I can't leave you alone like this: Anika

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Posted: 9 years ago
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For a change, and since it was requested😳
How many times had she dreamt of, imagined, and spoken about hitting him whole heartedly, and heavy handedly with her beloved Chandni and Chameli for multiple reasons?
How many times had she threatened him as a way out of listening to his harsh criticisms of her?
And yet, her heart almost stopped at the gut-wrenching pain of his family when he was supposedly not going to come back home, ever.
She prayed to the God she barely believed in to bring him back safe, sound, and most importantly, completely unharmed.

'uss sab ka koi matlab nahi tha'
says she about the night that registered consciously in her mind. She saw colours not just in his eyes, but also in him: he was not a boring man, just a rigidly coiled one.
Seeing him unfurl different shades, she was forced to admit today that he was not pakau.
Not even a little bit. Not at all.
Sharing a sweet memory with people perhaps brings them closer to us.Or maybe, she knew when she looked at him that the changes she was going through, he felt them too. In that short distance between then and now lay trust, concern, and unexpressed, barely understood intense emotions.

He will not be the protective kind of person who will not give her a chance to prove her bravery and strength, both mental and physical. They would do this, together.

And then, he was hit. On the head. With a stick.
She felt rather than heard him scream as he knelt down, his head reeling with pain. And she said she could not leave him alone like this: Unprotected, vulnerable, alone.

She would not abandon him, not for a moment.
And yet, he trusted her to, he needed her to.
Because they do not belong to each other. They belong to their families, one of which needed her to leave him.
He could not afford to let them both get weak.

Perhaps it was the urgency in his voice that demanded she leave him be. She understood what was unsaid: I'll be fine. That is more important for me than my pain.

She understood perhaps in the same moment what it meant for her: Their pain did not matter. Family came first, and he trusted her to carry out his, their responsibility when he could not.

Equal partners in crime-solving, as equal partners in life.

😳😳
Geet


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Shivikaishkara thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing and beautifully expressed😳👏. Thank you dear😊❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivikaishkara

Amazing and beautifully expressed😳👏. Thank you dear😊❤️



You're welcome! 😳 😃 glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lets shower you with kisses and Hugs!
What should I point out first?
The way he wanted her to carry forward his responsibility or the way she understood that she needs to do what is important for him first rather than he himself...

You are absolutely right... with every thing you mentioned here..
They are partner in all. More than being together, they are for each other when one is unable to play his role.. the other just turns herself to be his miracle... this is their way of showing love for eachother.. they care for each other and their priorities more...

Geet... As always... you know what! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very very well written <3 Even i loved how instead of telling her to stay with him so that she would be "Safe" He chose to tell her to follow the girl. It is not that he does not care about her, it is that he knows that she can handle it. She is a sherni.. a Cheetah, just like her brother🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely pov.. he trusted her to go on for him when he was down, knowing they were on the same page. Same team.
Don't forget how Shivaay's hand was at the bottom of the "All for one, and one for all" clasp. Rudra and Om in the middle, and Annika's on top. Loved that.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnnzSageflower7

lovely pov.. he trusted her to go on for him when he was down, knowing they were on the same page. Same team.

Don't forget how Shivaay's hand was at the bottom of the "All for one, and one for all" clasp. Rudra and Om in the middle, and Annika's on top. Loved that.

Every detail in the show is so meaning full... only few people are able to get these.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritzz

Lets shower you with kisses and Hugs!

What should I point out first?
The way he wanted her to carry forward his responsibility or the way she understood that she needs to do what is important for him first rather than he himself...

You are absolutely right... with every thing you mentioned here..
They are partner in all. More than being together, they are for each other when one is unable to play his role.. the other just turns herself to be his miracle... this is their way of showing love for eachother.. they care for each other and their priorities more...

Geet... As always... you know what!🤗



I love how cute they are, they are their best versions with each other, they can be themselves: thorny, childish, utterly forlorn, they accept it all in each other and see the best without being blind to the bad.
It's wonderful to see this relationship unfold!

And you know i love you <3 <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -happilyunknown

Very very well written <3 Even i loved how instead of telling her to stay with him so that she would be "Safe" He chose to tell her to follow the girl. It is not that he does not care about her, it is that he knows that she can handle it. She is a sherni.. a Cheetah, just like her brother🤣



Exactly!! And i really like that he didn't say, 'stay behind me, it's risky'
He said 'tum dekho, i'll handle this'

A division of work to be done, very nicely expressed too.

She's a sherni and he's a khargosh on skates 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnnzSageflower7

lovely pov.. he trusted her to go on for him when he was down, knowing they were on the same page. Same team.

Don't forget how Shivaay'shand was at the bottom of the "All for one, and one for all" clasp. Rudra and Om in the middle, and Annika's on top. Loved that.



Thanks! And yes! I totally loved that too, and the symbolism of it 😃

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