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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
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Unless
Take a bow Zo!!!!
Stupendous , mind blowing, breathtakingly beautiful!!!!
I teared up reading this chapter though they were happy tears.
He gifted her , her old house .nothing could've been better than this not even giving her PCT papers.
The proposal was so beautiful
I can read this chapter a million times!!
Thank you so much for writing this
Love you loads 🤗

Prii meri jaan 🤗
I'm so glad you loved it!
I was waiting for your comment!
Million times! Sigh! Thank you ya!
Love you more ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q

EEEKKK!!! Love Love Loved it!!!

As soon as these thought crossed Shravan's mind I was in La-La Land :

We have lost enough in our egos, our misunderstandings and our fear of rejection. It's time we let go and embrace each other, cause life is short and I will loose out no more. Tomorrow will be a new day. I will give you the life you deserve Sumo.


I can't begin to tell you how good this piece of writing was.

I can't begin to tell you how excited I am about your comment! Look at these cute ass monkeys!

Long? Who's complaining?
Clearly not you 😆


Such a wonderful display of Shravan-Sumo moments, their growing closeness. Did you read the part where I said I loved it?
Yaa! I read it twice!

I think the CVs are going to wrap up the show with the angle that Ramnath will tell Shravan how he actually kept his mother away and therefore his resentment towards women will dissolve and suddenly Sumo will become the love of his life, but that's not how I wanted to see it go down.

Makes two 😕

You on the other hand have captured the essence of the characters so well in each of your stories...and this one tops the list.

Oh my! Blushes so profusely puts M.A.C. blush on to shame 😳

This is the Shravan I wanted to see in the show...this is the resolution I wanted to see between him and Sumo.

Makes two again bro!

Kaash! We could have a do over. And kaash you were head of the writing team!

Oh teri! Yeh mara sixer ball seedha stadium ke bahar! Itni bhi acchi nahi hoon writer mai...

I don't care how the show ends now...because I can always come back to this thread and imagine how things should have happened.

You have no idea how happy you've made me!

Again...loved it!

Thanks for the PM...and the wonderful treat.

Fatima 🤗
@ bold
Thank you so much for the mind blowing comment!!
❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya darling, aaj tum yeh post nahin karti na to mere liye ek na ek moment of impact ho hi jata 😆... was that mad after the episode... keep writing Zoya... that proposal scene was
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: an_chau

Zoya darling, aaj tum yeh post nahin karti na to mere liye ek na ek moment of impact ho hi jata 😆... was that mad after the episode... keep writing Zoya... that proposal scene was

Anu 🤗
Hehehe!
Thand rakh ya...
Last ke 3 kick ass hone wale hai!
Tu stress na le!
Thank you so much hon, glad to have saved you from an impactful situation 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya,
Lovely as always..
The buying of Sumo's childhood home, the proposal...
Oh gosh!!!
Kaash we could have got to see all these... Aahh!! Dreams... Unfulfilled ones at that...
I still hope we get to see a moment of impact when ShraMan confession happens.
So glad that you penned this down... So beautiful !!
Thank you so much for making me happy today...
Love!!
🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

Anu 🤗
Hehehe!
Thand rakh ya...
Last ke 3 kick ass hone wale hai!
Tu stress na le!
Thank you so much hon, glad to have saved you from an impactful situation 😆



😆😆😆 living my DP today 😆😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Roshni2015

Zoya,

Lovely as always..
The buying of Sumo's childhood home, the proposal...
Oh gosh!!!
Kaash we could have got to see all these... Aahh!! Dreams... Unfulfilled ones at that...
I still hope we get to see a moment of impact when ShraMan confession happens.
So glad that you penned this down... So beautiful !!
Thank you so much for making me happy today...
Love!!
🤗

Rosh 🤗
I would kill to see this on the show...
If only...
I'm with on this, at least one moment of impact in their proposal and I'd be a content soul!
I'm glad to have made you happy hon!
Thank you so much!
Love ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: an_chau



😆😆😆 living my DP today 😆😆😆

🤣 🤣
I shall be careful as hell!
😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunain

Res
*******

Unres...

M seriously speechless...😃
stupendously written👍🏼...really loved each an every aspect of da story...❤️
trust me i really wanted shravan to buy her childhood home for her n donno whether dis is gonna happen in EDKV or not but in dis context of urz u fulfilled my wish...soo thnaks alot for tht...it made me a bit teary though...😉
n rest..da way he proposed her n da way he kept a check to fulfil each an every wish of her waz heart warming...❤️
Hats of to u Bro...n big big 🤗...hope u dont mind..🤪

Hope I don't mind!
Heck I love hugs!
Come here you 🤗
Thank you so so much sunain!
Means a lot to me!
I'm glad I could make you happy!
😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
This was awesome 👏 beyond perfect
I just loved it. Thank u for writing this
wanted to watch this in serial bt ye read kar k accha
laga 😳 ⭐️

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