while writing this comment. I can understand khushi feeling suffocated just went u think that the story will have a happy ending such a big blow came in place 😭😭😭

The only good thing that happened was they die together not every love story have such an end in there case it would be happy ending bcuz it's together n not one before the other. Lovely they will meet again n this time I think it would be great.

Marvelous emotional update 👏😭

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#478

It is such a tragedy , we as humans never feel satisfied with what we have we always want to run behind what we want , Princess Sundari has lost everything in searching for a baby , I can completely understand that as a woman she wanted to me a mother but when she cannot have it she should be happy that her husband still loves her and is supporting her in all the way. There are many couple who get separated as the woman cannot bear a child I call those man as spineless.

I hope what ever Arnav got from suraj is a good new

Here is my request , can you please tell me on how to bribe you to give us an Epilogue for the story yaar please m pretty please 😭

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Nitya

@nik1310

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#479

Wow, a powerful emotional update. While it highlight importance of our deep rooted cultural practices playing a vital part in our lives ( the puja, satsang, parivaar village dynamics), you bring out the impact of such situations affecting Khushi in understanding her life with Arnav - she cannot exist without him, period.

Looking forward eagerly to the couple beginning their life with Raja.

And yes, pretty please an epilogue would add to the charm if this fab story. 😛

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#480

finally managed to start reading this story again. Got to read only from chapter 18 onwards. But i love this story.

It never fails to get tears to my eyes, esp reading about Princess Sundari's story.

Waiting for tomorrow, to read the last part...love that part so much.

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