Originally posted by: Fatima_Q
EEEKKK!!! Love Love Loved it!!!
As soon as these thought crossed Shravan's mind I was in La-La Land :
We have lost enough in our egos, our misunderstandings and our fear of rejection. It's time we let go and embrace each other, cause life is short and I will loose out no more. Tomorrow will be a new day. I will give you the life you deserve Sumo. 
I can't begin to tell you how good this piece of writing was.
I can't begin to tell you how excited I am about your comment! Look at these cute ass monkeys!
Long? Who's complaining?
Clearly not you 😆
Such a wonderful display of Shravan-Sumo moments, their growing closeness. Did you read the part where I said I loved it?
Yaa! I read it twice!
I think the CVs are going to wrap up the show with the angle that Ramnath will tell Shravan how he actually kept his mother away and therefore his resentment towards women will dissolve and suddenly Sumo will become the love of his life, but that's not how I wanted to see it go down.
Makes two 😕
You on the other hand have captured the essence of the characters so well in each of your stories...and this one tops the list.
Oh my! Blushes so profusely puts M.A.C. blush on to shame 😳
This is the Shravan I wanted to see in the show...this is the resolution I wanted to see between him and Sumo.
Makes two again bro!Kaash! We could have a do over. And kaash you were head of the writing team!
Oh teri! Yeh mara sixer ball seedha stadium ke bahar! Itni bhi acchi nahi hoon writer mai...I don't care how the show ends now...because I can always come back to this thread and imagine how things should have happened.
You have no idea how happy you've made me!
Again...loved it!
Thanks for the PM...and the wonderful treat.