EEEKKK!!! Love Love Loved it!!!As soon as these thought crossed Shravan's mind I was in La-La Land :
We have lost enough in our egos, our misunderstandings and our fear of rejection. It's time we let go and embrace each other, cause life is short and I will loose out no more. Tomorrow will be a new day. I will give you the life you deserve Sumo. 
I can't begin to tell you how good this piece of writing was.
Long? Who's complaining?
Such a wonderful display of Shravan-Sumo moments, their growing closeness. Did you read the part where I said I loved it?
I think the CVs are going to wrap up the show with the angle that Ramnath will tell Shravan how he actually kept his mother away and therefore his resentment towards women will dissolve and suddenly Sumo will become the love of his life, but that's not how I wanted to see it go down.
You on the other hand have captured the essence of the characters so well in each of your stories...and this one tops the list.
This is the Shravan I wanted to see in the show...this is the resolution I wanted to see between him and Sumo.
Kaash! We could have a do over. And kaash you were head of the writing team!
I don't care how the show ends now...because I can always come back to this thread and imagine how things should have happened.
Again...loved it!
Thanks for the PM...and the wonderful treat.
Edited by Fatima_Q - 8 years ago
