ISHKARA story - TERE LIYE part 5 on page 11 13/1

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Hello ishqbazians

I was waiting for long for ishana to enter n ishkara story progress in nice way. But it seems we have to wait more.

So I am here with a ts . it is my view after ishkara confrontation n ishana exit. So in my ts she is re- entering.

Plz hit like n comment if u like.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

She run from there ( after fight om) n reach a abandon house. She open already broken door come inside n touch all the walls n sit on dusty floor on her knee n cry a lot. After satisfying cry she control herself n take out a doll from her bag.

She hug it tightly n say

Ish - I know mujhe omkara ko wo sab nahi kehna tha.uski kya galti thi.wo mai thi jisne uske bhaiyon ko loota , maine hi usse jhuti humdardi hasil kar dosti ki . Maine hi use or riddima ko alag karne ki koshish ki.
Haa riddima uska use kar rahi hai par wo ye to nahi janta na. I know I am wrong. Par use ye sab nahi kehna tha meri family or parwarish k bare mai wo kya janta hai jo usne unpar point kiya . mujhe Jo man aata wo keh leta mai chup chap sun leti.
But meri family k bare mai q kaha Jo is duniya mai hi nahi hai.

She drift into flashback

A happy family

A man of age 29 a woman of age 28 who is heavily 9 month pragnent n a sweet girl of
6 year

Woman - ishana . ishana aise mat bhago beta .mumma or Chotu thak jayenge.

Baby stop

Ish - mumma baby kab ayega .

Mom - bus 4 din bad

Her eye twinkle

Ish - sacchi mai. Dekho pappa mumma kya keh rahi hai Chotu baby 4 din bad ayega .fir mai usse khelungi uska khub dhyan rakhungi

Dad - haa beta qki aap big sister ban jaoge na.

Her friend gunjan call her

Ish - pappa mai gunjan k ghar khelne ja rahi hu.

N she run from there . she come home after 2 hour n found door of her house is broken all her house shattered n her mumma papa laying on floor all red red (blood) around them. Some uncle ( police) doing something.

She ask her mumma papa to wakeup but they don't . n after that day she sent to an orphanage. But her misfortune again meet her. After one month watchman of orphanage come in drunken state n kidnap her n try to misbehave her. She is too small to know what is going on but she is not liking it. She cry n hit him with stone n pick her doll given by her parents n run .after some time she faint n when she wakeup she found herself in a house.

A lady who work in call center returning for home found her. She take her home . from then she live with them .that lady her husband n their child Mona. She become their daughter. But after 10 year her ma passed away n left her with responsibility of Mona. Bcoz her husband is drinker n good for nothing. she earn n raised them n educate them. But he never cchanged , he continue drinking n start gambling also. Now they are in debt of 3 carore.n for lower middle class family like them it is impossibly difficult to arrange such amount in short span of time. So they start coning. She hate to do this. But she has no choice other than that bcoz those goons threat them to sell both girls. She is afraid for her lil sis mona more then herself. She have to save her at any cost.so she target omkara

Fb end

Ish - mumma papa aap to humesha kehte the kabhi galat kam nahi karna chahiye humesha sach bolna chahiye. Dekho na aapki ishana kya ban gayi.

She cry more

Ish - omkara tum sahi ho par tumhe bina jane meri family ko blame nahi karana tha.

Her phone ring n she pick n rush toward her home

She reach home n see those goons are trying to take mona

Ish - dekho plz use chod do plz

Goon 1 - bola tha na tere ko apna paisa lauta de nahi to tujhe or teri Behan ko bech kar wasulega.

Ish - plz thoda time or de do .plz

She join her hand n literally beg them


Goon - thik hai .to pehli kist ( installment ) 3 din mai chahiye 75 lakh rs.

N they leave them. Mona hug her crying.

Ish MV mujhe kuch na kuch to karan hi hoga

Next day.

She is passing on road suddenly her eye catch view of poster.

A kidney is wanted for wealthy man's son.she think something n rush to hospital. Her kidney match luckily n she get 90 lakh rs in return .bcoz they are in so much need.

After one month

Here omkara suffer breakup from riddima. Bcoz he come to know the true face of riddima .that she is using him just for publicity. None another but his brother expose riddima . that time her voice rang in his ears


Ish - or wo tumhari gf riddima mujhse bhi badi fraud hai.

He thing all girls are same who come in his life . he decide not to have in any relation in future.

Now after one month of ishkara confrontation


Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1 updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start
poor ishana her fb i feel for her
waiting for their meeting
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

After one month

Ishana is working in an event management company. Today they have to arrange a function for award winning artist of Mumbai.

She is going for her work.while walking on road

Ish MV ek mahina ho gaya us bat ko. Par aaj bhi Jane q wo mere khayalon se nahi ja paya. Maine pehle bhi jhoot bole hai logon ko thaga hai par q omkara ka wo hurt chahera meri ankho se nahi nikalta q uske wo accusing word mere kano mai aaj bhi gunjte hai. Q aaj bhi mere dil par itna bada bojh hai use dhoka dene ka. Us ek insan ne us ek pal ne sab badal diya . ha mai badal gayi ab kisi or ko jhoot bolne ki thagne ki himmat nahi rahi mujhme. Usne mujhe badal diya.
Or apni mare hue parents k blood par unke sanskaron par ungli uthne nahi de sakti mai. Ha abhi bhi mujhe unhe 1 carore rs dene hai par mai koshish kar rahi hu. Event management k sath jitna time milta hai mai usme bhi kuch kam karti hu. Bas ek hi dua hai kabhi usse samna na ho.kaise najre mila paungi mai usse.

She reach her destination n start doing her work.

After some hour function start .

Anchor - now I want to invite on stage Mr omkara sing oberai to take his award for his amazing work.

Ishan hear this n curse her luck. She hide herself. But what she see made her shocked. Some laser light on omkara. She leave all thought n immediately throw him away.

All panicly run here n there. But police handle all

Ish - tum thik ho

Om - just stay away from me .ye bhi tumhari hi koi chal thi na meri life mai aane k liye. Meri Jaan bachana fir dosti fir dhoka wow perfect plan

He clap n she run from there. Shivay n rudra ask him to calmdown

Shi - take it easy om . police dhund rahi hai .agar is bar is ladki ne kuch kiya hoga na to Ise chodunga nahi.

His phone ring

Shi - haa insp boliye ...what...are you sure...hmm...thik hai...

Om - kya hua shivay

Shi - om CCTV footage se pata chala hai ye attack gaytri ne kiya hai. Par wo bhag gayi. Police tujhpar fire ki hui goli dhund rahi hai.

Rud - wow Bhaiya goli to jadu ho gayi hawa mai gayab

Shivkara - shutup rudra

Suddenly they hear

One girl - koi ambulance bulao ishana ko goli lagi hai.

Om- shi - rud shocked to hear this. Om run there like manic.he pick her in arms.

Om - shivay gadi nikal.

Shivay run fast n om follow him. Shidra take front seats n om with ish in his lap take back seat . they take her hospital n dr take her in ot.

They are waiting outside for operation to finish. Dr come outside

Dr - she is fine now . goli upper arms se chu kar nikli hai .blood Loss n stress ki wajah se faint ho gayi thi wo.

All take sigh in relief.

After some hrs ishana open her eye n found om in front of her.
She look at him

Ish - tum...I mean aap

Om - hmm..kaisa feel kar rahi ho.

Is - better

Om - wo I am sorry .tum par chillane k liye or thnku meri Jaan bachane k liye

Is - koi bat nahi

Om - kuch kar sakta hu tumhare liye

Is - hmm..ho sake to mujhe maf kar dena .or bhul Jana ki hum kabhi mile the .or tum mujhe jante ho. Mujhe kabhi mat milna or agar galti se mil bhi gaye to ajnabi hi rehna .bas yahi kar do.

Omkar look at her shocked n she close her eyes again. He stare her n left her room.

TBC...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow...though im not ishkara fan but if you are writing i will definitely read your story...
parts were awesome...
thanx for pm and do continue soon
dont forget to pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it
Awesomeee
Superbbb
Waiting for the next chap
Update kar diyo jaldi se
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Posted: 9 years ago
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update it soonish..
i m loving this...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

nice start
poor ishana her fb i feel for her
waiting for their meeting
update soon


Thanku so much
Their next meeting soon
Will update soon

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