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Author's note- before updating this part I wanna wish u all a shubh maha ashthami .may goddess durga bless u all with peace and harmony in ur life.
This update is specially for my sweet buddy sharu aka sk-sharmin who literally spammed this thread for update. This one is for u sweetheart and I want a longish comment from u.
PART 10
At 3.30 , nidhi came into the kitchen only to see ishita already in the kitchen.she was wearing a simple pink saree ,her hair was open and she was instructing the helps to make many variety of delicacies.
Nidhi- arey ishita,u r up.I was about to wake u up.and u almost completed the work.u should have called me.
Ishita saw her and smiled .
Ishita- actually I asked what to make in sargi last evening only ,so got up early to prepare.kuch jyada kaam nahi tha toh nahi uthaya.come let's have it before the sun rise.
Nidhi nodded and both settled on the dining table to have their sargi.
Nidhi- good that u r with me today or else every year I am alone.
Ishita- chachi ji don't fast.that reminds me where is chacha ji.
Nidhi- Papa ji died when param was too young.Raman bhaiya's maa Papa took care of param and mom ji.
Ishita- Raman ke maa Papa bahut achche the naa.
Nidhi- I don't know.I never met them.they have died before my marriage with param.
Ishita- aur Raman tab se kya aise hi hai.they were talking and eating when Raman came down rubbing his eyes.he came to ishita and said- where u went without telling me.I was searching for u naa and why u r eating at this hour that to without me.he said keeping his head on her shoulder closing his eyes.
Ishita- I came down to have sargi as I have to fast.
Raman open his eyes and asked looking at her- what is sargi.
Nidhi- it's a food that everyone eat before keeping karwachauth fast.
Raman- tab mujhe bhi khilao,I am also,he stopped saying in mid.
Ishita- what u also Raman.
Raman- I am also hungry.
Ishita smiled and start feeding him while he was also feeding ishita.nidhi was just looking at them and their love.her eyes got moist thinking param never come to her like this.they have been married for two years but still they don't share such relationship and here ishra r so close in just few days.
Nidhi- I am done.going to sleep, aap log bhi so jaana.saying so she went without waiting for their answer.
Ishita look at her and thought- isse kya ho gaya.she was thinking when Raman said- khilao.
Ishita shrug the thought and start feeding him again.soon they went back to their room.Raman slept again while ishita was just looking at him.he was sleeping like a small baby while ishita was just caressing his hair lovingly.she kissed his forehead lovingly and said- I love u Raman.soon she too slept .
Next morning Raman open his eyes feeling some water droplets.he open his eyes only to see her drying her hairs wearing a red saree.he smiled seeing her and said- u r looking so beautiful biwi.
Ishita look at him and blushed hearing his words. Raman get out of the bed and went to her.he caged her in his arms holding her waist.he hold her chin and make her look at him.her eyes were down casted while her cheek were red with blush.Raman traced her features and said- tum sach mein bahut sundar ho biwi.ek dum pari jaisi.he said and kissed her forehead.she closed her eyes feeling his touch.he took a pinch of sindoor and filled her partition and said- ab sabse sundar ho gayi.he said and went to washroom leaving her alone .
After half an hour ,he came out of washroom only to see her still standing there all lost.he went to her and waved his fingers in front of her.
Raman- what happened biwi.
That broke her trance and she ran from there without telling anything.she was running downstairs when she was about to slip but someone held her.she turned only to see param holding her.
She get up and said- I am sorry param.
Param- it's alright ishita.dekh kar chalo.he said gazing at her.
She felt awkward with his gaze and covered herself properly and was going when he held her hand and said- u r beautiful ishita.bahut khoobsurat.
Ishita shrug his hand and said- tameez se baat karo.main tumhare bade Bhai ki biwi ho.saying so she went to kitchen.
Param- bade Bhai ki biwi.my foot.ek baar hamara kaam ho jaaye phir dekho main kaise tumhe apna banata hoon.he said smirking and left .nidhi heard all this and felt bad.she went to param and said- why u r doing this param.I am ur wife,I am keeping fast for ur long life and u r thinking about ishita.
Param- oh shutup nidhi.biwi ho biwi ki tarah raho,mera maalik banne ki koshish mat karo.agar vrat rakhna hai toh rakho nahi rakhna toh bhi mera kuch nahi bigadne wala.chalo jao yahan se .he said breaking nidhi's heart .
She ran inside crying and went to kitchen .ishita saw her and asked what happened but she didn't said anything.she took a piece of bread and about to eat it when ishita said- what r u doing nidhi.
Nidhi hugged ishita and cried.ishita don't know how to console her.she was caressing nidhi and saying- stop crying.when pammi entered the kitchen and said- kya tamasha chal raha hai.chalo mehendi lagwa lo.nidhi r u listening go .she said sternly.
Ishita and nidhi nodded.nidhi went out but ishita said ,she will come after feeding Raman.
Ishita went to their room only to see raman playing with mintu.
Ishita- Raman aaiye khana kha lijiye,phir mujhe mehendi lagwane bhi jaana hai.she was go on calling him but he was not listening .just roaming around ishita playing with mintu.
Ishita- Raman kha lijiye warna main nahi khilane waali.
Raman- u keep it here .I will eat when I feel hungry.abhi bhookh nahi hai.
Ishita insisted him to eat but he didn't budge so she went keeping the food there only.
Soon ishita got busy in applying mehendi and household work.soon it was six in evening.she took out a dark pink colour sherwani for Raman and got ready wearing the red lehengaa he brought for her.she tied her hair in a beautiful bun adorning it with gajra.she wear the matching set he brought for her.put a small bindi and applied sindoor .she was wearing earrings when he entered the room and was all lost in her beauty.
Ishita blushed feeling his gaze on her and said- how I am looking Raman.
Raman- sabse sundar biwi.but ek kami hai.
Ishita look at him and asked what.
Raman- wait.saying so he went to cupboard and took out a box which he kept hiding from her.
Ishita- what's this.
Raman- ur gift.which I kept hiding from u.tum bahut shaitaan biwi ho naa,tumhe San chahiye hota hai.so I hide it under my clothes.
Ishita- par yeh hai kya.
Raman- just wait and watch.saying so he opened the box and took out a diamond studded mangalsutra from it.he turn her around and tied it in her neck.he covered her head from her dupatta, wiped a little sindoor which was looking messy and said- now it's perfect.
Ishita smiled and touch his feet.he took her in side hug and kissed her forehead.they stay like this for sometime when ishita said- let's go downstairs, we r getting late.
Raman- tum jao ,main aa raha hoon.
Ishita nodded and went downstairs. She sat with the ladies and all start doing the puja together.
Soon Raman came down and sat beside ishita when they were exchanging thaalis.
Lady- why u r sitting here.go and sit with man.
Raman- mujhe bhi puja karni hai.
L2-yeh kya mazak hai.yeh karwachauth ki puja hai koi khel nahi ki koi bhi karne lage.
Ishita- Raman u go and sit with men.yahan sirf auratein baithti hai.
Raman- but I have to do puja like u.
L1-yeh kya koi khel chal raha hai.arey hum pure din bhookhe rahen hai tab puja kar rahen hai .
Raman- toh Maine bhi vrat rakha hai.main bhi puja karunga.
Ishita look at him all shocked ,then she realised why he did eat anything since morning.
L2- tum kaise vrat rakh sakte ho.hum auratein yeh vrat rakhti hai.aadmi nahi rakhte.
Raman- kyun,kyun nahi rakh sakta .aur aap kyun rakhti hai yeh vrat.
L1- taaki hamare pati hamesha salamat rahe and we can have them as our husband in each birth.
Raman- toh mujhe bhi toh meri biwi sahi salamat chahiye aur har janam mein chahiye,toh main kyun nahi vrat rakh sakta.
Ishita eyes got moist seeing his love for him.she don't know how to react hearing his words but all she can feel.was blessed to have someone like him in her life.she was just looking at Raman who was looking too cute and innocent but pure.her trance broke when she heard.
L1- yeh kya bakwaas hai pammi.hum yahan puja karne aayen hain naa ki iss pagal ki baat sunne.khud toh dimaag nahi hai aur hamara waqt barbaad kar raha hai.
Raman face fell hearing her harsh words.
L2- aur nahi toh kya,hamari puri shraddha se ki puja ko barbaad karne aaya hai.pagal kahin kaa.jaa yahan se.
Pammi- Raman go inside and let everyone finish their puja.
Raman got up and start walking out of the place when ishita held his hand.he turn to see her and heard her saying- kahan jaa rahen hai Raman apni biwi ko akela chod kar.
Raman said with moist eyes- Maine kuch galat kiya kya.kuch galat kaha kya.agar tumhe hai toh kya mujhe tumhare liye vrat rakhna ka haq nahi .he said and a tear fell off his eyes.
Ishita- u have all the rights on me but u don't have right to make ur precious tear fall over their rubbish.yeh kya samajh payengi aapki feelings ko,their heart r not pure as urs.
L2- pammi tumhari nahi kya bol rahi hai.agar yeh puja karegaa toh hum nahi karne wale.
Pammi- ishita baith jao aur Raman ko jaane do.
Ishita- u all sit and finish ur puja.I will do my puja with my husband.
L2- puja beech mein chodna apshagun hota hai.tumhare saubhagya par asar padega.
Ishita- mera saubhagya mere pati ki muskaan mein hai.unhe takleef pahuncha kar main kuch bhi haasil nahi kar paaungi.saying so she went upstairs holding Raman's hand.
Soon ishra were on terrace .ishita start looking at him through sieve.she did aarti of Moon and then of him.she put a tilak on his forehead and then give water to moon.lastly she touch his feet.Raman saw all this and after she finishes her rituals,he started doing the same.he see her through the sieve,did her aarti ,gave water to moon and was about to touch her feet when she stopped him and said,sirf biwi pair chooti hai.Raman make her drink water and feed her sweet.she too make him drink water and feed him sweet.he took her in side hug and kissed her forehead.
Ishita- sach kaha tha uss saint ne,pyaar karne ke liye dimaag ki jarurat nahi hoti sirf ek sachche dil ki jarurat hoti hai.she said snuggling more into him while he tighten his hold over her.they remain in each other's arms for long feeling happy and contented.
That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and hit like.will wait for it.
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