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saack

@saack

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Posted: 8 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: matosarah

I am sorry about that dear, but lack of response "again" was very disappointing for me. This was the second time, it was happening to this fiction. I just couldn't leave my personal best work so open and unattended for long, hence it is off the forum.
As of now, I have no desire to share it again on this forum. I might move it to a blog one day.
But thanks for let me know somebody had recommended it on the ficverse. I really appreciate that. 😊

Hi Ritu,

I had posted recommendation for both your stories on ficverse. I am so in love with your stories and enjoy reading them that I wanted others to experience them as well.

I do feel honored that I was, in a small way, responsible for you to repost this story. I can't thank you enough for reposting it and giving me this opportunity to read such a masterpiece.

As I mentioned once earlier too, I think lack of response is more due to lack of knowledge and hence, I wanted to do my bit to let others know about your stories...hope you are ok with that.

Please do consider posting this on a very private blog and give access to very limited readers, who you deem appropriate.

I, for one, would love to reread this story. I was planning to start from beginning once the story ends. But I was a bit disappointed to know that you have already removed the beginning chapters.

I fully respect and understand your reasons for doing that but please do post this story on blog soon.

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matosarah

@matosarah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: saack

Hi Ritu,
I had posted recommendation for both your stories on ficverse. I am so in love with your stories and enjoy reading them that I wanted others to experience them as well.
I do feel honored that I was, in a small way, responsible for you to repost this story. I can't thank you enough for reposting it and giving me this opportunity to read such a masterpiece.

As I mentioned once earlier too, I think lack of response is more due to lack of knowledge and hence, I wanted to do my bit to let others know about your stories...hope you are ok with that.

Please do consider posting this on a very private blog and give access to very limited readers, who you deem appropriate.

I, for one, would love to reread this story. I was planning to start from beginning once the story ends. But I was a bit disappointed to know that you have already removed the beginning chapters.
I fully respect and understand your reasons for doing that but please do post this story on blog soon.

Aww that is so sweet of you and...Thanks for recommending the stories.

I have not finalized on the blog yet...but yes, that is one of my plan to make it a private blog...maybe I will experiment it with few. Let's finish this story first and then I would put it on the blog also...

I can fully understand that you may want to read it again someday.

Thanks dear.🤗

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matosarah

@matosarah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#453

Thanks for the comments dears. Sorry to all the new readers, currently I am working to finish this story here on the forum. But eventually I would make a private blog for it. Sorry for the inconvenience.

Edited by matosarah - 8 years ago

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matosarah

@matosarah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#454

Thanks for being a part of this story...

But now since this one is coming to an end, this story is removed from this forum.

As of now, it is not available on blog.

Thanks again for reading it and appreciating it.🤗

R❤️

Edited by matosarah - 8 years ago

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

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Posted: 8 years ago

#455

I really loved this chapter , that does not mean that I did not like the other , but this chapter has a lot after a long time Arnav and Khushi shared their feeling , fears and thoughts with each other with out any bitterness , they came more closer to each other if it is possible. I am happy that Arnav could bring Khushi back from going into depression. Khushi need this reality check at this time . Waiting for the union of Raja with Arnav and Khushi

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#456

loved the chapter .just hoping they get raja

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saack

@saack

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Posted: 8 years ago

#457

Another great chapter...

The whole journey and their feelings of hope followed by apprehension, worry and sense of hopelessness...everything is so vividly described. Truly awesome writing.

Khushi is so broken at not getting anything positive but still so determined.

Arnav wants to do whatever he can to bring Raja into their lives. While situation does look a bit grim, the last few lines of the chapter are truly encouraging...

Even Suraj has a burdensome past...that was really heartbreaking. Fighting terrorism has always had lots of innocent collateral damages. Really unfortunate and sad...

Hope Arnav, Khushi and Suraj find their peace soon by reclaiming Raja...even if he is not really their dead child, they would still love him as much. After all the hardships, they all truly deserve this...

On another note...you have truly touched upon a very sensitive and heart wrenching subject of human trafficking. All of us sit cozy in our homes and read such incidents as news snippets. But I can't even begin to imagine the horror stories that these young innocent kids undergo. How can some people be so cruel, greedy and heartless? When I think about such people, I truly start questioning the existence of God himself...such atrocious things cannot happen if there really is a God.

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#458

Raja.. he wil be connecting them.

Loved the hard core subjects touched here.

Your writing is brilliant.

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matosarah

@matosarah

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla
I really loved this chapter , that does not mean that I did not like the other , but this chapter has a lot after a long time Arnav and Khushi shared their feeling , fears and thoughts with each other with out any bitterness , they came more closer to each other if it is possible. I am happy that Arnav could bring Khushi back from going into depression. Khushi need this reality check at this time . Waiting for the union of Raja with Arnav and Khushi

These next few chapter till the very end are my personal fav. work. I loved the way they came out. When I was originally writing it, Sundari's story was done at that point...but then as Khushi and Arnav got stuck in the storm...to tie the entire evening...this whole idea about Sundari's story came along.

And in the end it all worked out perfectly for me.

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matosarah

@matosarah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: dv19
Raja.. he wil be connecting them. Raja is for sure going to connect them and it would be a surprise to see where Raja has been living for past few months now.

Loved the hard core subjects touched here.

Your writing is brilliant.

Thanks dear.🤗

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